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This is the latest edition of The Blade Stylebook. Earlier editions were published in 1934, 1948, 1958, 1967, 1975, 1991, 1997, and 2000, and updated routinely after 2004 on the online stylebook on Your SOURCE.

Style comprises rules that govern punctuation and word usage. When carefully adhered to, it makes a newspaper more attractive and easier to read. This Stylebook codifies The Blade’s style and must be followed by all reporters and editors so that this newspaper will have a uniform voice.

All editorial employees are expected to learn and follow these guidelines and policies.

John Robinson Block, Publisher and Editor-in-Chief

Blade Style Committee
John Robinson Block
Kurt Franck
Kim Bates
Alicia Gruver



DO’S AND DON’TS

Although the ultimate responsibility for style rests with the copy desk, reporters should familiarize themselves with the contents of this book so that their copy will require less editing for common errors.

Getting names correct is vital. Do not hesitate to have the news source spell out all names on which there is any possibility of error.

In attributing statements it is preferable to use “he said” rather than “said he” unless this usage results in awkward constructions.

Be careful in using alternate words for “said.” For instance, a speaker may “point out” an accepted fact but not an opinion; “to indicate” means to intimate or to show indirectly and should not be used with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution. Once it has been established who is responsible for a speech or statement, attribution usually can be restricted to sensitive areas.

Avoid racial designations except where pertinent.

Do not use terms like “kids,” “tots,” “kiddies,” “lad,” or “lass” for children except in light features in which they are appropriate.

Do not use the title of “Magistrate” to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith.

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence.

Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative,  for years preferred Miss Kaptur on succeeding references, but in 2020 said she now prefers Ms. Kaptur on second reference. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred.

In obituaries the age normally follows the name: John Jones, 57, of Main Street died Friday. However, in obituaries of prominent people in which the lead contains extensive identification the age may be used in a separate sentence: He was 57.  When family members ask that the age of a deceased person be omitted, we normally comply. (See names for additional obituary guidelines.)

Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) to designate the time element. Do not use today, yesterday, tomorrow, and last night. Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style in the printed newspaper and all our digital platforms.

In general, use the day of the week if the date is within seven days of the day of publication. Otherwise use the calendar date. Do not use “last” and “next” with a day of the week. This also applies to months.

In a series of dates, reporters should clarify in notes mode the calendar dates.

When a.m. and p.m. are used, be sure there is no repetition. “At 2 p.m. Monday afternoon” is redundant, as is “7 p.m. tonight.” Noon and midnight are sufficient.



REPORTING SPEECHES

It is essential that a report on a speech convey the same emphasis the speaker intended the speech to convey, not a different emphasis the reporter may consider more important or more newsworthy.

While direct quotations can help to illustrate or emphasize significant points a speaker makes, they generally should be used sparingly. The reporter should be able to convey the speaker’s intent more accurately and succinctly with indirect quotations, summary, and interpretation.

When used, direct quotations should be the words of the speaker and should not be changed arbitrarily to conform to Blade style. If the speaker uses bad grammar or unacceptable words, paraphrase the statement unless the error was intentional to emphasize a point or the usage is significant in itself.

If a speaker makes a particularly newsworthy statement outside the main thrust of the speech (examples: a parenthetical or off-the-cuff comment during the course of the speech or an answer to a question afterward), the statement should be reported in a way that makes the context clear, either in the story on the speech or in a separate story.



SOURCES

The use of anonymous or unidentified sources should be avoided because it undermines the credibility of The Blade. Readers who are suspicious of what we report have greater reason to distrust information when we can not tell them where we got it. Reporters must make every effort to get information on the record, that is, with the source willing to be quoted by name.

The use of anonymous sources is sometimes necessary, but there must be a discussion with your supervisor, who will then discuss with the managing editor, executive editor or an assistant managing editor. Anonymous sources ought to be use sparingly, and not because someone asked “to remain anonymous.”

Again, the use of anonymous sources requires the approval of the managing editor or executive editor before they can run in the newspaper.



LIBEL

A publication is libelous if its information is false, it identifies a person (or organization or product) to any reader, and its natural effect is either to make the reader think generally less of the person (or organization or product) or to affect adversely its business or profession.  There are three kinds of libelous damage:  harm to reputation and good name;  harm to right to enjoy social contacts; harm to business, occupation, or professional  status.

Some of the main defenses against libel are:
·        Truth (plaintiff must generally prove falsity on matters of public concern).
·        Privilege of reporting legislative, judicial, or other public official records and proceedings (provided the report is fair, impartial and accurate, contains no extraneous matter that is libelous, and no malice is present).
·        Expressions of opinion (provided an opinion is expressed instead of fact, facts on which the opinion is based are not defamatory, no malice is present).
·        The New York Times, or constitutional, rule (allows printing in good faith defamatory falsehoods against public officials or public figures as long as knowledge of falsity or reckless disregard or serious doubt about truth is not present; public figures are those with general fame or notoriety in the community or those who have thrust themselves to the forefront of a public controversy to influence the outcome).

Other defenses include statute of limitations (one year in Ohio), privilege of a participant in an official proceeding, consent or authorization, and neutral reportage.

But malice can destroy many of these defenses.  Under The New York Times rule malice is reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth or knowing use of falsities to inflict harm on a public official or public figure. In other cases malice is gross carelessness, personal ill will, or extreme falsity. Plaintiffs must prove malice.

In addition Ohio and most other states allow private persons to collect actual damages by showing fault or negligence rather than having to prove actual malice, but actual malice must be proved for private persons to recover punitive damages.

And there are partial defenses to reduce damages such as retractions, stories friendly to the plaintiff, corrections, reasonable cause to believe the charge, use of wire service copy, provocation, heat of a campaign, mistaken target, care in preparing the story, proof of plaintiff’s bad reputation.



PRIVACY

Invasion of privacy is violating a person’s right to be let alone, to be free from unwarranted publicity.

The four types of privacy invasions and the defense or defenses for each are:

Appropriation – Unauthorized taking of someone’s name, picture, or likeness or personality for commercial gain.

Defense – Consent, provided it is timely, not given by a minor or incompetent or other unauthorized person, covers items that haven’t been materially altered, and doesn’t otherwise violate the right to publicity (a person’s right to control exploitation of own name or likeness).

Intrusion – Intrusion into private activities, such as stealing or breaking and entering, snooping with hidden cameras or recording devices, trespassing on private property, wiretaps.

Defense: Consent or implied consent.

Private facts – Publishing true personal material that is not of legitimate concern to the public.

Defense – Consent (which can be revoked) and newsworthiness (including nature of story, status of subject, time lapse, intimacy of revelation, degree of embarrassment).

False information – Publishing untruths, whether defamatory or not, by fictionalization (embellishing an otherwise true story with falsehoods) or putting a person in a false light (unintentionally giving a false impression of someone).

Defense: Truth, consent, New York Times rule (plaintiff must show actual malice, reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth).


HANDLING CRIME NEWS

In recognition of its responsibility to report news of crime and the potential problems associated with such reporting, The Blade has adopted these guidelines, which grew out of a cooperative effort between the Toledo Bar Association and the newspaper in 1966. The objective is to provide the public with pertinent information while avoiding publicity that might unduly interfere with the rights of defendants.

In criminal arrests use:
The name, age, and block and street address for the suspect. NOT the exact address [REVISED August 2015]
A description of the crime.
The specific legal charge.
How the arrest was made, when, and where.
Whether a grand jury has returned an indictment and a trial date has been set.
Some practical rules:
Crime stories should be based on information that can be documented, such as the police log, affidavits, warrants, and indictments.

Statements by investigators and attorneys, information from supplemental reports, etc., should be gathered but used with caution to avoid damaging a suspect’s rights.

The same caveat applies to information from witnesses unless they are under oath.

Do not say somebody will be charged with a crime. Wait until a charge is filed. You can say someone is being questioned in the investigation of a crime if you know that to be so, but being interrogated does not necessarily make a person a suspect.

When describing the events during a crime, do not link them with the suspect. Instead use terms such as “a man,” “a woman,” “the robber.”

Do not use the following types of information without supervisory approval:
Prior criminal record.
A confession.
Names of jurors selected for a particular trial.


CRIME VICTIMS

The names of victims are used except in sex-related crimes.

Omit addresses of victims unless they are pertinent to the story. Instead, use the age and general area of residence (West Toledo, near north side, etc).

Extreme caution must be used in reporting incest cases to protect the identity of the victim.

Full identification is used when the victim is dead.


A

a, an  –  Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. Thus, a habitual criminal, a historic occasion; an herb, an heiress.

When the article a or an is to precede a word or phrase beginning with a figure, be guided by pronunciation: a 1-year-old, an eight-point program, an 80 percent average, a 30-cent purchase, etc.

AARP  – The official name of the American Association of Retired Persons. It should be used alone in all references.

abbreviations
The following guidelines apply:

All months except March, April, May, June, and July are abbreviated when used with dates.
Days of the week are never abbreviated.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Road (Rd.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.),  Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.), Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. [Revised February 2016]

Terrace, Lane, and Way are always spelled out. Even in addresses, Terrace, Lane, and Way should be spelled out. For example, 23 Bethesda Terrace. [Revised December 2014].

Abbreviate north, east, south, and west in street names: 300 S. Detroit Ave. [Revised November 2011].

Do not use street, etc., generically in a formal address. Do not guess: Check the Polk directories and telephone book blue pages for the correct name. Resolve discrepancies relying on the telephone book or by checking with the municipality.

Highways are designated in the following manner: I-75, U.S. 23, U.S. 20 for Ohio and all other states except Michigan, where the style is M-50. Spell out county and township roads: North County Road 5.

Company names should not be abbreviated unless the form is familiar, O-I for Owens-Illinois, GM for General Motors Co., and GE for General Electric. L-O-F is used for Libbey-Owens-Ford in historical stories. It no longer exists. It’s Pilkington PLC’s North American subsidiary.  [revised January 30, 2002]

The word building should be spelled out unless used as part of an address that includes a number: 614 Spitzer Bldg., Spitzer Building. Capitalize building only when it is part of the formal name: Safety Building, The Blade building.

Fort and mount are not abbreviated, except in headlines, unless the abbreviated name is the formal designation.

States are abbreviated in the following manner:
Ala.; Alaska; Ariz.; Ark.; Calif.; Colo.; Conn.; Del.; Fla.;   Ga.; Hawaii; Iowa; Idaho; Ill.; Ind.; Kan.; Ky.; La.; Mass.;     Md.; Maine; Mich.; Minn.; Miss.; Mo.; Mont.; N.C.; N.D.;   Neb.; Nev.; N.H.; N.J.; N.M.; N.Y.; Ohio; Okla.; Ore.; Pa.;  R.I.; S.C.; S.D.; Tenn.; Texas; Utah; Va.; Vt.; Wash.;  Wis.;  W.Va.; Wyo.

Canadian provinces are abbreviated in the following manner. It is not necessary to add Canada.

Alberta; B.C. (British Columbia);  Man. (Manitoba);  N.B. (New Brunswick); Nfld. (Newfoundland);  N.S. (Nova Scotia);  Ont. (Ontario);   P.E.I. (Prince Edward Island);  Que. (Quebec);  Sask. (Saskatchewan)

Do not abbreviate the name of a state or Canadian province except after municipalities. In referring to counties, parks, lakes, mountains, or other geographical features, use the full name of the state:

Franklin County, Ohio; Bedford Township, Michigan; Yosemite National Park, California; Round Lake, Minnesota (if there is a post office bearing the same name as the lake, the state abbreviation may be used); Fort Bragg, North Carolina.

Nations are not abbreviated except USSR for the former Soviet Union. United States is abbreviated U.S. only as an adjective.

State and party designations of members of Congress follow this style: Rep. John Jones (R., Mich.); Sen. Jack Smith (D., N.Y.). Use the same state abbreviations as elsewhere.
Party designations other than Democratic and Republican should not be spelled out: Sen. John Smith (I, Va.).

For state legislators, use the same style except that the hometown must be spelled out: John Jones (R., Cincinnati) or State Sen. Mary Smith (D., Toledo).

Well-known members of Congress need not be identified in this manner on first mention. Later in the story the state and party can be inserted.

Percentages are abbreviated in headlines or tabular material with %. Always use percent in copy.

Academic degrees are abbreviated as follows:

  • BA – bachelor of arts
  • BS – bachelor of science
  • DDS –  doctor of dental science
  • JD –  doctor of laws
  • MA –  master of arts
  • MD –  doctor of medicine
  • PhD  –  doctor of philosophy When not abbreviating, use bachelor’s degree, master’s degree, doctor’s degree.  Doctorate is acceptable for doctor’s degree.

Do not use abbreviations of academic degrees after a person’s name.

Agencies and organizations are usually referred to by the full name on first reference, then by initials. The abbreviations do not require periods: ICC, FHA, SEC, SEATO, UNESCO, WHO.

Periods are used in the adjectives U.S. and U.N., which are spelled out as nouns except in headlines, tabular material, and tie-in cutlines.

Some organizations are so well known by their initials that the abbreviations may be used on first reference: NATO, FBI, CIA, AFL-CIO, UAW, YMCA (or Y), YWCA, GOP, NAACP.

abbreviations (con’t)
If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate.

In using U for university omit the period: UT, UM, BGSU.

Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

Miscellaneous: A.D. (Anno Domini), B.C. (Before Christ), mph, AWOL, KO (knockout), RBI (run batted in).

abolition – Do not use “abolishment.”

a capella

according to – Do not use this phrase when said will suffice. There are situations in which according to is appropriate: Jones started the fight, according to a signed statement by Smith. Never use with a direct quote.

AccuWeather, Inc. – In State College, Pa.

acoustics –  This word takes a singular verb when referring to the science but plural when referring to the sound qualities of a hall or other building: Acoustics is gaining new stature as a science. The acoustics of the new hall were praised by critics.

acronyms –  In general, avoid overuse of acronyms, especially those that are not well known. If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate. Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

active or passive forms
In general the active voice is preferred.

Write “the work began,” not “the work was begun,” unless you want to emphasize who began it.

Write “the man’s leg was broken in a fall,” not “the man broke his leg.” The latter sounds as if he did it deliberately. Similarly, do not say “He had his license (or sentence) suspended.” Or “She had her degree suspended.” See had.

Write “the boy drowned in the creek,” not “the boy was drowned.” The latter implies murder.

adapt, adopt –  Adapt means to make suitable or modify; adopt means to take as one’s own. Example: The musical director adapted the old music; the college then adopted it as its official song.

ad nauseam

addresses –  Do not stop the reader’s flow with the use of commas. Jack Jones of 2145 Pond Circle. Not Jack Jones, 2145 Pond Circle.

For crime suspects, use the suspect’s block and street, but not the exact address. For example: Joe Smith, the 500 block of Douglas Road. [REVISED August 2015]

adopt –  Resolutions are adopted; bills are passed by legislative bodies.

adverse, averse – Adverse means unfavorable: He predicted adverse weather. Averse means reluctant, opposed: She is averse to change.

advice, advise –  noun, verb.

Adviser

affect, effect –  Affect should be used only as a verb. It means to act upon or influence. Effect as a verb means to bring about or accomplish. Effect as a noun means the result of an action. Example: The effect of the ruling was limited; it did not affect the litigants.

afterward –  Without s in all uses.

African-American –  hyphenated

agreement of subject and verb
Confusion on this point occurs chiefly with
(1) compound or complex subjects and
(2) collective nouns.

A compound subject (separate items usually connected by and or by commas and and) takes a plural verb: The governor and his escort were taken to the auditorium.

When the subject is a noun modified by a prepositional phrase, it is a complex subject and takes a singular verb: The governor, with his escort, was taken to the auditorium.

Collective nouns always have been a problem. Usage generally is to treat words like committee, government, class as singular: The committee offers the resolution.

However, when speaking of a committee, class, etc., acting as individuals, substitute “committee members” or “members of the class” and use a plural verb.

Sums of money always are singular: $100 was offered, $32.20 was the daily-double payoff, etc

Other words always considered singular are anybody, everybody, either, neither, headquarters, whereabouts.

Certain words ending in s but denoting a singular idea are treated as singular: mathematics, physics, politics. Examples: Mathematics is being subjected to new teaching approaches. Physics is the science of the hour. Politics receives expanded coverage in presidential election years.

aid, aide –  verb, noun.

air brake

air-condition, air-conditioned  –  verb, adjective.  The nouns are air conditioner and air conditioning.

airdrop, air-drop –  noun, verb.

airstrike –  One word.

Air Force

Alford plea – In an Alford plea, a defendant does not admit guilt but pleads guilty to a lesser charge to escape more severe penalties had the case gone to trial.

All-America, All-American – adjective, noun.

all right

all time, all-time –  An all-time high but the greatest runner of all time. Avoid the redundant phrase all-time or new record.

allude, refer –  We allude to something when we speak of it without direct mention; we refer to it when we mention it directly. Example: Although any direct reference to his deformity annoyed him, there were times when she felt it necessary to allude to it.

al-Qaeda – An international terrorist network led by Osama bin Laden. [revised 2002]

alumni, etc. –  Alumnus is the masculine singular, alumni the masculine plural, also used for a group including both sexes. Alumna is the feminine singular, alumnae the feminine plural.

A.D. – Anno Domini

another – It is wrong and unnecessary to use “another” in cases such as “council appropriated another $9 million for children” when the story does not say that $9 million has been appropriated for anything else. “Another” should be used only when it refers to something exactly like the first.

ante, anti –  As prefixes the first means before and never takes a hyphen. The second means against and usually takes a hyphen. A good rule is to use the hyphen when anti is joined with a word that could stand alone: anti-trust, anti-Semitic. See hyphenation.

anticipate, expect –  The words are not synonyms. It is one thing to expect an event, another to anticipate it by thought or deed. Examples: A record crowd was expected. The manager anticipated the record crowd by installing extra bleachers.

antiseptic, disinfectant – Antiseptics, such as hand sanitizers, are used to kill germs on living things. Disinfectants, such as bleach, are used on inanimate things, such as countertops and handrails. The adjective is disinfectant, not disinfecting. [Added April 2020]

apostrophes –  See punctuation

appraise, apprise –  Appraise means to set a value on. Apprise means to inform.

appropriate, expropriate, take –  To appropriate usually means to set aside for a special purpose. Do not use as a synonym for take or steal. To expropriate is to deprive of property, usually by government action.

ArenaHuntington Center is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. The arena opened in October 2009, and in April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights. [Updated June 2011]

Army

Artificial intelligence – On first reference, write out the full phrase. AI is acceptable on all following references. No periods needed.

as if –  Should be used instead of like  as a conjunction: He ran as if a demon were pursuing him. See like.

attorney –  Technically, an attorney is someone (usually, but not necessarily, a lawyer) empowered to act for another. A lawyer is a person admitted to practice in a court system. Do not abbreviate.

attribution –  It is preferable to use he said rather than said he unless this usage results in awkward constructions. Be careful in using alternate words for said. A speaker ordinarily points out an accepted fact. To indicate means to intimate or to show indirectly and is not appropriate with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution in stories with limited sources once the identity of the speaker is established.

audience –  See spectators.

auger, augur – An auger is an instrument for boring. Augur means to foretell; also a seer.

author –  Do not use as a verb. Mr. Smith is the author of “Time & Again.”

authoress, poetess, etc. – Drop the needless ess.

auto –  Automobile is preferred, but auto or car is permitted to avoid repetition.

automaker, automakers

autoworker, autoworkers – One word when used generically. But United Auto Workers when referring to the union.

automotive plants, local
The following is style for local automotive plants:
Formal name of Chrysler group is now FCA US LLC.

  • Toledo Assembly Complex makes Jeep Wrangler and Jeep Cherokee. [revised Dec. 2014.]
  • Toledo Machining Plant in Perrysburg Township (not just Perrysburg). [revised Oct. 25, 2007]
  • Dundee Engine Plant. [added August 2013]
  • General Motors Co.’s Toledo Transmission Plant; no longer Hydramatic or Toledo Powertrain.
  • Also in the area: GM Defiance Powertrain Plant;  Ford’s Lima Engine Plant;  [revised August 2013]

avoid, avert –  To avoid is to shun, to avert is to prevent: The driver averted the collision by avoiding the truck.

awhile, a while –  She plans to remain here awhile. She will remain for a while.

AWOL – A term that normally refers to military personnel who are absent from the ranks without having been given permission. A truant is one who skips school without permission.

axis –  Plural is axes.


B

BP Husky Refining LLC – Refinery located in Oregon, Ohio, and owned by BP PLC. [added Nov. 17, 2008]

BP PLC – The company no longer uses British Petroleum. Its refinery in Oregon is called BP Husky Refining LLC. [revised Nov. 17, 2008]

Baby Boomer – Uppercase, no hyphen.

back door, back-door –  noun, adjective.

back room, back-room –  noun, adjective.

back up, back-up –  verb, noun/adjective.

backward –  Without s in all uses.

backyard, back-yard –  Noun, adjective.

bad, badly –  The first is an adjective; the second an adverb: He feels bad (he is ill); he feels badly (his fingers are numb).

baleful –  Do not confuse with mournful or soulful. It means ominous.

Band-Aid – trademark, capitalize

banks, local

The following is the style for local banks:

  • Citizens Bank (absorbed Charter One Bank) is part of Citizens Financial Group Inc, which is based in Providence, R.I. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Fifth Third Bank (Northwestern Ohio) is based in Toledo and is part of Fifth Third Bancorp, based in Cincinnati). [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • GenoaBank, based in Genoa, Ohio, with several area branches. Bank name is one word, with capital “B.” [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Huntington National Bank – Northwest Ohio, is based in Toledo and is part of Huntington Bancshares Inc., based in Columbus. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • KeyBank, based in Toledo, is part of KeyCorp, based in Cleveland. A branch can simply be called KeyBank (one word). [revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • PNC Bank, based in Pittsburgh, is part of PNC Financial Services Group Inc. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Resolute Bank, based in Maumee. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Signature Bank, based in Toledo. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Union Bank, based in Columbus Grove, Ohio and owned by Union Banking Co. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Waterford Bank, based in Sylvania. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
No longer is there a Sky Bank (became part of Huntington) or National City Bank (became part of PNC). [Added Feb. 9, 2017]

BAX Global, Inc. – The proper name for what was Burlington Air Express.

B.C. – Before Christ.

beside, besides –  Beside means alongside. Besides means “in addition to.”

best seller

between –  Generally refers to two only. Use among for more than two.

Bible, bible – Capitalize when referring to the holy book of Christanity, including the Scriptures in the Old Testament or the New Testament. Capitalize also related terms such as the Gospels, Gospel of St. Mark, the Scriptures, the Holy Scriptures.

Lowercase bible as a nonreligious term: My dictionary is my bible.

bi, semi –  Bi means two; so biennial is every two years, bimonthly every two months, etc. Semi means half; so semiannual is every half year, or biannual is twice a year.

Big Three – Use Detroit Three when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Traditionally, GM, Ford,  and Chrysler were referred to as the Big Three in the auto industry. However, years ago, Toyota and Volkswagen took over two of those slots. So, the term to use should be Detroit Three automakers. Do NOT use Big Three for GM, Ford and Chrysler. [Added February 2017]

bird watcher

bird’s-eye

Black: Uppercase in terms of race or racial history or culture. [Added February 2021]
Here are some other noteworthy comments on the style:
Black(s), white(s) (n.) Do not use either term as a singular noun. For plurals, phrasing such as Black people, white people, Black teachers, white students is often preferable when clearly relevant. White officers account for 64% of the police force, Black officers 21%, and Latino officers 15%. The plural nouns Blacks and whites are generally acceptable when clearly relevant and needed for reasons of space or sentence construction. He helped integrate dance halls among Blacks, whites, Latinos, and Asian Americans.  [Added February 2021]

Black (adj.) Use the capitalized term as an adjective in a racial, ethnic, or cultural sense: Black people, Black culture, Black literature, Black studies, Black colleges. African-American is also acceptable for those in the United States. The terms are not necessarily interchangeable, however. Americans of Caribbean heritage, for example, generally refer to themselves as Caribbean-American. Follow an individual’s preference if known. Use Negro or colored only in names of organizations or in rare quotations when essential. [Added February 2021]

Blade carrier – Use independent contractor. Do not use Blade carrier. Do not use contract employee.

blizzard – Often misused to refer to any snowstorm. See weather terms.

bloc, block – Use bloc for a combination of parties or of countries. Block is correct for other uses.

Block Communications, Inc.  –  The parent company of The Blade. Block Communications, Inc. owns communications companies in Ohio, Michigan, Pennsylvania, Illinois, Indiana, and Kentucky. The company is based in Toledo, and the corporate headquarters is located at 405 Madison Ave, Toledo, OH 43604.

In Toledo, companies include : The Blade, Buckeye Broadband (cable and Internet; changed June 2016; BCSN and BCAN appear on Buckeye Broadband) and Telesystem (formerly Buckeye Telesystem).  Telesystem is a national voice, data, and security systems provider.

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband.  [Revised August 2019]

Other companies owned by BCI include the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette in Pennsylvania,  Erie County Cablevision in Sandusky, Ohio; WLIO-TV in Lima, Ohio, and television stations in  Kentucky (Louisville), Indiana, and Illinois. BCI also owns MaxxSouth Broadband in parts of Mississippi and Alabama; Libercus, a content management system/publishing system; and Toledo Detroit Outdoor (billboard company). On July 6, 2000, the parent company changed its name to Block Communications, Inc. It was previously known as Blade Communications, Inc.  [Revised August 2019]

Block News Alliance – The proper designation for writers from other Block Communications, Inc., properties when their work appears in The Blade.

BLOCK, Allan – Chairman of Block Communications Inc., parent company of The Blade. Use Allan (two “l”s in first name) Block with no middle initial on first reference.

BLOCK, Diana – Executive vice president of Block Communications Inc.. She is the daughter of William Block Jr. [Added August 2019]

BLOCK, John Robinson – Publisher and editor-in-chief of The Blade and the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. On first reference, use John Robinson Block. Use the “Robinson” middle name. Do NOT use a middle initial.

BLOCK, Susan – Wife of Block Communications Inc. chairman Allan and board member of BCI.  Do NOT use Susan Allan Block. On succeeding references, she is Mrs. Block. [Updated October 2018]

BLOCK Jr., William – Retired president and general manager of the Post-Gazette and co-publisher of The Blade and Post-Gazette. William Block Jr. is the father of Diana Block and the cousin of Allan Block and John Robinson Block. [Added August 2019]

blond, blonde –  Use blond as a noun for males and as an adjective for all applications: She has blond hair. Use blonde as a noun for females.

blowup, blow up –  noun, verb.

B’nai B’rith

Bombay – Formerly the name for the financial center in India. Blade style now is Mumbai. No longer use Bombay in datelines or stories. See entry for Mumbai. [added November 27, 2008]

booby trap, booby-trap –  noun, adjective/verb.

border line, borderline –  noun, adjective.

boyfriend

breach, breech –  Breach means a break or opening and is used in phrases like “a breach of faith,” ” a breach in the dike,” or “stepping into the breach.” Breech means the rear or hind portion, hence the breech of a gun, a breech delivery.

break-in, break in – noun, verb.

breakout, break out –  noun, verb.

bric-a-brac

bridge names
I-280 over Maumee River: Veterans’ Glass City SkywayState Rt. 65 over Maumee River (drawbridge formerly used by I-280): Craig Memorial BridgeCherry Street/Main Street over Maumee River: Martin Luther King, Jr. BridgeState Rts. 2/51 over Maumee River: Anthony Wayne Bridge (also known as High Level Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)I-75 over Maumee River: DiSalle Bridge (also known as South End Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)U.S. 20/State Rt. 25 over Maumee River: Fort Meigs Memorial Bridge (also known as Maumee-Perrysburg Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)
[revised November 2007]broach, brooch –  The first means to open or introduce; the second is an ornament.

broadcast – Past tense is broadcast.

Buckeye Broadband, formerly Buckeye CableSystem, is the cable and Internet company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Note the “v” in Cablevision is lowercase and Cablevision is one word. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Telesystem — NAME CHANGE — The correct name is Telesystem. It is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

buckshot, bird shot –  Buckshot is large-size shot. Bird shot is small-size shot and is much more common. A person would never be “peppered” with buckshot.

bull, steer –  A bull is a male bovine. A steer is a castrated bull, usually fattened for market.

bull’s-eye

bullet –  The bullet is the projectile portion of a rifle or revolver cartridge, which includes a casing containing an explosive charge.

burglary –  See larceny.

business name style   [revised January 30, 2002]

  • for Company,  use Co.
  • for Companies, use Cos.
  • for Corporation,  use Corp.
  • for Incorporated, use Inc.
  • for Limited, use Ltd.
  • for Limited Liability Corporation, use LLC (no periods)
  • for Limited Partnership  (like Cedar Fair), use LP (no periods)
  • for Public Liability Company (like BP or Pilkington), use PLC (no periods)
  • for Spanish, French or Italian companies using S.A., use SA (no periods)
  • for Dutch companies using N.V., use NV (no periods)

business name style (con’t)

In most cases, don’t capitalize a whole name of a company  (use Trinova instead of TRINOVA), and, with few local exceptions (such as The Andersons), we don’t capitalize The in a company name (it’s Rouse Co., despite its official The Rouse Co.).

by (as prefix) –  No hyphen in most combinations, such as bylaw, bypass. Some exceptions are by-play and by-product.

by as suffix –  Usually takes a hyphen, as in passer-by.

bylines – See credit lines.


C

cabby

caliber – See weapons

call-up, call up – noun, verb

Canada goose

cancel, canceled, canceling, cancellation

cannon, canon – A cannon is a mounted gun; a canon refers to an ecclesiastical law or a church official.

canvas, canvass – Canvas is a fabric; canvass means to solicit.

capital, capitol  –  Capital applies to all uses except capitol, which is a building used as a seat of government.

capitalization

Some basic principles:

In addition to proper nouns, capitalize common nouns such as river, party, street, and west when they are part of proper names: Monroe Street, Maumee River, Democratic Party.

Lowercase common nouns when they stand alone in subsequent references: the party, the river.

Lowercase the common noun elements of names in all plural uses: the Democratic and Republican parties, Main and State streets, lakes Erie and Ontario.

Breeds of animals – Follow the spelling and capitalization in Webster’s Third New International Dictionary. For breeds not listed there, capitalize words derived from proper nouns and use lowercase elsewhere: thoroughbred, Arabian mare, basset hound, Boston terrier.

Constitution, laws

Capitalize references to the U.S. Constitution, with or without the U.S. modifier.

When referring to the constitutions of other nations or of states, capitalize only with the name of a nation or of a state: the French Constitution, the Massachusetts Constitution, the nation’s constitution, the state constitution.

The city charter of Toledo and all other cities is lowercase.

The formal names of acts of Congress and the Ohio General Assembly are uppercase. When in doubt, lowercase. Bills before passage are lowercase: Taft-Hartley Act (or Law), but the labor act or the labor law; the Sherman Anti-Trust Act (or Law), but the Hawaii statehood bill.

Capitalize amendments to the U.S. Constitution: the First Amendment, the 14th Amendment. Also capitalize the Bill of Rights referring to the first 10 amendments.

Courts – Formal names of courts are capitalized: the Supreme Court of the United States (also the Supreme Court), Circuit Court of Appeals, U.S. District Court or District Court, Ohio Supreme Court, Lucas County Common Pleas Court, Toledo Municipal Court, Municipal Court. Also capitalize the formal names of a foreign nation’s courts.

Derivatives
Capitalize words that are derived from proper nouns and still depend on them for their meaning: American, Christian, English, Marxism.

Lowercase words that are derived from proper nouns but no longer depend on them for their meaning: scotch whiskey, french fries, brussels sprouts, china, india rubber, spartan, geiger counter, utopia.

Geographic terms

  • Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: The pioneers opened the West.
  • Capitalize Michigan’s Upper Peninsula and Lower Peninsula.
  • Capitalize East and West when referring to the eastern and western worlds; South Pacific, North Pacific, South Atlantic, North Atlantic; Far North, Arctic Circle, Antarctic Circle, the Arctic, North Pole, South Pole, Eastern Hemisphere, Western Hemisphere.
  • Capitalize sections of the city of Toledo and well-known sections of other cities: West Toledo, South Toledo, New York’s West Side, Chicago’s South Side.
  • Lowercase points of the compass when used as directions; state and province in expressions like New York state, the province of Manitoba.
  • Capitalize Earth when referring to the planet, otherwise use lowercase. Lowercase sun, moon.
  • Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: Example. The pioneers opened the West.
  • We do not capitalize the “s” in southwestern United States, etc.
  • In the same vein, we do not capitalize the “n” in northwest Ohio or the “s” in southeast Michigan unless it is included in an organization’s name. We would do the same thing with areas of the city: East Toledo, North Toledo, South Toledo, West Toledo. But we do not capitalize northwestern Toledo, etc. Here is an example of correct usage: We would write there are seven Mercy Health hospitals in northwest Ohio. However, if we’re writing about the Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, the “n” in northwest would be uppercase because it is part of the organization’s name.
  • When writing headlines it is permissible to use NW Ohio, but there are no periods because northwestern is one word, not two.
    [Updated March 2021]

Government

General principles for federal, state, and local governmental units:

  • Always lowercase, never abbreviate: the federal government, the state government, the U.S. government. Lowercase administration and cabinet but capitalize a specific: The Bush Cabinet.
  • Capitalize the official names of all federal and state government departments, agencies, and offices: the State Department, the Treasury Department, the Treasury, the Defense Department, the Department of State, Department of Defense, General Services Administration, Secret Service.
  • Social Security – Capitalize Social Security (Administration and Act) when referring to the U.S. system. Capitalize Medicare and Medicaid.
  • Capitalize all departments, divisions, agencies, and offices below the state level: Toledo Police Department, Chicago Fire Department, Board of Zoning Appeals, Toledo-Lucas County Plan Commission.
  • Capitalize Electoral College referring to the body that elects the president.
  • Capitalize the formal names of legislative bodies and their respective chambers with and without the state name.

Prominent individuals – The first name of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Here are the official designations of state legislative bodies:

  • General Assembly: Arkansas, Colorado, Connecticut, Delaware, Georgia, Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Kentucky, Maryland, Missouri, North Carolina, Ohio, Pennsylvania, Rhode Island, South Carolina, Tennessee, Vermont, Virginia.
  • Legislature:  Alabama, Alaska, Arizona, California, Florida, Hawaii, Idaho, Kansas, Louisiana, Maine, Michigan, Minnesota, Mississippi, Nebraska, Nevada, New Jersey, New Mexico, New York, Oklahoma, South Dakota, Texas, Utah, Washington, West Virginia, Wisconsin, Wyoming. [NOT Ohio]
  • Legislative Assembly: Montana, North Dakota, Oregon.
  • General Court – Massachusetts, New Hampshire.

Examples: Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives; Ohio General Assembly, the General Assembly, the state Senate. Michigan Legislature.

In Ohio, the official name of the governing body is Ohio General Assembly. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.” In Michigan, the official name of the governing body is the Michigan Legislature, so that one is OK.
[Added May 2010]

Capitalize the names of full committees of Congress whether or not preceded by the name of the main legislative body: House Ways and Means Committee, Ways and Means Committee, Senate Foreign Relations Committee. Be certain of the full committee names. Ethics committee is a shortened, uncapped name. Subcommittees are not capitalized: a Senate military construction subcommittee.

The rule above applies to committees of state legislatures.

Capitalize all legislative bodies at the state and city level: Toledo City Council, Lucas County Commissioners, Spencer Township Trustees.

Capitalize the formal name of a foreign nation’s legislative body and its chambers both with and without the name of the country.

Holidays and observances – Capitalize names of holidays and observances, including day and eve in all uses: Christmas Day, Christmas Eve, New Year’s Eve, Labor Day.

Independent administrative agencies
Capitalize the formal names: Lucas County Mental Health Board, Lucas County Board of Mental Retardation, Children Services Board, Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority, Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority, Toledo Lucas County Public Library, Toledo Area Sanitary District, Lucas Metropolitan Housing Authority, Metroparks Toledo.

Military
Capitalize Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, Coast Guard and Merchant Marines, in all cases when we are referring to those branches of the United States military. Capitalize Joint Chiefs of Staff, lowercase the partial title joint chiefs.

Services of other countries are down: the Portuguese navy, the French air force.

Capitalize the names of all military decorations.

Organizations and institutions
Capitalize formal names: Trinity Episcopal Church, Rotary Club.

Capitalize Security Council, General Assembly, Food and Agriculture Organization, and other U.N. agencies when preceded by U.N.

Many specialized agencies, such as the U.N. Educational Scientific, and Cultural Organization, are referred to by initials: UNESCO, UNIFEM.

Capitalize union only if it is part of an official name: United Auto Workers union, American Postal Workers Union.

Personal titles
Capitalize formal titles when used immediately before names: Justice Andy Douglas, Chairman Lee Iacocca.

Lowercase formal titles when used alone or in constructions set off from names by commas.

Lowercase terms that are job descriptions rather than formal titles: Blade staff writer John Jones, plumber Jack Adams.

Capitalize the title for the U.S. President, Pope and Dalai Lama.

Capitalize Chief Executive when referring to the President. His wife is the First Lady.

Political parties
Capitalize the names of recognized political parties and their members: the Republican Party, Republicans; the Democratic Party, Democrats; the Socialist Party, Socialists, the Communist Party, Communists.

Lowercase terms referring to political philosophies and their followers: democracy, communism, socialist.

Write the Democratic National Committee and the Democratic National Convention.

Public buildings
Capitalize formal names of buildings and their rooms: Spitzer Building, Government Center, Ohio’s Statehouse, the Oval Office, the Versailles Room at the Toledo Club, the Summit Room of the Holiday Inn.

Lowercase words such as courthouse, jail, and embassy in most instances: Lucas County courthouse and Wood County jail, but U.S. Embassy.

Publications – Do not capitalize magazine unless it is part of the name: Time magazine, Toledo Magazine. Similarly, do not cap the in the name of a newspaper or wire service unless it is part of the formal name. The New York Times, The Plain Dealer, Detroit News, The Associated Press.

Races
Capitalize nouns and adjectives referring to races, nationalities, and regional groups: Oriental, Semitic, Buckeye, Yankee, Englishman.  Lowercase oriental in other uses: oriental rug, oriental cooking.

Capitalize African-American and Caucasian when used, as in direct quotes, but lowercase the preferred black and white.

Religious
Capitalize all nouns and pronouns referring to the Deity.

Capitalize sacred books such as Holy Bible, the Bible, Old Testament, New Testament, the Qur’an.

Capitalize Lent, Lenten, Rosh Hashanah, Yom Kippur, Ramadan, Sukkoth, Tet, etc.; Holy Communion, Eucharist. Mass, parts of the Mass such as the Credo, Gloria, Sanctus.

Capitalize Hades, Satan; lowercase heaven, hell, devil.

Capitalize church as part of the official name of a religious body or congregation.

Lowercase baptism, christening, biblical; day in Latter-day Saints and Seventh-day Adventists.
See titles for capitalization of religious titles.

Royalty, nobility
Do not capitalize titles when standing alone but do capitalize them when used with the name of the person: Queen Elizabeth, queen of England, the queen.

Honorary titles and titles of nobility are capitalized when they serve as alternate names: Lady Jane Wellesley, only daughter of the duke of Wellington, has been linked romantically with Charles, the prince of Wales. The duke is rumored to dislike the prince. See royalty.

Schools and colleges
Capitalize the proper name of a school district: Toledo Public Schools, Washington Local Schools, Penta County Joint Vocational School District, Whiteford Agricultural School District.

Capitalize the formal names of schools: Scott High School, Byrnedale Junior High School, Gateway Middle School, Harvard School, Coy Elementary School.

Capitalize formal names of colleges or universities: University of Toledo, Indiana University, University of Michigan. Lowercase subordinate colleges and divisions of universities: Harvard law school, Ohio State University history department.

Capitalize academic degrees only when abbreviated: BA (bachelor of arts), PhD (doctor of philosophy).

Ships, boats
Do not capitalize the word designating the classification of a ship or boat: battleship Missouri, aircraft carrier Saratoga, cruiser Toledo, etc. The same applies to words like schooner, yacht, ketch, etc.

In yacht racing, however, the racing class is capitalized: Comet, Vixen, Star, Thistle; the Star class yacht Arcturus, the Comet class sailboat Halley.

Time periods
Capitalize names of geologic and archaeological times: Cambrian, Paleozoic. Lowercase the generic word: Neolithic age.

Lowercase words such as baroque, classical, romantic except when referring to specific periods in art, literary, or music history.

Lowercase century: a 19th century poet; the Magna Carta was signed in the 13th century.

Lowercase daylight-saving time.

Titles of compositions – Capitalize the principal words in the names of books, movies, plays, poems, operas, songs, radio and television programs, works of art.

Treaties – Capitalize the official name. When in doubt, lowercase.

Wars – Capitalize Civil War, Revolutionary War (U.S. only), Korean War, Vietnam War, World War I, World War II, Persian Gulf War, WWI, WWII, etc. Do not capitalize variations, such as gulf war.

capture  – It is better and shorter to write the fugitive was captured than that he was apprehended. Seize is a permissible headline synonym for capture but avoid nab.

Carat, karat  – Carat is gem weight; karat is the fineness of gold.

carbon monoxide –  This poisonous gas is odorless, colorless, and flavorless. Do not refer to it as a fume. Write his death was caused by carbon monoxide poisoning or just carbon monoxide.

Casino – The casino that opened in May 2012 is called Hollywood Casino Toledo. Be sure to include Toledo, because is is part of the official name. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.
cave-in, cave in – noun/adjective, verb.
cease-fire – noun and adjective.

cement, concrete – Cement is an ingredient in concrete, Sidewalks, roads, etc. are made with concrete, not cement.

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention – Located in Atlanta, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is part of the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. On first reference, use Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Precede with national, federal or U.S. if needed for clarity. CDC is acceptable on second reference and it takes a singular verb.  [Added April 2020]

celebrant, celebrator – A celebrant is a person who officiates at a religious ceremony. A celebrator is someone having a good time.
center field, center fielder – nouns.
center-field – adjective.

Centerior Energy Corp. – see FirstEnergy Corp.

chairman,  – Do not use chair, chairwoman or chairperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Chairman Janet Smith, Chairman Bob Davis  (revised October 31, 2002)

chaise lounge

Charter Behavioral Health System – No longer Charter Hospital of Toledo.

checkup, check up – noun, verb.

chock-full

Chrysler Group LLC is now called FCA US LLC- Use it on first reference when referring to the new company. The parent company Fiat Chrysler Automobile N.V. Also, see automotive plants, local.
[Revised Dec. 17, 2014]

Toledo Assembly Complex (formerly Toledo Jeep Assembly complex)- Owned by FCA US  LLC. The complex is made up of two sets of plants, one that makes the Jeep Wrangler and the other makes the Jeep Cherokeee.  [revised Dec. 17. 2014].

See automotive plants, local.

claim – Do not use as a synonym for assert, declare, or insist. A good rule of thumb is to use claim as a verb only with a direct object: He claimed the prize.

clampdown, clamp down – noun, verb.

clarifications – See corrections.

Clarion Hotel – No longer the Sheraton Westgate.

Clazel Theater – New name of the historic theater in Bowling Green. Do not use Cla Ze or Cla-Zel. It’s one word: Clazel. It used to be hyphenated after the original owners Clark and Hazel, but that is no longer what it is called. [Revised October 2009]

clean-cut

cleanup, clean up – noun/adjective, verb.

clear-cut

cliches – Avoid old, inaccurate cliches: hammered out a contract; a sweeping bill; a massive tax cut; braved the rain, etc.

climactic, climatic – The first pertains to a climax: a climactic scene of a play. The second pertains to the climate: Some scientists predict severe climatic changes.

climax, culminate – Use climax as a transitive verb, culminate as an intransitive verb (with in): A banquet climaxed the day’s events. The day’s events culminated in a banquet.

close-up – noun and adjective.

closure – Most cases.

cloture – In legislative bodies.

co – Use the hyphen in compounds like co-defendant, co-sponsor, co-worker, and co-star. Other words, like copilot and correspondent, are not hyphenated.

cocaine – The slang term coke should appear only in quoted matter. Crack is refined cocaine in crystalline rock form. [added November 2022]

coined verbs – In some cases coinages of verbs from nouns have become accepted: the couple vacationed; the family picnicked; the home was burglarized. However, some verb forms such as to impact and to prioritize are still not considered good usage. If in doubt, consult the dictionary.

coliseum, Colosseum – A coliseum is an enclosed arena. The Colosseum is the famed ruins in Rome.

Colombia – The South American country.

color-blind

come – Announcements, statements, wars, peace, cannot come.

comedown – noun.

commander in chief

commas – See punctuation.

Common Space – The arts organization called The Common Space, run by Martin Nagy, has two locations: Common Space in the former Glann School on Reynolds Road just north of Dorr Street, and Common Space Two, the former Martin School at Hill Avenue and Holland-Sylvania Road.

community-based corrections – This is the catch phrase for diverting inmates from costly medium and high-security facilities, such as the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility in Lucasville, to community alternatives, such as minimum security facilities, halfway houses, and house arrest with electronic bracelets, for example.

community-oriented policing – This is a return to the days when officers walked neighborhood beats. It is a style of policing that takes officers out of squad cars and mixes law enforcement with social work.

Companies
LOCAL     [revised Oct. 25, 2007]

  • The Andersons Inc., based in Maumee (The should be capitalized).
  • Cooper Tire & Rubber Co. (use ampersand), based in Findlay.
  • Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee [revised January 2017]
  • First Defiance Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • La-Z-Boy Inc. ( no Chair in the name), based in Monroe.
  • Libbey Inc. (no longer Libbey Glass), based in Toledo.
  • HCR ManorCare Inc., renamed/rebranded ProMedica Senior Care [October 2020]
  • N-Viro International Corp., based in Toledo.
  • Ohio Art Co., based in Bryan
  • Owens Corning  (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.
  • Owens-Illinois Inc., (use hyphen), based in Perrysburg. Second reference: O-I .
  • ProMedica (one word, M is capitalized), based in Toledo. [Added March 2019]
  • ProMedica Senior Care (previously HCR ManorCare Inc. [Added October 2020]
  • Rurban Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • Tecumseh Products Co., based in Ann Arbor [revised February 2011]
  • Welltower (previously Health Care REIT Inc.), based in Toledo [Revised March 2019]

Companies with big local presence [revised May 2015]

  • Chrysler Group LLC [revised 7/16/2009]
  • FirstEnergy Corp. (owns Toledo Edison)
  • Ford Motor Co.
  • General Motors Co. [Revised July 16, 2009]
  • Marathon Petroleum Corp. is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]
  • Pilkington North America, a subsidiary of Nippon (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)
  • Spartan Stores Inc. (owns Pharm stores)
    See also: automotive plants, banks, malls

complement, compliment  –  Complement is a noun or verb denoting completeness or the process of supplementing something: The ship has a complement of 200 sailors and 20 officers. The hat complements her dress. Compliment is a noun or verb that denotes praise or the expression of courtesy: The captain complimented the sailors.  She was flattered by the compliments on her outfit.

complexion – Use as a noun: She was of light complexion. Avoid complexioned and complected.

compose, comprise – The easiest rule of thumb is that comprise is the equivalent of is composed of: The book comprises 12 sections. The book is composed of 12 sections. Do not use is comprised of.

computer virus – A destructive, repetitive program “hidden” in a shared computer program that eats away at a system’s programs and stored information.

conditional clauses – Use the past perfect in the if clause, the past conditional in the main clause.Right: If the dog had kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

Wrong: If the dog would have kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

congressman –  Do not use congresswoman  or congressperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Bob Davis (revised October 31, 2002)

conscious, aware – We are conscious of what we feel but aware of what we know: Police were aware (not conscious) of the bank robbers’ plans.

Consumer Price Index – Based on a variety of goods and services, this is the chief measurement of inflation in the United States. Many government and private organizations use the index as a yardstick for revising salaries, wages, welfare benefits, and other payments to keep pace with inflation. As a result the index affects the income of about half the people in the United States.

continuous, continual – What is done continuously is done without interruption, but a man can work hard continually and still take time out to sleep.

controller, comptroller – Controller is the preferred word except when the official designNation is comptroller, as the comptroller of the United States.

co-op

cop-out

cops – Avoid the usage for policemen except in quotes, light features, and entertainment stories.

coronavirus – Use coronavirus. Do Not use COVID-19 unless it is part of a quote in a story. COVID-19, which stands for coronavirus disease 2019, is caused by a virus named SARS-CoV-2. Symptoms of the virus can include fever, cough, and breathing trouble. Most develop only mild symptoms. But some people, usually those with other medical complications, develop more severe symptoms, including pneumonia, which can be fatal.

corrections – This is the format: An article on a specific topic on a specific day made an error. The correct information is ——- ———– ——-. Except in very rare circumstances do not repeat the error.

Example of a correction:
An article yesterday Thurs. 9/7 on Continental Express Airlines’ use of larger planes on Toledo-to-Cleveland flights misidentified the Toledo station manager for Continental Express.  The manager is Gus Lahanis.

Example of an invented sports correction:
An article in yesterday’s sports section incorrectly reported the winners of the Grand Goose shuffleboard tournament. George Smith placed first and Emma Jones was second.

COSI – The Center of Science & Industry goes by COSI. When referring to the center, use COSI exclusively. On subsequent references, it may be called a hands-on science and education center.

council, counsel – Council is a deliberative or advisory body, as city council, a legislative council, ecclesiastical council. Counsel is legal or other advice or the person who gives it. The word counselor also is used for one who gives advice.

councilman –  Do not use councilwoman or councilperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Councilman Janet Smith, Councilman Bob Davis  [Revised October 31, 2002]

counter – Forms one-word compounds except when the second part of the combination begins with an r.

Countian – DO NOT use it or Lucas Countian. Countian is a made up word. Use Lucas county residents or count residents.  [Added January 2013]

counties – On first reference and in headlines county standing alone always means Lucas County. Do not use the name of a county by itself in a headline: Say a Lenawee County man; not a Lenawee man.

couple, pair

When used in the sense of two people, the word takes plural verbs and pronouns: The couple were married Saturday and left Sunday on their honeymoon.

In the sense of a single unit use a singular verb: Each couple was asked to give $10.

The above also applies to pair.

Do not write: Jones got a couple hits. Make it a couple of hits.

court cases – Italicize the names of lawsuits: Roe vs. Wade.

courtesy titles – see titles.

court-martial, courts-martial

cover-up, cover up – noun, verb.

coverage – We will cover with Blade staff all non-spot news events that occur within 150 miles of Toledo and which are sufficiently important to be likely to attract national coverage, These may include, but are not limited to, institutional openings, funerals, graduation speeches, parades, performances, appearances by luminaries. Excluded are sports events and trials.

COVID-19 – Use coronavirus. See coronavirus entry.

crash-land – verb.

crash-landing – noun.

credible, credulous – Credible means believable. Credulous means ready or disposed to believe.

Credit lines
All caps. Use the full name of the news service with photos one column and larger. Half-column wire photos run without credit.

Bylined articles written by Blade staff members carry the credit:
By JOE McGINTY
BLADE STAFF WRITER
unless the writer has a title such as business writer, music critic, arts writer, etc.

Bylined articles from writers based at other newspapers owned by Block Communications, Inc., carry the credit:
BLOCK NEWS ALLIANCE

Bylined articles by non-staff writers carry the credit:
SPECIAL TO THE BLADE

Articles written in The Blade newsroom from regional material provided by paid stringers are credited:
BLADE CORRESPONDENT

Staff-produced dateline and non-bylined articles are credited:
BLADE STAFF

Articles produced in The Blade newsroom from both staff-generated and news-service material are credited:
BLADE STAFF AND NEWS SERVICES
[revised March 2010]

News-service stories that require bylines follow the same credit format.
Examples:
By TAD BARTIMUS
ASSOCIATED PRESS

By R.W. APPLE
NEW YORK TIMES
By PAMELA CONSTABLE
WASHINGTON POST

Datelined non byline news-service articles are credited as follows:

Datelined news-service articles should be credited as specifically as possible. Use the name of the newspaper, such as the Los Angeles Times, New York Times or Washington Post. Do not use abbreviations, such as AP, NYT, or CP. Spell out names of the wire services.

Use BLADE NEWS SERVICES when dispatches are blended. [revised March 2010] Credit lines run above the dateline, and some examples are:

  • ASSOCIATED PRESS
  • REUTERS
  • NEW YORK TIMES
  • WASHINGTON POST
  • BLADE NEWS SERVICES

Credit lines for photos

For staff photos:
THE BLADE/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

For freelance photos and pictures taken by Blade reporters:
PHOTOGRAPHER NAME FOR THE BLADE

For AP, New York Times, Reuters: ASSOCIATED PRESS, NEW YORK TIMES, REUTERS. If you can determine that the picture was taken by a newspaper, use the name of the paper, such as CHICAGO TRIBUNE, or LOS ANGELES TIMES.

For staff file photo:
BLADE PHOTO

For pool photo:
POOL PHOTO/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

criteria, criterion – plural, singular.

critical – A person near death in a hospital is in critical condition. A person is critical when he criticizes someone or something.

cross as prefix – Usually hyphenated in combinations, but there are exceptions like crossover and crosswise.

cross-country

cross-examine

cross fire – noun

cryptocurrency – A type of digital money secured via encryption technology in an unalterable — at least for now — and publicly viewable way. Cryptocurrency is not the same as virtual currency, which is used in online games and other virtual worlds.

The shorthand crypto is acceptable in headlines and direct quotations, but should be avoided in story text to avoid confusion with cryptography.

As of early 2022, bitcoin was the most popular cryptocurrency system. Others include ethereum, litecoin, dogecoin and a large number of rivals, some created for specific purposes. Lowercase all references to bitcoin and other cryptocurrencies, consistent with the style for conventional currency.

References to individual cryptocurrencies should use the singular form — bitcoin, ethereum, litecoin. Example: Thieves reportedly stole litecoin worth $15 million. Use plural forms for specific quantities of cryptocurrency — six bitcoins, 58.7 ethers — analogous to style for traditional currency. Acronyms for particular cryptocurrencies — for instance, USDC for U.S. digital coin — should still be fully capitalized.

Unlike dollars, euros and other traditional currencies, cryptocurrencies are not backed by governments, central banks or, for the most part, physical assets. As a result, their value is often determined largely via supply and demand, which can cause wild swings in their value. The exception is a class of cryptocurrencies known as stablecoins whose values are pegged, often to traditional currencies like the U.S. dollar or commodities like gold.

Individual units of cryptocurrency, called tokens, can be traded for other tokens or for traditional currencies via online exchanges. Many investors trade these tokens much like they’d trade stocks.

Cryptocurrency owners typically store their tokens in virtual wallets offered by a variety of vendors, including some online services that resemble bank accounts. Tokens can be used to pay for goods and services at participating merchants, although as of early 2022 few vendors accepted cryptocurrency.

In technical terms, tokens exist as chunks of data that are digitally signed each time they travel from one owner to the next. These transactions are stored in data blocks; when the transactions are verified, those blocks are chained to previous blocks, forming a digital ledger called a blockchain. Copies of each blockchain are stored in multiple locations, making them extremely difficult to tamper with.

Blockchains are constructed by people known as miners who lend their computing power to verify cryptocurrency transactions so that no one can spend the same token twice. Miners receive new cryptocurrency tokens — bitcoins or ethers (the ethereum token), for instance — as rewards. The mining process consumes a great deal of electricity, much of it carbon-based as of early 2022.

Although it’s possible to trace bitcoins and some other cryptocurrencies as they are spent, owners of the accounts behind those transactions aren’t always easily identifiable. Criminals favor cryptocurrency for that reason and employ various methods to launder it. It is the currency of ransomware attacks, in which malicious software locks a computer and its data until the target pays a ransom.

Investigators, however, are increasingly able to link cryptocurrency transactions to real people, especially when the cryptocurrency is converted to a traditional currency.

The world of cryptocurrency and blockchain continues to evolve rapidly. The Associated Press will update style for these subjects on a regular basis.

bitcoin The first cryptocurrency to attain significant popularity. It was designed by an unknown person or group using the pseudonym Satoshi Nakamoto and launched in 2009. As of early 2022, bitcoin was the most popular cryptocurrency system available. Lowercase all references to bitcoin and other cryptocurrencies, consistent with the style for conventional currency.

As with other cryptocurrencies, bitcoins do not exist as physical bills or coins. Rather, they exist as blocks of data that are digitally signed each time they travel from one owner to the next. The value of bitcoin has risen considerably over the past several years, although it continues to experience wild price swings.

blockchain A distributed digital ledger of cryptocurrency transactions that is maintained across a worldwide network. In general, different cryptocurrencies use different blockchains, although some new cryptocurrencies have been established on existing blockchains.

Some blockchains can store other kinds of data, such as hyperlinks and files. Smart contracts, for instance, exist as software code stored on a blockchain that can self-execute once the contract terms have been met.

Blockchain records are stored in a “peer-to-peer” network that updates continually so that copies of these records are stored across computers around the world.

Blockchain records are secured through cryptography. Participants have their own private keys that act as personal digital signatures for accessing their funds. Cryptocurrency transactions are digitally signed each time cryptocurrency changes hands.

Web3 A catchall term for the prospect of a new stage of the internet driven by the cryptocurrency-related technology blockchain.

Although blockchain is best known as a mechanism that makes bitcoin and other cryptocurrencies possible, it can also store data and even software code that can self-execute under certain conditions.

Some see this latter feature as the key to building a new, distributed internet based on blockchain technology, one that’s effectively owned by no one, answerable to no authority and “owned” in a sense by the holders of cryptocurrencies. Many proponents consider Web3 the natural successor to both the early World Wide Web (Web 1.0) and the current internet of interactive websites and services, sometimes called Web 2.0.

As of early 2022, Web3 remained a distant vision. Critics argue that it has yet to generate any widely useful applications and decry the fact that any systems built on blockchain will be “financialized” and thus likely to be warped by speculators trading the cryptocurrency tokens associated with the blockchain.

Do not use the term Web3 without explanation. For instance: Many proponents believe that a new version of the internet based on blockchain, known by some as Web3, will be key to undermining the power of giant tech companies such as Google and Meta, the company formerly known as Facebook.

non-fungible token, NFT Artificially scarce digital objects created by using blockchain technology to mint “unique” versions of digital artwork, sports memorabilia, famous photographs and anything else that can be digitized. NFT is acceptable on first reference, but use the full term high in the story and explain what it means.

Digital objects such as these can typically be copied or altered without limit. Turning them into NFTs involves placing a declaration of ownership on a blockchain, typically the ethereum blockchain. That creates a permanent record of “ownership.” It’s possible to create a series of NFTs for a single digital object, each uniquely numbered, theoretically increasing the value of the lowest numbers.

In March 2021 the artist Beeple sold an NFT of one of his pieces for almost $70 million, kicking off an NFT boom.

Critics point out that NFTs don’t actually involve putting digital artworks directly on the blockchain; most are far too large for that. Instead, the data placed on the blockchain typically includes a series number and a simple hyperlink pointing to a non-unique version of the art. [Added March 2022]

cuff links

Cutlines
The Blade uses two kinds of cutlines, so-called cutboxes and tie-in lines.

Cutboxes, used with photos without an accompanying story, have a headline briefly summarizing the photo, plus a block of text.    Cutlines should be written in the present tense except where common sense or historical times make it impractical. They should help tell the story with pertinent information; they should describe whatever is necessary to make the picture meaningful, but they should not state the obvious that is insulting to the reader: The politician kisses a baby or Molly Jones puts on her new shirt.

Tie-in cutlines are used with photos that
accompany articles. These cutlines identify people and/or things and the action in the picture. The day is not necessary because it is in the story. Use single quotes in all cutlines.

Cutlines with half-column and one-column mugshots include a brief description of the pictured person’s role to the article with which the cut appears. Limit half-column cuts to a two-line maximum, dropping first name if needed. Use verbs and articles where possible.
Examples:
half-column of Liz Taylor
Taylor: set
to wed again
one-column of the police chief
Chief Felker: He is
injured in a crash:

Cutline reefers now read STORY ON PAGE x.

Weather cutlines should indicate the forecast and refer.

cutoff, cut off – noun/adjective, verb.

cut-rate


D

Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee. [revised January 2017]

Datelines (also see state names)
All articles originating outside Lucas County with the exception of Rossford, Northwood, and Perrysburg carry a dateline.

All place names included on road maps published by the states of Ohio and Michigan will be used in datelines. Datelines from other states should be based on the Rand McNally atlas. Do not use townships as datelines. Stories developing in rural areas should carry a dateline of the nearest community on the map. In all cases it is essential high in the story to locate the community by appropriate indicators such as county and distance from a more well-known location.

All 4-star communities outside Lucas County as well as well-known and area cities stand alone in datelines and in body copy. Others should be followed by the state or Canadian province (see abbreviations) or by the name of the country. Names of countries are not abbreviated.

A dateline is required when the action we are reporting happened outside Toledo, even though we may be covering the event from here.

We would not use a dateline when we are simply interviewing an out-of-town source for a story we are developing or for a story we are following, as long as the news event is not happening in that town.

In certain cases, to avoid confusion, it may be necessary to let the reader know that we are conducting a telephone interview. An example would be interviewing an out-of-town person in advance of his or her Toledo appearance, such as an entertainer, author, scientist, etc. It is desirable to let the reader know by the third paragraph that we were conducting a telephone interview. If that’s not possible, it should be high up in the story – and before the runover.

THE FOLLOWING CITIES STAND ALONE:
Akron, Ann Arbor, Bowling Green, Bryan, Canton, Cincinnati, Cleveland, Columbus,  Dayton, Defiance, Erie, Findlay, Fostoria, Fremont, Kelleys Island, Lambertville,  Luckey, Napoleon, Port Clinton, Sandusky, Temperance, Tiffin, Wauseon, Youngstown [Revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Ohio):
Ada, Alvordton, Archbold, Bellevue, Bluffton, Bradner,  Carey, Clyde, Curtice, Custar, Cygnet, Delta, Deshler, Elliston, Fayette,  Genoa, Gibsonburg, Grand Rapids, Graytown, Haskins,  Hicksville, Holgate,  Lakeside, Leipsic, Liberty Center, Little Sister Island,  Lyons, Marblehead, McClure, Metamora, Middle Bass Island, Millbury, Montpelier,  North Baltimore, North Bass Island, Norwalk, Oak Harbor, Ohio City, Paulding, Pemberville, Pettisville, Pioneer, Portage, Put-in-Bay, Rattlesnake Island, Risingsun,  South Bass Island,  Stryker,  Tontogany, Upper Sandusky, Van Wert, Wapakoneta,  West Sister Island, Woodville, Wyandot. [revised November 2023]

THE FOLLOWING MICHIGAN CITIES STAND ALONE:
Adrian, Ann Arbor, Detroit, Hillsdale, Kalamazoo, Lambertville, Lansing, Luna Pier, Monroe, Ottawa Lake, Temperance. All others would take the Mich. including Erie (to avoid possible confusion with Erie, Pa.)  [Added August 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Michigan):
Blissfield, Deerfield, Dundee, Ida, Maybee, Morenci, Ottawa Lake, Petersburg, Riga, Samaria, Tecumseh.  [revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:
United States:
Anchorage, Annapolis, Atlanta, Austin, Baltimore, Baton Rouge, Boise, Boston, Buffalo, Charlotte, Cheyenne, Chicago, Colorado Springs, Corpus Christi, Dallas, Denver, Des Moines, Detroit, El Paso, Fort Worth, Greensboro, Hartford, Hollywood, Honolulu, Houston, Indianapolis, Jacksonville, Jersey City, Juneau, Kansas City, Lansing, Las Vegas, Little Rock, Los Angeles, Louisville, Memphis, Miami, Milwaukee, Minneapolis, Nashville, Newark, New Orleans, New York,  Norfolk, Oakland,  Oklahoma City, Omaha, Philadelphia, Phoenix, Pittsburgh, Raleigh, Reno, Sacramento, Salt Lake City, San Antonio, San Diego, San Francisco, Santa Fe, Seattle, Spokane, St. Louis, St. Paul, Tacoma, Tallahassee, Tampa, Topeka,  Tucson,  United Nations, Virginia Beach, Washington

The Americas :
Buenos Aires, Calgary, Caracas, Edmonton, Guatemala, Havana, Managua, Mexico City, Montreal, Panama, Quebec, Rio de Janeiro, San Salvador, Sao Paulo, Saskatoon, Toronto,  Vancouver, Whitehorse, Winnipeg,

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:

Other Continents:
Algiers, Amsterdam, Athens, Baghdad, Bangkok, Barcelona, Beijing, Beirut, Belfast, Belgrade, Berlin, Bonn, Brussels, Budapest, Cairo, Calcutta, Cape Town, Casablanca, Copenhagen, Damascus,  Dublin, Edinburgh, Gdansk, Geneva, Glasgow, Hamburg, Hanoi, Helsinki, Ho Chi Minh City, Hong Kong, Istanbul, Jerusalem, Johannesburg, Leningrad, Lisbon, London, Luxembourg, Madrid, Manila, Marseille, Melbourne, Monte Carlo, Moscow, Munich, Naples, New Delhi, Oslo, Paris, Phnom Penh, Prague, Pretoria, Rome, Seoul, Singapore, Stockholm, Sydney, Taipei, Tehran, Tel Aviv, Tokyo, Turin, Vatican City, Venice, Vienna,  Warsaw, Yangon, Zurich.

data – The word typically takes singular verbs and pronouns when writing for general audiences and in data journalism contexts: The data is sound. In scientific and academic writing, plural verbs and pronouns are preferred. Use databank and database, but data processing (n. and adj.) and data center.

Davis-Besse nuclear power plant. The name is hyphenated, but the “n” in nuclear, “p” in power, and “p” in plant are all lowercase. [Added November 2011]

daylight saving –  adjective. Not savings. No hyphen.

When linking the term with the name of a time zone, use only the word daylight: Eastern Daylight Time, Pacific Daylight Time, etc. Lowercase daylight saving time in all uses and daylight time whenever it stands alone. A federal law specifies that daylight time applies from 2 a.m. on the second Sunday of March until 2 a.m. on the first Sunday of November in areas that do not specifically exempt themselves. [Updated March 2021]

day – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

dead end, dead-end –  noun, adjective/verb.

Democrat, Democratic  – Democrat is the proper noun referring to a member of the political party. Democratic is its adjective. See capitalization.

desert, dessert –  Two nouns are spelled desert. One, pronounced DESert, refers to a desolate or dry area. The other, pronounced deSERT, same as the verb, means something deserved or earned: “He got his just deserts.” Dessert is a course served at the end of a meal.

detective – Never abbreviate. For example, Detective Joe Smith.

Detroit Three – Use when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Do NOT use Big Three. See Big Three entry. [Added February 2017]

dialect –  Dialect should be avoided, even in quoted matter, unless it is clearly pertinent to a story.

differ, different –  Both words should be followed by from, not by than. However, differ in the sense of disagree is followed by with.

Examples: The gray squirrel differs from the red in size as well as color. The viola is different from the violin in size and pitch. The witness differed with the senator on the question of privileged information.

different – Do not use it unnecessarily, as in: he had 17 different jobs. She took 17 different pills.

Dingell – The late U.S. Rep. John (D., Dearborn). Not Trenton

discreet, discrete –  Discreet means prudent, circumspect: “I’m afraid I was not very discreet,” she wrote. Discrete means detached, separate: There are four discrete sounds from a quadraphonic system.

diseases – Do not capitalize diseases such as cancer, emphysema, leukemia, hepatitis, etc., but do capitalize the shorthand COVID-19, MERS, SARS. When a disease is known by the name of a person or geographical area identified with it, capitalize only the proper noun element: Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, Ebola virus, etc.

Avoid such expressions as: He is battling COVID-19. She is a stroke victim. Use neutral, precise descriptions: He has stomach cancer. She had a stroke. [Added April 2020]

DNA – deoxyribonucleic acid is a genetic code contained in the nuclei of human cells. Except for identical twins, no two people have identical DNA patterns.

dominant –  adjective.

dominate – verb.

double check, double-check –   noun, verb.

double play, double-play  – noun, adjective.

double-talk –  noun.

double time, double-time – noun, adjective/verb

douse, dowse –  The first means to plunge into water; the second, to use a divining rod to find water.

drier, dryer –  adjective, appliance

dropout, drop out –  noun, verb.

Drug Abuse Resistance Education – First reference should be Drug Abuse Resistance Education. Following references use DARE [revised October 23, 2002]

drugstore

drunk – He was drunk (when the adjective follows the noun). But a drunken driver; drunken driving.

due to – Not accepted as a substitute for “caused by” or “because of.”

dumpster – (Dumpster, a former trademark)  is a large metal trash bin, often of a kind that is emptied, or transported to a dump, by a specially equipped truck. Because there is no longer a trademark for the brand, the ‘d” in dumpster does not need to capitalized. [Updated October 2020]


E

easy, easily  –  Easy as an adverb survives only as a vulgarism and in a few phrases, mostly colloquial: stand easy, take it easy, easy come easy go, easier said than done.

Elderly – Use this word carefully and sparingly. Do not refer to a person as elderly unless it is clearly relevant to the story. Apply the same principle to terms such as senior citizen. It is appropriate in generic phrases that do not refer to specific individuals: concern for elderly people, a home for senior citizens, etc. If the intent is to show that an individual’s faculties have deteriorated, cite a graphic example and give attribution for it. Use age when available and appropriate. [Added November 2019]

Electricity – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Electric Auto-Lite – The name of the Toledo company when it was the site for the 1934 strike where the National Guard charged the protesters, killing 2 and wounding hundreds. The strike was one of the formative job actions in the founding of the UAW and CIO. In 1961, Electric Auto-Lite became Electric Autolite, at which time Autolite became a brand name.
[Revised October 30, 2002]

elude  –  To avoid adroitly, evade. See allude.

emigrant, immigrant –  A person emigrates from a country and immigrates into another. Thus an emigrant from Germany becomes an immigrant to the United States.

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

eminent, imminent –  Eminent means noted; imminent means near in time.

email –  Changed in June 2011 to follow the style of Associated Press. No longer use with a hyphen, and addresses should be in boldface. [Revised June 2011]

enact – Laws are enacted; bills are passed.

enclose – Preferred over inclose for all uses.

endorse – Now preferred over indorse in all uses.

en route – Two words.

envelop, envelope –  verb, noun.

epidemic, pandemic – An epidemic is the rapid spreading of disease in a certain population or region; a pandemic is an epidemic that has spread worldwide. Follow declarations of public health officials. On March 11, 2020, the World Health Organization declared the COVID-19 outbreak a pandemic. Do not write global pandemic, which is redundant. [Added April 2020]

erstwhile – Means former.

esports – Acceptable in all references to competitive multiplayer video gaming. Use alternate forms like eSports or e-sports only if part of a formal name, like an organization or arena. Capitalize at the start of sentences. Like other collective nouns that are plural in form, esports takes singular form when the group or quantity is regarded as a unit.

estate – An estate is used to refer to a large landed property owned by an individual of great wealth; said property would contain a large residence and other structures of great value, all of which would require a staff to maintain. An estate would not contain rental property and slum conditions on the property as was the case with Vice President Al Gore’s home and property that, in addition to his home, contained substandard housing being rented to a poor family. We and other media, in reporting that story, referred to the Gore property as an “estate.” Do not use “estate” to mean only an expensive home on landed property as defined in Webster’s Dictionary.

ethics committee – Not the official name of the congressional panel.

ever as prefix – Usually not hyphenated: everbearing and everlasting. Use a hyphen when the dictionary does not give a one-word form.

ex – Takes the hyphen when used in the sense of the former: ex-king, ex-president, ex-senator. Be sure the prefix is used with the right word. For instance, John J. Gilligan is an Ohio ex-governor because he is still an Ohioan; he is not an ex-Ohio governor. However, write ex-public official rather than public ex-official. In this case the ex refers to the whole phrase.

expect – See anticipate.

extradite – The governmental unit that gives up the prisoner does the extraditing: California extradited the suspect to Ohio. The suspect was extradited by California to Ohio. Ohio sought the extradition of the suspect by California.

eye opener


F

fact finder

fact-finding – noun/adjective

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall in Maumee, located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

faker, fakir – The meaning of the first is obvious. The second is a Moslem or Hindu holy man or ascetic.

Far East – The easternmost portions of the continent of Asia: China, Japan, North and South Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and the eastern portions of the Soviet Union. See Southeast Asia.

farmhand

farmhouse

farm worker

farther, further – Farther refers to physical distance: He walked farther into the woods. Further refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the mystery.

fat cat

female – Do not use as a synonym for woman. See lady.

fewer, less – Use fewer for people/individuals or things that can be counted. Fewer than 100 applicants applied. Use less with a number that describes quantity or bulk. Police recovered less than $1,500; It happened less than 36 hours ago; The recipe calls for less than two cups of sugar.

FFA – The official name of what formerly was Future Farmers of America.

fiance, fiancee – Fiance refers to a man; fiancee to a woman.

Fiberglas – Trademark of Owens Corning.

fiber glass, fiber-glass – noun, adjective.

Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate is the correct name for One SeaGate in downtown Toledo. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine.The former Fifth Third Center (headquarters at Madison and Huron) is no longer called that because the sign is down and the bank doesn’t own it anymore. For now, we could refer to it informally as the former Fifth Third Bank headquarters at Madison and Huron. [added  July 22, 2008]

Fifth Third Field – On first reference the new stadium should be called by its formal name. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the new Mud Hens stadium, or the stadium, etc. [revised January 30, 2002]

figure – The verb means calculate or estimate using figures. It is correct to say “He figured his income tax,” questionable to say “John Jones figured in the inquiry.”

firefighter

fire tower

first-rate – noun/adjective

FirstEnergy Corp. – owns Toledo Edison Co. and is based in Akron. FirstEnergy (one word) was created from merger of Centerior Energy Corp. and Ohio Edison Co. [ revised January 30, 2002]

flair, flare – Flair is a knack or talent, flare as a noun is a torch.

flare up, flare-up – verb, noun.

flaunt, flout – To flaunt is to display ostentatiously; to flout is to scoff at: The peacock flaunted its plumage. The composition flouted the rules.

flier, flyer – A flier is an aviator; a flyer is a handbill or a venture.

flimflam

flip-flop

floe  – Do not use ice with floe.

flounder, founder  – A flounder is a fish; to move in a clumsy manner is to flounder. To founder is to get bogged down, become disabled or to sink.

fold as suffix – Do not hyphenate: twofold, threefold, tenfold.

follow-up

foot, feet  – It is correct to say a man is a six-footer but not to say he is six foot tall or six foot. Also it is correct to say a 6-foot, 2-inch guard, or his height is 6 feet, 2 inches.

forgo, forego  –  Forgo means to abstain from or renounce. Forego means to go before.

former, old – Former means erstwhile; old refers to age: The old mansion on Cherry Street is the former home of Mrs. Harvey.

Fort – Do not abbreviate for cities or for military installations.

It should be Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Do not use Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Use Fort Bragg, not Fort Bragg. [Added November 2016]

Fostoria St. Wendelin Church and Parish Life Center

foul up, foul-up – verb, noun.

Four SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]

Franciscan Center – In Sylvania, not Franciscan Life Center.

Frankenstein – In Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein was the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself.

Franklin Park Mall – Official name of Toledo’s premier indoor mail. No longer owned by Westfield.

freelance

Frisbee – A trade name; always capitalize.

front line, front-line – noun, adjective.

front-runner

front yard, front-yard – noun, adjective.

full time, full-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

fund-raiser, fund-raising

funeral vs. memorial service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service. [Added February 2015]


G

Gadhafi, Moammar – Correct Blade style for the Libyan leader. Do NOT use Muammar Kaddafi, previous Blade style.
[Added March 2011].

gage, gauge – Gage is a pledge; gauge is a measurement.

General Growth Property Inc., a Chicago-based development company that owns the Shops at Fallen Timbers in Maumee.

General Motors Co. – Use on first reference. Do not use General Motors Corp. any longer. The name was changed during the 2009 bankruptcy. The “old GM,” with the assets to be disposed, is now referred to as Motors Liquidation Co. GM still can be used in second reference. [Revised July 16, 2009]

Geographic terms

  • Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: Example. The pioneers opened the West.
  • We do not capitalize the “s” in southwestern United States, etc.
  • In the same vein, we do not capitalize the “n” in northwest Ohio or the “s” in southeast Michigan unless it is included in an organization’s name. We would do the same thing with areas of the city: East Toledo, North Toledo, South Toledo, West Toledo. But we do not capitalize northwestern Toledo, etc. Here is an example of correct usage: We would write there are seven Mercy Health hospitals in northwest Ohio. However, if we’re writing about the Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, the “n” in northwest would be uppercase because it is part of the organization’s name.
  • When writing headlines it is permissible to use NW Ohio, but there are no periods because northwestern is one word, not two.
    [Added March 2021]

gibe – Means jeer or taunt, either as a noun or verb. See jibe.

girlfriend

Gladieux Enterprises – See V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

good, well – Write “he feels good” if you mean he is in good spirits; “he feels well” if he feels healthy. (In this case well is an adjective.) But he hears well, he sees well, meaning that his perception is good. (Well is an adverb in this case.)

good-bye

good Samaritan

graduate – Graduate is correctly used in the active voice; “She graduated from the university.” It is correct but unnecessary to use the passive voice: “He was graduated from the university.”

Do not drop the from: “John Adams graduated from Harvard,” not “John Adams graduated Harvard.”

graphics – Follow style, including the use of articles in all cases.

gray – The preferred American spelling.

great as prefix – Great-grandchild, great-grandmother, great-grandson.

grisly, grizzly – Grisly means horrible; grizzly means grayish.

grown-up


H

had  –  Avoid such constructions as “he had his leg broken” and “he had his car stolen.” Both signify intent.

The Hague – Netherlands

half as prefix  –  Half as an adjective does not take the hyphen in such combinations as half brother, half dozen, half inch, half mile.

Combinations used as adjectives take the hyphen: half-inch opening, half-mile run. Combinations always hyphenated include half-breed, half-and-half, half-dollar. One-word combinations include halfback, halfway. Consult dictionary when in doubt.

haled, hailed –  Haled is an older form of hauled. A suspect is haled into court. Hailed means greeted or acclaimed.

half mast, half staff –  The flag on a ship is lowered to half mast. On land the flag is lowered to half staff.

hand-washing

hangar, hanger  –  A hangar houses planes; a hanger holds clothes.

hanged, hung  –  One hangs a picture, criminal, or oneself. For past tense or passive voice use hanged when referring to executions or suicides, hung for other actions.

Hanukkah   –  The Jewish Festival of Lights, an eight-day commemoration of rededication of the Temple by the Macabees after their victory over the Syrians. Usually occurs in December, but sometime falls in November. DO NOT use Chanukah or any other variation.

hara-kiri

hard hat

hard-liner

Hardship stories – Include a website address or phone number with any “hardship-themed” story we publish. A good example would be an Associated Press story out of Los Angeles about the basset hound rescue center that has fallen on hard times. Do this with hardship stories involving people as well as dogs and other animals. [Added November 2009]

Hayes – New name for the museum and library in Fremont is Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]

HCR ManorCare Inc. , Renamed ProMedica Senior Care in October 2020. Headquarters is on Summit Street, downtown Toledo. [revised October 2020]

headlines

The cardinal rule is that the headline must be accurate and give the reader a true impression of the story. The headline should not steal the lead, especially in feature material.

Some additional guidelines:
Avoid verb heads.
Do not end a line of a head with a preposition except on the middle line of a three-line head or deck. But if a word that is normally a preposition is part of a verb, it must be on the line with the verb.Do not break a proper name, title and name, two-word phrase, or verb and auxiliary between lines of a headline.
As closely as possible headlines should follow the same style as text on abbreviations, etc., except as noted elsewhere.
If a name or title is spelled out in body copy, spell it out in the headline.But if a name or title is abbreviated in copy, do not spell it out in a headline. Use only numbers in heads, except in rare instances, such as “one of a kind.”
Avoid repeating a word in a headline except when any synonym would sound stilted and artificial. Short prepositions such as of, to, and in may be repeated.Do not use such words as rap, slap, hit, blast, as synonyms for criticize.Use quotation marks only when the words are verbatim. Do not put quotation marks around a word just because it is used in an unusual sense or to call attention to a pun.Avoid making a headline pun on a person’s name without supervisory approval.Do not use:
·       Lash for criticize.
·       Peak for record.
·       Snarl for traffic jam.
·       Do not base headlines on weather forecasts.
·       Do not split adjectives from nouns on different lines. This is a common problem.

Instead of:
Notes set for copy
editors on the desk

Rewrite the head to keep the adjective and noun on the same line, which makes it easier for readers to understand:

Desk copy editors
to get suggestions

head-on, head on  –  adjective, adverb.

heavy-handed

Heidelberg College   [revised January 30, 2002]

held  –  Avoid using as a synonym for believed or contended.

helter-skelter

high-handed

hippie, hippy –  noun, adjective.

hit-and-run

hit-skip

high-speed, etc. – It is not necessary to describe a chase, in autos or otherwise, as “high-speed.” A “low-speed” chase would be unusual.

It is unnecessary to write “the victim was rushed to the hospital.” It is assumed that a trip to the hospital is made as rapidly as possible. Write “was taken to the hospital.”

historic, historical – A historic event is an important occurrence, one that stands out in history. Any occurrence in the past is a, not an, historic event. Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. [added March 2010]

hoard, horde – Hoard means an accumulation and is also a verb; horde is a crowd.

hocus-pocus

Hodgkin’s disease

Hollywood Casino Toledo – The official name of the casino that opened in May 2012. Be sure to include Toledo. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.

home, hone –  Do not confuse these two verbs. To home in is to seek, as in a target. To hone means to sharpen.

home room

home rule

home run

horse race

hot line

hot rod, hot-rod – noun, adjective/verb.

Huntington Center – On first reference, this is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. In April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights to the arena. [revised April 16, 2010]

hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or more. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line.

Typhoons develop west of the line. They are known as cyclones in the Indian Ocean and Australia. When a hurricane or typhoon loses strength (wind speed), usually after landfall, it is reduced to tropical storm status.

Capitalize hurricane when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Hurricane Dorian, Hurricane Michael.

Use it and its in pronoun references.

Once storms lose strength and are downgraded to tropical storm or tropical depression status, it may be clearer to simply use the storm’s name on first reference: Officials said the storm surge from Dorian was blamed for the heavy damage to the region. Give the storm’s current status and history high in the story: Dorian came ashore as a major hurricane and was downgraded to a tropical storm. After a storm is downgraded, phrasing such as storm Michael or the remnants of Hurricane Maria is also acceptable on first reference, with background later.

hurricane categories – Hurricanes are ranked 1 to 5 according to what is known as the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale. Categories 3, 4 and 5 hurricanes are considered major hurricanes.

  • Category 1 — Winds of 74-95 mph (120-150 kph). Damage primarily to unanchored mobile homes, shrubbery and trees. Some damage to poorly constructed signs and piers. Extensive damage to power lines and poles likely will result in power outages that could last a few to several days.
  • Category 2 — Winds of 96-110 mph (155-175 kph). Some roof, door and window damage to buildings. Considerable damage to mobile homes, small watercraft, trees, poorly constructed signs and piers. Many shallowly rooted trees will be snapped or uprooted and block numerous roads. Near-total power loss is expected with outages that could last from several days to weeks.
  • Category 3 — Winds of 111-129 mph (180-210 kph). Some structural damage to small homes. Mobile homes destroyed and large trees blown down. Hurricane Katrina, the costliest natural disaster in U.S. history, was a Category 3 at landfall in 2005 after being a Category 5 in the Gulf of Mexico.
  • Category 4 — Winds of 130-156 mph (210-250 kph). Wall failures and roof collapses on small homes, and extensive damage to doors and windows. Complete destruction of some homes, especially mobile homes. Power outages will last for weeks to possibly months. Most of the area will be uninhabitable for weeks or months. In 2004, Hurricane Charley hit the Florida Gulf Coast near Fort Myers as a Category 4 storm. It left thousands homeless and the total U.S. damage was estimated at more than $15 billion.
  • Category 5 — Winds greater than 157 mph (250 kph). Complete roof failure on many homes and industrial buildings. Smaller buildings and mobile homes blown over or completely blown away. Major damage to lower floors of all structures located less than 15 feet (4.5 meters) above sea level and within 500 yards (460 meters) of the shoreline. Massive evacuation of residential areas on low ground within 5 to 10 miles (8 to 16 kilometers) inland may be required.

Hurricane Katrina in 2005, which was a Category 3 storm, was the most expensive hurricane to hit the United States with $160 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation into 2017 dollars. Hurricane Harvey in 2017 was second with $125 billion in damage, with 2017’s Maria, a Category 4 storm on landfall ranked third at $90 billion. Superstorm Sandy, which pummeled New York and New Jersey in 2012, didn’t have the high winds and had lost tropical status by the time it struck. Though not formally called a major hurricane, it had devastating effects and caused $70 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation.

hurricane names – The names of tropical cyclones are decided by the World Meteorological Organization and are recycled every six years. If more than 21 named tropical cyclones occur in one basin in a season, any additional storms will be named for Greek letters. The names of storms deemed to have caused extraordinary damage are retired from the list. When referring to two hurricanes: hurricanes Maria and Dorian.

hurricane season – The portion of the year that has a relatively high incidence of hurricanes. In the Atlantic, Caribbean and Gulf of Mexico, this is from June through November. In the eastern Pacific, it is May 15 through Nov. 30. In the central Pacific, it is June 1 through Nov. 30.

hurricane warning – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are expected somewhere within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. The warning is issued 36 hours before tropical-storm-force winds are expected to arrive.

hurricane watch – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are possible within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. A hurricane watch is issued 48 hours in advance of the expected onset of tropical-storm-force winds.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

hyphenation – An adjective modifying a noun takes no hyphen, but when the adjective and noun in combination modify another noun, the hyphen is required: sound money, a sound-money policy.

A noun used to modify another noun becomes an adjective for grammatical purposes and no hyphen is needed. Race winner, not race-winner; bird watcher, not bird-watcher. Exceptions are combinations shown as hyphenated in the dictionary.

Two hyphens are needed in phrases like 10-foot-deep hole, 50-foot-tall tree, three-mile-wide strip.

Compound adjectives made up of a noun and a verb must be hyphenated: a man-eating shark is different from a man eating shark.

However, the hyphen may be omitted in two-word phrases used together so generally that their connection is obvious: high school boy, income tax returns, civil rights struggle.

Do NOT use the hyphen between an adverb ending in ly and the verb, participle, or adjective it modifies: a recently remodeled house.

In general well or ill take the hyphen when the adverb is before the noun: a well-fed cat; the cat was well fed.

Do not use suspended hyphens, as in three-, five-, and eight-mile runs. Write either three-mile, five-mile, and eight-mile runs or three, five, and eight-mile runs.


I

ice pack

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

ill health –  Avoid this term. A person is either ill or healthy.

Imagination Station — Science center, formerly COSI, that opens October 2009 on Summit Street in downtown Toledo
[added September 2009]

imminent –  See eminent.

inaugurate –  Implies some degree of formality or ceremony; limit its use to such occasions.

include –  Use to introduce a series only when the items that follow are part of a total: The zoo includes lions and tigers.

incumbent – Avoid the redundancy of incumbent senator, etc.

infer, imply –  Infer means to draw a conclusion, imply to hint or suggest: The speaker implied that all was not well in his country. His audience inferred that a revolution was brewing.

insect –  Spiders and centipedes are not insects. If in doubt about a specific creature, consult references.

inside of, outside of –   Drop the of.

Instagram – Photo- and video-sharing service owned by Meta Platforms Inc. [Added March 2022]

inter as prefix –  Takes no hyphen except when second part of the word begins with a capital letter, as in inter-American.

inter, intra –  Inter means between, intra within: Interplanetary travel, intramural (within the walls) athletics.

internet: Lowercase internet to match Blade style for web and website. The internet is a decentralized, worldwide network of computers and other devices that can communicate with each other.
The web, like email, is a subset of the internet. They are not synonymous and should not be used interchangeably in stories. [Added February 2021]

ISOH/IMPACT – A nonprofit disaster relief organization. It is based at 25182 River Road, Perrysburg, but its distribution center is at 905 Farnsworth Rd., Waterville. Note: all letters are uppercase.   [Added May 2013]

its, it’s  –  possessive pronoun, contraction of it is.


J

JayCee

jailed –  When incorrectly used for sentenced, jailed gives a different meaning. “The driver was jailed for 90 days” means that he has completed a sentence of 90 days. (Do not “give a sentence.”)

jelly bean

Jeep – a brand of Stellantis. [Added September 2023]

jibe –  Means agree. See gibe.

Johnson’s Island – is correct for the Lake Erie island north of Sandusky and south of Marblehead in Ottawa County. It was the site of a prisoner-of-war camp for Confederate officers captured during the American Civil War. [revised 2002, April 2014]

judges –  Blade coverage of court sentencings involving major crimes (including, but not limited to, murder, rape, major felonies, major white-collar crimes) always will give a direct quotation of the judge’s pronouncement of sentence.

We are interested in the judges’s feelings about the act and anything personal. Any judge speaks for a community as well as the criminal justice system. We must share that insight.

judgment – Not judgement.

justices, judges  –  Not always interchangeable. Municipal Court, Common Pleas Court, Juvenile Court, and U.S. district and circuit courts have judges. Members of the U.S. and Ohio Supreme courts are justices. The head of the U.S. Supreme Court is the chief justice of the United States. For a state other than Ohio try to follow approved usage in that state. A justice of the peace on second reference is never a judge. The term jurist may be applied to either justices or judges but never as a title.


K

Kaddafi, Muammar – Do NOT use this spelling for the Libyan leader. The correct Blade style is Moammar Gadhafi. [Revised March 2011]

Kaptur, Marcy — A Democrat, Marcy Kaptur is the U.S. Representative for Ohio’s 9th congressional district, which stretches from her hometown of Toledo to Cleveland. She is the longest-serving woman in Congress and she has represented the Democratic Party since 1983. After many years, Marcy has decided that she would like to be called Ms. Kaptur on second reference, not Miss.  [Added February 2021]

karat – See carat.

kids – Do not use for children except in light features in which it is appropriate.

Kyiv – Use in written in text, captions and datelines for the Ukrainian capital city Kiev. No longer use Kiev. The change is in line with the Ukrainian government’s preferred name and transliteration. The spelling Kyiv also has been gaining usage over the last decade among governments, international bodies and media organizations. [Updated February 2022]

knot – One nautical mile (6,076.10 feet) per hour. It is redundant to say knots per hour. To convert to approximate miles per hour, multiply knots by 1.15.

know-how

KO, KOs – nouns.

KO’s, KO’d – verbs.

Koran – Preferred spelling is Qur’an.

Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport – This is the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]


L

lady – Do not use as a synonym for woman. Lady may be used as a courtesy title or in a specific reference to fine manners without patronizing overtones. See female.

lake bed

larceny –  Larceny is unlawful taking or carrying away of personal property. Burglary is breaking into a building illegally with intent to steal. Robbery is larceny from a person or in the immediate presence of another by violence or threat of violence.

last, past –  Use last rather than past to refer to the time immediately preceding the time of writing.  It is not the style of The Blade to use the word last as in “last October” or “last Wednesday” unless it is October or unless the paper is going to be published on Wednesday. It is better to say that something occurred in October or will occur in October; that it happened Wednesday or it will happen Wednesday.

launch – Use it almost exclusively for military matters, rockets, attacks, missiles. It is not good usage to “launch”  political campaigns, programs, projects, drives, etc. Simply starting or beginning them is sufficient.

lawn mower

lawyer – See attorney.

Lead: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

led – Past tense of lead.

Lede: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

left field, left-field – noun, adjective.

left fielder

left-handed

left-hander

left wing, left-wing – noun, adjective.

left-winger, left winger –  The first is a political term; the second is a hockey position.

lend, loan –  Lend is the preferred verb form and should be used in all instances except when quoting someone. Loan is properly used as a noun.

less –  See fewer.

Levis Commons – Outdoor shops on State Rt. 25 in Perrysburg. Mall was built was built was developer Larry Dillin.

LG Philips Displays – formerly Philips Display Components [revised October 23, 2002]

liable, likely –  One is liable to a suit for damages. He is exposed or vulnerable to such a suit. He is likely to sue for damages.  He probably will sue.

lie, lay –  Lie is intransitive and does not take an object: lie, lay, lain. Lay is transitive and takes an object: lay, laid, laid.

Examples: He lies down but cannot sleep. He lay down in the grass. Lenin’s body has lain in Red Square since his death. The bricklayer lays bricks. He laid his rifle down. A new golf course was laid out.

life buoy

Mercy Health Life Flight – This is the name of the medical helicopter company operated by Corporate Jets, Inc., of Pittsburgh. It operates out of Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center. [revised April 26, 2016]

life jacket

life raft

lift-off

liftouts –  Used to break up blocks of type and to summarize a significant point of an article that is not part of the headline.

light-heavyweight

like –  Should not be used as a conjunction. Correct: It looked like a victory for the Conservatives. See as if.

like as suffix –  Usually not hyphenated: businesslike, lifelike. No hyphen is necessary after words ending in l: raillike. Use the hyphen after words ending in ll : bell-like.

like-minded

likely, probably –  Likely is normally an adjective, as in a likely story; probably is an adverb.

linage, lineage – The first is the number of lines; the second is one’s family tree.

living room

loath, loathe –  The first is an adjective meaning unwilling; the second a verb meaning to detest.

locate –  Verb meaning to place or to find. Do not write “The building is located at Sixth and Main streets.”  Write “The building is at Sixth and Main streets.”

locker room

L-O-F   – Acceptable on second reference for the former Libbey-Owens-Ford Co. in historical stories. [revised January 30, 2002]

long shot, long-shot  –  noun, adjective.

long-standing

long time, longtime –  noun, adjective.

long titles – Place long titles after the name. Instead of Lucas County Common Pleas Court Judge James Bates, use Judge James Bates, of Lucas County Common Pleas Court, said . . .

Lourdes University – Officially became a university on Aug. 19, 2011. Founded in 1958 as Lourdes College, the private university is situated on 113 wooded acres in Sylvania. [Added August 2011]

Lower Peninsula

Lucas County Arena – Name of the arena opened in downtown Toledo in October 2009. Do not use Lucas County Multipurpose Arena. [Added October 2009]

Lucas County Board of Mental Health and Recovery Services – On first reference, don’t call the agency the Mental Health Board. The board is the result of a 2006 merger.

Lucas County educational service center board – No longer Lucas County board of education.



M

Mach number

machine gun, machine-gun – noun, adjective/verb.

Magna Carta – (NOT Magna Charta)

Mafia – The secret society of criminals and its members. Do not use as a synonym for organized crime or the underworld.

majority, plurality – Majority means more than half an amount. Plurality means more than the next highest number. If there are more than two candidates in a race, the one with the greatest number of votes has a plurality, but he lacks a majority unless he has more than half the total vote.

makeup, make up –  noun/adjective, verb.

malls, local –  The following is a list of the major local malls:
North Towne Square; Southwyck Shopping Center; Franklin Park Mall (Franklin Park on second reference; Woodville Mall, Shops at Fallen Timbers (in Maumee) and Levis Commons (in Perrysburg)

man-made

man-of-war

mantel, mantle –  The first is a shelf; the second is a cloak.

Mardi Gras

Marathon Petroleum Company LLC is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]

margin, ratio – Margin is the amount or degree of difference: The measure passed by a 15-vote margin. Ratio is a proportional relationship between two or more things: Losers outnumbered gainers on the New York Stock Exchange by a 5-3 ratio.

Marines

market basket

Masonic, fraternal organizations – Use the following guidelines:

  • Trident Lodge, F&AM. Do not use lodge numbers or the term Blue Lodge. In some states and for black lodges it is AF&AM.
  • Solomon Chapter, RAM. Do not spell out Royal Arch Masons or use a chapter number.
  • Eastern Council, R&SM. The correct form for Royal and Select Masons.
  • Toledo Commandery, Knights Templar.  Chapter, Council, and Commandery constitute the York Rite of Masonry. Use the names of the groups, not York Rite.
  • Scottish Rite, Toledo. Omit “Valley of.” It is redundant to refer to a 32nd Degree Scottish Rite Mason. However, the 33rd Degree is a signal honor and should be mentioned when appropriate.
  • Constituent bodies of the Scottish Rite may be mentioned if someone has been an officer. They are: Commander, Toledo Consistory; Sovereign Prince, Northern Light Council, Princes of Jerusalem; Most Wise Master, Fort Industry Chapter, Rose Croix; Thrice Potent Master, Mi-A-Mi Lodge of Perfection.
  • Shrine and Grotto are short for much longer official titles of the parent organizations. The local Shrine body is Zenobia Temple. The black Shriners belong to Mecca Temple. It’s O-Ton-Ta-La Grotto.
  • Black Masonic groups sometimes are referred to as Prince Hall affiliates.
Polar Chapter, Eastern Star. Omit “Order of the” and do not use OES. This is primarily a women’s group, but men may belong.
Lodge of Rebekahs is a women’s order.

Write Knights of Pythias, Odd Fellows, Eagles, Moose, and Elks. Do not use the abbreviations K of P, IOOF, FOE, LOOM, and BPOE.

mayor, coverage of – Make the accounts as objective as possible. Save interpretation and analysis for columns or other types of articles whose purpose is clearly labeled.

medal, metal – Medal is a small piece of metal with a design or inscription made to commemorate some event or to honor some individual. Metal is any of a class of chemical elements, such as iron, gold, or aluminum.

media –  Plural form of medium and always takes a plural verb: News media plan to cover the story. Do NOT use as a synonym for employees of the media.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital.

Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [revised May 12, 2015]

Megawatt – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Mercy Health –  In April 2016, the health group changed its name to Mercy Health. It is no longer Mercy Health Partners. Its seven hospitals in northwest Ohio also have slightly different names: Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center, Mercy Health St. Anne Hospital, Mercy Health St. Charles Hospital, Mercy Health Children’s Hospital, Mercy Health Tiffin Hospital, Mercy Health Willard Hospital, and Mercy Health Hospital of Defiance.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center – No longer Mercy  St.. Vincent Mercy Medical Center St. Vincent Mercy Medical Center or  St. Vincent Medical Center.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy College of Ohio – A Toledo-based Catholic institution with a focus on healthcare. In 2011, the school changed its name from Mercy College of Northwest Ohio to Mercy College of Ohio. The school also has a Youngstown campus.
[Added January 2013]

memorial vs. funeral service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service.
[Added February 2015]

merry-go-round

Metroparks Toledo  – It is the name for the government agency that operates 15 Metroparks totaling more than 12,000 acres in Lucas County. Metroparks is one word. The  “M” is  capitalized, there is no hyphen, and there is no capital p. Use Metroparks Toledo on first reference. On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks.  [revised September 2017]

Mexican-American – hyphenated

mezzo-soprano

mid as prefix –  Not hyphenated unless the second part of the word begins with a capital letter.

Mid-American Conference  – Comprises University of Akron, Ball State University, Bowling Green State University, University of Buffalo, Central Michigan University, Eastern Michigan University, Kent State University, Miami University, Northern Illinois University, Ohio University, University of Toledo, and Western Michigan University. [Revised December 2023]

middle age, middle-aged –  noun, adjective.

mill – All bond issue or levy stories must identify what a mill is and what any proposed levy changes would mean to the owner of a typical home.

millennium  [revised January 30, 2002]

minelayer, mine-laying –  noun, adjective.

minesweeper, mine-sweeping  – noun, adjective.

mini as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

mixed-up, mix-up, mix up  –  adjective, noun, verb.

Middle East – Comprises Afghanistan, Cyprus, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Kuwait, Jordan, Lebanon, Oman, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, South Yemen, Sudan, Syria, Turkey, United Arab Emirates, and Yemen. Mideast is acceptable, but Middle East is preferred.

model, replica –  A model may be a different size from the original and/or of different material; a replica is an exact duplicate.

Mohammed – Use this spelling for the name of the prophet and founder of the Islamic religion. Do Not use Muhammad.
[Added November 2009]

money maker

moneys – Restrict use to currencies, as in the moneys of the world.

Moonies – A pejorative term for members of the Rev. Sun Myung Moon’s Unification Church. DON’T use it.
[added Dec. 3, 2008]

mop-up, mop up –  noun, verb.

more than  –  Write “more than 500 attended,” not “over 500.” Over is permissible in headlines.

mother-in-law

mph

mpox – A virus that originates in wild animals and occasionally jumps to people, who can spread it to others. The virus was previously known as monkeypox, because it was first seen in research monkeys. The World Health Organization changed the name to mpox in November 2022, saying the term monkeypox could be construed as stigmatizing and racist. Until the new name becomes more widely known, use mpox on first reference and mention its former name in one reference later in the story. Mpox is pronounced EM’-pox.

mucus, mucous –  noun, adjective.

multi as prefix –  Hyphenate only when the second part of the combination begins with the letter i.

Mumbai is now Blade style for the financial capital of  India. Formerly known as Bombay, there are 15 million people who live in Mumbai, which is the capital of Maharashtra on the western coast of India. Most U.S. news organizations refer to the city as Mumbai, NOT Bombay, since the Indian government made that change in the mid-1990s. The Blade also will use Mumbai when reporting news from this India city. Because Mumbai is not as well known as its predecessor, Bombay, Mumbai needs India in the dateline. [added November 27, 2008]

Murder – It is malicious, premeditated homicide. Generally speaking, manslaughter is homicide without malice or premeditation. Reserve murder for a crime that authorities labeled in a warrant, a charge or a conviction.

DO NOT say that a victim was murdered until someone has been convicted in court. Instead, say that a victim was killed or slain. Do not write that X was charged with murdering Y. Use the formal murder charge and, if not already in the story, specify the nature of the killing — shooting, stabbing, beating, poisoning, drowning, etc.: Jones was charged with murder in the shooting of his girlfriend.

Examples:
* An officer pulled over 29-year-old John White, who was arrested and charged with murder, according to Andrew Johnson, the county sheriff’s spokesman.
* The 66-year-old amateur photographer has pleaded not guilty to four counts of first-degree murder in the slaying of four women.
* Cook County Sheriff James Jones says a shooting that left a man and a woman dead appears to be a murder-suicide.


N

NAFTA – NAFTA is correct. In first reference use North American Free Trade Agreement. [revised October 23, 2002]

names  –  Getting a person’s name right is one of the first essentials of reporting. When interviewing people, ask for correct spelling, preference in the use of the first name and/or initials, and any peculiarities.

For names in wire stories the “World Almanac,”  “Who’s Who,” and other reference books are available.

Junior is permissible if it is part of the person’s formal name. Senior is not used unless father and son are living and both are well enough known that omission would create confusion. Generational designations generally are not needed for nationally known people.

Nicknames are permissible.  If John P. Jones is known to all his friends as Doc, his name would appear as John P. “Doc” Jones.

Use the nickname instead of the first name on first reference for a person best known by that name.

Do not use tasteless nicknames or the common nicknames for given names.

A married woman’s maiden name or name from a previous marriage will be used if desired. The names should appear in their proper order: Mrs. Mary Jones, nee Smith, would appear as Mrs. Mary Smith Jones. If the widow Jones is remarried to a man named Brown, her name should appear as Mrs. Mary Jones Brown.

Prominent individuals – The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Foreign names – In some foreign names the last name is not the family surname. In such cases on second reference the title should be used with the correct part of the name.

NATO – Acceptable on first reference.

nauseate, nauseous – The first is a verb meaning to make or become ill; the second is an adjective meaning causing illness or disgust.

Navy

near as prefix –  Near is an adjective as well as an adverb and can be used as such in phrases as near accident, near thing.

nearby

neo as prefix – Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

nerve-racking – Preferred to nerve-wracking.

new – Avoid using the phrase “constructing new building.” It is difficult for someone to build an old building. This is in line with editing expertise aimed at taking unnecessary words out of stories so there is more room for necessary ones. It is in the same realm as “a new record,” a completely unnecessary modifier.

news conference – Not press conference

next – Do not use with the day of the week or month.

nick – Not knick.

nobility – References to members of the nobility present special problems because nobles frequently are known by their titles rather than their given or family names. These guidelines relate to Britain’s nobility and may be adapted when appropriate to other nations.

Orders of rank begin with the royal family. The term royalty is reserved for relatives of living and deceased sovereigns.

Next in descending order are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts, and barons. Many hold inherited titles; others have been raised to the nobility by the sovereign.

Sovereigns also confer honorary titles, which do NOT make an individual a member of the nobility.  The principal designations in descending order are baronet and knight.

Refer to The Associated Press stylebook for a complete discussion of titles of nobility.

no-man’s-land

non –  Not hyphenated except in combination with proper nouns.

none – Usually means no single one, and in this sense takes singular verbs and pronouns: None of the seats was in its right place. Use a plural verb only if the sense is no two or no amount: None of the consultants agree on the same approach. None of the taxes have been paid.

Norfolk Southern Corp. – A railroad company. DO NOT  refer to it as Norfolk Southern Railway.

North – The northern United States.

North Toledo

North Towne Square – Mall is not part of the name.

Northwest Psychiatric Hospital – No longer Toledo Mental Health Center

notable, noted, notorious  –  Notable means worthy of notice; noted means celebrated or famous; notorious means publicly or widely known, usually in an unfavorable light. Notoriety is not a synonym for fame.

numbers –  Whenever possible spell out all numbers and ordinals below 10 with the following exceptions:

  • Ages -Use numerals without exception when referring to the age of people or animals in years, months, weeks, or days. This also applies to approximate ages: He was in his 40s.
  • Betting odds – He was a 2-1 favorite.
  • City council districts – The correct form is District 5. Do not spell out number.
  • Court identification – It’s the 6th U.S. Circuit Court, not Sixth U.S. Circuit.
  • Decimals – Always use numerals. For figures less than one use a 0 before the decimal point: 2.5, 0.2.
  • Fractional compounds – 3 1/2 inches, size 6 hat. For less common fractions the phrase must be spelled out: five and nine-sixteenths inches, 13 and three-sevenths gallons.
  • Measurements – Exact measurements in feet and inches: 6 feet, 2 inches tall. Otherwise six feet or seven inches unless used with abbreviations in tabular matter. Also, it’s 3 inches of snow fell, not 3″ of snow fell.
  • Money – With the $ sign: $5. Foreign currencies should be stated in U.S. dollars and cents. (The cents symbol is used in special cases such as graphics and charts and always takes numerals.) For sums of money one million and above: $1 million, $20 billion. This format applies only to money.
  • Percentages – 5 percent. For percentages below 1 percent use a 0 before the decimal: 0.2 percent.
  • Special uses – Spelling out extremely large figures is sometimes more appropriate: They planned to enlist a million workers. He was expected to draw a half-million votes. Spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence.
  • When numbers are used in a series or in close association and some are above nine, use numerals for all: The man was sentenced to from 1 to 25 years. It took 2 weeks and 10 days to complete the work.
  • Spell out one when it is used in a general rather than a numerical sense, even when other numbers appear in the same sentence: He was one of 13 seniors honored.
  • Spell out twofold through tenfold. Above tenfold make it 11-fold, 12-fold, 20-fold, etc.
  • Sports results – Detroit defeated Cleveland 2-1. He ran the 100-yard dash in 9.4 seconds (or 0:9:4). McEnroe defeated Connors 6-3, 5-7, 6-4.
  • In football stories use numerals when referring to yard lines but spell out through nine when referring to number of yards gained: Brown plunged four yards to the 3.
  • Time of day – 2 o’clock, 3 p.m., 4:45 a.m. Zeros are unnecessary for the hour on the hour.
  • Vote results – City council voted 6-3.
  • Weapons – A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun. See also Weapons.
  • Weights – Exact weights in pounds and ounces: 7 pounds, 6 ounces. Otherwise seven pounds or six ounces. (Use numerals with abbreviations in special cases such as charts and graphics.)


O

Obamacare – Nickname for President Obama’s Affordable Care Act. Obamacare is one word and should not be offset with quotation marks. [Added November 2016]

obscenity, profanity, vulgarity

May not be used in stories unless in direct quotations when there is a compelling reason and with the approval of the managing editor, or in his absence, an assistant managing editor.

Avoid using any form of abbreviation to substitute for a vulgarity (as in f—). We do not change quotes as in “damn you” to “darn you,” or “hell” to “heck,” etc.

This section shall be interpreted to mean we will permit the use of such words only in very rare instances.

Odesa – (not Odessa) – Ukrainian port city on the Black Sea. [Added March 2022]

off as prefix – Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: off-color, off-peak, off-season, off-white, off-key.  Some combinations without the hyphen: offhand, offset, offshore, offside, offstage.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

off as suffix –  Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: send-off, stop-off. Some combinations without the hyphen: playoff, standoff, takeoff, cutoff, liftoff.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

offhand –  adjective/adverb.

of mine, of his, etc. –  The common expressions “a friend of mine,”  “a friend of John’s”  should be avoided. Instead, write “my friend,”  “John’s friend.”

oil field

Ohio General Assembly – Official name of the state’s governing body. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.”
[Added May 2010]

Ohio Newspaper Organization – A consortium of Ohio’s eight major newspapers to share non-competitive news content on-cycle. The participating papers are The Blade, the Plain Dealer of Cleveland, The Columbus Dispatch, the Akron Beacon Journal, The Cincinnati Enquirer, the Dayton Daily News, The (Canton) Repository and The (Youngstown) Vindicator. Use Ohio Newspaper Organization on first reference, but the acronym OHNO is fine on subsequent references.

Under the consortium’s guidelines, the byline of the reporter and name of the newspaper should be used when posting OHNO stories on participating papers’ websites, print and e-editions.

ONMA – Use Ohio News Media Association. Formerly the Ohio Newspaper Association. ONMA is the trade association for more than 250 Ohio daily and weekly newspapers and media outlets.

OK, OKs, OK’d

old-timer, old-time – noun, adjective

One SeaGate is called Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine. [revised July 22, 2008]

one-sided

onetime, one-time –  The first means the former; the second means occurring only once

only –  Used in the sense of solely or exclusively, only should go as close as possible to the word it modifies. Note the different meanings: “Only he hoped to find her.” “He hoped only to find her.” “He hoped to find only her.”

Take care to use appropriately to convey a judgment or degree. Proper: Only two people attended the meeting. Improper: Only two people died in the crash.

open-minded

oral, verbal – All communication by words, whether written or spoken, is verbal. Hence, do not use “a verbal order” to mean an unwritten order; a spoken order is “an oral order.” But use verbal to signify by word rather than deed as “a verbal conflict” to distinguish from a physical conflict.

Ohio State Highway Patrol – Do not use Ohio Highway Patrol. The Ohio State Highway Patrol is a division of the Ohio State Department of Public Safety and is the official highway patrol agency in Ohio. [Added March 2019]

out of doors, out-of-doors –  noun, adjective.

over as prefix –  Not hyphenated.

Owens Corning  – (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.


    • P

      panic-stricken

      papier-mache

      part time, part-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

      party – Do not use party as a synonym for person. However, parties to a contract or a lawsuit is correct usage.

      pass – Bills are passed, laws are enacted.

      passer-by, passers-by

      past master

      patron, customer – Properly, a patron is a benefactor, a supporter, a protector, an advocate, or the like. Use of the word as a synonym for customer or client is colloquial.

      pawn ticket

      pay – All stories on new contracts must have some kind of indication of what the workers got in terms of pay increases. Either the range of pay or what the average employee got. For example, a city street worker would be paid $250 more or $13,250 a year with the increase. Any story about the appointment of a public official or promotion, etc., must state the salary for that position and indicate that the individual will be paid the salary. Do not use “Joe Smith earns $40,000.”

      PBF Toledo Refining Co. – The full name of the refinery on the Toledo-Oregon border. The refinery is owned by PBF, a private equity firm that bought the facility from Sunoco, Inc. in late 2010 for $400 million. [Added March 1, 2011]

      peak, peek, pique
      • Peak is the topmost point, such as a mountain peak, or to reach that point.
      • Peek is to peer or glance (The boy took a peek around the corner).
      • Pique is to upset, arouse or excite. (If you are piquing someone’s interest, you are exciting their interest, not taking a quick look.

      percent – one word. Use it or % in heads.

      Philips Displays – SEE: LG Philips Displays

      phenomena (plural noun), phenomenon (single noun) for “extremely unusual, extraordinary”. [added May 5, 2008]

      photos – Local feature photos with a weather theme must contain weather information as far as the day’s readings and what’s in store.

      pickles – In northwestern Ohio small cucumbers grown for pickling are referred to colloquially as pickles. They are not pickles until treated with vinegar and brine. Use the correct term, cucumbers.

      Pilkington North America – a subsidiary of Pilkington PLC (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)

      Ping-Pong – Trade name for table tennis.

      “Pit bull” – This is a generic descriptive term for a dog trained to fight and may refer to multiple breeds, including the American Staffordshire terrier, Staffordshire bull terrier, American pit bull terrier, and other mix breeds determined to be “pit bulls” by Lucas County Dog Warden Tom Skeldon. “Pit bulls” should have quotation marks and the style is two words, not one. [Revised November 2009]

      planes – It is our policy on airplane crashes to include in stories and cutlines the type of aircraft involved in the crash.

      playoff

      plead – Past tense is pleaded.

      plow – Correct in all uses.

      plurality – See majority.

      plurals – In compound forms add the s to the noun part of the compound to form the plural: attorneys general, notaries public. When both parts of the compound are normally nouns, add the s to the more important word: major generals, lieutenant colonels. (However, it is sergeants major, for a sergeant major is a sergeant, not a major.)
      The plural of proper names ending in x or z is formed by adding es. The addition of s is sufficient for names ending in ce or se: Keeping up with the Joneses. Lopez, Lopezes.
      For the plural of abbreviations add ‘s: The brief was full of etc.’s.
      For plurals of figures add s: Boeing 727s. The same for years: 1970s, but ’50s, ’60s.
      For plurals of single letters add ‘s: Oakland A’s, two B’s on his report card, 3 R’s.
      For plurals of multiple letters add s: She knows her ABCs.
      For plurals of all-caps initials without periods add s: YMCAs, GIs, POWs.

      Pokemon Go – Two words, with the “o” at the end lower case. Italics in body type, single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

      post as prefix – Usually not hyphenated except in combination with a proper noun.

      pore – A verb that means to gaze or study intensely: She pored over her books.

      pour – A verb that means to flow in a continuous stream: It poured rain. He poured the coffee.pre as prefix – Not hyphenated unless in combination with a proper noun.

      premier, premiere – The head of government in many countries is the premier (not necessarily synonymous with prime minister). As an adjective premier can mean first in rank or supreme: Pablo Casals was his era’s premier performer on the cello.
      Premiere refers to a first performance, either as noun or adjective. Do not use premiere as a verb.

      press conference – Do not use. News conference is preferred.

      preventive – Preferred over preventative as noun and adjective.

      principal, principle – Principal as a noun means the head of a school, the chief person in a transaction, or a sum of money from which interest derives. As an adjective it means first or highest in rank.
      Principle means a fundamental doctrine or tenet or a rule of conduct. It is not an adjective.

      Private Industry Collaborative [revised February 28, 2002]

      profanity – See obscenity.

      professor – Never abbreviate. For example, Professor Jim Smith.

      ProMedica – Official name of the region’s largest health-care system. Only use ProMedica. Do Not refer to it as ProMedica Health System in stories and/or headlines. The “P” and “M” are uppercase.
      The ProMedica Downtown Campus is comprised of the following:
      • The Steam Plant
      • The Junction (triangular building)
      • The Plaza (former Edison Plaza or what you called the Key Bank Building)
      • The Summit Center (former HCR ManorCare building)
      • The Depot (ProMedica’s parking garage)
      [Added February 2021].

      All ProMedica hospitals have the parent name in front of the hospital name. The ProMedica hospitals are:
      • ProMedica Bay Park Hospital
      • ProMedica Bixby Hospital
      • ProMedica Defiance Regional Hospital
      • ProMedica Flower Hospital
      • ProMedica Fostoria Community Hospital
      • ProMedica Herrick Hospital
      • ProMedica Memorial Hospital
      • ProMedica Toledo Children’s Hospital
      • ProMedica Toledo Hospital
      • ProMedica Russell J. Ebeid Children’s Hospital
      • ProMedica Wildwood Orthopaedic and Spine Hospital
      [Revised November 2016].

      ProMedica Senior Care (formerly HCR ManorCare). ProMedica Senior Care operates about 500 assisted living, skilled nursing, outpatient rehabilitation, memory care, and home-health and Hospice Care centers. [added October 2020]

      pronouns for animals – Use personal pronouns (he or she) if you know the gender of the pet. [Revised January 2015]

      Personal pronouns are acceptable when writing about an animal and its offspring.

      protester, not protestor

      proved, proven – Use proven only as an adjective: A proven remedy.

      provided – Make it “provided that” something occurs, not “providing that.”

      pseudo as prefix – Do not hyphenate unless in combination with a proper noun.
      Punctuation
      Some general rules:

          • Apostrophes – Normally the singular possessive of a word is formed by adding ‘s: the bear’s den. The plural possessive is formed by adding the apostrophe to the plural form: the bears’ den. In the case of common and singular proper nouns ending in s, use only an apostrophe after the s. Michael Woods’ desk, Gov. Rhodes’ grave, the moss’ coloration. But the plural possessive should be the Joneses’ house; the Lopezes’ golf clubs.
          • Omit in all possessive pronouns: his, hers, its, theirs.
          • In organization names follow the organization: Elks Club. When in doubt omit the apostrophe.
          • To indicate joint possession write Smith and Brown’s properties. If ownership is separate: Frank’s and Vicki’s faces.
          • Form singular and plural possessives of all-caps initials without periods by adding ‘s: YMCA’s, YMCAs’; GI’s, GIs’; POW’s, POWs’.
          • Use the apostrophe (not a single opening quote) to indicate omitted letters: rock ‘n’ roll, he is a ne’er-do-well, ‘Tis the season to be jolly. Omit the apostrophe on words that have come into common use: copter, possum.
          • Brackets – Use brackets to insert explanatory information inside quotes. Use parentheses outside of quotes.
          • Colons – Use the colon to introduce a list or a quotation. Capitalize the first word after a colon if it is a proper noun, the start of a complete sentence, or a new paragraph. Follow these rules in headlines.
          • Commas – Overuse and underuse are the most common problems with commas.
          • Underuse – Failure to use both commas when two are needed to set off a phrase or clause, the year in a date, and ages, unless the elements begin or end a sentence: John Jones, a South Side grocer, was the next speaker. The tragic events of Nov. 22, 1963, will long be remembered. November, 1963, will go down in history.
          • Overuse – Insertion between subject and verb: According to the printout, the house next door, has a large yard.
          • Improper use with conjunctions – As a general rule use a comma if the subject of each clause is expressly stated: We are visiting Washington, and we plan a side trip to Williamsburg. We visited Washington, but our senator would not see us. Do not use a comma when the subject of the two clauses is the same: We are visiting Washington and plan to see the White House.
          • Unnecessary use to set off short introductory clauses and phrases: During the night he heard many noises. (Use a comma if needed to avoid ambiguity: On the street below, the curious gathered. A comma is necessary after most when and if clauses: When he had tired of the mad pace of New York, he moved to Toledo.)
          • Unnecessary use to set off adverbs such as too, therefore, and also: He too is tired.

      Some additional guidelines:

          • Use the comma to separate items in a series: The colors of the flag are red, white, and blue. If the items in a series include commas, use semicolons to separate the items except before the last item, where a comma is used.
          • Street addresses and hometowns after a name should not have commas. Instead use the preposition of: Mary Roberts of 442 Adams St. called Florence Smith, Boston. Smith Co. of New York mailed the records to Brown Co. of South Avenue, Toledo.
          • Use commas before and after the abbreviation Jr. following names. However II and III, for second and third, follow the name without punctuation. When a senator or congressman uses Jr., the correct punctuation is Sen. John Jones, Jr. (R., Mass.).
          • Do not use commas to set off sports scores or legislative or judicial votes: The Tigers defeated the Indians 3-2 on the steady pitching of Justin Thompson. The Supreme Court ruled 5-4 today . . . The Ohio Senate voted 17-16 . . .
          • Use commas to separate a series of adjectives equal in rank. Adjectives are equal if the comma could be replaced by the word and without changing the sense: a thoughtful, precise manner; a dark, dangerous night.
          • Do not use a comma when the last adjective before a noun outranks its predecessors because it is an integral element of a noun phrase: a cheap fur coat; the old oaken bucket; a new, blue spring bonnet.
          • Do not use commas to set off essential clauses and phrases that cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence: Reporters who do not read the stylebook should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that one class of reporters, those who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors.)
          • Reporters, who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that all reporters do not read the stylebook.)
          • Commas are used to set off nonessential clauses and phrases that can be eliminated without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.

      We saw the 1995 winner of the Academy Award competition for best movie, “Braveheart.” (Only one movie won the award in 1995. The name is informative, but even without it no other movie could be meant.)

      We saw the award-winning movie “One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.” (No comma because many movies have won awards and without the name of the movie the reader would not know which movie was meant.)

      They ate dinner with their daughter Julie. (Because this couple has more than one daughter, the inclusion of her name is critical.) They ate dinner with their daughter Julie and her husband, David. (Julie has only one husband, so his name is only informative.)

      Do not confuse nonessential clauses and phrases with descriptive adjectives: Julie and husband David went shopping. Julie and her husband, David, went shopping.

      Dashes – Use long dashes but only when necessary to set off inserted matter where the break in thought is abrupt.

      Hyphens – Use to avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words: The president will speak to small-business men. (Businessmen normally is one word, but small businessmen is ambiguous.) He re-covered the leaky roof. He recovered his health. He viewed the re-creation of the event. He went to the recreation center.

      When a compound modifier two or more words that express a single concept precedes a noun, use hyphens to link all the words in the compound except the adverb very and all adverbs that end in ly: a first-quarter touchdown, a bluish-green dress, a full-time job, a well-known man, a better-qualified woman, a know-it-all attitude, a very good time, an easily remembered date.

      Many combinations that are hyphenated before a noun are not hyphenated when they occur after a noun: The team scored in the first quarter. The dress, a bluish green, was attractive. She works full time. His attitude suggested that he knew it all.

      Use a hyphen to designate dual heritage: African-American, Italian-American, Mexican-American. Do not hyphenate French Canadian or Latin American.

      Use a hyphen to separate letters and figures when used in combination: A-1 rating, C-47 plane.

      However, in plane designations involving letter-number combinations omit the hyphen after the number: XB-70A.

      Parentheses and brackets – Use parentheses to insert explanatory matter except in quotations, where brackets are used. The insertion of bracketed material should be kept to a minimum.

      If parenthetical material runs more than one paragraph, use a parenthesis at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.

      Parentheses are used around party and state or hometown designations of members of Congress and Ohio or Michigan state legislators: Bill Smith (R., Monroe).

      Quotes – The chief fault is failure to close the quotation. General rules:

          • Use single quotes for quoted matter inside quotes. Return to double quotes inside single quotes.
          • In headlines, quote boxes, and all cutlines use single quotes.
          • For continuous quoted matter running more than one paragraph use quotes at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.
          • The above applies only to continuous quoted matter. Each reintroduction, such as he said, he added, he continued, makes it a new quotation, and the previous paragraph should end with quotation marks.
          • Use italic type , not quotation marks, for the titles of plays, movies, books, operas, paintings, video games, TV shows and series and their episodes. Use quotation marks with slogans, songs, poems, chapters, and articles. However, in headlines use single quotes for all titles.
            [Revised August 2016]

      Do not use quotation marks with names of dogs, race horses, magazines, newspapers, orchestras, dances, boats, ships, aircraft, estates, rail lines, nicknames of cities or states, or nicknames of athletic teams.

      Do not use quotes for symphonies, concertos, overtures, etc. For such works descriptive terms are in quotes within parentheses:
      Beethoven’ s Symphony No. 3 (“Eroica”). Beethoven’s Piano Concerto No. 5 (“Emperor”).

      An opus number goes in parentheses.

      Capital letters used alone to convey a definite meaning usually can stand without quotes: a grade of A, the Y campaign, vitamin B.

      Use partial quotations only when the words are especially emphatic or pertinent: He said the Chinese attacked with a “savage butchery unknown in modern times.”

      Avoid using quotes on single words as well as new words or phrases and on those used in an unorthodox or figurative sense.

      Commas and periods go inside quotation marks; colons and semicolons go outside.

      Question marks and exclamation points go inside the quotation marks if they belong with the quoted matter, outside if they belong to the main sentence: He asked: “Is it time to go?” Did he say, “It is time to go”?

      Do not use quote marks to mean inches. Spell out inches when writing 3 inches of snow fell.

      Semicolons – The semicolon is used to separate items in a series when commas are included in the items. When a series of semicolons is used, end the series with a semicolon, not a comma: Jane Doe of 1616 Elm St.; Dick Jones of 1414 Hall St.; Becky Smith of 1313 Duke St. Use it to separate parts of a sentence when a more definitive break than the comma is called for; do not use a conjunction after the semicolon.

      In headlines that contain more than one verb separate the verbs by commas if they have the same subject, by semicolons if they have different subjects.

      Troops move through Sudan, put dissidents under arrest
      Storms kill 303; floods maroon 200

      puns – Avoid making a pun on a person’s name. See headlines.

      pupil, student – Avoid pupil. Student is preferred for all grades.



      Q

      quarter mile, quarter-mile, quarter-miler –  noun, adjective, runner. See half.

      queen –  Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain. See titles – royalty and nobility.

      quoteboxes –  Used to break up blocks of type and to highlight a remark from an article. One caution: Check the material after it is typeset to ensure that a quotation mark does not occupy a line by itself.

      quotes –  See also punctuation.

      Full quotes are preferable to partial quotes. But do not use full quotes if they have to be explained. Especially, don’t try to overdo an explanation when the context of the story has told the reader enough to know what is involved.

      This example came from the AP, but our reporters and other wire services use similar useless extra words:

      Ms. Brookner said Mrs. Hanssen asked her to issue a statement because she felt she could speak out after the plea agreement. “She feels terrible. I don’t think she can feel any worse, any more devastated,” said Ms. Brookner, describing Mrs. Hanssen’s emotions.

      Doesn’t the quote convey her feelings enough to avoid the redundancy? The same thing happens when a writer ends a quote and proceeds with, “referring to” or “said of.” To avoid this type of construction, the quote may have to be slightly altered and the speaker or subject matter introduced before the quote. Example:

      “Julie was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free,” Dr. Jones said of Julie Newman, referring to her problem of deciding on a divorce.

      The reader doesn’t know what is happening until the explanation. More clear and easier to read would be: Julie Newman was having a problem deciding on a divorce, Dr. Jones said, but she knew she “was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free.”

      Do not delete the words spoken in quotes and substitute more specific words in brackets. In quotes in which the meaning of a word is not clear, put the word in brackets, but leave the words that the person said:

      Correct: “We were going to do it [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

      Incorrect: “We were going to [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

      Qur’an – Sacred book for those of Muslim faith.



      R

      racial, national designations  –  Avoid designating a person’s race or nationality unless it is pertinent to the story. A naturalized citizen of the United States is an American regardless of birthplace. The hyphenated form, such as African-American or Mexican-American, may be used if pertinent.

      rack, wrack – The noun rack is a framework; the verb means to arrange on a rack, to torture, trouble, or torment: She racked her brain.

      The noun wrack means ruin and generally is confined to the phrase wrack and ruin. The verb wrack is the alternate spelling of the preferred rack.

      raise, rear – One raises livestock but rears children.

      rake-off

      ratio – See margin.

      rat race

      RBI, RBIs – Abbreviation for run batted in in baseball.

      re as prefix – Do not hyphenate except when the second part of the word begins with e or is a proper noun. Use a hyphen to indicate a meaning different from the common one-word form: recreation, re-creation; reform, re-form.

      Realtor – Use real estate agent unless there is a reason to indicate that the individual is a member of the National Association of Realtors.

      rebut, refute – Rebut means to argue to the contrary: He rebutted his opponent’s statement. Refute means to prove to be false or erroneous: Scientists refuted the contention that the world is square.

      recollect, remember –  To recollect is to recall to memory; to remember is to retain in memory.

      recur

      redneck – Do not use this term, generally considered derogatory, to refer to poor, white, rural people. [Added March 2022]

      redundancy –  Avoid using the same words and phrases: craft a bill, create a committee, faces charges. Also, avoid repeating a word or phrase in several graphs or throughout the story.

      reign, rein –  Reign is the period a ruler is on the throne: The king began his reign. The leather strap for a horse is a rein, hence figuratively: seize the reins, give free rein to, put a check rein on.

      religious terms –  Some guidelines:

          • Mass is celebrated, said, or read. High Mass is sung.
          • Rosaries are recited or said, never read.
          • Celebrant refers to a person conducting a religious rite.
          • The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Utah, permits the term Mormon in referring to its members.
          • The Reorganized Church of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Independence, Mo., does not use the term Mormon. If in doubt as to which church is meant, do not use Mormon.
          • It is the United Methodist Church. The African Methodist Episcopal Church (AME) is a separate body.
          • It is incorrect to apply the term church to any Baptist unit other than a local congregation. The organization of Southern Baptists is the Southern Baptist Convention.
          • Organizational units of other denominations include diocese, archdiocese, area, synod, presbytery, etc. Check an official source for the accurate designation.
            replica – See model.

      revue, review –  A revue is a light musical stage show. Otherwise use review.

      Rh factor – Merriam Webster defines Rh factor as any of one or more genetically determined antigens present in the red blood cells of most persons and of higher animals and capable of inducing intense immunogenic reactions. Rh factor also is known as “Rhesus factor” because it was first discovered in the blood of Rhesus monkeys (small monkeys from India often used for experimentation).

      right field, right-field, right fielder – noun, adjective, ballplayer.

      right hand, right hander  –  nouns.

      right-hand, right-handed  –  adjectives.

      right of way, right-of-way  –  noun, adjective. Noun plural is rights of way.

      right wing, right-wing –  noun, adjective.

      right winger, right-winger   –  hockey player, political term.

      ripoff, rip off –  noun/ adjective, verb.

      rob, steal –  A person or place is robbed; the articles taken are stolen: Gunman robs bank. Gunman steals $10,000.

      robbery  See larceny.

      rodent  –  A gnawing animal, including rats and mice as well as beavers, muskrats, groundhogs, squirrels, and rabbits. Such animals as skunks and weasels are not rodents.

      roll call, roll-call – noun, adjective.

      round robin, round-robin  –  noun, adjective.

      roundup, round up –  noun/adjective, verb.

      rout, route – Rout as a noun means precipitous flight, a disastrous defeat, or a state of confusion. As a verb it means to put to flight or to defeat utterly. Route as a noun means course of travel or itinerary. The verb means to direct or to assign a course of travel.

      royalty  See nobility.

      rubber stamp, rubber-stamp  – noun, verb.

      Rumor(s) – Don’t use in stories or in headlines. We report facts or attribute news. The exception would be if the word is used in a quote. [Added April 2011]

      runner-up, runners-up
      Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. New name for the museum located in Fremont. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]


      S

      safe, safely –   “He arrived safely” means that there was no mishap in connection with his arrival. “He arrived safe” means he arrived in a safe condition.

      Sahara – Omit desert.

      said –  See attribution.

      saint –  St. is acceptable before names.

      St. Francis DeSales Church  [revised January 30, 2002]

      St. Francis de Sales High School  [revised January 30, 2002]

      St. Luke’s Hospital – Luke’s Hospital was a non-profit hospital in Maumee, operated by McLaren Health Care Corporation of Michigan, but McLaren closed the hospital because of years of declining revenues and unstable reimbursement environment. In May 2023, Mercy Health finalized a deal to purchase the St. Luke’s facilities, land, and physical assets. [ Updated December 2023]

      saving, savings –  Singular: The purchase was made at a saving of $100. Plural: The family’s savings amounted to $15,000.

      savior, Saviour –  common noun, Jesus Christ.

      Scholastic Assessment Tests – No longer Scholastic Aptitude Test.

      school bus

      school years

      sea gull –  There is no such bird. The bird is a gull, of which there are several varieties.

      SeaGate Convention Centre – The name of the downtown convention center in Toledo. Click here to go the convention center website. [revised Feb. 19, 2009]

      see –  Avoid the use of the word in cases like: Consumers will see their bills go up; parents will see their students’ grades go down; Monclova has seen the biggest percentage growth of any metro Toledo locale, etc. Avoid see in headlines as a substitute for foresee.

      self as prefix –  Always hyphenated.

      semi as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination a word beginning in i or a proper noun.

      send-off, send off  –  noun, verb.

      setup, set up –  noun/adjective, verb.

      sewage, sewerage –  As noun, sewage is waste matter; sewerage is a drainage system. Sewage may also be used as an adjective to refer to drainage, as in sewage system.

      shear, sheer –  The first means to cut; the second, precipitous or utter.

      Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475 in southwest Lucas County. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

      shot put, shot-putter, shot-putting

      shrank, shrunk –  Shrank is the past tense of the verb shrink, shrunk the past participle: He shrank from combat. The lake has shrunk to a mere pond.

      Shultz, Betty – Betty Shultz is a former member of the Toledo City Council , not Betty Schultz. [revised January 2013]

      shut-in –  noun/adjective.

      shutdown, shut-down –  noun, adjective.

      shutout, shut out –  noun/adjective, verb.

      Side Cut Metropark – Side Cut should be 2 words for the Metropark along the Maumee River’s west bank. [revised October 23, 2002]

      sign-up, sign up –  noun, verb.

      sit, set –  Sit is intransitive and does not take an object. Set is transitive and takes an object. Either may apply to people or things.

      sit-in –  noun.

      skin diver

      slowdown, slow down –  noun, verb.

      smaller –  See fewer.

      smart phone –  Two words in Blade style.

      Smithsonian Institution

      so-called –  adjective.

      so-so

      South – The southern United States.

      Southeast Asia – Comprises Burma, Cambodia, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, and Vietnam. See Far East.

      Southwyck Shopping Center – Defunct mall. Mall was not part of the name.

      spark plug –  noun.

      spectators, audience – Those who watch a performance are spectators; listeners form an audience. The crowds at sports events and motion pictures are spectators. Use audience for those attending speeches, lectures, spoken drama, concerts, opera, etc.

      speedup –  noun/adjective.

      split infinitives, verbs –  Splitting an infinitive no longer is considered a major literary crime, and many good writers do so. It is still better to avoid inserting adverbs, etc., between the parts of the verb. The test is how the sentence reads.

      split-up –  noun/adjective.

      spokesman – Our style is to use spokesman in all references. We do not use spokeswoman or spokesperson. [Added April 2011]

      sport utility vehicle – Preferred second reference,  SUV;  sport-utes can also be used. [revised Revised March 29, 2003]

      sprang, sprung –  Sprang is the past tense of spring; sprung is the past participle: He sprang to his feet. The trap was sprung.

      staffer –  Staff member is preferred.

      stanch, staunch –  The first means to stop the flow; the second firm or steadfast.

      standby –  noun/adjective.

      standoff

      The Star-Spangled Banner  [revised January 30, 2002]

      State Employment Relations Board  – Not State Employee Relations Board.

      State names – Follow these guidelines for using names of states in stories and datelines. Eight states are not abbreviated. They are Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas, and Utah.
      Below are the state abbreviations that would follow the city names that do not stand alone (Example for dateline: BIRMINGHAM, Ala) [Added July 2016]
      Ark. Mass. Okla.
      Calif. Mich. Ore.
      Colo. Minn. Pa.
      Conn. Miss. R.I.
      Del. Mo. S.C.
      Fla. Mont. S.D.
      Ga. Neb. Tenn.
      Ill. N.C. Vt.
      Ind. N.D. Va.
      Kan. N.H. W.Va.
      Ky. N.J. Wisc.
      La. N.M. Wyo.
      Md. N.Y.

      states’ rights

      stationary, stationery –  The first means immobile; the second, writing material.

      stay, stop –  A guest is staying, not stopping, at a hotel.

      Stellantis N.V.  – A multinational automotive manufacturing corporation formed in 2021 on the basis of a 50–50 merger between the Italian–American conglomerate Fiat Chrysler Automobiles and the French PSA Group. It is no longer Fiat Chrysler or Daimler Chrysler. The brands under the Stellantis group include Abarth, Alfa Romeo, Chrysler, Citroën, Dodge, DS, Fiat, Fiat Professional, Jeep, Lancia, Maserati, Mopar, Opel, Peugeot, Ram, and Vauxhall. [Added September 2023]

      step-up, step up –  noun, verb.

      Student – Student is preferred for all grades. Avoid using pupil.

      straits –  Difficulties.

      Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Road (Rd.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.), Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.) and Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. We should note an exception for East Broadway, which is different in that it is the “Broadway” in East Toledo and not the one that runs from South Toledo to downtown. [Updated December 2023]

      strong-arm –  adjective/verb.

      sub as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

      subpoena

      suffer, sustain, receive  –  A man suffers a broken leg. He does not sustain or receive a broken leg or have his leg broken.

      suit, suite –  One may have a suit of clothes, a suit of cards, or be faced with a lawsuit. There are suites of music, rooms, and furniture.

      Sunoco Mid-America’s Toledo refinery. No longer owned by Sunoco, Inc. and  the name of the facility is PBF Toledo Refining Co. PBF, a private equity firm, bought the facility from Sunoco in late 2010. It should be referred to as PBF Toledo Refining Co. [Added March 1, 2011]

      super as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

      superhero – One word [Added Nov. 2, 2016]

      survivors – In local obituaries, we shall include all people in the “survived by” listing, including those quoted or mentioned in the article.

      suspect, suspicion –  verb, noun: He suspected something was wrong. He had a suspicion something was wrong.

      swath, swathe – The first is a noun and is a mowed strip; the second a verb meaning to drape or wrap.

      Symphony – The Toledo Symphony is the local orchestra in northwest Ohio. TSO is acceptable on second and subsequent references and in headlines. [Revised November 2023]



      T

      table tennis  – Preferred term for Ping-Pong.

      takeoff

      takeover, take over –  noun/adjective, verb.

      Tam-O-Shanter – hockey/recreation center in Sylvania.

      TB – Acceptable for tuberculosis on second reference and in headlines.

      teenage (adj.) – Do not use teen-aged. [Added January 2024]

      teenager –  one word

      telephone numbers –  Our policy of using telephone numbers in stories is that we don’t, with very few exceptions. If we do use one, the department head must be consulted and will be responsible for making sure the telephone number is absolutely necessary for the story and that the telephone number is correct.

      Telesystem, formerly Buckeye Telesystem,  is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

      that
      Use the conjunction that to introduce a dependent clause if the sentence is weak without it. There are no hard-and-fast rules but in general:

      That usually may be omitted when a dependent clause immediately follows a form of the verb “to say”: The president said he had signed the bill.

      That should be used when a time element intervenes between the verb and the dependent clause: The president said Monday that he had signed the bill.

      When in doubt, include that.

      that, which, who, whom –  Use the pronouns who and whom in referring to people and animals with names. Use the pronouns that and which in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without names.

      The Toledo Lucas County Public Library  NO HYPHEN. Change made in 2017.  [added September 2017]

      their, there, they’re
      Their is a possessive pronoun: They went to their house.

      There as an adverb indicates direction: We went there for dinner.

      There is a pronoun for constructions in which the subject follows the verb: There is no food on the table.

      They’re is a contraction for they are.

      Three SeaGate    [revised February 28, 2002]

      time designations

      Common sense should prevail in deciding how to designate specific hours in locations outside the eastern time zone:

      • When the time is significant, as in an earthquake, use either: 1 p.m. (San Diego time) or 10 p.m. PST.
      • When the time is pertinent, as with the live broadcast of an event, translate it into Toledo time: 9 p.m. (Toledo time).
      • In events of great historical significance both times may be pertinent: The document was signed at 4 p.m. Tokyo time (2 a.m. Toledo time.)

      time of day –  Avoid the redundancy of “Monday afternoon at 2 p.m.” or “tonight at 7 p.m.” Make it “at 2 p.m. Monday” and “at 7 tonight.” Use noon and midnight not 12 a.m. or 12 p.m.

      time element – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

      titles
      General guidelines:
      See also long titles

      Courtesy titles:
      Mr. and Mrs. are abbreviated whether used with full name or last name only.

      Use Ms. when requested by the woman. Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Ms. Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred. [Updated February 2021]

      DO NOT give a courtesy title to a person who has been convicted of a felony. On second reference, only the last name should be used. This is Blade style.

      Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

      DO NOT use a courtesy title with a coined or fanciful stage name to avoid appearing too literal. Meat Loaf and Little Richard, for example, keep their full names without title, in all references. [Added April 2014]

      Foreign individuals – Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. rather than attempt to give them the title used in their own language.

      Juveniles – Use the full name of people under the age of 18 on first reference: John Jones, Mary Jones. Do not use Mr. and Ms. with the last names of unmarried juveniles. On second reference the boy may be John, young Jones, or the Jones boy. She may be Mary, Miss Jones, or the Jones girl. Married juveniles are entitled to Mrs. and Mr.

      Entertainment, sports personalities
      Generally omit courtesy titles for movie, stage, television, radio, popular music, and sports personalities, including actors, directors, producers, coaches, players, and composers and performers of popular music.

      When the names of these people appear in regular news stories, the courtesy title may be used.

      When the names of non athletes appear on the sports pages, they should have a courtesy title on second reference.

      Magistrate – Do not use the title of Magistrate to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith. [Added April 2014]

      In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence. [Added April 2014]

      Music and literature – Use courtesy titles for living composers, authors, and musical artists in regular news copy. The courtesy title usually is not used in reviews.

      See names.

      Abbreviation guidelines:

      • Titles abbreviated with the full name: Sen., Gov., Rep. On second reference spell out Senator and Governor or use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss with the last name alone. Always use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss instead of Representative to save space. Ask women their preference: Miss, Ms., or Mrs. Do not presume.
      • For two or more people with the same title plural abbreviations may be used: Sens., Govs., Reps.
      • Do not abbreviate: Archbishop, Attorney General, Bishop, Cardinal, Congressman, District Attorney, President, Principal, Prosecutor, Secretary, Superintendent
      • Do not abbreviate: assistant, associate

      Limit titles preceding the name to three words: Secretary of State John Doe, but John Smith, assistant secretary of state for African affairs.

      Professional titles:
      Dr. is used ONLY for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians. Dr. should NOT be used for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. On second reference for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians, use the courtesy title Dr. For example, on second reference for Dr. Anthony Fauci, it would be Dr. Fauci.

      Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. DO NOT use Dr. for this group. If a person has an earned doctorate degree and it is a relevant element to the story, you can include this information. But DO NOT use the courtesy title Dr. [Updated 8/3/2020]

      Military guidelines:
      Abbreviations are given first, followed by second-reference usages, including alternatives,

      ARMY
      Commissioned officers: Gen. – General; Lt. Gen. – General; Maj. Gen. – General; Brig. Gen. – General; Col. – Colonel; Lt. Col. – Colonel; Maj. – Major; Capt. – Captain; 1st Lt. – Lieutenant;   2nd Lt. – Lieutenant;

      Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer/Mr.; WO – Warrant Officer/Mr.;

      Enlisted personnel: Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Command Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Platoon Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. 1st Class – Sergeant; Spec. 7 – Specialist/Mr.; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 6 – Specialist/Mr.; Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 5 – Specialist/Mr.; Cpl. – Corporal; Spec. 4 – Specialist/Mr.; Pfc. – Private; Pvt. 2 – Private; Pvt. 1 – Private [revised May 14, 2004]

      NAVY, COAST GUARD
      Commissioned officers: Adm. – Admiral;  Vice Adm. – Admiral;    Rear Adm. –  Admiral;  Comm. – Commodore;    Capt. – Captain; Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. – Lieutentant;  Lt. j.g. – Lieutenant;  Ens. – Ensign/Mr.

      Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer;   WO – Warrant Officer

      Enlisted personnel :  CPO – Chief Petty Officer/Mr.;  PO 1st Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;   PO 2nd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.; PO 3rd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;  Seaman –   Mr.;  Seaman Apprentice – Mr.;   Seaman Recruit –   Mr.

      MARINE CORPS
      Commissioned officers: Same as army.

      Warrant officers: Same as navy.

      Others: Sgt. Major – Sergeant; Master Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant;   Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant;  Staff Sgt. – Sergeant;  Sgt. – Sergeant;   Cpl. – Corporal;  Lance Cpl. – Corporal;  Pfc. – Private;   Pvt. –  Private

      AIR FORCE
      Commissioned officers: Same as army.
      Enlisted personnel: Chief Master Sgt. – Sergeant;
      Senior Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Tech. Sgt. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. – Sergeant; Senior Airman – Airman/Mr.; Airman 1st Class – Airman/Mr.;   Airman – Airman/Mr.;    Airman Basic  – Airman/Mr.

      Police titles – Use military style for captain, lieutenant, sergeant. Below these ranks use officer. Titles will be abbreviated on first and subsequent references.

      Prominent individuals
      The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln and, Jefferson.

      Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

      Religious titles

      Protestant uses
      The Rev. John Jones on first reference, The Rev. or Pastor Jones on second. Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones, or Dr. Jones (if applicable) on second reference.

      An Episcopal deacon or priest is the Rev. John Jones on first reference, the Rev. Jones on second reference. Some Episcopal rectors prefer to be called Father.

      A dean is the Very Rev. John Jones on first reference, Dean Jones on second.

      An Episcopal bishop is Bishop John Adams on first reference, Bishop Adams or Dr. Adams (if applicable) on second. This rule also applies to archbishops.

      Roman Catholic uses
      Do not use the name of or the abbreviation for a religious order after a member’s name. The Rev. John Jones on first reference, Father Jones on second reference. Do not refer to a Catholic priest as Mr.

      A monsignor is Mgsr. John Jones on first reference. On subsquent references, it should be Monsignor Jones. [Updated December 2017]

      Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones on second.

      Archbishop John Jones on first reference, Archbishop Jones on second unless he is a cardinal.

      A cardinal is Cardinal John Jones on first reference, Cardinal Jones on second. The title cardinal takes precedence over archbishop: Cardinal Terence Cooke, archbishop of New York.

      A Roman Catholic nun is usually Sister Mary Magdalene Jones on first reference, Sister Mary or Sister Mary Magdalene on second reference. However, usage varies both among and within orders, so personal preference should be verified and noted with “cq” in the story. Always spell out Sister when referring to a member of a religious order.

      Eastern Orthodox rites
      Clergy at the parish level use the Rev. Michael Elias on first reference, Father Michael on second reference.

      Archimandrite is an honorary title for priests, similar to monsignor in the Roman Catholic Church: Archimandrite Jones or the Right Rev. John Jones, subsequently Father John.

      Above the parish level usage varies:

      Antiochian Orthodox Church –  a metropolitan is an archbishop and the church uses both titles: Metropolitan Archbishop John Jones, subsequently Archbishop John.

      Greek Orthodox Church – Archbishop, Metropolitan, and Bishop.

      These titles are used with geographical area: archbishop of North and South America; metropolitan of New Jersey, bishop of Detroit diocese.
      Jewish uses: Rabbi James Wise, subsequently Rabbi Wise or Dr. Wise (if applicable).  Cantor Harry Epstein, Cantor Epstein, Mr. Epstein.
      Christian Science uses: Practitioner, Lecturer, Reader. (Do not use Rev. in any form.) Use Mr., Mrs., or Miss on second reference.

      Royalty and nobility:

      Kings and queens are referred to by first name in most cases: Queen Elizabeth II, or Queen Elizabeth; King Hussein, or Hussein. Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain.

      A British knight or baronet carries the title Sir before his full name on first reference: Sir Henry Smith. On second reference: Sir Henry. Do not use double titles or descriptions such as General Sir or Spokesman Lt., Surgeon Dr., Coroner Dr., or Leader General.

      The same applies to ladies carrying the title Dame, the feminine equivalent of knighthood: Dame Mary Brown, Dame Mary.

      Among members of the peerage (baron, viscount, earl, marquis, duke) usage varies. When the family name is different from the title, the correct form is John Churchill, Duke of Marlborough, or the Duke of Marlborough on first reference. Subsequent references could be Lord John, Lord Churchill, the Duke of Marlborough, or just Marlborough. When the family name and title are the same, the first name ordinarily is not used even on first reference: Field Marshal Viscount Montgomery. On second reference use Marshal Montgomery or Lord Montgomery.

      The wife of a knight or baronet is referred to as Lady with either the last name or her first name.

      Wrong-way drivers –  Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

      Toledo Area Metroparks  – DO NOT USE. Correct style on first reference is Metroparks Toledo. Metroparks is one word, no hyphen, no capital p.  On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks. [revised September 2017]

      Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority  –  Not Toledo Area Regional Transportation Agency. On second reference, TARTA.

      Toledo Arena Sports Inc. – A non-profit organization set up for the teams (Toledo Walleye, Bullfrogs) that play in the downtown arena, now called Huntington Center. [Added April 16, 2010]

      Toledo Edison Co.  – See FirstEnergy Corp. (revised January 21, 2003)

      Toledo Express Airport – Do NOT use this name on first reference to the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The new name for the airport is Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport.  The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]

      Toledo Metropolitan Area Council of Governments – TMACOG.

      Toledo Mud Hens — Mud Hens is two words. The Mud Hens are a professional baseball team in the International League. The Triple-A baseball club is affiliated with the Detroit Tigers of Major League Baseball.
      Top executives of the Toledo Mud Hens
          • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
          • Erik Ibsen is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Mud Hens. [Added June 2015]

      Toledo Symphony – The correct name for the local orchestra. TSO is acceptable on second and subsequent references and in headlines. [Revised November 2023]

      Toledo Walleye – A professional hockey team with the ECHL, formerly the East Coast Hockey League. ECHL is a developmental league for the American Hockey and the National Hockey League. The Walleye are affiliated with the AHL’s Grand Rapid Griffins and the NHL’s Detroit Red Wings. Walleye is a collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated.
      Top executives of the Toledo Walleye
          • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
          • Neil Neukam is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Walleye. [Updated June 2015]

      tongue-tied

      top-heavy

      topsy-turvy

      tortuous, torturous –  The first means twisting; the second means torturing.

      toss-up, toss up –  noun, verb.

      toward –  Without s in all uses. (NOT towards)

      Trademarks – A trademark is a brand, symbol, word, etc., used by a manufacturer or dealer and protected by law to prevent a competitor from using it. For example, Kleenex is the trademark for a facial tissue; BUBBLE WRAP (all caps) is the trademark for protective packaging and Dumpster is a trademark for a trash hauling bin.

      In general, use a generic equivalent unless the trademark name is essential to the story. When a trademark is used, capitalize it.

      The International Trademark Association’s Trademark Checklist is a helpful source of information about trademarks.

      Click here to go the INTRA’s Trademark Checklist

      Tranquility

      trans as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun. Transatlantic and transpacific are exceptions.

      Transgender Coverage [added June 2023]

      transgender – Describes people whose gender does not match the one usually associated with the sex they were assigned at birth. Identify people as transgender only when relevant, and use the name by which they live publicly. The shorthand trans is acceptable on second reference and in headlines. A person who is assigned female at birth and transitions to align with their identity as a boy or man is a transgender boy or transgender man, and a person who is assigned male at birth and transitions to align with their identity as a girl or woman is a transgender girl or woman. Avoid the one-word compounds transman and transwoman.

      drag queen, drag king – Entertainers who dress and act as a different gender. Drag queens act as women; drag kings act as men. Male impersonator and female impersonator are also acceptable.

      gender – A social construct encompassing a person’s behaviors, intrinsic identity and appearance. Gender often corresponds with but is not synonymous with sex. A person’s sex and gender are usually assigned at birth by parents or attendants and can turn out to be inaccurate

      gender-affirming care – Refers to a swath of mental and medical treatments (such as counseling, hormones, or surgery) that help bring a person’s gender expression (such as voice, appearance or anatomy) in line with their gender identity.

      nonbinary (adj.) – Describes people who don’t identify as strictly men or women; can include agender (having no gender), gender-fluid (an identity that fluctuates) or a combination of male and female. Not synonymous with transgender, though some nonbinary people are also transgender.

      openly, out – The term openly can imply that to identify as transgender is inherently shameful, so use it only when relevant.

      sex – Refers to biological and physiological characteristics, including but not limited to chromosomes, hormones, and reproductive organs. Sex often corresponds with but is not synonymous with gender.

      transition (n., v.), – gender transition The legal, medical, or social processes some transgender or nonbinary people undergo to match their gender identity. Examples can include a formal or informal change to names or pronouns, makeup and hairstyles, hormone therapy, or gender-affirmation surgery.

      trod –  past tense of tread.

      tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

      tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

      T-shirt

      trustee, trusty –  A member of a board of trustees or a person entrusted with something is a trustee. A convict granted certain privileges is a trusty (plural: trusties).

      try to –  Write “I will try to win” not “try and win.”

      Two SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]


      U

      Ukraine,  NOT the Ukraine

      ultra as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

      U.N. – Acceptable on second reference.

      under as prefix –  Do not hyphenate.

      under way

      unique –  One of a kind; nothing is more unique or most unique.

      University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

      University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [Revised November 2023]

      Upper Peninsula



      V

      V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

      Valentine Theatre  [revised January 30, 2002]

      venal, venial –  The first means mercenary; the second, pardonable.

      vertebra, vertebrae – singular, plural.

      Veterans’ Glass City Skyway – Official name for the cable-stayed bridge and viaduct carrying I-280 over the Maumee River. Opened to traffic in June 2007. Note position of apostrophe in first word of name.  [revised November 2007]
      vice as auxiliary –  Do not hyphenate.

      vice, vise –  The first is a serious fault of character; the second a tool.

      vice versa

      victim – Do not use this word in referring to people who have a disabling disease or physical or mental impairment.

      videocassette, videotape –  Other video combinations are two words: video game.

      Video game titles – Italics in body type and single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

      Viet Cong, Vietnam, Vietnamese

      vocal cords



      W

      wait, await – Wait is intransitive; await transitive: He waited for four hours. They eagerly awaited his arrival.

      waive, wave – Waive means to relinquish or forgo: The defendant waived a preliminary hearing.  The verb wave generally means to move in the breeze or to signal a greeting.

      Walleye – East Coast Hockey League or  ECHL team. Walleye is collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated. [added November 2009]
      walleye – Freshwater perch-like fish native to most of the northern United States and Canada. Walleye fishing is popular in the Maumee River.

      Walmart –  The company’s name is now Walmart Inc. (spelled with NO hypen and NO capital M). Its stores are called Walmart. Please be careful when editing a story or writing a headline to use the proper spelling as sometimes the news services have it incorrect. [Updated March 2018]

      war game, war zone –  Other usages are one word: warplane, warship, wartime.

      water bed

      weapons –  An automatic is a pistol designed for automatic or semiautomatic firing. Its cartridges are held in a magazine. A machine gun is an automatic gun, usually mounted on a support, that fires as long as the trigger is depressed. A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun.

      weather terms

      • The designations watch and warning are attached to a number of weather conditions.
      • A watch is an alert to the possibility of a dangerous weather event. A warning is issued when a dangerous weather event is imminent or in progress.

      The following definitions are based on National Weather Service usage:

      • blizzard – Wind speeds of 35 mph or higher and considerable falling and/or blowing snow with visibility near zero. See severe blizzard.
      • cyclone –  Sometimes used in the United States to mean tornado and in the Indian Ocean area to mean hurricane. To avoid confusion use the more precise words.
      • dust storm –  Visibility of one-half mile or less, wind speeds of 30 mph or more.
      • flash flood –  A sudden, violent flood.
      • flood –  Stories about floods usually tell how high the water is and where it is expected to crest. Such a story should also list flood stage and state how high the water is above or below flood stage.
      • freezing drizzle, rain – Drizzle or rain that freezes on objects as it strikes them.
      • funnel cloud – A violent rotating column of air that does not touch ground.
      • gale – Sustained winds from 39 to 54 mph (34 to 47 knots.)
      • hail, sleet –  Precipitation in the form of frozen pellets. Hail is larger and occurs during powerful thunderstorms in which strong vertical air currents lift and drop ice crystals that grow as moisture freezes onto them.
      • sleet, also known as ice pellets, is rain that freezes before it hits the ground because of sub-freezing air near the surface beneath warmer air aloft.
      • sleet is granular and occurs during winter or winter-like storms.
      • hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or higher. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line, typhoons west of the line. When a hurricane or typhoon loses wind speed, it becomes a tropical storm.
      • ice storm –  Reserved for significant and possibly damaging accumulations of ice.
      • severe blizzard – Wind speeds of 45 mph or more, great density of falling and/or blowing snow with visibility frequently near zero, and a temperature of 10 degrees or lower.
      • sleet –  See hail.
      • squall –  A sudden increase of wind speed by a least 16 knots lasting for at least one minute.
      • tornado –  A violent rotating column of air that touches the ground. It usually starts as a funnel cloud and is accompanied by a roaring noise.
        travelers’ advisory – An alert that difficult traveling or hazardous road conditions are expected to be widespread.
      • tropical depression, tropical storm –  The first is a tropical cyclone with maximum sustained surface winds of 38 mph; the second, with winds from 39 to 73 mph. See hurricane.
      • typhoon – See hurricane.
      • waterspout – A tornado over water.
      • wind chill index –  Describes the combined effect of the wind and cold temperatures.

      Web – As an abbreviation of World Wide Web, use Web, capitalized. Also,  Web page and Web browser, but it is website and webcam, webcast.  [Revised  June 23, 2005]

      website – One word and the “w” is lowercase. [Revised February 2015]
      website reefers
      There are three kinds of reefers that can be used in the newspaper to The Blade’s website. Each has a specific Web address.
      Here’s how they should be handled:
      • To reefer to a story, video, photo gallery, audio tape, or added documents or data on our website, use either the toledoblade.com logo or use this address in type: toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online.
      • To refer to a specific section online or to a specific writer or columnist online, use this type of address: toledoblade.com/sports or toledoblade.com/courts or toledoblade.com/davehackenberg. To do this, please verify the address to make sure it is correct.

      • To reefer to the eBlade, use the eBlade logo and this address: eblade.toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online. Please do not use just toledoblade.com, as that will make the reader then have to find the eBlade link and click on that.

      well-being

      well-wisher

      West Toledo

      Westfield Franklin Park – In second reference, Franklin Park is acceptable.

      wheelchair –  Do not refer to people who use a wheelchair as being wheelchair bound or confined to a wheelchair. See victim.

      where – Do not use where at.

      wide as suffix –  Do not hyphenate.

      Wi-Fi – Not WiFi, wifi, wi-fi or Wi-fi. [Added July 2011]

      wiggle, wriggle  –  Wiggle means to jiggle or oscillate, wriggle means to squirm.
      windup, wind up –  noun, verb.
      Wood Lane – Name sometimes used for the Wood County Board of Development Disabilities, based in Bowling Green. [Revised 7/17/2009]
      Woodville Mall
      work load, work force – Other usages are one word: workday, workweek, workplace.

      wrack –  See rack.



      X

      X-ray



      Y

      yoke, yolk  –  The first is a wooden bar by which two draft animals are coupled at the necks for working together; the second, the yellow inner mass of a bird or reptile egg.

      youth – Applicable to boys and girls age 13 through 17. Use man or woman after the 18th birthday.

      YouTube –  The “Y” and “T” are uppercase and YouTube is one word. YouTube is a video-sharing website where users can upload, share and view video clips. [Added May 2009]


      Z

      zeros, zeroes  –  plural of the noun, third person singular verb.

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This is the latest edition of The Blade Stylebook. Earlier editions were published in 1934, 1948, 1958, 1967, 1975, 1991, 1997, and 2000, and updated routinely after 2004 on the online stylebook on Your SOURCE.

Style comprises rules that govern punctuation and word usage. When carefully adhered to, it makes a newspaper more attractive and easier to read. This Stylebook codifies The Blade’s style and must be followed by all reporters and editors so that this newspaper will have a uniform voice.

All editorial employees are expected to learn and follow these guidelines and policies.

John Robinson Block, Publisher and Editor-in-Chief

Blade Style Committee
John Robinson Block
Kurt Franck
Kim Bates
Tony Durham



DO’S AND DON’TS

Although the ultimate responsibility for style rests with the copy desk, reporters should familiarize themselves with the contents of this book so that their copy will require less editing for common errors.

Getting names correct is vital. Do not hesitate to have the news source spell out all names on which there is any possibility of error.

In attributing statements it is preferable to use “he said” rather than “said he” unless this usage results in awkward constructions.

Be careful in using alternate words for “said.” For instance, a speaker may “point out” an accepted fact but not an opinion; “to indicate” means to intimate or to show indirectly and should not be used with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution. Once it has been established who is responsible for a speech or statement, attribution usually can be restricted to sensitive areas.

Avoid racial designations except where pertinent.

Do not use terms like “kids,” “tots,” “kiddies,” “lad,” or “lass” for children except in light features in which they are appropriate.

Do not use the title of “Magistrate” to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith.

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence.

Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Miss Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred.

In obituaries the age normally follows the name: John Jones, 57, of Main Street died Friday. However, in obituaries of prominent people in which the lead contains extensive identification the age may be used in a separate sentence: He was 57.  When family members ask that the age of a deceased person be omitted, we normally comply. (See names for additional obituary guidelines.)

Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) to designate the time element. Do not use today, yesterday, tomorrow, and last night. Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style in the printed newspaper and all our digital platforms.

In general, use the day of the week if the date is within seven days of the day of publication. Otherwise use the calendar date. Do not use “last” and “next” with a day of the week. This also applies to months.

In a series of dates, reporters should clarify in notes mode the calendar dates.

When a.m. and p.m. are used, be sure there is no repetition. “At 2 p.m. Monday afternoon” is redundant, as is “7 p.m. tonight.” Noon and midnight are sufficient.



REPORTING SPEECHES

It is essential that a report on a speech convey the same emphasis the speaker intended the speech to convey, not a different emphasis the reporter may consider more important or more newsworthy.

While direct quotations can help to illustrate or emphasize significant points a speaker makes, they generally should be used sparingly. The reporter should be able to convey the speaker’s intent more accurately and succinctly with indirect quotations, summary, and interpretation.

When used, direct quotations should be the words of the speaker and should not be changed arbitrarily to conform to Blade style. If the speaker uses bad grammar or unacceptable words, paraphrase the statement unless the error was intentional to emphasize a point or the usage is significant in itself.

If a speaker makes a particularly newsworthy statement outside the main thrust of the speech (examples: a parenthetical or off-the-cuff comment during the course of the speech or an answer to a question afterward), the statement should be reported in a way that makes the context clear, either in the story on the speech or in a separate story.



SOURCES

The use of anonymous or unidentified sources should be avoided because it undermines the credibility of The Blade. Readers who are suspicious of what we report have greater reason to distrust information when we can not tell them where we got it. Reporters must make every effort to get information on the record, that is, with the source willing to be quoted by name.

The use of anonymous sources is sometimes necessary, but there must be a discussion with your supervisor, who will then discuss with the managing editor, executive editor or an assistant managing editor. Anonymous sources ought to be use sparingly, and not because someone asked “to remain anonymous.”

Again, the use of anonymous sources requires the approval of the managing editor or executive editor before they can run in the newspaper.



LIBEL

A publication is libelous if its information is false, it identifies a person (or organization or product) to any reader, and its natural effect is either to make the reader think generally less of the person (or organization or product) or to affect adversely its business or profession.  There are three kinds of libelous damage:  harm to reputation and good name;  harm to right to enjoy social contacts; harm to business, occupation, or professional  status.

Some of the main defenses against libel are:
·        Truth (plaintiff must generally prove falsity on matters of public concern).
·        Privilege of reporting legislative, judicial, or other public official records and proceedings (provided the report is fair, impartial and accurate, contains no extraneous matter that is libelous, and no malice is present).
·        Expressions of opinion (provided an opinion is expressed instead of fact, facts on which the opinion is based are not defamatory, no malice is present).
·        The New York Times, or constitutional, rule (allows printing in good faith defamatory falsehoods against public officials or public figures as long as knowledge of falsity or reckless disregard or serious doubt about truth is not present; public figures are those with general fame or notoriety in the community or those who have thrust themselves to the forefront of a public controversy to influence the outcome).

Other defenses include statute of limitations (one year in Ohio), privilege of a participant in an official proceeding, consent or authorization, and neutral reportage.

But malice can destroy many of these defenses.  Under The New York Times rule malice is reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth or knowing use of falsities to inflict harm on a public official or public figure. In other cases malice is gross carelessness, personal ill will, or extreme falsity. Plaintiffs must prove malice.

In addition Ohio and most other states allow private persons to collect actual damages by showing fault or negligence rather than having to prove actual malice, but actual malice must be proved for private persons to recover punitive damages.

And there are partial defenses to reduce damages such as retractions, stories friendly to the plaintiff, corrections, reasonable cause to believe the charge, use of wire service copy, provocation, heat of a campaign, mistaken target, care in preparing the story, proof of plaintiff’s bad reputation.



PRIVACY

Invasion of privacy is violating a person’s right to be let alone, to be free from unwarranted publicity.

The four types of privacy invasions and the defense or defenses for each are:

Appropriation – Unauthorized taking of someone’s name, picture, or likeness or personality for commercial gain.

Defense – Consent, provided it is timely, not given by a minor or incompetent or other unauthorized person, covers items that haven’t been materially altered, and doesn’t otherwise violate the right to publicity (a person’s right to control exploitation of own name or likeness).

Intrusion – Intrusion into private activities, such as stealing or breaking and entering, snooping with hidden cameras or recording devices, trespassing on private property, wiretaps.

Defense: Consent or implied consent.

Private facts – Publishing true personal material that is not of legitimate concern to the public.

Defense – Consent (which can be revoked) and newsworthiness (including nature of story, status of subject, time lapse, intimacy of revelation, degree of embarrassment).

False information – Publishing untruths, whether defamatory or not, by fictionalization (embellishing an otherwise true story with falsehoods) or putting a person in a false light (unintentionally giving a false impression of someone).

Defense: Truth, consent, New York Times rule (plaintiff must show actual malice, reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth).


HANDLING CRIME NEWS

In recognition of its responsibility to report news of crime and the potential problems associated with such reporting, The Blade has adopted these guidelines, which grew out of a cooperative effort between the Toledo Bar Association and the newspaper in 1966. The objective is to provide the public with pertinent information while avoiding publicity that might unduly interfere with the rights of defendants.

In criminal arrests use:
The name, age, and block and street address for the suspect. NOT the exact address [REVISED August 2015]
A description of the crime.
The specific legal charge.
How the arrest was made, when, and where.
Whether a grand jury has returned an indictment and a trial date has been set.
Some practical rules:
Crime stories should be based on information that can be documented, such as the police log, affidavits, warrants, and indictments.

Statements by investigators and attorneys, information from supplemental reports, etc., should be gathered but used with caution to avoid damaging a suspect’s rights.

The same caveat applies to information from witnesses unless they are under oath.

Do not say somebody will be charged with a crime. Wait until a charge is filed. You can say someone is being questioned in the investigation of a crime if you know that to be so, but being interrogated does not necessarily make a person a suspect.

When describing the events during a crime, do not link them with the suspect. Instead use terms such as “a man,” “a woman,” “the robber.”

Do not use the following types of information without supervisory approval:
Prior criminal record.
A confession.
Names of jurors selected for a particular trial.


CRIME VICTIMS

The names of victims are used except in sex-related crimes.

Omit addresses of victims unless they are pertinent to the story. Instead, use the age and general area of residence (West Toledo, near north side, etc).

Extreme caution must be used in reporting incest cases to protect the identity of the victim.

Full identification is used when the victim is dead.


A

a, an  –  Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. Thus, a habitual criminal, a historic occasion; an herb, an heiress.

When the article a or an is to precede a word or phrase beginning with a figure, be guided by pronunciation: a 1-year-old, an eight-point program, an 80 percent average, a 30-cent purchase, etc.

AARP  – The official name of the American Association of Retired Persons. It should be used alone in all references.

abbreviations
The following guidelines apply:

All months except March, April, May, June, and July are abbreviated when used with dates.
Days of the week are never abbreviated.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.),  Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.), Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. [Revised February 2016]

Terrace, Lane, and Way are always spelled out. Even in addresses, Terrace, Lane, and Way should be spelled out. For example, 23 Bethesda Terrace. [Revised December 2014].

Abbreviate north, east, south, and west in street names: 300 S. Detroit Ave. [Revised November 2011].

Do not use street, etc., generically in a formal address. Do not guess: Check the Polk directories and telephone book blue pages for the correct name. Resolve discrepancies relying on the telephone book or by checking with the municipality.

Highways are designated in the following manner: I-75, U.S. 23, State Rt. 20 for Ohio and all other states except Michigan, where the style is M-50. Spell out county and township roads: North County Road 5.

Company names should not be abbreviated unless the form is familiar, O-I for Owens-Illinois, GM for General Motors Co., and GE for General Electric. L-O-F is used for Libbey-Owens-Ford in historical stories. It no longer exists. It’s Pilkington PLC’s North American subsidiary.  [revised January 30, 2002]

The word building should be spelled out unless used as part of an address that includes a number: 614 Spitzer Bldg., Spitzer Building. Capitalize building only when it is part of the formal name: Safety Building, The Blade building.

Fort and mount are not abbreviated, except in headlines, unless the abbreviated name is the formal designation.

States are abbreviated in the following manner:
Ala.; Alaska; Ariz.; Ark.; Calif.; Colo.; Conn.; Del.; Fla.;   Ga.; Hawaii; Iowa; Idaho; Ill.; Ind.; Kan.; Ky.; La.; Mass.;     Md.; Maine; Mich.; Minn.; Miss.; Mo.; Mont.; N.C.; N.D.;   Neb.; Nev.; N.H.; N.J.; N.M.; N.Y.; Ohio; Okla.; Ore.; Pa.;  R.I.; S.C.; S.D.; Tenn.; Texas; Utah; Va.; Vt.; Wash.;  Wis.;  W.Va.; Wyo.

Canadian provinces are abbreviated in the following manner. It is not necessary to add Canada.

Alberta; B.C. (British Columbia);  Man. (Manitoba);  N.B. (New Brunswick); Nfld. (Newfoundland);  N.S. (Nova Scotia);  Ont. (Ontario);   P.E.I. (Prince Edward Island);  Que. (Quebec);  Sask. (Saskatchewan)

Do not abbreviate the name of a state or Canadian province except after municipalities. In referring to counties, parks, lakes, mountains, or other geographical features, use the full name of the state:

Franklin County, Ohio; Bedford Township, Michigan; Yosemite National Park, California; Round Lake, Minnesota (if there is a post office bearing the same name as the lake, the state abbreviation may be used); Fort Bragg, North Carolina.

Nations are not abbreviated except USSR for the former Soviet Union. United States is abbreviated U.S. only as an adjective.

State and party designations of members of Congress follow this style: Rep. John Jones (R., Mich.); Sen. Jack Smith (D., N.Y.). Use the same state abbreviations as elsewhere.
Party designations other than Democratic and Republican should not be spelled out: Sen. John Smith (I, Va.).

For state legislators, use the same style except that the hometown must be spelled out: John Jones (R., Cincinnati) or State Sen. Mary Smith (D., Toledo).

Well-known members of Congress need not be identified in this manner on first mention. Later in the story the state and party can be inserted.

Percentages are abbreviated in headlines or tabular material with %. Always use percent in copy.

Academic degrees are abbreviated as follows:

  • BA – bachelor of arts
  • BS – bachelor of science
  • DDS –  doctor of dental science
  • JD –  doctor of laws
  • MA –  master of arts
  • MD –  doctor of medicine
  • PhD  –  doctor of philosophy When not abbreviating, use bachelor’s degree, master’s degree, doctor’s degree.  Doctorate is acceptable for doctor’s degree.

Do not use abbreviations of academic degrees after a person’s name.

Agencies and organizations are usually referred to by the full name on first reference, then by initials. The abbreviations do not require periods: ICC, FHA, SEC, SEATO, UNESCO, WHO.

Periods are used in the adjectives U.S. and U.N., which are spelled out as nouns except in headlines, tabular material, and tie-in cutlines.

Some organizations are so well known by their initials that the abbreviations may be used on first reference: NATO, FBI, CIA, AFL-CIO, UAW, YMCA (or Y), YWCA, GOP, NAACP.

abbreviations (con’t)
If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate.

In using U for university omit the period: UT, UM, BGSU.

Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

Miscellaneous: A.D. (Anno Domini), B.C. (Before Christ), mph, AWOL, KO (knockout), RBI (run batted in).

abolition – Do not use “abolishment.”

a capella

according to – Do not use this phrase when said will suffice. There are situations in which according to is appropriate: Jones started the fight, according to a signed statement by Smith. Never use with a direct quote.

AccuWeather, Inc. – In State College, Pa.

acoustics –  This word takes a singular verb when referring to the science but plural when referring to the sound qualities of a hall or other building: Acoustics is gaining new stature as a science. The acoustics of the new hall were praised by critics.

acronyms –  In general, avoid overuse of acronyms, especially those that are not well known. If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate. Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

active or passive forms
In general the active voice is preferred.

Write “the work began,” not “the work was begun,” unless you want to emphasize who began it.

Write “the man’s leg was broken in a fall,” not “the man broke his leg.” The latter sounds as if he did it deliberately. Similarly, do not say “He had his license (or sentence) suspended.” Or “She had her degree suspended.” See had.

Write “the boy drowned in the creek,” not “the boy was drowned.” The latter implies murder.

adapt, adopt –  Adapt means to make suitable or modify; adopt means to take as one’s own. Example: The musical director adapted the old music; the college then adopted it as its official song.

ad nauseam

addresses –  Do not stop the reader’s flow with the use of commas. Jack Jones of 2145 Pond Circle. Not Jack Jones, 2145 Pond Circle.

For crime suspects, use the suspect’s block and street, but not the exact address. For example: Joe Smith, the 500 block of Douglas Road. [REVISED August 2015]

adopt –  Resolutions are adopted; bills are passed by legislative bodies.

adverse, averse – Adverse means unfavorable: He predicted adverse weather. Averse means reluctant, opposed: She is averse to change.

advice, advise –  noun, verb.

Adviser

affect, effect –  Affect should be used only as a verb. It means to act upon or influence. Effect as a verb means to bring about or accomplish. Effect as a noun means the result of an action. Example: The effect of the ruling was limited; it did not affect the litigants.

afterward –  Without s in all uses.

African-American –  hyphenated

agreement of subject and verb
Confusion on this point occurs chiefly with
(1) compound or complex subjects and
(2) collective nouns.

A compound subject (separate items usually connected by and or by commas and and) takes a plural verb: The governor and his escort were taken to the auditorium.

When the subject is a noun modified by a prepositional phrase, it is a complex subject and takes a singular verb: The governor, with his escort, was taken to the auditorium.

Collective nouns always have been a problem. Usage generally is to treat words like committee, government, class as singular: The committee offers the resolution.

However, when speaking of a committee, class, etc., acting as individuals, substitute “committee members” or “members of the class” and use a plural verb.

Sums of money always are singular: $100 was offered, $32.20 was the daily-double payoff, etc

Other words always considered singular are anybody, everybody, either, neither, headquarters, whereabouts.

Certain words ending in s but denoting a singular idea are treated as singular: mathematics, physics, politics. Examples: Mathematics is being subjected to new teaching approaches. Physics is the science of the hour. Politics receives expanded coverage in presidential election years.

aid, aide –  verb, noun.

air brake

air-condition, air-conditioned  –  verb, adjective.  The nouns are air conditioner and air conditioning.

airdrop, air-drop –  noun, verb.

airstrike –  One word.

Air Force

Alford plea – In an Alford plea, a defendant does not admit guilt but pleads guilty to a lesser charge to escape more severe penalties had the case gone to trial.

All-America, All-American – adjective, noun.

all right

all time, all-time –  An all-time high but the greatest runner of all time. Avoid the redundant phrase all-time or new record.

allude, refer –  We allude to something when we speak of it without direct mention; we refer to it when we mention it directly. Example: Although any direct reference to his deformity annoyed him, there were times when she felt it necessary to allude to it.

al-Qaeda – An international terrorist network led by Osama bin Laden. [revised 2002]

alumni, etc. –  Alumnus is the masculine singular, alumni the masculine plural, also used for a group including both sexes. Alumna is the feminine singular, alumnae the feminine plural.

A.D. – Anno Domini

another – It is wrong and unnecessary to use “another” in cases such as “council appropriated another $9 million for children” when the story does not say that $9 million has been appropriated for anything else. “Another” should be used only when it refers to something exactly like the first.

ante, anti –  As prefixes the first means before and never takes a hyphen. The second means against and usually takes a hyphen. A good rule is to use the hyphen when anti is joined with a word that could stand alone: anti-trust, anti-Semitic. See hyphenation.

anticipate, expect –  The words are not synonyms. It is one thing to expect an event, another to anticipate it by thought or deed. Examples: A record crowd was expected. The manager anticipated the record crowd by installing extra bleachers.

antiseptic, disinfectant – Antiseptics, such as hand sanitizers, are used to kill germs on living things. Disinfectants, such as bleach, are used on inanimate things, such as countertops and handrails. The adjective is disinfectant, not disinfecting. [Added April 2020]

apostrophes –  See punctuation

appraise, apprise –  Appraise means to set a value on. Apprise means to inform.

appropriate, expropriate, take –  To appropriate usually means to set aside for a special purpose. Do not use as a synonym for take or steal. To expropriate is to deprive of property, usually by government action.

ArenaHuntington Center is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. The arena opened in October 2009, and in April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights. [Updated June 2011]

Army

as if –  Should be used instead of like  as a conjunction: He ran as if a demon were pursuing him. See like.

attorney –  Technically, an attorney is someone (usually, but not necessarily, a lawyer) empowered to act for another. A lawyer is a person admitted to practice in a court system. Do not abbreviate.

attribution –  It is preferable to use he said rather than said he unless this usage results in awkward constructions. Be careful in using alternate words for said. A speaker ordinarily points out an accepted fact. To indicate means to intimate or to show indirectly and is not appropriate with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution in stories with limited sources once the identity of the speaker is established.

audience –  See spectators.

auger, augur – An auger is an instrument for boring. Augur means to foretell; also a seer.

author –  Do not use as a verb. Mr. Smith is the author of “Time & Again.”

authoress, poetess, etc. – Drop the needless ess.

auto –  Automobile is preferred, but auto or car is permitted to avoid repetition.

automaker

automotive plants, local
The following is style for local automotive plants:
Formal name of Chrysler group is now FCA US LLC.

  • Toledo Assembly Complex makes Jeep Wrangler and Jeep Cherokee. [revised Dec. 2014.]
  • Toledo Machining Plant in Perrysburg Township (not just Perrysburg). [revised Oct. 25, 2007]
  • Dundee Engine Plant. [added August 2013]
  • General Motors Co.’s Toledo Transmission Plant; no longer Hydramatic or Toledo Powertrain.
  • Also in the area: GM Defiance Powertrain Plant;  Ford’s Lima Engine Plant;  [revised August 2013]

avoid, avert –  To avoid is to shun, to avert is to prevent: The driver averted the collision by avoiding the truck.

awhile, a while –  She plans to remain here awhile. She will remain for a while.

AWOL – A term that normally refers to military personnel who are absent from the ranks without having been given permission. A truant is one who skips school without permission.

axis –  Plural is axes.


B

BP Husky Refining LLC – Refinery located in Oregon, Ohio, and owned by BP PLC. [added Nov. 17, 2008]

BP PLC – The company no longer uses British Petroleum. Its refinery in Oregon is called BP Husky Refining LLC. [revised Nov. 17, 2008]

Baby Boomer – Uppercase, no hyphen.

back door, back-door –  noun, adjective.

back room, back-room –  noun, adjective.

back up, back-up –  verb, noun/adjective.

backward –  Without s in all uses.

backyard, back-yard –  Noun, adjective.

bad, badly –  The first is an adjective; the second an adverb: He feels bad (he is ill); he feels badly (his fingers are numb).

baleful –  Do not confuse with mournful or soulful. It means ominous.

Band-Aid – trademark, capitalize

banks, local

The following is the style for local banks:

  • Citizens Bank (absorbed Charter One Bank) is part of Citizens Financial Group Inc, which is based in Providence, R.I. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Fifth Third Bank (Northwestern Ohio) is based in Toledo and is part of Fifth Third Bancorp, based in Cincinnati). [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • GenoaBank, based in Genoa, Ohio, with several area branches. Bank name is one word, with capital “B.” [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Huntington National Bank – Northwest Ohio, is based in Toledo and is part of Huntington Bancshares Inc., based in Columbus. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • KeyBank, based in Toledo, is part of KeyCorp, based in Cleveland. A branch can simply be called KeyBank (one word). [revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • PNC Bank, based in Pittsburgh, is part of PNC Financial Services Group Inc. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Resolute Bank, based in Maumee. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Signature Bank, based in Toledo. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Union Bank, based in Columbus Grove, Ohio and owned by Union Banking Co. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Waterford Bank, based in Sylvania. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
No longer is there a Sky Bank (became part of Huntington) or National City Bank (became part of PNC). [Added Feb. 9, 2017]

BAX Global, Inc. – The proper name for what was Burlington Air Express.

B.C. – Before Christ.

beside, besides –  Beside means alongside. Besides means “in addition to.”

best seller

between –  Generally refers to two only. Use among for more than two.

Bible, bible – Capitalize when referring to the holy book of Christanity, including the Scriptures in the Old Testament or the New Testament. Capitalize also related terms such as the Gospels, Gospel of St. Mark, the Scriptures, the Holy Scriptures.

Lowercase bible as a nonreligious term: My dictionary is my bible.

bi, semi –  Bi means two; so biennial is every two years, bimonthly every two months, etc. Semi means half; so semiannual is every half year, or biannual is twice a year.

Big Three – Use Detroit Three when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Traditionally, GM, Ford,  and Chrysler were referred to as the Big Three in the auto industry. However, years ago, Toyota and Volkswagen took over two of those slots. So, the term to use should be Detroit Three automakers. Do NOT use Big Three for GM, Ford and Chrysler. [Added February 2017]

bird watcher

bird’s-eye

Blade carrier – Use independent contractor. Do not use Blade carrier. Do not use contract employee.

blizzard – Often misused to refer to any snowstorm. See weather terms.

bloc, block – Use bloc for a combination of parties or of countries. Block is correct for other uses.

Block Communications, Inc.  –  The parent company of The Blade. Block Communications, Inc. owns communications companies in Ohio, Michigan, Pennsylvania, Illinois, Indiana, and Kentucky. The company is based in Toledo, and the corporate headquarters is located at 405 Madison Ave, Toledo, OH 43604.

In Toledo, companies include : The Blade, Buckeye Broadband (cable and Internet; changed June 2016; BCSN and BCAN appear on Buckeye Broadband) and Telesystem (formerly Buckeye Telesystem).  Telesystem is a national voice, data, and security systems provider.

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband.  [Revised August 2019]

Other companies owned by BCI include the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette in Pennsylvania,  Erie County Cablevision in Sandusky, Ohio; WLIO-TV in Lima, Ohio, and television stations in  Kentucky (Louisville), Indiana, and Illinois. BCI also owns MaxxSouth Broadband in parts of Mississippi and Alabama; Libercus, a content management system/publishing system; and Toledo Detroit Outdoor (billboard company). On July 6, 2000, the parent company changed its name to Block Communications, Inc. It was previously known as Blade Communications, Inc.  [Revised August 2019]

Block News Alliance – The proper designation for writers from other Block Communications, Inc., properties when their work appears in The Blade.

BLOCK, Allan – Chairman of Block Communications Inc., parent company of The Blade. Use Allan (two “l”s in first name) Block with no middle initial on first reference.

BLOCK, Diana – Executive vice president of Block Communications Inc.. She is the daughter of William Block Jr. [Added August 2019]

BLOCK, John Robinson – Publisher and editor-in-chief of The Blade and the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. On first reference, use John Robinson Block. Use the “Robinson” middle name. Do NOT use a middle initial.

BLOCK, Susan – Wife of Block Communications Inc. chairman Allan and board member of BCI.  Do NOT use Susan Allan Block. On succeeding references, she is Mrs. Block. [Updated October 2018]

BLOCK Jr., William – Retired president and general manager of the Post-Gazette and co-publisher of The Blade and Post-Gazette. William Block Jr. is the father of Diana Block and the cousin of Allan Block and John Robinson Block. [Added August 2019]

blond, blonde –  Use blond as a noun for males and as an adjective for all applications: She has blond hair. Use blonde as a noun for females.

blowup, blow up –  noun, verb.

B’nai B’rith

Bombay – Formerly the name for the financial center in India. Blade style now is Mumbai. No longer use Bombay in datelines or stories. See entry for Mumbai. [added November 27, 2008]

booby trap, booby-trap –  noun, adjective/verb.

border line, borderline –  noun, adjective.

boyfriend

breach, breech –  Breach means a break or opening and is used in phrases like “a breach of faith,” ” a breach in the dike,” or “stepping into the breach.” Breech means the rear or hind portion, hence the breech of a gun, a breech delivery.

break-in, break in – noun, verb.

breakout, break out –  noun, verb.

bric-a-brac

bridge names
I-280 over Maumee River: Veterans’ Glass City SkywayState Rt. 65 over Maumee River (drawbridge formerly used by I-280): Craig Memorial BridgeCherry Street/Main Street over Maumee River: Martin Luther King, Jr. BridgeState Rts. 2/51 over Maumee River: Anthony Wayne Bridge (also known as High Level Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)I-75 over Maumee River: DiSalle Bridge (also known as South End Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)U.S. 20/State Rt. 25 over Maumee River: Fort Meigs Memorial Bridge (also known as Maumee-Perrysburg Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)
[revised November 2007]broach, brooch –  The first means to open or introduce; the second is an ornament.

broadcast – Past tense is broadcast.

Buckeye Broadband, formerly Buckeye CableSystem, is the cable and Internet company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Note the “v” in Cablevision is lowercase and Cablevision is one word. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Telesystem — NAME CHANGE — The correct name is Telesystem. It is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

buckshot, bird shot –  Buckshot is large-size shot. Bird shot is small-size shot and is much more common. A person would never be “peppered” with buckshot.

bull, steer –  A bull is a male bovine. A steer is a castrated bull, usually fattened for market.

bull’s-eye

bullet –  The bullet is the projectile portion of a rifle or revolver cartridge, which includes a casing containing an explosive charge.

burglary –  See larceny.

business name style   [revised January 30, 2002]

  • for Company,  use Co.
  • for Companies, use Cos.
  • for Corporation,  use Corp.
  • for Incorporated, use Inc.
  • for Limited, use Ltd.
  • for Limited Liability Corporation, use LLC (no periods)
  • for Limited Partnership  (like Cedar Fair), use LP (no periods)
  • for Public Liability Company (like BP or Pilkington), use PLC (no periods)
  • for Spanish, French or Italian companies using S.A., use SA (no periods)
  • for Dutch companies using N.V., use NV (no periods)

business name style (con’t)

In most cases, don’t capitalize a whole name of a company  (use Trinova instead of TRINOVA), and, with few local exceptions (such as The Andersons), we don’t capitalize The in a company name (it’s Rouse Co., despite its official The Rouse Co.).

by (as prefix) –  No hyphen in most combinations, such as bylaw, bypass. Some exceptions are by-play and by-product.

by as suffix –  Usually takes a hyphen, as in passer-by.

bylines – See credit lines.


C

cabby

caliber – See weapons

call-up, call up – noun, verb

Canada goose

cancel, canceled, canceling, cancellation

cannon, canon – A cannon is a mounted gun; a canon refers to an ecclesiastical law or a church official.

canvas, canvass – Canvas is a fabric; canvass means to solicit.

capital, capitol  –  Capital applies to all uses except capitol, which is a building used as a seat of government.

capitalization

Some basic principles:

In addition to proper nouns, capitalize common nouns such as river, party, street, and west when they are part of proper names: Monroe Street, Maumee River, Democratic Party.

Lowercase common nouns when they stand alone in subsequent references: the party, the river.

Lowercase the common noun elements of names in all plural uses: the Democratic and Republican parties, Main and State streets, lakes Erie and Ontario.

Breeds of animals – Follow the spelling and capitalization in Webster’s Third New International Dictionary. For breeds not listed there, capitalize words derived from proper nouns and use lowercase elsewhere: thoroughbred, Arabian mare, basset hound, Boston terrier.

Constitution, laws

Capitalize references to the U.S. Constitution, with or without the U.S. modifier.

When referring to the constitutions of other nations or of states, capitalize only with the name of a nation or of a state: the French Constitution, the Massachusetts Constitution, the nation’s constitution, the state constitution.

The city charter of Toledo and all other cities is lowercase.

The formal names of acts of Congress and the Ohio General Assembly are uppercase. When in doubt, lowercase. Bills before passage are lowercase: Taft-Hartley Act (or Law), but the labor act or the labor law; the Sherman Anti-Trust Act (or Law), but the Hawaii statehood bill.

Capitalize amendments to the U.S. Constitution: the First Amendment, the 14th Amendment. Also capitalize the Bill of Rights referring to the first 10 amendments.

Courts – Formal names of courts are capitalized: the Supreme Court of the United States (also the Supreme Court), Circuit Court of Appeals, U.S. District Court or District Court, Ohio Supreme Court, Lucas County Common Pleas Court, Toledo Municipal Court, Municipal Court. Also capitalize the formal names of a foreign nation’s courts.

Derivatives
Capitalize words that are derived from proper nouns and still depend on them for their meaning: American, Christian, English, Marxism.

Lowercase words that are derived from proper nouns but no longer depend on them for their meaning: scotch whiskey, french fries, brussels sprouts, china, india rubber, spartan, geiger counter, utopia.

Geographic terms
Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: The pioneers opened the West.
Capitalize Michigan’s Upper Peninsula and Lower Peninsula.

Capitalize East and West when referring to the eastern and western worlds; South Pacific, North Pacific, South Atlantic, North Atlantic; Far North, Arctic Circle, Antarctic Circle, the Arctic, North Pole, South Pole, Eastern Hemisphere, Western Hemisphere.

Capitalize sections of the city of Toledo and well-known sections of other cities: West Toledo, South Toledo, New York’s West Side, Chicago’s South Side.

Lowercase points of the compass when used as directions; state and province in expressions like New York state, the province of Manitoba.

Capitalize Earth when referring to the planet, otherwise use lowercase. Lowercase sun, moon.

Government

General principles for federal, state, and local governmental units:

Always lowercase, never abbreviate: the federal government, the state government, the U.S. government. Lowercase administration and cabinet but capitalize a specific: The Bush Cabinet.

Capitalize the official names of all federal and state government departments, agencies, and offices: the State Department, the Treasury Department, the Treasury, the Defense Department, the Department of State, Department of Defense, General Services Administration, Secret Service.

Social Security – Capitalize Social Security (Administration and Act) when referring to the U.S. system. Capitalize Medicare and Medicaid.

Capitalize all departments, divisions, agencies, and offices below the state level: Toledo Police Department, Chicago Fire Department, Board of Zoning Appeals, Toledo-Lucas County Plan Commission.

Capitalize Electoral College referring to the body that elects the president.

Capitalize the formal names of legislative bodies and their respective chambers with and without the state name.

Prominent individuals – The first name of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Here are the official designations of state legislative bodies:

  • General Assembly: Arkansas, Colorado, Connecticut, Delaware, Georgia, Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Kentucky, Maryland, Missouri, North Carolina, Ohio, Pennsylvania, Rhode Island, South Carolina, Tennessee, Vermont, Virginia.
  • Legislature:  Alabama, Alaska, Arizona, California, Florida, Hawaii, Idaho, Kansas, Louisiana, Maine, Michigan, Minnesota, Mississippi, Nebraska, Nevada, New Jersey, New Mexico, New York, Oklahoma, South Dakota, Texas, Utah, Washington, West Virginia, Wisconsin, Wyoming. [NOT Ohio]
  • Legislative Assembly: Montana, North Dakota, Oregon.
  • General Court – Massachusetts, New Hampshire.

Examples: Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives; Ohio General Assembly, the General Assembly, the state Senate. Michigan Legislature.

In Ohio, the official name of the governing body is Ohio General Assembly. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.” In Michigan, the official name of the governing body is the Michigan Legislature, so that one is OK.
[Added May 2010]

Capitalize the names of full committees of Congress whether or not preceded by the name of the main legislative body: House Ways and Means Committee, Ways and Means Committee, Senate Foreign Relations Committee. Be certain of the full committee names. Ethics committee is a shortened, uncapped name. Subcommittees are not capitalized: a Senate military construction subcommittee.

The rule above applies to committees of state legislatures.

Capitalize all legislative bodies at the state and city level: Toledo City Council, Lucas County Commissioners, Spencer Township Trustees.

Capitalize the formal name of a foreign nation’s legislative body and its chambers both with and without the name of the country.

Holidays and observances – Capitalize names of holidays and observances, including day and eve in all uses: Christmas Day, Christmas Eve, New Year’s Eve, Labor Day.

Independent administrative agencies
Capitalize the formal names: Lucas County Mental Health Board, Lucas County Board of Mental Retardation, Children Services Board, Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority, Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority, Toledo Lucas County Public Library, Toledo Area Sanitary District, Lucas Metropolitan Housing Authority, Metroparks Toledo.

Military
Capitalize Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, Coast Guard and Merchant Marines, in all cases when we are referring to those branches of the United States military. Capitalize Joint Chiefs of Staff, lowercase the partial title joint chiefs.

Services of other countries are down: the Portuguese navy, the French air force.

Capitalize the names of all military decorations.

Organizations and institutions
Capitalize formal names: Trinity Episcopal Church, Rotary Club.

Capitalize Security Council, General Assembly, Food and Agriculture Organization, and other U.N. agencies when preceded by U.N.

Many specialized agencies, such as the U.N. Educational Scientific, and Cultural Organization, are referred to by initials: UNESCO, UNIFEM.

Capitalize union only if it is part of an official name: United Auto Workers union, American Postal Workers Union.

Personal titles
Capitalize formal titles when used immediately before names: Justice Andy Douglas, Chairman Lee Iacocca.

Lowercase formal titles when used alone or in constructions set off from names by commas.

Lowercase terms that are job descriptions rather than formal titles: Blade staff writer John Jones, plumber Jack Adams.

Capitalize the title for the U.S. President, Pope and Dalai Lama.

Capitalize Chief Executive when referring to the President. His wife is the First Lady.

Political parties
Capitalize the names of recognized political parties and their members: the Republican Party, Republicans; the Democratic Party, Democrats; the Socialist Party, Socialists, the Communist Party, Communists.

Lowercase terms referring to political philosophies and their followers: democracy, communism, socialist.

Write the Democratic National Committee and the Democratic National Convention.

Public buildings
Capitalize formal names of buildings and their rooms: Spitzer Building, Government Center, Ohio’s Statehouse, the Oval Office, the Versailles Room at the Toledo Club, the Summit Room of the Holiday Inn.

Lowercase words such as courthouse, jail, and embassy in most instances: Lucas County courthouse and Wood County jail, but U.S. Embassy.

Publications – Do not capitalize magazine unless it is part of the name: Time magazine, Toledo Magazine. Similarly, do not cap the in the name of a newspaper or wire service unless it is part of the formal name. The New York Times, The Plain Dealer, Detroit News, The Associated Press.

Races
Capitalize nouns and adjectives referring to races, nationalities, and regional groups: Oriental, Semitic, Buckeye, Yankee, Englishman.  Lowercase oriental in other uses: oriental rug, oriental cooking.

Capitalize African-American and Caucasian when used, as in direct quotes, but lowercase the preferred black and white.

Religious
Capitalize all nouns and pronouns referring to the Deity.

Capitalize sacred books such as Holy Bible, the Bible, Old Testament, New Testament, the Qur’an.

Capitalize Lent, Lenten, Rosh Hashanah, Yom Kippur, Ramadan, Sukkoth, Tet, etc.; Holy Communion, Eucharist. Mass, parts of the Mass such as the Credo, Gloria, Sanctus.

Capitalize Hades, Satan; lowercase heaven, hell, devil.

Capitalize church as part of the official name of a religious body or congregation.

Lowercase baptism, christening, biblical; day in Latter-day Saints and Seventh-day Adventists.
See titles for capitalization of religious titles.

Royalty, nobility
Do not capitalize titles when standing alone but do capitalize them when used with the name of the person: Queen Elizabeth, queen of England, the queen.

Honorary titles and titles of nobility are capitalized when they serve as alternate names: Lady Jane Wellesley, only daughter of the duke of Wellington, has been linked romantically with Charles, the prince of Wales. The duke is rumored to dislike the prince. See royalty.

Schools and colleges
Capitalize the proper name of a school district: Toledo Public Schools, Washington Local Schools, Penta County Joint Vocational School District, Whiteford Agricultural School District.

Capitalize the formal names of schools: Scott High School, Byrnedale Junior High School, Gateway Middle School, Harvard School, Coy Elementary School.

Capitalize formal names of colleges or universities: University of Toledo, Indiana University, University of Michigan. Lowercase subordinate colleges and divisions of universities: Harvard law school, Ohio State University history department.

Capitalize academic degrees only when abbreviated: BA (bachelor of arts), PhD (doctor of philosophy).

Ships, boats
Do not capitalize the word designating the classification of a ship or boat: battleship Missouri, aircraft carrier Saratoga, cruiser Toledo, etc. The same applies to words like schooner, yacht, ketch, etc.

In yacht racing, however, the racing class is capitalized: Comet, Vixen, Star, Thistle; the Star class yacht Arcturus, the Comet class sailboat Halley.

Time periods
Capitalize names of geologic and archaeological times: Cambrian, Paleozoic. Lowercase the generic word: Neolithic age.

Lowercase words such as baroque, classical, romantic except when referring to specific periods in art, literary, or music history.

Lowercase century: a 19th century poet; the Magna Carta was signed in the 13th century.

Lowercase daylight-saving time.

Titles of compositions – Capitalize the principal words in the names of books, movies, plays, poems, operas, songs, radio and television programs, works of art.

Treaties – Capitalize the official name. When in doubt, lowercase.

Wars – Capitalize Civil War, Revolutionary War (U.S. only), Korean War, Vietnam War, World War I, World War II, Persian Gulf War, WWI, WWII, etc. Do not capitalize variations, such as gulf war.

capture  – It is better and shorter to write the fugitive was captured than that he was apprehended. Seize is a permissible headline synonym for capture but avoid nab.

Carat, karat  – Carat is gem weight; karat is the fineness of gold.

carbon monoxide –  This poisonous gas is odorless, colorless, and flavorless. Do not refer to it as a fume. Write his death was caused by carbon monoxide poisoning or just carbon monoxide.

Casino – The casino that opened in May 2012 is called Hollywood Casino Toledo. Be sure to include Toledo, because is is part of the official name. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.
cave-in, cave in – noun/adjective, verb.
cease-fire – noun and adjective.

cement, concrete – Cement is an ingredient in concrete, Sidewalks, roads, etc. are made with concrete, not cement.

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention – Located in Atlanta, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is part of the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. On first reference, use Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Precede with national, federal or U.S. if needed for clarity. CDC is acceptable on second reference and it takes a singular verb.  [Added April 2020]

celebrant, celebrator – A celebrant is a person who officiates at a religious ceremony. A celebrator is someone having a good time.
center field, center fielder – nouns.
center-field – adjective.

Centerior Energy Corp. – see FirstEnergy Corp.

chairman,  – Do not use chair, chairwoman or chairperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Chairman Janet Smith, Chairman Bob Davis  (revised October 31, 2002)

chaise lounge

Charter Behavioral Health System – No longer Charter Hospital of Toledo.

checkup, check up – noun, verb.

chock-full

Chrysler Group LLC is now called FCA US LLC- Use it on first reference when referring to the new company. The parent company Fiat Chrysler Automobile N.V. Also, see automotive plants, local.
[Revised Dec. 17, 2014]

Toledo Assembly Complex (formerly Toledo Jeep Assembly complex)- Owned by FCA US  LLC. The complex is made up of two sets of plants, one that makes the Jeep Wrangler and the other makes the Jeep Cherokeee.  [revised Dec. 17. 2014].

See automotive plants, local.

claim – Do not use as a synonym for assert, declare, or insist. A good rule of thumb is to use claim as a verb only with a direct object: He claimed the prize.

clampdown, clamp down – noun, verb.

clarifications – See corrections.

Clarion Hotel – No longer the Sheraton Westgate.

Clazel Theater – New name of the historic theater in Bowling Green. Do not use Cla Ze or Cla-Zel. It’s one word: Clazel. It used to be hyphenated after the original owners Clark and Hazel, but that is no longer what it is called. [Revised October 2009]

clean-cut

cleanup, clean up – noun/adjective, verb.

clear-cut

cliches – Avoid old, inaccurate cliches: hammered out a contract; a sweeping bill; a massive tax cut; braved the rain, etc.

climactic, climatic – The first pertains to a climax: a climactic scene of a play. The second pertains to the climate: Some scientists predict severe climatic changes.

climax, culminate – Use climax as a transitive verb, culminate as an intransitive verb (with in): A banquet climaxed the day’s events. The day’s events culminated in a banquet.

close-up – noun and adjective.

closure – Most cases.

cloture – In legislative bodies.

co – Use the hyphen in compounds like co-defendant, co-sponsor, co-worker, and co-star. Other words, like copilot and correspondent, are not hyphenated.

coined verbs – In some cases coinages of verbs from nouns have become accepted: the couple vacationed; the family picnicked; the home was burglarized. However, some verb forms such as to impact and to prioritize are still not considered good usage. If in doubt, consult the dictionary.

coliseum, Colosseum – A coliseum is an enclosed arena. The Colosseum is the famed ruins in Rome.

Colombia – The South American country.

color-blind

come – Announcements, statements, wars, peace, cannot come.

comedown – noun.

commander in chief

commas – See punctuation.

Common Space – The arts organization called The Common Space, run by Martin Nagy, has two locations: Common Space in the former Glann School on Reynolds Road just north of Dorr Street, and Common Space Two, the former Martin School at Hill Avenue and Holland-Sylvania Road.

community-based corrections – This is the catch phrase for diverting inmates from costly medium and high-security facilities, such as the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility in Lucasville, to community alternatives, such as minimum security facilities, halfway houses, and house arrest with electronic bracelets, for example.

community-oriented policing – This is a return to the days when officers walked neighborhood beats. It is a style of policing that takes officers out of squad cars and mixes law enforcement with social work.

Companies
LOCAL     [revised Oct. 25, 2007]

  • The Andersons Inc., based in Maumee (The should be capitalized).
  • Cooper Tire & Rubber Co. (use ampersand), based in Findlay.
  • Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee [revised January 2017]
  • First Defiance Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • La-Z-Boy Inc. ( no Chair in the name), based in Monroe.
  • Libbey Inc. (no longer Libbey Glass), based in Toledo.
  • HCR ManorCare Inc., renamed/rebranded ProMedica Senior Care [October 2020]
  • N-Viro International Corp., based in Toledo.
  • Ohio Art Co., based in Bryan
  • Owens Corning  (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.
  • Owens-Illinois Inc., (use hyphen), based in Perrysburg. Second reference: O-I .
  • ProMedica (one word, M is capitalized), based in Toledo. [Added March 2019]
  • ProMedica Senior Care (previously HCR ManorCare Inc. [Added October 2020]
  • Rurban Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • Tecumseh Products Co., based in Ann Arbor [revised February 2011]
  • Welltower (previously Health Care REIT Inc.), based in Toledo [Revised March 2019]

Companies with big local presence [revised May 2015]

  • Chrysler Group LLC [revised 7/16/2009]
  • FirstEnergy Corp. (owns Toledo Edison)
  • Ford Motor Co.
  • General Motors Co. [Revised July 16, 2009]
  • Marathon Petroleum Corp. is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]
  • Pilkington North America, a subsidiary of Nippon (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)
  • Spartan Stores Inc. (owns Pharm stores)
    See also: automotive plants, banks, malls

complement, compliment  –  Complement is a noun or verb denoting completeness or the process of supplementing something: The ship has a complement of 200 sailors and 20 officers. The hat complements her dress. Compliment is a noun or verb that denotes praise or the expression of courtesy: The captain complimented the sailors.  She was flattered by the compliments on her outfit.

complexion – Use as a noun: She was of light complexion. Avoid complexioned and complected.

compose, comprise – The easiest rule of thumb is that comprise is the equivalent of is composed of: The book comprises 12 sections. The book is composed of 12 sections. Do not use is comprised of.

computer virus – A destructive, repetitive program “hidden” in a shared computer program that eats away at a system’s programs and stored information.

conditional clauses – Use the past perfect in the if clause, the past conditional in the main clause.Right: If the dog had kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

Wrong: If the dog would have kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

congressman –  Do not use congresswoman  or congressperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Bob Davis (revised October 31, 2002)

conscious, aware – We are conscious of what we feel but aware of what we know: Police were aware (not conscious) of the bank robbers’ plans.

Consumer Price Index – Based on a variety of goods and services, this is the chief measurement of inflation in the United States. Many government and private organizations use the index as a yardstick for revising salaries, wages, welfare benefits, and other payments to keep pace with inflation. As a result the index affects the income of about half the people in the United States.

continuous, continual – What is done continuously is done without interruption, but a man can work hard continually and still take time out to sleep.

controller, comptroller – Controller is the preferred word except when the official designNation is comptroller, as the comptroller of the United States.

co-op

cop-out

cops – Avoid the usage for policemen except in quotes, light features, and entertainment stories.

coronavirus – Use coronavirus. Do Not use COVID-19 unless it is part of a quote in a story. COVID-19, which stands for coronavirus disease 2019, is caused by a virus named SARS-CoV-2. Symptoms of the virus can include fever, cough, and breathing trouble. Most develop only mild symptoms. But some people, usually those with other medical complications, develop more severe symptoms, including pneumonia, which can be fatal.

corrections – This is the format: An article on a specific topic on a specific day made an error. The correct information is ——- ———– ——-. Except in very rare circumstances do not repeat the error.

Example of a correction:
An article yesterday Thurs. 9/7 on Continental Express Airlines’ use of larger planes on Toledo-to-Cleveland flights misidentified the Toledo station manager for Continental Express.  The manager is Gus Lahanis.

Example of an invented sports correction:
An article in yesterday’s sports section incorrectly reported the winners of the Grand Goose shuffleboard tournament. George Smith placed first and Emma Jones was second.

COSI – The Center of Science & Industry goes by COSI. When referring to the center, use COSI exclusively. On subsequent references, it may be called a hands-on science and education center.

council, counsel – Council is a deliberative or advisory body, as city council, a legislative council, ecclesiastical council. Counsel is legal or other advice or the person who gives it. The word counselor also is used for one who gives advice.

councilman –  Do not use councilwoman or councilperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Councilman Janet Smith, Councilman Bob Davis  [Revised October 31, 2002]

counter – Forms one-word compounds except when the second part of the combination begins with an r.

Countian – DO NOT use it or Lucas Countian. Countian is a made up word. Use Lucas county residents or count residents.  [Added January 2013]

counties – On first reference and in headlines county standing alone always means Lucas County. Do not use the name of a county by itself in a headline: Say a Lenawee County man; not a Lenawee man.

couple, pair

When used in the sense of two people, the word takes plural verbs and pronouns: The couple were married Saturday and left Sunday on their honeymoon.

In the sense of a single unit use a singular verb: Each couple was asked to give $10.

The above also applies to pair.

Do not write: Jones got a couple hits. Make it a couple of hits.

court cases – Italicize the names of lawsuits: Roe vs. Wade.

courtesy titles – see titles.

court-martial, courts-martial

cover-up, cover up – noun, verb.

coverage – We will cover with Blade staff all non-spot news events that occur within 150 miles of Toledo and which are sufficiently important to be likely to attract national coverage, These may include, but are not limited to, institutional openings, funerals, graduation speeches, parades, performances, appearances by luminaries. Excluded are sports events and trials.

COVID-19 – Use coronavirus. See coronavirus entry.

crash-land – verb.

crash-landing – noun.

credible, credulous – Credible means believable. Credulous means ready or disposed to believe.

Credit lines
All caps. Use the full name of the news service with photos one column and larger. Half-column wire photos run without credit.

Bylined articles written by Blade staff members carry the credit:
By JOE McGINTY
BLADE STAFF WRITER
unless the writer has a title such as business writer, music critic, arts writer, etc.

Bylined articles from writers based at other newspapers owned by Block Communications, Inc., carry the credit:
BLOCK NEWS ALLIANCE

Bylined articles by non-staff writers carry the credit:
SPECIAL TO THE BLADE

Articles written in The Blade newsroom from regional material provided by paid stringers are credited:
BLADE CORRESPONDENT

Staff-produced dateline and non-bylined articles are credited:
BLADE STAFF

Articles produced in The Blade newsroom from both staff-generated and news-service material are credited:
BLADE STAFF AND NEWS SERVICES
[revised March 2010]

News-service stories that require bylines follow the same credit format.
Examples:
By TAD BARTIMUS
ASSOCIATED PRESS

By R.W. APPLE
NEW YORK TIMES
By PAMELA CONSTABLE
WASHINGTON POST

Datelined non byline news-service articles are credited as follows:

Datelined news-service articles should be credited as specifically as possible. Use the name of the newspaper, such as the Los Angeles Times, New York Times or Washington Post. Do not use abbreviations, such as AP, NYT, or CP. Spell out names of the wire services.

Use BLADE NEWS SERVICES when dispatches are blended. [revised March 2010] Credit lines run above the dateline, and some examples are:

  • ASSOCIATED PRESS
  • REUTERS
  • NEW YORK TIMES
  • WASHINGTON POST
  • BLADE NEWS SERVICES

Credit lines for photos

For staff photos:
THE BLADE/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

For freelance photos and pictures taken by Blade reporters:
PHOTOGRAPHER NAME FOR THE BLADE

For AP, New York Times, Reuters: ASSOCIATED PRESS, NEW YORK TIMES, REUTERS. If you can determine that the picture was taken by a newspaper, use the name of the paper, such as CHICAGO TRIBUNE, or LOS ANGELES TIMES.

For staff file photo:
BLADE PHOTO

For pool photo:
POOL PHOTO/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

criteria, criterion – plural, singular.

critical – A person near death in a hospital is in critical condition. A person is critical when he criticizes someone or something.

cross as prefix – Usually hyphenated in combinations, but there are exceptions like crossover and crosswise.

cross-country

cross-examine

cross fire – noun

cuff links

Cutlines
The Blade uses two kinds of cutlines, so-called cutboxes and tie-in lines.

Cutboxes, used with photos without an accompanying story, have a headline briefly summarizing the photo, plus a block of text.    Cutlines should be written in the present tense except where common sense or historical times make it impractical. They should help tell the story with pertinent information; they should describe whatever is necessary to make the picture meaningful, but they should not state the obvious that is insulting to the reader: The politician kisses a baby or Molly Jones puts on her new shirt.

Tie-in cutlines are used with photos that
accompany articles. These cutlines identify people and/or things and the action in the picture. The day is not necessary because it is in the story. Use single quotes in all cutlines.

Cutlines with half-column and one-column mugshots include a brief description of the pictured person’s role to the article with which the cut appears. Limit half-column cuts to a two-line maximum, dropping first name if needed. Use verbs and articles where possible.
Examples:
half-column of Liz Taylor
Taylor: set
to wed again
one-column of the police chief
Chief Felker: He is
injured in a crash:

Cutline reefers now read STORY ON PAGE x.

Weather cutlines should indicate the forecast and refer.

cutoff, cut off – noun/adjective, verb.

cut-rate


D

Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee. [revised January 2017]

Datelines (also see state names)
All articles originating outside Lucas County with the exception of Rossford, Northwood, and Perrysburg carry a dateline.

All place names included on road maps published by the states of Ohio and Michigan will be used in datelines. Datelines from other states should be based on the Rand McNally atlas. Do not use townships as datelines. Stories developing in rural areas should carry a dateline of the nearest community on the map. In all cases it is essential high in the story to locate the community by appropriate indicators such as county and distance from a more well-known location.

All 4-star communities outside Lucas County as well as well-known and area cities stand alone in datelines and in body copy. Others should be followed by the state or Canadian province (see abbreviations) or by the name of the country. Names of countries are not abbreviated.

A dateline is required when the action we are reporting happened outside Toledo, even though we may be covering the event from here.

We would not use a dateline when we are simply interviewing an out-of-town source for a story we are developing or for a story we are following, as long as the news event is not happening in that town.

In certain cases, to avoid confusion, it may be necessary to let the reader know that we are conducting a telephone interview. An example would be interviewing an out-of-town person in advance of his or her Toledo appearance, such as an entertainer, author, scientist, etc. It is desirable to let the reader know by the third paragraph that we were conducting a telephone interview. If that’s not possible, it should be high up in the story – and before the runover.

THE FOLLOWING CITIES STAND ALONE:
Akron, Ann Arbor, Bowling Green, Bryan, Canton, Cincinnati, Cleveland, Columbus,  Dayton, Defiance, Erie, Findlay, Fostoria, Fremont, Kelleys Island, Lambertville,  Luckey, Napoleon, Port Clinton, Sandusky, Temperance, Tiffin, Wauseon, Youngstown [Revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Ohio):
Ada, Alvordton, Archbold, Bellevue, Bluffton, Bradner,  Carey, Clyde, Curtice, Custar, Cygnet, Delta, Deshler, Elliston, Fayette,  Gibsonburg, Graytown, Haskins,  Hicksville, Holgate,  Lakeside, Leipsic, Liberty Center, Little Sister Island,  Lyons, Marblehead, McClure, Metamora, Middle Bass Island, Montpelier,  North Baltimore, North Bass Island, Norwalk, Oak Harbor, Ohio City, Paulding, Pettisville, Pioneer, Portage, Put-in-Bay, Rattlesnake Island, Risingsun,  South Bass Island,  Stryker,  Upper Sandusky, Van Wert, Wapakoneta,  West Sister Island, Woodville, Wyandot. [revised July 19, 2012]

THE FOLLOWING MICHIGAN CITIES STAND ALONE:
Adrian, Ann Arbor, Detroit, Hillsdale, Kalamazoo, Lambertville, Lansing, Luna Pier, Monroe, Ottawa Lake, Temperance. All others would take the Mich. including Erie (to avoid possible confusion with Erie, Pa.)  [Added August 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Michigan):
Blissfield, Deerfield, Dundee, Ida, Maybee, Morenci, Ottawa Lake, Petersburg, Riga, Samaria, Tecumseh.  [revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:
United States:
Anchorage, Annapolis, Atlanta, Austin, Baltimore, Baton Rouge, Boise, Boston, Buffalo, Charlotte, Cheyenne, Chicago, Colorado Springs, Corpus Christi, Dallas, Denver, Des Moines, Detroit, El Paso, Fort Worth, Greensboro, Hartford, Hollywood, Honolulu, Houston, Indianapolis, Jacksonville, Jersey City, Juneau, Kansas City, Lansing, Las Vegas, Little Rock, Los Angeles, Louisville, Memphis, Miami, Milwaukee, Minneapolis, Nashville, Newark, New Orleans, New York,  Norfolk, Oakland,  Oklahoma City, Omaha, Philadelphia, Phoenix, Pittsburgh, Raleigh, Reno, Sacramento, Salt Lake City, San Antonio, San Diego, San Francisco, Santa Fe, Seattle, Spokane, St. Louis, St. Paul, Tacoma, Tallahassee, Tampa, Topeka,  Tucson,  United Nations, Virginia Beach, Washington

The Americas :
Buenos Aires, Calgary, Caracas, Edmonton, Guatemala, Havana, Managua, Mexico City, Montreal, Panama, Quebec, Rio de Janeiro, San Salvador, Sao Paulo, Saskatoon, Toronto,  Vancouver, Whitehorse, Winnipeg,

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:

Other Continents:
Algiers, Amsterdam, Athens, Baghdad, Bangkok, Barcelona, Beijing, Beirut, Belfast, Belgrade, Berlin, Bonn, Brussels, Budapest, Cairo, Calcutta, Cape Town, Casablanca, Copenhagen, Damascus,  Dublin, Edinburgh, Gdansk, Geneva, Glasgow, Hamburg, Hanoi, Helsinki, Ho Chi Minh City, Hong Kong, Istanbul, Jerusalem, Johannesburg, Leningrad, Lisbon, London, Luxembourg, Madrid, Manila, Marseille, Melbourne, Monte Carlo, Moscow, Munich, Naples, New Delhi, Oslo, Paris, Phnom Penh, Prague, Pretoria, Rome, Seoul, Singapore, Stockholm, Sydney, Taipei, Tehran, Tel Aviv, Tokyo, Turin, Vatican City, Venice, Vienna,  Warsaw, Yangon, Zurich.

data – The word typically takes singular verbs and pronouns when writing for general audiences and in data journalism contexts: The data is sound. In scientific and academic writing, plural verbs and pronouns are preferred. Use databank and database, but data processing (n. and adj.) and data center.

Davis-Besse nuclear power plant. The name is hyphenated, but the “n” in nuclear, “p” in power, and “p” in plant are all lowercase. [Added November 2011]

daylight-saving –  adjective.

day – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

dead end, dead-end –  noun, adjective/verb.

Democrat, Democratic  – Democrat is the proper noun referring to a member of the political party. Democratic is its adjective. See capitalization.

desert, dessert –  Two nouns are spelled desert. One, pronounced DESert, refers to a desolate or dry area. The other, pronounced deSERT, same as the verb, means something deserved or earned: “He got his just deserts.” Dessert is a course served at the end of a meal.

detective – Never abbreviate. For example, Detective Joe Smith.

Detroit Three – Use when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Do NOT use Big Three. See Big Three entry. [Added February 2017]

dialect –  Dialect should be avoided, even in quoted matter, unless it is clearly pertinent to a story.

differ, different –  Both words should be followed by from, not by than. However, differ in the sense of disagree is followed by with.

Examples: The gray squirrel differs from the red in size as well as color. The viola is different from the violin in size and pitch. The witness differed with the senator on the question of privileged information.

different – Do not use it unnecessarily, as in: he had 17 different jobs. She took 17 different pills.

Dingell – The late U.S. Rep. John (D., Dearborn). Not Trenton

discreet, discrete –  Discreet means prudent, circumspect: “I’m afraid I was not very discreet,” she wrote. Discrete means detached, separate: There are four discrete sounds from a quadraphonic system.

diseases – Do not capitalize diseases such as cancer, emphysema, leukemia, hepatitis, etc., but do capitalize the shorthand COVID-19, MERS, SARS. When a disease is known by the name of a person or geographical area identified with it, capitalize only the proper noun element: Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, Ebola virus, etc.

Avoid such expressions as: He is battling COVID-19. She is a stroke victim. Use neutral, precise descriptions: He has stomach cancer. She had a stroke. [Added April 2020]

DNA – deoxyribonucleic acid is a genetic code contained in the nuclei of human cells. Except for identical twins, no two people have identical DNA patterns.

dominant –  adjective.

dominate – verb.

double check, double-check –   noun, verb.

double play, double-play  – noun, adjective.

double-talk –  noun.

double time, double-time – noun, adjective/verb

douse, dowse –  The first means to plunge into water; the second, to use a divining rod to find water.

drier, dryer –  adjective, appliance

dropout, drop out –  noun, verb.

Drug Abuse Resistance Education – First reference should be Drug Abuse Resistance Education. Following references use DARE [revised October 23, 2002]

drugstore

drunk – He was drunk (when the adjective follows the noun). But a drunken driver; drunken driving.

due to – Not accepted as a substitute for “caused by” or “because of.”

dumpster – (Dumpster, a former trademark)  is a large metal trash bin, often of a kind that is emptied, or transported to a dump, by a specially equipped truck. Because there is no longer a trademark for the brand, the ‘d” in dumpster does not need to capitalized. [Updated October 2020]


E

easy, easily  –  Easy as an adverb survives only as a vulgarism and in a few phrases, mostly colloquial: stand easy, take it easy, easy come easy go, easier said than done.

Elderly – Use this word carefully and sparingly. Do not refer to a person as elderly unless it is clearly relevant to the story. Apply the same principle to terms such as senior citizen. It is appropriate in generic phrases that do not refer to specific individuals: concern for elderly people, a home for senior citizens, etc. If the intent is to show that an individual’s faculties have deteriorated, cite a graphic example and give attribution for it. Use age when available and appropriate. [Added November 2019]

Electricity – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Electric Auto-Lite – The name of the Toledo company when it was the site for the 1934 strike where the National Guard charged the protesters, killing 2 and wounding hundreds. The strike was one of the formative job actions in the founding of the UAW and CIO. In 1961, Electric Auto-Lite became Electric Autolite, at which time Autolite became a brand name.
[Revised October 30, 2002]

elude  –  To avoid adroitly, evade. See allude.

emigrant, immigrant –  A person emigrates from a country and immigrates into another. Thus an emigrant from Germany becomes an immigrant to the United States.

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

eminent, imminent –  Eminent means noted; imminent means near in time.

email –  Changed in June 2011 to follow the style of Associated Press. No longer use with a hyphen, and addresses should be in boldface. [Revised June 2011]

enact – Laws are enacted; bills are passed.

enclose – Preferred over inclose for all uses.

endorse – Now preferred over indorse in all uses.

en route – Two words.

envelop, envelope –  verb, noun.

epidemic, pandemic – An epidemic is the rapid spreading of disease in a certain population or region; a pandemic is an epidemic that has spread worldwide. Follow declarations of public health officials. On March 11, 2020, the World Health Organization declared the COVID-19 outbreak a pandemic. Do not write global pandemic, which is redundant. [Added April 2020]

erstwhile – Means former.

esports – Acceptable in all references to competitive multiplayer video gaming. Use alternate forms like eSports or e-sports only if part of a formal name, like an organization or arena. Capitalize at the start of sentences. Like other collective nouns that are plural in form, esports takes singular form when the group or quantity is regarded as a unit.

estate – An estate is used to refer to a large landed property owned by an individual of great wealth; said property would contain a large residence and other structures of great value, all of which would require a staff to maintain. An estate would not contain rental property and slum conditions on the property as was the case with Vice President Al Gore’s home and property that, in addition to his home, contained substandard housing being rented to a poor family. We and other media, in reporting that story, referred to the Gore property as an “estate.” Do not use “estate” to mean only an expensive home on landed property as defined in Webster’s Dictionary.

ethics committee – Not the official name of the congressional panel.

ever as prefix – Usually not hyphenated: everbearing and everlasting. Use a hyphen when the dictionary does not give a one-word form.

ex – Takes the hyphen when used in the sense of the former: ex-king, ex-president, ex-senator. Be sure the prefix is used with the right word. For instance, John J. Gilligan is an Ohio ex-governor because he is still an Ohioan; he is not an ex-Ohio governor. However, write ex-public official rather than public ex-official. In this case the ex refers to the whole phrase.

expect – See anticipate.

extradite – The governmental unit that gives up the prisoner does the extraditing: California extradited the suspect to Ohio. The suspect was extradited by California to Ohio. Ohio sought the extradition of the suspect by California.

eye opener


F

fact finder

fact-finding – noun/adjective

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall in Maumee, located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

faker, fakir – The meaning of the first is obvious. The second is a Moslem or Hindu holy man or ascetic.

Far East – The easternmost portions of the continent of Asia: China, Japan, North and South Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and the eastern portions of the Soviet Union. See Southeast Asia.

farmhand

farmhouse

farm worker

farther, further – Farther refers to physical distance: He walked farther into the woods. Further refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the mystery.

fat cat

female – Do not use as a synonym for woman. See lady.

fewer, less – Use fewer for people/individuals or things that can be counted. Fewer than 100 applicants applied. Use less with a number that describes quantity or bulk. Police recovered less than $1,500; It happened less than 36 hours ago; The recipe calls for less than two cups of sugar.

FFA – The official name of what formerly was Future Farmers of America.

fiance, fiancee – Fiance refers to a man; fiancee to a woman.

Fiberglas – Trademark of Owens Corning.

fiber glass, fiber-glass – noun, adjective.

Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate is the correct name for One SeaGate in downtown Toledo. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine.The former Fifth Third Center (headquarters at Madison and Huron) is no longer called that because the sign is down and the bank doesn’t own it anymore. For now, we could refer to it informally as the former Fifth Third Bank headquarters at Madison and Huron. [added  July 22, 2008]

Fifth Third Field – On first reference the new stadium should be called by its formal name. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the new Mud Hens stadium, or the stadium, etc. [revised January 30, 2002]

figure – The verb means calculate or estimate using figures. It is correct to say “He figured his income tax,” questionable to say “John Jones figured in the inquiry.”

firefighter

fire tower

first-rate – noun/adjective

FirstEnergy Corp. – owns Toledo Edison Co. and is based in Akron. FirstEnergy (one word) was created from merger of Centerior Energy Corp. and Ohio Edison Co. [ revised January 30, 2002]

flair, flare – Flair is a knack or talent, flare as a noun is a torch.

flare up, flare-up – verb, noun.

flaunt, flout – To flaunt is to display ostentatiously; to flout is to scoff at: The peacock flaunted its plumage. The composition flouted the rules.

flier, flyer – A flier is an aviator; a flyer is a handbill or a venture.

flimflam

flip-flop

floe  – Do not use ice with floe.

flounder, founder  – A flounder is a fish; to move in a clumsy manner is to flounder. To founder is to get bogged down, become disabled or to sink.

fold as suffix – Do not hyphenate: twofold, threefold, tenfold.

follow-up

foot, feet  – It is correct to say a man is a six-footer but not to say he is six foot tall or six foot. Also it is correct to say a 6-foot, 2-inch guard, or his height is 6 feet, 2 inches.

forgo, forego  –  Forgo means to abstain from or renounce. Forego means to go before.

former, old – Former means erstwhile; old refers to age: The old mansion on Cherry Street is the former home of Mrs. Harvey.

Fort – Do not abbreviate for cities or for military installations.

It should be Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Do not use Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Use Fort Bragg, not Fort Bragg. [Added November 2016]

Fostoria St. Wendelin Church and Parish Life Center

foul up, foul-up – verb, noun.

Four SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]

Franciscan Center – In Sylvania, not Franciscan Life Center.

Frankenstein – In Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein was the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself.

Franklin Park Mall – Official name of Toledo’s premier indoor mail. No longer owned by Westfield.

freelance

Frisbee – A trade name; always capitalize.

front line, front-line – noun, adjective.

front-runner

front yard, front-yard – noun, adjective.

full time, full-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

fund-raiser, fund-raising

funeral vs. memorial service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service. [Added February 2015]


G

Gadhafi, Moammar – Correct Blade style for the Libyan leader. Do NOT use Muammar Kaddafi, previous Blade style.
[Added March 2011].

gage, gauge – Gage is a pledge; gauge is a measurement.

General Growth Property Inc., a Chicago-based development company that owns the Shops at Fallen Timbers in Maumee.

General Motors Co. – Use on first reference. Do not use General Motors Corp. any longer. The name was changed during the 2009 bankruptcy. The “old GM,” with the assets to be disposed, is now referred to as Motors Liquidation Co. GM still can be used in second reference. [Revised July 16, 2009]

gibe – Means jeer or taunt, either as a noun or verb. See jibe.

girlfriend

Gladieux Enterprises – See V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

good, well – Write “he feels good” if you mean he is in good spirits; “he feels well” if he feels healthy. (In this case well is an adjective.) But he hears well, he sees well, meaning that his perception is good. (Well is an adverb in this case.)

good-bye

good Samaritan

graduate – Graduate is correctly used in the active voice; “She graduated from the university.” It is correct but unnecessary to use the passive voice: “He was graduated from the university.”

Do not drop the from: “John Adams graduated from Harvard,” not “John Adams graduated Harvard.”

graphics – Follow style, including the use of articles in all cases.

gray – The preferred American spelling.

great as prefix – Great-grandchild, great-grandmother, great-grandson.

grisly, grizzly – Grisly means horrible; grizzly means grayish.

grown-up


H

had  –  Avoid such constructions as “he had his leg broken” and “he had his car stolen.” Both signify intent.

The Hague – Netherlands

half as prefix  –  Half as an adjective does not take the hyphen in such combinations as half brother, half dozen, half inch, half mile.

Combinations used as adjectives take the hyphen: half-inch opening, half-mile run. Combinations always hyphenated include half-breed, half-and-half, half-dollar. One-word combinations include halfback, halfway. Consult dictionary when in doubt.

haled, hailed –  Haled is an older form of hauled. A suspect is haled into court. Hailed means greeted or acclaimed.

half mast, half staff –  The flag on a ship is lowered to half mast. On land the flag is lowered to half staff.

hand-washing

hangar, hanger  –  A hangar houses planes; a hanger holds clothes.

hanged, hung  –  One hangs a picture, criminal, or oneself. For past tense or passive voice use hanged when referring to executions or suicides, hung for other actions.

Hanukkah   –  The Jewish Festival of Lights, an eight-day commemoration of rededication of the Temple by the Macabees after their victory over the Syrians. Usually occurs in December, but sometime falls in November. DO NOT use Chanukah or any other variation.

hara-kiri

hard hat

hard-liner

Hardship stories – Include a website address or phone number with any “hardship-themed” story we publish. A good example would be an Associated Press story out of Los Angeles about the basset hound rescue center that has fallen on hard times. Do this with hardship stories involving people as well as dogs and other animals. [Added November 2009]

Hayes – New name for the museum and library in Fremont is Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]

HCR ManorCare Inc. , Renamed ProMedica Senior Care in October 2020. Headquarters is on Summit Street, downtown Toledo. [revised October 2020]

headlines

The cardinal rule is that the headline must be accurate and give the reader a true impression of the story. The headline should not steal the lead, especially in feature material.

Some additional guidelines:
Avoid verb heads.
Do not end a line of a head with a preposition except on the middle line of a three-line head or deck. But if a word that is normally a preposition is part of a verb, it must be on the line with the verb.Do not break a proper name, title and name, two-word phrase, or verb and auxiliary between lines of a headline.
As closely as possible headlines should follow the same style as text on abbreviations, etc., except as noted elsewhere.
If a name or title is spelled out in body copy, spell it out in the headline.But if a name or title is abbreviated in copy, do not spell it out in a headline. Use only numbers in heads, except in rare instances, such as “one of a kind.”
Avoid repeating a word in a headline except when any synonym would sound stilted and artificial. Short prepositions such as of, to, and in may be repeated.Do not use such words as rap, slap, hit, blast, as synonyms for criticize.Use quotation marks only when the words are verbatim. Do not put quotation marks around a word just because it is used in an unusual sense or to call attention to a pun.Avoid making a headline pun on a person’s name without supervisory approval.Do not use:
·       Lash for criticize.
·       Peak for record.
·       Snarl for traffic jam.
·       Do not base headlines on weather forecasts.
·       Do not split adjectives from nouns on different lines. This is a common problem.

Instead of:
Notes set for copy
editors on the desk

Rewrite the head to keep the adjective and noun on the same line, which makes it easier for readers to understand:

Desk copy editors
to get suggestions

head-on, head on  –  adjective, adverb.

heavy-handed

Heidelberg College   [revised January 30, 2002]

held  –  Avoid using as a synonym for believed or contended.

helter-skelter

high-handed

hippie, hippy –  noun, adjective.

hit-and-run

hit-skip

high-speed, etc. – It is not necessary to describe a chase, in autos or otherwise, as “high-speed.” A “low-speed” chase would be unusual.

It is unnecessary to write “the victim was rushed to the hospital.” It is assumed that a trip to the hospital is made as rapidly as possible. Write “was taken to the hospital.”

historic, historical – A historic event is an important occurrence, one that stands out in history. Any occurrence in the past is a, not an, historic event. Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. [added March 2010]

hoard, horde – Hoard means an accumulation and is also a verb; horde is a crowd.

hocus-pocus

Hodgkin’s disease

Hollywood Casino Toledo – The official name of the casino that opened in May 2012. Be sure to include Toledo. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.

home, hone –  Do not confuse these two verbs. To home in is to seek, as in a target. To hone means to sharpen.

home room

home rule

home run

horse race

hot line

hot rod, hot-rod – noun, adjective/verb.

Huntington Center – On first reference, this is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. In April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights to the arena. [revised April 16, 2010]

hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or more. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line.

Typhoons develop west of the line. They are known as cyclones in the Indian Ocean and Australia. When a hurricane or typhoon loses strength (wind speed), usually after landfall, it is reduced to tropical storm status.

Capitalize hurricane when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Hurricane Dorian, Hurricane Michael.

Use it and its in pronoun references.

Once storms lose strength and are downgraded to tropical storm or tropical depression status, it may be clearer to simply use the storm’s name on first reference: Officials said the storm surge from Dorian was blamed for the heavy damage to the region. Give the storm’s current status and history high in the story: Dorian came ashore as a major hurricane and was downgraded to a tropical storm. After a storm is downgraded, phrasing such as storm Michael or the remnants of Hurricane Maria is also acceptable on first reference, with background later.

hurricane categories – Hurricanes are ranked 1 to 5 according to what is known as the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale. Categories 3, 4 and 5 hurricanes are considered major hurricanes.

  • Category 1 — Winds of 74-95 mph (120-150 kph). Damage primarily to unanchored mobile homes, shrubbery and trees. Some damage to poorly constructed signs and piers. Extensive damage to power lines and poles likely will result in power outages that could last a few to several days.
  • Category 2 — Winds of 96-110 mph (155-175 kph). Some roof, door and window damage to buildings. Considerable damage to mobile homes, small watercraft, trees, poorly constructed signs and piers. Many shallowly rooted trees will be snapped or uprooted and block numerous roads. Near-total power loss is expected with outages that could last from several days to weeks.
  • Category 3 — Winds of 111-129 mph (180-210 kph). Some structural damage to small homes. Mobile homes destroyed and large trees blown down. Hurricane Katrina, the costliest natural disaster in U.S. history, was a Category 3 at landfall in 2005 after being a Category 5 in the Gulf of Mexico.
  • Category 4 — Winds of 130-156 mph (210-250 kph). Wall failures and roof collapses on small homes, and extensive damage to doors and windows. Complete destruction of some homes, especially mobile homes. Power outages will last for weeks to possibly months. Most of the area will be uninhabitable for weeks or months. In 2004, Hurricane Charley hit the Florida Gulf Coast near Fort Myers as a Category 4 storm. It left thousands homeless and the total U.S. damage was estimated at more than $15 billion.
  • Category 5 — Winds greater than 157 mph (250 kph). Complete roof failure on many homes and industrial buildings. Smaller buildings and mobile homes blown over or completely blown away. Major damage to lower floors of all structures located less than 15 feet (4.5 meters) above sea level and within 500 yards (460 meters) of the shoreline. Massive evacuation of residential areas on low ground within 5 to 10 miles (8 to 16 kilometers) inland may be required.

Hurricane Katrina in 2005, which was a Category 3 storm, was the most expensive hurricane to hit the United States with $160 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation into 2017 dollars. Hurricane Harvey in 2017 was second with $125 billion in damage, with 2017’s Maria, a Category 4 storm on landfall ranked third at $90 billion. Superstorm Sandy, which pummeled New York and New Jersey in 2012, didn’t have the high winds and had lost tropical status by the time it struck. Though not formally called a major hurricane, it had devastating effects and caused $70 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation.

hurricane names – The names of tropical cyclones are decided by the World Meteorological Organization and are recycled every six years. If more than 21 named tropical cyclones occur in one basin in a season, any additional storms will be named for Greek letters. The names of storms deemed to have caused extraordinary damage are retired from the list. When referring to two hurricanes: hurricanes Maria and Dorian.

hurricane season – The portion of the year that has a relatively high incidence of hurricanes. In the Atlantic, Caribbean and Gulf of Mexico, this is from June through November. In the eastern Pacific, it is May 15 through Nov. 30. In the central Pacific, it is June 1 through Nov. 30.

hurricane warning – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are expected somewhere within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. The warning is issued 36 hours before tropical-storm-force winds are expected to arrive.

hurricane watch – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are possible within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. A hurricane watch is issued 48 hours in advance of the expected onset of tropical-storm-force winds.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

hyphenation – An adjective modifying a noun takes no hyphen, but when the adjective and noun in combination modify another noun, the hyphen is required: sound money, a sound-money policy.

A noun used to modify another noun becomes an adjective for grammatical purposes and no hyphen is needed. Race winner, not race-winner; bird watcher, not bird-watcher. Exceptions are combinations shown as hyphenated in the dictionary.

Two hyphens are needed in phrases like 10-foot-deep hole, 50-foot-tall tree, three-mile-wide strip.

Compound adjectives made up of a noun and a verb must be hyphenated: a man-eating shark is different from a man eating shark.

However, the hyphen may be omitted in two-word phrases used together so generally that their connection is obvious: high school boy, income tax returns, civil rights struggle.

Do NOT use the hyphen between an adverb ending in ly and the verb, participle, or adjective it modifies: a recently remodeled house.

In general well or ill take the hyphen when the adverb is before the noun: a well-fed cat; the cat was well fed.

Do not use suspended hyphens, as in three-, five-, and eight-mile runs. Write either three-mile, five-mile, and eight-mile runs or three, five, and eight-mile runs.


I

ice pack

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

ill health –  Avoid this term. A person is either ill or healthy.

Imagination Station — Science center, formerly COSI, that opens October 2009 on Summit Street in downtown Toledo
[added September 2009]

imminent –  See eminent.

inaugurate –  Implies some degree of formality or ceremony; limit its use to such occasions.

include –  Use to introduce a series only when the items that follow are part of a total: The zoo includes lions and tigers.

incumbent – Avoid the redundancy of incumbent senator, etc.

infer, imply –  Infer means to draw a conclusion, imply to hint or suggest: The speaker implied that all was not well in his country. His audience inferred that a revolution was brewing.

insect –  Spiders and centipedes are not insects. If in doubt about a specific creature, consult references.

inside of, outside of –   Drop the of.

inter as prefix –  Takes no hyphen except when second part of the word begins with a capital letter, as in inter-American.

inter, intra –  Inter means between, intra within: Interplanetary travel, intramural (within the walls) athletics.

ISOH/IMPACT – A nonprofit disaster relief organization. It is based at 25182 River Road, Perrysburg, but its distribution center is at 905 Farnsworth Rd., Waterville. Note: all letters are uppercase.   [Added May 2013]

its, it’s  –  possessive pronoun, contraction of it is.


J

JayCee

jailed –  When incorrectly used for sentenced, jailed gives a different meaning. “The driver was jailed for 90 days” means that he has completed a sentence of 90 days. (Do not “give a sentence.”)

jelly bean

jibe –  Means agree. See gibe.

Johnson’s Island – is correct for the Lake Erie island north of Sandusky and south of Marblehead in Ottawa County. It was the site of a prisoner-of-war camp for Confederate officers captured during the American Civil War. [revised 2002, April 2014]

judges –  Blade coverage of court sentencings involving major crimes (including, but not limited to, murder, rape, major felonies, major white-collar crimes) always will give a direct quotation of the judge’s pronouncement of sentence.

We are interested in the judges’s feelings about the act and anything personal. Any judge speaks for a community as well as the criminal justice system. We must share that insight.

judgment – Not judgement.

justices, judges  –  Not always interchangeable. Municipal Court, Common Pleas Court, Juvenile Court, and U.S. district and circuit courts have judges. Members of the U.S. and Ohio Supreme courts are justices. The head of the U.S. Supreme Court is the chief justice of the United States. For a state other than Ohio try to follow approved usage in that state. A justice of the peace on second reference is never a judge. The term jurist may be applied to either justices or judges but never as a title.


K

Kaddafi, Muammar – Do NOT use this spelling for the Libyan leader. The correct Blade style is Moammar Gadhafi. [Revised March 2011]

karat – See carat.

kids – Do not use for children except in light features in which it is appropriate.

knot – One nautical mile (6,076.10 feet) per hour. It is redundant to say knots per hour. To convert to approximate miles per hour, multiply knots by 1.15.

know-how

KO, KOs – nouns.

KO’s, KO’d – verbs.

Koran – Preferred spelling is Qur’an.

Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport – This is the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]


L

lady – Do not use as a synonym for woman. Lady may be used as a courtesy title or in a specific reference to fine manners without patronizing overtones. See female.

lake bed

larceny –  Larceny is unlawful taking or carrying away of personal property. Burglary is breaking into a building illegally with intent to steal. Robbery is larceny from a person or in the immediate presence of another by violence or threat of violence.

last, past –  Use last rather than past to refer to the time immediately preceding the time of writing.  It is not the style of The Blade to use the word last as in “last October” or “last Wednesday” unless it is October or unless the paper is going to be published on Wednesday. It is better to say that something occurred in October or will occur in October; that it happened Wednesday or it will happen Wednesday.

launch – Use it almost exclusively for military matters, rockets, attacks, missiles. It is not good usage to “launch”  political campaigns, programs, projects, drives, etc. Simply starting or beginning them is sufficient.

lawn mower

lawyer – See attorney.

Lead: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

led – Past tense of lead.

Lede: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

left field, left-field – noun, adjective.

left fielder

left-handed

left-hander

left wing, left-wing – noun, adjective.

left-winger, left winger –  The first is a political term; the second is a hockey position.

lend, loan –  Lend is the preferred verb form and should be used in all instances except when quoting someone. Loan is properly used as a noun.

less –  See fewer.

Levis Commons – Outdoor shops on State Rt. 25 in Perrysburg. Mall was built was built was developer Larry Dillin.

LG Philips Displays – formerly Philips Display Components [revised October 23, 2002]

liable, likely –  One is liable to a suit for damages. He is exposed or vulnerable to such a suit. He is likely to sue for damages.  He probably will sue.

lie, lay –  Lie is intransitive and does not take an object: lie, lay, lain. Lay is transitive and takes an object: lay, laid, laid.

Examples: He lies down but cannot sleep. He lay down in the grass. Lenin’s body has lain in Red Square since his death. The bricklayer lays bricks. He laid his rifle down. A new golf course was laid out.

life buoy

Mercy Health Life Flight – This is the name of the medical helicopter company operated by Corporate Jets, Inc., of Pittsburgh. It operates out of Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center. [revised April 26, 2016]

life jacket

life raft

lift-off

liftouts –  Used to break up blocks of type and to summarize a significant point of an article that is not part of the headline.

light-heavyweight

like –  Should not be used as a conjunction. Correct: It looked like a victory for the Conservatives. See as if.

like as suffix –  Usually not hyphenated: businesslike, lifelike. No hyphen is necessary after words ending in l: raillike. Use the hyphen after words ending in ll : bell-like.

like-minded

likely, probably –  Likely is normally an adjective, as in a likely story; probably is an adverb.

linage, lineage – The first is the number of lines; the second is one’s family tree.

living room

loath, loathe –  The first is an adjective meaning unwilling; the second a verb meaning to detest.

locate –  Verb meaning to place or to find. Do not write “The building is located at Sixth and Main streets.”  Write “The building is at Sixth and Main streets.”

locker room

L-O-F   – Acceptable on second reference for the former Libbey-Owens-Ford Co. in historical stories. [revised January 30, 2002]

long shot, long-shot  –  noun, adjective.

long-standing

long time, longtime –  noun, adjective.

long titles – Place long titles after the name. Instead of Lucas County Common Pleas Court Judge James Bates, use Judge James Bates, of Lucas County Common Pleas Court, said . . .

Lourdes University – Officially became a university on Aug. 19, 2011. Founded in 1958 as Lourdes College, the private university is situated on 113 wooded acres in Sylvania. [Added August 2011]

Lower Peninsula

Lucas County Arena – Name of the arena opened in downtown Toledo in October 2009. Do not use Lucas County Multipurpose Arena. [Added October 2009]

Lucas County Board of Mental Health and Recovery Services – On first reference, don’t call the agency the Mental Health Board. The board is the result of a 2006 merger.

Lucas County educational service center board – No longer Lucas County board of education.



M

Mach number

machine gun, machine-gun – noun, adjective/verb.

Magna Carta – (NOT Magna Charta)

Mafia – The secret society of criminals and its members. Do not use as a synonym for organized crime or the underworld.

majority, plurality – Majority means more than half an amount. Plurality means more than the next highest number. If there are more than two candidates in a race, the one with the greatest number of votes has a plurality, but he lacks a majority unless he has more than half the total vote.

makeup, make up –  noun/adjective, verb.

malls, local –  The following is a list of the major local malls:
North Towne Square; Southwyck Shopping Center; Franklin Park Mall (Franklin Park on second reference; Woodville Mall, Shops at Fallen Timbers (in Maumee) and Levis Commons (in Perrysburg)

man-made

man-of-war

mantel, mantle –  The first is a shelf; the second is a cloak.

Mardi Gras

Marathon Petroleum Company LLC is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]

margin, ratio – Margin is the amount or degree of difference: The measure passed by a 15-vote margin. Ratio is a proportional relationship between two or more things: Losers outnumbered gainers on the New York Stock Exchange by a 5-3 ratio.

Marines

market basket

Masonic, fraternal organizations – Use the following guidelines:

  • Trident Lodge, F&AM. Do not use lodge numbers or the term Blue Lodge. In some states and for black lodges it is AF&AM.
  • Solomon Chapter, RAM. Do not spell out Royal Arch Masons or use a chapter number.
  • Eastern Council, R&SM. The correct form for Royal and Select Masons.
  • Toledo Commandery, Knights Templar.  Chapter, Council, and Commandery constitute the York Rite of Masonry. Use the names of the groups, not York Rite.
  • Scottish Rite, Toledo. Omit “Valley of.” It is redundant to refer to a 32nd Degree Scottish Rite Mason. However, the 33rd Degree is a signal honor and should be mentioned when appropriate.
  • Constituent bodies of the Scottish Rite may be mentioned if someone has been an officer. They are: Commander, Toledo Consistory; Sovereign Prince, Northern Light Council, Princes of Jerusalem; Most Wise Master, Fort Industry Chapter, Rose Croix; Thrice Potent Master, Mi-A-Mi Lodge of Perfection.
  • Shrine and Grotto are short for much longer official titles of the parent organizations. The local Shrine body is Zenobia Temple. The black Shriners belong to Mecca Temple. It’s O-Ton-Ta-La Grotto.
  • Black Masonic groups sometimes are referred to as Prince Hall affiliates.
Polar Chapter, Eastern Star. Omit “Order of the” and do not use OES. This is primarily a women’s group, but men may belong.
Lodge of Rebekahs is a women’s order.

Write Knights of Pythias, Odd Fellows, Eagles, Moose, and Elks. Do not use the abbreviations K of P, IOOF, FOE, LOOM, and BPOE.

mayor, coverage of – Make the accounts as objective as possible. Save interpretation and analysis for columns or other types of articles whose purpose is clearly labeled.

medal, metal – Medal is a small piece of metal with a design or inscription made to commemorate some event or to honor some individual. Metal is any of a class of chemical elements, such as iron, gold, or aluminum.

media –  Plural form of medium and always takes a plural verb: News media plan to cover the story. Do NOT use as a synonym for employees of the media.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital.

Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [revised May 12, 2015]

Megawatt – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Mercy Health –  In April 2016, the health group changed its name to Mercy Health. It is no longer Mercy Health Partners. Its seven hospitals in northwest Ohio also have slightly different names: Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center, Mercy Health St. Anne Hospital, Mercy Health St. Charles Hospital, Mercy Health Children’s Hospital, Mercy Health Tiffin Hospital, Mercy Health Willard Hospital, and Mercy Health Hospital of Defiance.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center – No longer Mercy  St.. Vincent Mercy Medical Center St. Vincent Mercy Medical Center or  St. Vincent Medical Center.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy College of Ohio – A Toledo-based Catholic institution with a focus on healthcare. In 2011, the school changed its name from Mercy College of Northwest Ohio to Mercy College of Ohio. The school also has a Youngstown campus.
[Added January 2013]

memorial vs. funeral service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service.
[Added February 2015]

merry-go-round

Metroparks Toledo  – It is the name for the government agency that operates 15 Metroparks totaling more than 12,000 acres in Lucas County. Metroparks is one word. The  “M” is  capitalized, there is no hyphen, and there is no capital p. Use Metroparks Toledo on first reference. On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks.  [revised September 2017]

Mexican-American – hyphenated

mezzo-soprano

mid as prefix –  Not hyphenated unless the second part of the word begins with a capital letter.

Mid-American Conference  – Comprises University of Akron, Ball State University, Bowling Green State University, University of Buffalo, Central Michigan University, Eastern Michigan University, Kent State University, Miami University, Northern Illinois University, Ohio University, Temple University, University of Toledo, and Western Michigan University. [Revised November 2011]

middle age, middle-aged –  noun, adjective.

mill – All bond issue or levy stories must identify what a mill is and what any proposed levy changes would mean to the owner of a typical home.

millennium  [revised January 30, 2002]

minelayer, mine-laying –  noun, adjective.

minesweeper, mine-sweeping  – noun, adjective.

mini as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

mixed-up, mix-up, mix up  –  adjective, noun, verb.

Middle East – Comprises Afghanistan, Cyprus, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Kuwait, Jordan, Lebanon, Oman, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, South Yemen, Sudan, Syria, Turkey, United Arab Emirates, and Yemen. Mideast is acceptable, but Middle East is preferred.

model, replica –  A model may be a different size from the original and/or of different material; a replica is an exact duplicate.

Mohammed – Use this spelling for the name of the prophet and founder of the Islamic religion. Do Not use Muhammad.
[Added November 2009]

money maker

moneys – Restrict use to currencies, as in the moneys of the world.

Moonies – A pejorative term for members of the Rev. Sun Myung Moon’s Unification Church. DON’T use it.
[added Dec. 3, 2008]

mop-up, mop up –  noun, verb.

more than  –  Write “more than 500 attended,” not “over 500.” Over is permissible in headlines.

mother-in-law

mph

mucus, mucous –  noun, adjective.

multi as prefix –  Hyphenate only when the second part of the combination begins with the letter i.

Mumbai is now Blade style for the financial capital of  India. Formerly known as Bombay, there are 15 million people who live in Mumbai, which is the capital of Maharashtra on the western coast of India. Most U.S. news organizations refer to the city as Mumbai, NOT Bombay, since the Indian government made that change in the mid 1990s. The Blade also will use Mumbai when reporting news from this India city. Because Mumbai is not as well known as its predecessor, Bombay, Mumbai needs India in the dateline. [added November 27, 2008]



N

NAFTA – NAFTA is correct. In first reference use North American Free Trade Agreement. [revised October 23, 2002]

names  –  Getting a person’s name right is one of the first essentials of reporting. When interviewing people, ask for correct spelling, preference in the use of the first name and/or initials, and any peculiarities.

For names in wire stories the “World Almanac,”  “Who’s Who,” and other reference books are available.

Junior is permissible if it is part of the person’s formal name. Senior is not used unless father and son are living and both are well enough known that omission would create confusion. Generational designations generally are not needed for nationally known people.

Nicknames are permissible.  If John P. Jones is known to all his friends as Doc, his name would appear as John P. “Doc” Jones.

Use the nickname instead of the first name on first reference for a person best known by that name.

Do not use tasteless nicknames or the common nicknames for given names.

A married woman’s maiden name or name from a previous marriage will be used if desired. The names should appear in their proper order: Mrs. Mary Jones, nee Smith, would appear as Mrs. Mary Smith Jones. If the widow Jones is remarried to a man named Brown, her name should appear as Mrs. Mary Jones Brown.

Prominent individuals – The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Foreign names – In some foreign names the last name is not the family surname. In such cases on second reference the title should be used with the correct part of the name.

NATO – Acceptable on first reference.

nauseate, nauseous – The first is a verb meaning to make or become ill; the second is an adjective meaning causing illness or disgust.

Navy

near as prefix –  Near is an adjective as well as an adverb and can be used as such in phrases as near accident, near thing.

nearby

neo as prefix – Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

nerve-racking – Preferred to nerve-wracking.

new – Avoid using the phrase “constructing new building.” It is difficult for someone to build an old building. This is in line with editing expertise aimed at taking unnecessary words out of stories so there is more room for necessary ones. It is in the same realm as “a new record,” a completely unnecessary modifier.

news conference – Not press conference

next – Do not use with the day of the week or month.

nick – Not knick.

nobility – References to members of the nobility present special problems because nobles frequently are known by their titles rather than their given or family names. These guidelines relate to Britain’s nobility and may be adapted when appropriate to other nations.

Orders of rank begin with the royal family. The term royalty is reserved for relatives of living and deceased sovereigns.

Next in descending order are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts, and barons. Many hold inherited titles; others have been raised to the nobility by the sovereign.

Sovereigns also confer honorary titles, which do NOT make an individual a member of the nobility.  The principal designations in descending order are baronet and knight.

Refer to The Associated Press stylebook for a complete discussion of titles of nobility.

no-man’s-land

non –  Not hyphenated except in combination with proper nouns.

none – Usually means no single one, and in this sense takes singular verbs and pronouns: None of the seats was in its right place. Use a plural verb only if the sense is no two or no amount: None of the consultants agree on the same approach. None of the taxes have been paid.

Norfolk Southern Corp. – A railroad company. DO NOT  refer to it as Norfolk Southern Railway.

North – The northern United States.

North Toledo

North Towne Square – Mall is not part of the name.

Northwest Psychiatric Hospital – No longer Toledo Mental Health Center

notable, noted, notorious  –  Notable means worthy of notice; noted means celebrated or famous; notorious means publicly or widely known, usually in an unfavorable light. Notoriety is not a synonym for fame.

numbers –  Whenever possible spell out all numbers and ordinals below 10 with the following exceptions:

  • Ages -Use numerals without exception when referring to the age of people or animals in years, months, weeks, or days. This also applies to approximate ages: He was in his 40s.
  • Betting odds – He was a 2-1 favorite.
  • City council districts – The correct form is District 5. Do not spell out number.
  • Court identification – It’s the 6th U.S. Circuit Court, not Sixth U.S. Circuit.
  • Decimals – Always use numerals. For figures less than one use a 0 before the decimal point: 2.5, 0.2.
  • Fractional compounds – 3 1/2 inches, size 6 hat. For less common fractions the phrase must be spelled out: five and nine-sixteenths inches, 13 and three-sevenths gallons.
  • Measurements – Exact measurements in feet and inches: 6 feet, 2 inches tall. Otherwise six feet or seven inches unless used with abbreviations in tabular matter. Also, it’s 3 inches of snow fell, not 3″ of snow fell.
  • Money – With the $ sign: $5. Foreign currencies should be stated in U.S. dollars and cents. (The cents symbol is used in special cases such as graphics and charts and always takes numerals.) For sums of money one million and above: $1 million, $20 billion. This format applies only to money.
  • Percentages – 5 percent. For percentages below 1 percent use a 0 before the decimal: 0.2 percent.
  • Special uses – Spelling out extremely large figures is sometimes more appropriate: They planned to enlist a million workers. He was expected to draw a half-million votes. Spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence.
  • When numbers are used in a series or in close association and some are above nine, use numerals for all: The man was sentenced to from 1 to 25 years. It took 2 weeks and 10 days to complete the work.
  • Spell out one when it is used in a general rather than a numerical sense, even when other numbers appear in the same sentence: He was one of 13 seniors honored.
  • Spell out twofold through tenfold. Above tenfold make it 11-fold, 12-fold, 20-fold, etc.
  • Sports results – Detroit defeated Cleveland 2-1. He ran the 100-yard dash in 9.4 seconds (or 0:9:4). McEnroe defeated Connors 6-3, 5-7, 6-4.
  • In football stories use numerals when referring to yard lines but spell out through nine when referring to number of yards gained: Brown plunged four yards to the 3.
  • Time of day – 2 o’clock, 3 p.m., 4:45 a.m. Zeros are unnecessary for the hour on the hour.
  • Vote results – City council voted 6-3.
  • Weapons – A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun. See also Weapons.
  • Weights – Exact weights in pounds and ounces: 7 pounds, 6 ounces. Otherwise seven pounds or six ounces. (Use numerals with abbreviations in special cases such as charts and graphics.)


O

Obamacare – Nickname for President Obama’s Affordable Care Act. Obamacare is one word and should not be offset with quotation marks. [Added November 2016]

obscenity, profanity, vulgarity

May not be used in stories unless in direct quotations when there is a compelling reason and with the approval of the managing editor, or in his absence, an assistant managing editor.

Avoid using any form of abbreviation to substitute for a vulgarity (as in f—). We do not change quotes as in “damn you” to “darn you,” or “hell” to “heck,” etc.

This section shall be interpreted to mean we will permit the use of such words only in very rare instances.

off as prefix – Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: off-color, off-peak, off-season, off-white, off-key.  Some combinations without the hyphen: offhand, offset, offshore, offside, offstage.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

off as suffix –  Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: send-off, stop-off. Some combinations without the hyphen: playoff, standoff, takeoff, cutoff, liftoff.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

offhand –  adjective/adverb.

of mine, of his, etc. –  The common expressions “a friend of mine,”  “a friend of John’s”  should be avoided. Instead, write “my friend,”  “John’s friend.”

oil field

Ohio General Assembly – Official name of the state’s governing body. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.”
[Added May 2010]

Ohio Newspaper Organization – A consortium of Ohio’s eight major newspapers to share non-competitive news content on-cycle. The participating papers are The Blade, the Plain Dealer of Cleveland, The Columbus Dispatch, the Akron Beacon Journal, The Cincinnati Enquirer, the Dayton Daily News, The (Canton) Repository and The (Youngstown) Vindicator. Use Ohio Newspaper Organization on first reference, but the acronym OHNO is fine on subsequent references.

Under the consortium’s guidelines, the byline of the reporter and name of the newspaper should be used when posting OHNO stories on participating papers’ websites, print and e-editions.

ONMA – Use Ohio News Media Association. Formerly the Ohio Newspaper Association. ONMA is the trade association for more than 250 Ohio daily and weekly newspapers and media outlets.

OK, OKs, OK’d

old-timer, old-time – noun, adjective

One SeaGate is called Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine. [revised July 22, 2008]

one-sided

onetime, one-time –  The first means the former; the second means occurring only once

only –  Used in the sense of solely or exclusively, only should go as close as possible to the word it modifies. Note the different meanings: “Only he hoped to find her.” “He hoped only to find her.” “He hoped to find only her.”

Take care to use appropriately to convey a judgment or degree. Proper: Only two people attended the meeting. Improper: Only two people died in the crash.

open-minded

oral, verbal – All communication by words, whether written or spoken, is verbal. Hence, do not use “a verbal order” to mean an unwritten order; a spoken order is “an oral order.” But use verbal to signify by word rather than deed as “a verbal conflict” to distinguish from a physical conflict.

Ohio State Highway Patrol – Do not use Ohio Highway Patrol. The Ohio State Highway Patrol is a division of the Ohio State Department of Public Safety and is the official highway patrol agency in Ohio. [Added March 2019]

out of doors, out-of-doors –  noun, adjective.

over as prefix –  Not hyphenated.

Owens Corning  – (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.


P

panic-stricken

papier-mache

part time, part-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

party – Do not use party as a synonym for person. However, parties to a contract or a lawsuit is correct usage.

pass – Bills are passed, laws are enacted.

passer-by, passers-by

past master

patron, customer – Properly, a patron is a benefactor, a supporter, a protector, an advocate, or the like. Use of the word as a synonym for customer or client is colloquial.

pawn ticket

pay – All stories on new contracts must have some kind of indication of what the workers got in terms of pay increases. Either the range of pay or what the average employee got. For example, a city street worker would be paid $250 more or $13,250 a year with the increase. Any story about the appointment of a public official or promotion, etc., must state the salary for that position and indicate that the individual will be paid the salary. Do not use “Joe Smith earns $40,000.”

PBF Toledo Refining Co. – The full name of the refinery on the Toledo-Oregon border. The refinery is owned by PBF, a private equity firm that bought the facility from Sunoco, Inc. in late 2010 for $400 million. [Added March 1, 2011]

peak, peek, pique
• Peak is the topmost point, such as a mountain peak, or to reach that point.
• Peek is to peer or glance (The boy took a peek around the corner).
• Pique is to upset, arouse or excite. (If you are piquing someone’s interest, you are exciting their interest, not taking a quick look.

percent – one word. Use it or % in heads.

Philips Displays – SEE: LG Philips Displays

phenomena (plural noun), phenomenon (single noun) for “extremely unusual, extraordinary”. [added May 5, 2008]

photos – Local feature photos with a weather theme must contain weather information as far as the day’s readings and what’s in store.

pickles – In northwestern Ohio small cucumbers grown for pickling are referred to colloquially as pickles. They are not pickles until treated with vinegar and brine. Use the correct term, cucumbers.

Pilkington North America – a subsidiary of Pilkington PLC (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)

Ping-Pong – Trade name for table tennis.

“Pit bull” – This is a generic descriptive term for a dog trained to fight and may refer to multiple breeds, including the American Staffordshire terrier, Staffordshire bull terrier, American pit bull terrier, and other mix breeds determined to be “pit bulls” by Lucas County Dog Warden Tom Skeldon. “Pit bulls” should have quotation marks and the style is two words, not one. [Revised November 2009]

planes – It is our policy on airplane crashes to include in stories and cutlines the type of aircraft involved in the crash.

playoff

plead – Past tense is pleaded.

plow – Correct in all uses.

plurality – See majority.

plurals – In compound forms add the s to the noun part of the compound to form the plural: attorneys general, notaries public. When both parts of the compound are normally nouns, add the s to the more important word: major generals, lieutenant colonels. (However, it is sergeants major, for a sergeant major is a sergeant, not a major.)
The plural of proper names ending in x or z is formed by adding es. The addition of s is sufficient for names ending in ce or se: Keeping up with the Joneses. Lopez, Lopezes.
For the plural of abbreviations add ‘s: The brief was full of etc.’s.
For plurals of figures add s: Boeing 727s. The same for years: 1970s, but ’50s, ’60s.
For plurals of single letters add ‘s: Oakland A’s, two B’s on his report card, 3 R’s.
For plurals of multiple letters add s: She knows her ABCs.
For plurals of all-caps initials without periods add s: YMCAs, GIs, POWs.

Pokemon Go – Two words, with the “o” at the end lower case. Italics in body type, single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

post as prefix – Usually not hyphenated except in combination with a proper noun.

pore – A verb that means to gaze or study intensely: She pored over her books.

pour – A verb that means to flow in a continuous stream: It poured rain. He poured the coffee.pre as prefix – Not hyphenated unless in combination with a proper noun.

premier, premiere – The head of government in many countries is the premier (not necessarily synonymous with prime minister). As an adjective premier can mean first in rank or supreme: Pablo Casals was his era’s premier performer on the cello.
Premiere refers to a first performance, either as noun or adjective. Do not use premiere as a verb.

press conference – Do not use. News conference is preferred.

preventive – Preferred over preventative as noun and adjective.

principal, principle – Principal as a noun means the head of a school, the chief person in a transaction, or a sum of money from which interest derives. As an adjective it means first or highest in rank.
Principle means a fundamental doctrine or tenet or a rule of conduct. It is not an adjective.

Private Industry Collaborative [revised February 28, 2002]

profanity – See obscenity.

professor – Never abbreviate. For example, Professor Jim Smith.

ProMedica – Official name of the region’s largest health-care system. Only use ProMedica. Do Not refer to it as ProMedica Health System in stories and/or headlines. The “P” and “M” are uppercase. All ProMedica hospitals have the parent name in front of the hospital name. The ProMedica hospitals are:
• ProMedica Bay Park Hospital
• ProMedica Bixby Hospital
• ProMedica Defiance Regional Hospital
• ProMedica Flower Hospital
• ProMedica Fostoria Community Hospital
• ProMedica Herrick Hospital
• ProMedica Memorial Hospital
• ProMedica Toledo Children’s Hospital
• ProMedica Toledo Hospital
• ProMedica Wildwood Orthopaedic and Spine Hospital
[Revised November 2016].

ProMedica Senior Care (formerly HCR ManorCare). ProMedica Senior Care operates about 500 assisted living, skilled nursing, outpatient rehabilitation, memory care, and home-health and Hospice Care centers. [added October 2020]

pronouns for animals – Use personal pronouns (he or she) if you know the gender of the pet. [Revised January 2015]

Personal pronouns are acceptable when writing about an animal and its offspring.

protester, not protestor

proved, proven – Use proven only as an adjective: A proven remedy.

provided – Make it “provided that” something occurs, not “providing that.”

pseudo as prefix – Do not hyphenate unless in combination with a proper noun.
Punctuation
Some general rules:

  • Apostrophes – Normally the singular possessive of a word is formed by adding ‘s: the bear’s den. The plural possessive is formed by adding the apostrophe to the plural form: the bears’ den. In the case of common and singular proper nouns ending in s, use only an apostrophe after the s. Michael Woods’ desk, Gov. Rhodes’ grave, the moss’ coloration. But the plural possessive should be the Joneses’ house; the Lopezes’ golf clubs.
  • Omit in all possessive pronouns: his, hers, its, theirs.
  • In organization names follow the organization: Elks Club. When in doubt omit the apostrophe.
  • To indicate joint possession write Smith and Brown’s properties. If ownership is separate: Frank’s and Vicki’s faces.
  • Form singular and plural possessives of all-caps initials without periods by adding ‘s: YMCA’s, YMCAs’; GI’s, GIs’; POW’s, POWs’.
  • Use the apostrophe (not a single opening quote) to indicate omitted letters: rock ‘n’ roll, he is a ne’er-do-well, ‘Tis the season to be jolly. Omit the apostrophe on words that have come into common use: copter, possum.
  • Brackets – Use brackets to insert explanatory information inside quotes. Use parentheses outside of quotes.
  • Colons – Use the colon to introduce a list or a quotation. Capitalize the first word after a colon if it is a proper noun, the start of a complete sentence, or a new paragraph. Follow these rules in headlines.
  • Commas – Overuse and underuse are the most common problems with commas.
  • Underuse – Failure to use both commas when two are needed to set off a phrase or clause, the year in a date, and ages, unless the elements begin or end a sentence: John Jones, a South Side grocer, was the next speaker. The tragic events of Nov. 22, 1963, will long be remembered. November, 1963, will go down in history.
  • Overuse – Insertion between subject and verb: According to the printout, the house next door, has a large yard.
  • Improper use with conjunctions – As a general rule use a comma if the subject of each clause is expressly stated: We are visiting Washington, and we plan a side trip to Williamsburg. We visited Washington, but our senator would not see us. Do not use a comma when the subject of the two clauses is the same: We are visiting Washington and plan to see the White House.
  • Unnecessary use to set off short introductory clauses and phrases: During the night he heard many noises. (Use a comma if needed to avoid ambiguity: On the street below, the curious gathered. A comma is necessary after most when and if clauses: When he had tired of the mad pace of New York, he moved to Toledo.)
  • Unnecessary use to set off adverbs such as too, therefore, and also: He too is tired.

Some additional guidelines:

  • Use the comma to separate items in a series: The colors of the flag are red, white, and blue. If the items in a series include commas, use semicolons to separate the items except before the last item, where a comma is used.
  • Street addresses and hometowns after a name should not have commas. Instead use the preposition of: Mary Roberts of 442 Adams St. called Florence Smith, Boston. Smith Co. of New York mailed the records to Brown Co. of South Avenue, Toledo.
  • Use commas before and after the abbreviation Jr. following names. However II and III, for second and third, follow the name without punctuation. When a senator or congressman uses Jr., the correct punctuation is Sen. John Jones, Jr. (R., Mass.).
  • Do not use commas to set off sports scores or legislative or judicial votes: The Tigers defeated the Indians 3-2 on the steady pitching of Justin Thompson. The Supreme Court ruled 5-4 today . . . The Ohio Senate voted 17-16 . . .
  • Use commas to separate a series of adjectives equal in rank. Adjectives are equal if the comma could be replaced by the word and without changing the sense: a thoughtful, precise manner; a dark, dangerous night.
  • Do not use a comma when the last adjective before a noun outranks its predecessors because it is an integral element of a noun phrase: a cheap fur coat; the old oaken bucket; a new, blue spring bonnet.
  • Do not use commas to set off essential clauses and phrases that cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence: Reporters who do not read the stylebook should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that one class of reporters, those who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors.)
  • Reporters, who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that all reporters do not read the stylebook.)
  • Commas are used to set off nonessential clauses and phrases that can be eliminated without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.

We saw the 1995 winner of the Academy Award competition for best movie, “Braveheart.” (Only one movie won the award in 1995. The name is informative, but even without it no other movie could be meant.)

We saw the award-winning movie “One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.” (No comma because many movies have won awards and without the name of the movie the reader would not know which movie was meant.)

They ate dinner with their daughter Julie. (Because this couple has more than one daughter, the inclusion of her name is critical.) They ate dinner with their daughter Julie and her husband, David. (Julie has only one husband, so his name is only informative.)

Do not confuse nonessential clauses and phrases with descriptive adjectives: Julie and husband David went shopping. Julie and her husband, David, went shopping.

Dashes – Use long dashes but only when necessary to set off inserted matter where the break in thought is abrupt.

Hyphens – Use to avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words: The president will speak to small-business men. (Businessmen normally is one word, but small businessmen is ambiguous.) He re-covered the leaky roof. He recovered his health. He viewed the re-creation of the event. He went to the recreation center.

When a compound modifier two or more words that express a single concept precedes a noun, use hyphens to link all the words in the compound except the adverb very and all adverbs that end in ly: a first-quarter touchdown, a bluish-green dress, a full-time job, a well-known man, a better-qualified woman, a know-it-all attitude, a very good time, an easily remembered date.

Many combinations that are hyphenated before a noun are not hyphenated when they occur after a noun: The team scored in the first quarter. The dress, a bluish green, was attractive. She works full time. His attitude suggested that he knew it all.

Use a hyphen to designate dual heritage: African-American, Italian-American, Mexican-American. Do not hyphenate French Canadian or Latin American.

Use a hyphen to separate letters and figures when used in combination: A-1 rating, C-47 plane.

However, in plane designations involving letter-number combinations omit the hyphen after the number: XB-70A.

Parentheses and brackets – Use parentheses to insert explanatory matter except in quotations, where brackets are used. The insertion of bracketed material should be kept to a minimum.

If parenthetical material runs more than one paragraph, use a parenthesis at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.

Parentheses are used around party and state or hometown designations of members of Congress and Ohio or Michigan state legislators: Bill Smith (R., Monroe).

Quotes – The chief fault is failure to close the quotation. General rules:

  • Use single quotes for quoted matter inside quotes. Return to double quotes inside single quotes.
  • In headlines, quote boxes, and all cutlines use single quotes.
  • For continuous quoted matter running more than one paragraph use quotes at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.
  • The above applies only to continuous quoted matter. Each reintroduction, such as he said, he added, he continued, makes it a new quotation, and the previous paragraph should end with quotation marks.
  • Use italic type , not quotation marks, for the titles of plays, movies, books, operas, paintings, video games, TV shows and series and their episodes. Use quotation marks with slogans, songs, poems, chapters, and articles. However, in headlines use single quotes for all titles.
    [Revised August 2016]

Do not use quotation marks with names of dogs, race horses, magazines, newspapers, orchestras, dances, boats, ships, aircraft, estates, rail lines, nicknames of cities or states, or nicknames of athletic teams.

Do not use quotes for symphonies, concertos, overtures, etc. For such works descriptive terms are in quotes within parentheses:
Beethoven’ s Symphony No. 3 (“Eroica”). Beethoven’s Piano Concerto No. 5 (“Emperor”).

An opus number goes in parentheses.

Capital letters used alone to convey a definite meaning usually can stand without quotes: a grade of A, the Y campaign, vitamin B.

Use partial quotations only when the words are especially emphatic or pertinent: He said the Chinese attacked with a “savage butchery unknown in modern times.”

Avoid using quotes on single words as well as new words or phrases and on those used in an unorthodox or figurative sense.

Commas and periods go inside quotation marks; colons and semicolons go outside.

Question marks and exclamation points go inside the quotation marks if they belong with the quoted matter, outside if they belong to the main sentence: He asked: “Is it time to go?” Did he say, “It is time to go”?

Do not use quote marks to mean inches. Spell out inches when writing 3 inches of snow fell.

Semicolons – The semicolon is used to separate items in a series when commas are included in the items. When a series of semicolons is used, end the series with a semicolon, not a comma: Jane Doe of 1616 Elm St.; Dick Jones of 1414 Hall St.; Becky Smith of 1313 Duke St. Use it to separate parts of a sentence when a more definitive break than the comma is called for; do not use a conjunction after the semicolon.

In headlines that contain more than one verb separate the verbs by commas if they have the same subject, by semicolons if they have different subjects.

Troops move through Sudan, put dissidents under arrest
Storms kill 303; floods maroon 200

puns – Avoid making a pun on a person’s name. See headlines.

pupil, student – Avoid pupil. Student is preferred for all grades.



Q

quarter mile, quarter-mile, quarter-miler –  noun, adjective, runner. See half.

queen –  Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain. See titles – royalty and nobility.

quoteboxes –  Used to break up blocks of type and to highlight a remark from an article. One caution: Check the material after it is typeset to ensure that a quotation mark does not occupy a line by itself.

quotes –  See also punctuation.

Full quotes are preferable to partial quotes. But do not use full quotes if they have to be explained. Especially, don’t try to overdo an explanation when the context of the story has told the reader enough to know what is involved.

This example came from the AP, but our reporters and other wire services use similar useless extra words:

Ms. Brookner said Mrs. Hanssen asked her to issue a statement because she felt she could speak out after the plea agreement. “She feels terrible. I don’t think she can feel any worse, any more devastated,” said Ms. Brookner, describing Mrs. Hanssen’s emotions.

Doesn’t the quote convey her feelings enough to avoid the redundancy? The same thing happens when a writer ends a quote and proceeds with, “referring to” or “said of.” To avoid this type of construction, the quote may have to be slightly altered and the speaker or subject matter introduced before the quote. Example:

“Julie was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free,” Dr. Jones said of Julie Newman, referring to her problem of deciding on a divorce.

The reader doesn’t know what is happening until the explanation. More clear and easier to read would be: Julie Newman was having a problem deciding on a divorce, Dr. Jones said, but she knew she “was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free.”

Do not delete the words spoken in quotes and substitute more specific words in brackets. In quotes in which the meaning of a word is not clear, put the word in brackets, but leave the words that the person said:

Correct: “We were going to do it [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

Incorrect: “We were going to [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

Qur’an – Sacred book for those of Muslim faith.



R

racial, national designations  –  Avoid designating a person’s race or nationality unless it is pertinent to the story. A naturalized citizen of the United States is an American regardless of birthplace. The hyphenated form, such as African-American or Mexican-American, may be used if pertinent.

rack, wrack – The noun rack is a framework; the verb means to arrange on a rack, to torture, trouble, or torment: She racked her brain.

The noun wrack means ruin and generally is confined to the phrase wrack and ruin. The verb wrack is the alternate spelling of the preferred rack.

raise, rear – One raises livestock but rears children.

rake-off

ratio – See margin.

rat race

RBI, RBIs – Abbreviation for run batted in in baseball.

re as prefix – Do not hyphenate except when the second part of the word begins with e or is a proper noun. Use a hyphen to indicate a meaning different from the common one-word form: recreation, re-creation; reform, re-form.

Realtor – Use real estate agent unless there is a reason to indicate that the individual is a member of the National Association of Realtors.

rebut, refute – Rebut means to argue to the contrary: He rebutted his opponent’s statement. Refute means to prove to be false or erroneous: Scientists refuted the contention that the world is square.

recollect, remember –  To recollect is to recall to memory; to remember is to retain in memory.

recur

redundancy –  Avoid using the same words and phrases: craft a bill, create a committee, faces charges. Also, avoid repeating a word or phrase in several graphs or throughout the story.

reign, rein –  Reign is the period a ruler is on the throne: The king began his reign. The leather strap for a horse is a rein, hence figuratively: seize the reins, give free rein to, put a check rein on.

religious terms –  Some guidelines:

  • Mass is celebrated, said, or read. High Mass is sung.
  • Rosaries are recited or said, never read.
  • Celebrant refers to a person conducting a religious rite.
  • The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Utah, permits the term Mormon in referring to its members.
  • The Reorganized Church of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Independence, Mo., does not use the term Mormon. If in doubt as to which church is meant, do not use Mormon.
  • It is the United Methodist Church. The African Methodist Episcopal Church (AME) is a separate body.
  • It is incorrect to apply the term church to any Baptist unit other than a local congregation. The organization of Southern Baptists is the Southern Baptist Convention.
  • Organizational units of other denominations include diocese, archdiocese, area, synod, presbytery, etc. Check an official source for the accurate designation.
    replica – See model.

revue, review –  A revue is a light musical stage show. Otherwise use review.

Rh factor – Merriam Webster defines Rh factor as any of one or more genetically determined antigens present in the red blood cells of most persons and of higher animals and capable of inducing intense immunogenic reactions. Rh factor also is known as “Rhesus factor” because it was first discovered in the blood of Rhesus monkeys (small monkeys from India often used for experimentation).

right field, right-field, right fielder – noun, adjective, ballplayer.

right hand, right hander  –  nouns.

right-hand, right-handed  –  adjectives.

right of way, right-of-way  –  noun, adjective. Noun plural is rights of way.

right wing, right-wing –  noun, adjective.

right winger, right-winger   –  hockey player, political term.

ripoff, rip off –  noun/ adjective, verb.

rob, steal –  A person or place is robbed; the articles taken are stolen: Gunman robs bank. Gunman steals $10,000.

robbery  See larceny.

rodent  –  A gnawing animal, including rats and mice as well as beavers, muskrats, groundhogs, squirrels, and rabbits. Such animals as skunks and weasels are not rodents.

roll call, roll-call – noun, adjective.

round robin, round-robin  –  noun, adjective.

roundup, round up –  noun/adjective, verb.

rout, route – Rout as a noun means precipitous flight, a disastrous defeat, or a state of confusion. As a verb it means to put to flight or to defeat utterly. Route as a noun means course of travel or itinerary. The verb means to direct or to assign a course of travel.

royalty  See nobility.

rubber stamp, rubber-stamp  – noun, verb.

Rumor(s) – Don’t use in stories or in headlines. We report facts or attribute news. The exception would be if the word is used in a quote. [Added April 2011]

runner-up, runners-up
Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. New name for the museum located in Fremont. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]


S

safe, safely –   “He arrived safely” means that there was no mishap in connection with his arrival. “He arrived safe” means he arrived in a safe condition.

Sahara – Omit desert.

said –  See attribution.

saint –  St. is acceptable before names.

St. Francis DeSales Church  [revised January 30, 2002]

St. Francis de Sales High School  [revised January 30, 2002]

St. Luke’s Hospital – On July 1, 2016, St. Luke’s became independent again. It is no longer affiliated with ProMedica. [Added November 2016]

saving, savings –  Singular: The purchase was made at a saving of $100. Plural: The family’s savings amounted to $15,000.

savior, Saviour –  common noun, Jesus Christ.

Scholastic Assessment Tests – No longer Scholastic Aptitude Test.

school bus

school years

sea gull –  There is no such bird. The bird is a gull, of which there are several varieties.

SeaGate Convention Centre – The name of the downtown convention center in Toledo. Click here to go the convention center website. [revised Feb. 19, 2009]

see –  Avoid the use of the word in cases like: Consumers will see their bills go up; parents will see their students’ grades go down; Monclova has seen the biggest percentage growth of any metro Toledo locale, etc. Avoid see in headlines as a substitute for foresee.

self as prefix –  Always hyphenated.

semi as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination a word beginning in i or a proper noun.

send-off, send off  –  noun, verb.

setup, set up –  noun/adjective, verb.

sewage, sewerage –  As noun, sewage is waste matter; sewerage is a drainage system. Sewage may also be used as an adjective to refer to drainage, as in sewage system.

shear, sheer –  The first means to cut; the second, precipitous or utter.

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475 in southwest Lucas County. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

shot put, shot-putter, shot-putting

shrank, shrunk –  Shrank is the past tense of the verb shrink, shrunk the past participle: He shrank from combat. The lake has shrunk to a mere pond.

Shultz, Betty – Betty Shultz is a former member of the Toledo City Council , not Betty Schultz. [revised January 2013]

shut-in –  noun/adjective.

shutdown, shut-down –  noun, adjective.

shutout, shut out –  noun/adjective, verb.

Side Cut Metropark – Side Cut should be 2 words for the Metropark along the Maumee River’s west bank. [revised October 23, 2002]

sign-up, sign up –  noun, verb.

sit, set –  Sit is intransitive and does not take an object. Set is transitive and takes an object. Either may apply to people or things.

sit-in –  noun.

skin diver

slowdown, slow down –  noun, verb.

smaller –  See fewer.

smart phone –  Two words in Blade style.

Smithsonian Institution

so-called –  adjective.

so-so

South – The southern United States.

Southeast Asia – Comprises Burma, Cambodia, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, and Vietnam. See Far East.

Southwyck Shopping Center – Defunct mall. Mall was not part of the name.

spark plug –  noun.

spectators, audience – Those who watch a performance are spectators; listeners form an audience. The crowds at sports events and motion pictures are spectators. Use audience for those attending speeches, lectures, spoken drama, concerts, opera, etc.

speedup –  noun/adjective.

split infinitives, verbs –  Splitting an infinitive no longer is considered a major literary crime, and many good writers do so. It is still better to avoid inserting adverbs, etc., between the parts of the verb. The test is how the sentence reads.

split-up –  noun/adjective.

spokesman – Our style is to use spokesman in all references. We do not use spokeswoman or spokesperson. [Added April 2011]

sport utility vehicle – Preferred second reference,  SUV;  sport-utes can also be used. [revised Revised March 29, 2003]

sprang, sprung –  Sprang is the past tense of spring; sprung is the past participle: He sprang to his feet. The trap was sprung.

staffer –  Staff member is preferred.

stanch, staunch –  The first means to stop the flow; the second firm or steadfast.

standby –  noun/adjective.

standoff

The Star-Spangled Banner  [revised January 30, 2002]

State Employment Relations Board  – Not State Employee Relations Board.

State names – Follow these guidelines for using names of states in stories and datelines. Eight states are not abbreviated. They are Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas, and Utah.
Below are the state abbreviations that would follow the city names that do not stand alone (Example for dateline: BIRMINGHAM, Ala) [Added July 2016]
Ark. Mass. Okla.
Calif. Mich. Ore.
Colo. Minn. Pa.
Conn. Miss. R.I.
Del. Mo. S.C.
Fla. Mont. S.D.
Ga. Neb. Tenn.
Ill. N.C. Vt.
Ind. N.D. Va.
Kan. N.H. W.Va.
Ky. N.J. Wisc.
La. N.M. Wyo.
Md. N.Y.

states’ rights

stationary, stationery –  The first means immobile; the second, writing material.

stay, stop –  A guest is staying, not stopping, at a hotel.

step-up, step up –  noun, verb.

Student – Student is preferred for all grades. Avoid using pupil.

straits –  Difficulties.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.), Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.) and Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. We should note an exception for East Broadway, which is different in that it is the “Broadway” in East Toledo and not the one that runs from South Toledo to downtown. [Updated April 2016]

strong-arm –  adjective/verb.

sub as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

subpoena

suffer, sustain, receive  –  A man suffers a broken leg. He does not sustain or receive a broken leg or have his leg broken.

suit, suite –  One may have a suit of clothes, a suit of cards, or be faced with a lawsuit. There are suites of music, rooms, and furniture.

Sunoco Mid-America’s Toledo refinery. No longer owned by Sunoco, Inc. and  the name of the facility is PBF Toledo Refining Co. PBF, a private equity firm, bought the facility from Sunoco in late 2010. It should be referred to as PBF Toledo Refining Co. [Added March 1, 2011]

super as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

superhero – One word [Added Nov. 2, 2016]

survivors – In local obituaries, we shall include all people in the “survived by” listing, including those quoted or mentioned in the article.

suspect, suspicion –  verb, noun: He suspected something was wrong. He had a suspicion something was wrong.

swath, swathe – The first is a noun and is a mowed strip; the second a verb meaning to drape or wrap.

Symphony – The Toledo Symphony is the local orchestra in northwest Ohio. Do Not refer to it as TSO in stories and headlines because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Added March 1, 2011]



T

table tennis  – Preferred term for Ping-Pong.

takeoff

takeover, take over –  noun/adjective, verb.

Tam-O-Shanter – hockey/recreation center in Sylvania.

TB – Acceptable for tuberculosis on second reference and in headlines.

teenager –  one word

telephone numbers –  Our policy of using telephone numbers in stories is that we don’t, with very few exceptions. If we do use one, the department head must be consulted and will be responsible for making sure the telephone number is absolutely necessary for the story and that the telephone number is correct.

Telesystem, formerly Buckeye Telesystem,  is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

that
Use the conjunction that to introduce a dependent clause if the sentence is weak without it. There are no hard-and-fast rules but in general:

That usually may be omitted when a dependent clause immediately follows a form of the verb “to say”: The president said he had signed the bill.

That should be used when a time element intervenes between the verb and the dependent clause: The president said Monday that he had signed the bill.

When in doubt, include that.

that, which, who, whom –  Use the pronouns who and whom in referring to people and animals with names. Use the pronouns that and which in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without names.

The Toledo Lucas County Public Library  NO HYPHEN. Change made in 2017.  [added September 2017]

their, there, they’re
Their is a possessive pronoun: They went to their house.

There as an adverb indicates direction: We went there for dinner.

There is a pronoun for constructions in which the subject follows the verb: There is no food on the table.

They’re is a contraction for they are.

Three SeaGate    [revised February 28, 2002]

time designations

Common sense should prevail in deciding how to designate specific hours in locations outside the eastern time zone:

  • When the time is significant, as in an earthquake, use either: 1 p.m. (San Diego time) or 10 p.m. PST.
  • When the time is pertinent, as with the live broadcast of an event, translate it into Toledo time: 9 p.m. (Toledo time).
  • In events of great historical significance both times may be pertinent: The document was signed at 4 p.m. Tokyo time (2 a.m. Toledo time.)

time of day –  Avoid the redundancy of “Monday afternoon at 2 p.m.” or “tonight at 7 p.m.” Make it “at 2 p.m. Monday” and “at 7 tonight.” Use noon and midnight not 12 a.m. or 12 p.m.

time element – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

titles
General guidelines:
See also long titles

Courtesy titles:
Mr. and Mrs. are abbreviated whether used with full name or last name only.

Use Ms. when requested by the woman. Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Miss Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred. [Updated April 2014]

DO NOT give a courtesy title to a person who has been convicted of a felon. On second reference, only the last name should be used. This is Blade style.

Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

DO NOT use a courtesy title with a coined or fanciful stage name to avoid appearing too literal. Meat Loaf and Little Richard, for example, keep their full names without title, in all references. [Added April 2014]

Foreign individuals – Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. rather than attempt to give them the title used in their own language.

Juveniles – Use the full name of people under the age of 18 on first reference: John Jones, Mary Jones. Do not use Mr. and Ms. with the last names of unmarried juveniles. On second reference the boy may be John, young Jones, or the Jones boy. She may be Mary, Miss Jones, or the Jones girl. Married juveniles are entitled to Mrs. and Mr.

Entertainment, sports personalities
Generally omit courtesy titles for movie, stage, television, radio, popular music, and sports personalities, including actors, directors, producers, coaches, players, and composers and performers of popular music.

When the names of these people appear in regular news stories, the courtesy title may be used.

When the names of non athletes appear on the sports pages, they should have a courtesy title on second reference.

Magistrate – Do not use the title of Magistrate to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith. [Added April 2014]

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence. [Added April 2014]

Music and literature – Use courtesy titles for living composers, authors, and musical artists in regular news copy. The courtesy title usually is not used in reviews.

See names.

Abbreviation guidelines:

  • Titles abbreviated with the full name: Sen., Gov., Rep. On second reference spell out Senator and Governor or use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss with the last name alone. Always use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss instead of Representative to save space. Ask women their preference: Miss, Ms., or Mrs. Do not presume.
  • For two or more people with the same title plural abbreviations may be used: Sens., Govs., Reps.
  • Do not abbreviate: Archbishop, Attorney General, Bishop, Cardinal, Congressman, District Attorney, President, Principal, Prosecutor, Secretary, Superintendent
  • Do not abbreviate: assistant, associate

Limit titles preceding the name to three words: Secretary of State John Doe, but John Smith, assistant secretary of state for African affairs.

Professional titles:
Dr. is used ONLY for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians. Dr. should NOT be used for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. On second reference for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians, use the courtesy title Dr. For example, on second reference for Dr. Anthony Fauci, it would be Dr. Fauci.

Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. DO NOT use Dr. for this group. If a person has an earned doctorate degree and it is a relevant element to the story, you can include this information. But DO NOT use the courtesy title Dr. [Updated 8/3/2020]

Military guidelines:
Abbreviations are given first, followed by second-reference usages, including alternatives,

ARMY
Commissioned officers: Gen. – General; Lt. Gen. – General; Maj. Gen. – General; Brig. Gen. – General; Col. – Colonel; Lt. Col. – Colonel; Maj. – Major; Capt. – Captain; 1st Lt. – Lieutenant;   2nd Lt. – Lieutenant;

Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer/Mr.; WO – Warrant Officer/Mr.;

Enlisted personnel: Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Command Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Platoon Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. 1st Class – Sergeant; Spec. 7 – Specialist/Mr.; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 6 – Specialist/Mr.; Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 5 – Specialist/Mr.; Cpl. – Corporal; Spec. 4 – Specialist/Mr.; Pfc. – Private; Pvt. 2 – Private; Pvt. 1 – Private [revised May 14, 2004]

NAVY, COAST GUARD
Commissioned officers: Adm. – Admiral;  Vice Adm. – Admiral;    Rear Adm. –  Admiral;  Comm. – Commodore;    Capt. – Captain; Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. – Lieutentant;  Lt. j.g. – Lieutenant;  Ens. – Ensign/Mr.

Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer;   WO – Warrant Officer

Enlisted personnel :  CPO – Chief Petty Officer/Mr.;  PO 1st Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;   PO 2nd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.; PO 3rd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;  Seaman –   Mr.;  Seaman Apprentice – Mr.;   Seaman Recruit –   Mr.

MARINE CORPS
Commissioned officers: Same as army.

Warrant officers: Same as navy.

Others: Sgt. Major – Sergeant; Master Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant;   Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant;  Staff Sgt. – Sergeant;  Sgt. – Sergeant;   Cpl. – Corporal;  Lance Cpl. – Corporal;  Pfc. – Private;   Pvt. –  Private

AIR FORCE
Commissioned officers: Same as army.
Enlisted personnel: Chief Master Sgt. – Sergeant;
Senior Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Tech. Sgt. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. – Sergeant; Senior Airman – Airman/Mr.; Airman 1st Class – Airman/Mr.;   Airman – Airman/Mr.;    Airman Basic  – Airman/Mr.

Police titles – Use military style for captain, lieutenant, sergeant. Below these ranks use officer. Titles will be abbreviated on first and subsequent references.

Prominent individuals
The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln and, Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Religious titles

Protestant uses
The Rev. John Jones on first reference, The Rev. or Pastor Jones on second. Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones, or Dr. Jones (if applicable) on second reference.

An Episcopal deacon or priest is the Rev. John Jones on first reference, the Rev. Jones on second reference. Some Episcopal rectors prefer to be called Father.

A dean is the Very Rev. John Jones on first reference, Dean Jones on second.

An Episcopal bishop is Bishop John Adams on first reference, Bishop Adams or Dr. Adams (if applicable) on second. This rule also applies to archbishops.

Roman Catholic uses
Do not use the name of or the abbreviation for a religious order after a member’s name. The Rev. John Jones on first reference, Father Jones on second reference. Do not refer to a Catholic priest as Mr.

A monsignor is Mgsr. John Jones on first reference. On subsquent references, it should be Monsignor Jones. [Updated December 2017]

Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones on second.

Archbishop John Jones on first reference, Archbishop Jones on second unless he is a cardinal.

A cardinal is Cardinal John Jones on first reference, Cardinal Jones on second. The title cardinal takes precedence over archbishop: Cardinal Terence Cooke, archbishop of New York.

A Roman Catholic nun is usually Sister Mary Magdalene Jones on first reference, Sister Mary or Sister Mary Magdalene on second reference. However, usage varies both among and within orders, so personal preference should be verified and noted with “cq” in the story. Always spell out Sister when referring to a member of a religious order.

Eastern Orthodox rites
Clergy at the parish level use the Rev. Michael Elias on first reference, Father Michael on second reference.

Archimandrite is an honorary title for priests, similar to monsignor in the Roman Catholic Church: Archimandrite Jones or the Right Rev. John Jones, subsequently Father John.

Above the parish level usage varies:

Antiochian Orthodox Church –  a metropolitan is an archbishop and the church uses both titles: Metropolitan Archbishop John Jones, subsequently Archbishop John.

Greek Orthodox Church – Archbishop, Metropolitan, and Bishop.

These titles are used with geographical area: archbishop of North and South America; metropolitan of New Jersey, bishop of Detroit diocese.
Jewish uses: Rabbi James Wise, subsequently Rabbi Wise or Dr. Wise (if applicable).  Cantor Harry Epstein, Cantor Epstein, Mr. Epstein.
Christian Science uses: Practitioner, Lecturer, Reader. (Do not use Rev. in any form.) Use Mr., Mrs., or Miss on second reference.

Royalty and nobility:

Kings and queens are referred to by first name in most cases: Queen Elizabeth II, or Queen Elizabeth; King Hussein, or Hussein. Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain.

A British knight or baronet carries the title Sir before his full name on first reference: Sir Henry Smith. On second reference: Sir Henry. Do not use double titles or descriptions such as General Sir or Spokesman Lt., Surgeon Dr., Coroner Dr., or Leader General.

The same applies to ladies carrying the title Dame, the feminine equivalent of knighthood: Dame Mary Brown, Dame Mary.

Among members of the peerage (baron, viscount, earl, marquis, duke) usage varies. When the family name is different from the title, the correct form is John Churchill, Duke of Marlborough, or the Duke of Marlborough on first reference. Subsequent references could be Lord John, Lord Churchill, the Duke of Marlborough, or just Marlborough. When the family name and title are the same, the first name ordinarily is not used even on first reference: Field Marshal Viscount Montgomery. On second reference use Marshal Montgomery or Lord Montgomery.

The wife of a knight or baronet is referred to as Lady with either the last name or her first name.

Wrong-way drivers –  Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

Toledo Area Metroparks  – DO NOT USE. Correct style on first reference is Metroparks Toledo. Metroparks is one word, no hyphen, no capital p.  On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks. [revised September 2017]

Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority  –  Not Toledo Area Regional Transportation Agency. On second reference, TARTA.

Toledo Arena Sports Inc. – A non-profit organization set up for the teams (Toledo Walleye, Bullfrogs) that play in the downtown arena, now called Huntington Center. [Added April 16, 2010]

Toledo Edison Co.  – See FirstEnergy Corp. (revised January 21, 2003)

Toledo Express Airport – Do NOT use this name on first reference to the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The new name for the airport is Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport.  The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]

Toledo Metropolitan Area Council of Governments – TMACOG.

Toledo Mud Hens — Mud Hens is two words. The Mud Hens are a professional baseball team in the International League. The Triple-A baseball club is affiliated with the Detroit Tigers of Major League Baseball.
Top executives of the Toledo Mud Hens
  • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
  • Erik Ibsen is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Mud Hens. [Added June 2015]

Toledo Symphony – The correct name for the local orchestra. On second reference, use symphony. Do NOT use TSO, because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Updated March 2011.]

Toledo Walleye – A professional hockey team with the ECHL, formerly the East Coast Hockey League. ECHL is a developmental league for the American Hockey and the National Hockey League. The Walleye are affiliated with the AHL’s Grand Rapid Griffins and the NHL’s Detroit Red Wings. Walleye is a collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated.
Top executives of the Toledo Walleye
  • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
  • Neil Neukam is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Walleye. [Updated June 2015]

tongue-tied

top-heavy

topsy-turvy

tortuous, torturous –  The first means twisting; the second means torturing.

toss-up, toss up –  noun, verb.

toward –  Without s in all uses. (NOT towards)

Trademarks – A trademark is a brand, symbol, word, etc., used by a manufacturer or dealer and protected by law to prevent a competitor from using it. For example, Kleenex is the trademark for a facial tissue; BUBBLE WRAP (all caps) is the trademark for protective packaging and Dumpster is a trademark for a trash hauling bin.

In general, use a generic equivalent unless the trademark name is essential to the story. When a trademark is used, capitalize it.

The International Trademark Association’s Trademark Checklist is a helpful source of information about trademarks.

Click here to go the INTRA’s Trademark Checklist

Tranquility

trans as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun. Transatlantic and transpacific are exceptions.

trod –  past tense of tread.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

T-shirt

trustee, trusty –  A member of a board of trustees or a person entrusted with something is a trustee. A convict granted certain privileges is a trusty (plural: trusties).

try to –  Write “I will try to win” not “try and win.”

Two SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]


U

Ukraine,  NOT the Ukraine

ultra as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

U.N. – Acceptable on second reference.

under as prefix –  Do not hyphenate.

under way

unique –  One of a kind; nothing is more unique or most unique.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital. Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [Revised May 12, 2015]

Upper Peninsula



V

V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

Valentine Theatre  [revised January 30, 2002]

venal, venial –  The first means mercenary; the second, pardonable.

vertebra, vertebrae – singular, plural.

Veterans’ Glass City Skyway – Official name for the cable-stayed bridge and viaduct carrying I-280 over the Maumee River. Opened to traffic in June 2007. Note position of apostrophe in first word of name.  [revised November 2007]
vice as auxiliary –  Do not hyphenate.

vice, vise –  The first is a serious fault of character; the second a tool.

vice versa

victim – Do not use this word in referring to people who have a disabling disease or physical or mental impairment.

videocassette, videotape –  Other video combinations are two words: video game.

Video game titles – Italics in body type and single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

Viet Cong, Vietnam, Vietnamese

vocal cords



W

wait, await – Wait is intransitive; await transitive: He waited for four hours. They eagerly awaited his arrival.

waive, wave – Waive means to relinquish or forgo: The defendant waived a preliminary hearing.  The verb wave generally means to move in the breeze or to signal a greeting.

Walleye – East Coast Hockey League or  ECHL team. Walleye is collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated. [added November 2009]
walleye – Freshwater perch-like fish native to most of the northern United States and Canada. Walleye fishing is popular in the Maumee River.

Walmart –  The company’s name is now Walmart Inc. (spelled with NO hypen and NO capital M). Its stores are called Walmart. Please be careful when editing a story or writing a headline to use the proper spelling as sometimes the news services have it incorrect. [Updated March 2018]

war game, war zone –  Other usages are one word: warplane, warship, wartime.

water bed

weapons –  An automatic is a pistol designed for automatic or semiautomatic firing. Its cartridges are held in a magazine. A machine gun is an automatic gun, usually mounted on a support, that fires as long as the trigger is depressed. A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun.

weather terms

  • The designations watch and warning are attached to a number of weather conditions.
  • A watch is an alert to the possibility of a dangerous weather event. A warning is issued when a dangerous weather event is imminent or in progress.

The following definitions are based on National Weather Service usage:

  • blizzard – Wind speeds of 35 mph or higher and considerable falling and/or blowing snow with visibility near zero. See severe blizzard.
  • cyclone –  Sometimes used in the United States to mean tornado and in the Indian Ocean area to mean hurricane. To avoid confusion use the more precise words.
  • dust storm –  Visibility of one-half mile or less, wind speeds of 30 mph or more.
  • flash flood –  A sudden, violent flood.
  • flood –  Stories about floods usually tell how high the water is and where it is expected to crest. Such a story should also list flood stage and state how high the water is above or below flood stage.
  • freezing drizzle, rain – Drizzle or rain that freezes on objects as it strikes them.
  • funnel cloud – A violent rotating column of air that does not touch ground.
  • gale – Sustained winds from 39 to 54 mph (34 to 47 knots.)
  • hail, sleet –  Precipitation in the form of frozen pellets. Hail is larger and occurs during powerful thunderstorms in which strong vertical air currents lift and drop ice crystals that grow as moisture freezes onto them.
  • sleet, also known as ice pellets, is rain that freezes before it hits the ground because of sub-freezing air near the surface beneath warmer air aloft.
  • sleet is granular and occurs during winter or winter-like storms.
  • hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or higher. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line, typhoons west of the line. When a hurricane or typhoon loses wind speed, it becomes a tropical storm.
  • ice storm –  Reserved for significant and possibly damaging accumulations of ice.
  • severe blizzard – Wind speeds of 45 mph or more, great density of falling and/or blowing snow with visibility frequently near zero, and a temperature of 10 degrees or lower.
  • sleet –  See hail.
  • squall –  A sudden increase of wind speed by a least 16 knots lasting for at least one minute.
  • tornado –  A violent rotating column of air that touches the ground. It usually starts as a funnel cloud and is accompanied by a roaring noise.
    travelers’ advisory – An alert that difficult traveling or hazardous road conditions are expected to be widespread.
  • tropical depression, tropical storm –  The first is a tropical cyclone with maximum sustained surface winds of 38 mph; the second, with winds from 39 to 73 mph. See hurricane.
  • typhoon – See hurricane.
  • waterspout – A tornado over water.
  • wind chill index –  Describes the combined effect of the wind and cold temperatures.

Web – As an abbreviation of World Wide Web, use Web, capitalized. Also,  Web page and Web browser, but it is website and webcam, webcast.  [Revised  June 23, 2005]

website – One word and the “w” is lowercase. [Revised February 2015]
website reefers
There are three kinds of reefers that can be used in the newspaper to The Blade’s website. Each has a specific Web address.
Here’s how they should be handled:
• To reefer to a story, video, photo gallery, audio tape, or added documents or data on our website, use either the toledoblade.com logo or use this address in type: toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online.
• To refer to a specific section online or to a specific writer or columnist online, use this type of address: toledoblade.com/sports or toledoblade.com/courts or toledoblade.com/davehackenberg. To do this, please verify the address to make sure it is correct.

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well-being

well-wisher

West Toledo

Westfield Franklin Park – In second reference, Franklin Park is acceptable.

wheelchair –  Do not refer to people who use a wheelchair as being wheelchair bound or confined to a wheelchair. See victim.

where – Do not use where at.

wide as suffix –  Do not hyphenate.

Wi-Fi – Not WiFi, wifi, wi-fi or Wi-fi. [Added July 2011]

wiggle, wriggle  –  Wiggle means to jiggle or oscillate, wriggle means to squirm.
windup, wind up –  noun, verb.
Wood Lane – Name sometimes used for the Wood County Board of Development Disabilities, based in Bowling Green. [Revised 7/17/2009]
Woodville Mall
work load, work force – Other usages are one word: workday, workweek, workplace.

wrack –  See rack.



X

X-ray



Y

yoke, yolk  –  The first is a wooden bar by which two draft animals are coupled at the necks for working together; the second, the yellow inner mass of a bird or reptile egg.

youth – Applicable to boys and girls age 13 through 17. Use man or woman after the 18th birthday.

YouTube –  The “Y” and “T” are uppercase and YouTube is one word. YouTube is a video-sharing website where users can upload, share and view video clips. [Added May 2009]


Z

zeros, zeroes  –  plural of the noun, third person singular verb.

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This is the latest edition of The Blade Stylebook. Earlier editions were published in 1934, 1948, 1958, 1967, 1975, 1991, 1997, and 2000, and updated routinely after 2004 on the online stylebook on Your SOURCE.

Style comprises rules that govern punctuation and word usage. When carefully adhered to, it makes a newspaper more attractive and easier to read. This Stylebook codifies The Blade’s style and must be followed by all reporters and editors so that this newspaper will have a uniform voice.

All editorial employees are expected to learn and follow these guidelines and policies.

John Robinson Block, Publisher and Editor-in-Chief

Blade Style Committee
John Robinson Block
Kurt Franck
Kim Bates
Tony Durham



DO’S AND DON’TS

Although the ultimate responsibility for style rests with the copy desk, reporters should familiarize themselves with the contents of this book so that their copy will require less editing for common errors.

Getting names correct is vital. Do not hesitate to have the news source spell out all names on which there is any possibility of error.

In attributing statements it is preferable to use “he said” rather than “said he” unless this usage results in awkward constructions.

Be careful in using alternate words for “said.” For instance, a speaker may “point out” an accepted fact but not an opinion; “to indicate” means to intimate or to show indirectly and should not be used with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution. Once it has been established who is responsible for a speech or statement, attribution usually can be restricted to sensitive areas.

Avoid racial designations except where pertinent.

Do not use terms like “kids,” “tots,” “kiddies,” “lad,” or “lass” for children except in light features in which they are appropriate.

Do not use the title of “Magistrate” to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith.

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence.

Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative,  for years preferred Miss Kaptur on succeeding references, but in 2020 said she now prefers Ms. Kaptur on second reference. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred.

In obituaries the age normally follows the name: John Jones, 57, of Main Street died Friday. However, in obituaries of prominent people in which the lead contains extensive identification the age may be used in a separate sentence: He was 57.  When family members ask that the age of a deceased person be omitted, we normally comply. (See names for additional obituary guidelines.)

Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) to designate the time element. Do not use today, yesterday, tomorrow, and last night. Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style in the printed newspaper and all our digital platforms.

In general, use the day of the week if the date is within seven days of the day of publication. Otherwise use the calendar date. Do not use “last” and “next” with a day of the week. This also applies to months.

In a series of dates, reporters should clarify in notes mode the calendar dates.

When a.m. and p.m. are used, be sure there is no repetition. “At 2 p.m. Monday afternoon” is redundant, as is “7 p.m. tonight.” Noon and midnight are sufficient.



REPORTING SPEECHES

It is essential that a report on a speech convey the same emphasis the speaker intended the speech to convey, not a different emphasis the reporter may consider more important or more newsworthy.

While direct quotations can help to illustrate or emphasize significant points a speaker makes, they generally should be used sparingly. The reporter should be able to convey the speaker’s intent more accurately and succinctly with indirect quotations, summary, and interpretation.

When used, direct quotations should be the words of the speaker and should not be changed arbitrarily to conform to Blade style. If the speaker uses bad grammar or unacceptable words, paraphrase the statement unless the error was intentional to emphasize a point or the usage is significant in itself.

If a speaker makes a particularly newsworthy statement outside the main thrust of the speech (examples: a parenthetical or off-the-cuff comment during the course of the speech or an answer to a question afterward), the statement should be reported in a way that makes the context clear, either in the story on the speech or in a separate story.



SOURCES

The use of anonymous or unidentified sources should be avoided because it undermines the credibility of The Blade. Readers who are suspicious of what we report have greater reason to distrust information when we can not tell them where we got it. Reporters must make every effort to get information on the record, that is, with the source willing to be quoted by name.

The use of anonymous sources is sometimes necessary, but there must be a discussion with your supervisor, who will then discuss with the managing editor, executive editor or an assistant managing editor. Anonymous sources ought to be use sparingly, and not because someone asked “to remain anonymous.”

Again, the use of anonymous sources requires the approval of the managing editor or executive editor before they can run in the newspaper.



LIBEL

A publication is libelous if its information is false, it identifies a person (or organization or product) to any reader, and its natural effect is either to make the reader think generally less of the person (or organization or product) or to affect adversely its business or profession.  There are three kinds of libelous damage:  harm to reputation and good name;  harm to right to enjoy social contacts; harm to business, occupation, or professional  status.

Some of the main defenses against libel are:
·        Truth (plaintiff must generally prove falsity on matters of public concern).
·        Privilege of reporting legislative, judicial, or other public official records and proceedings (provided the report is fair, impartial and accurate, contains no extraneous matter that is libelous, and no malice is present).
·        Expressions of opinion (provided an opinion is expressed instead of fact, facts on which the opinion is based are not defamatory, no malice is present).
·        The New York Times, or constitutional, rule (allows printing in good faith defamatory falsehoods against public officials or public figures as long as knowledge of falsity or reckless disregard or serious doubt about truth is not present; public figures are those with general fame or notoriety in the community or those who have thrust themselves to the forefront of a public controversy to influence the outcome).

Other defenses include statute of limitations (one year in Ohio), privilege of a participant in an official proceeding, consent or authorization, and neutral reportage.

But malice can destroy many of these defenses.  Under The New York Times rule malice is reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth or knowing use of falsities to inflict harm on a public official or public figure. In other cases malice is gross carelessness, personal ill will, or extreme falsity. Plaintiffs must prove malice.

In addition Ohio and most other states allow private persons to collect actual damages by showing fault or negligence rather than having to prove actual malice, but actual malice must be proved for private persons to recover punitive damages.

And there are partial defenses to reduce damages such as retractions, stories friendly to the plaintiff, corrections, reasonable cause to believe the charge, use of wire service copy, provocation, heat of a campaign, mistaken target, care in preparing the story, proof of plaintiff’s bad reputation.



PRIVACY

Invasion of privacy is violating a person’s right to be let alone, to be free from unwarranted publicity.

The four types of privacy invasions and the defense or defenses for each are:

Appropriation – Unauthorized taking of someone’s name, picture, or likeness or personality for commercial gain.

Defense – Consent, provided it is timely, not given by a minor or incompetent or other unauthorized person, covers items that haven’t been materially altered, and doesn’t otherwise violate the right to publicity (a person’s right to control exploitation of own name or likeness).

Intrusion – Intrusion into private activities, such as stealing or breaking and entering, snooping with hidden cameras or recording devices, trespassing on private property, wiretaps.

Defense: Consent or implied consent.

Private facts – Publishing true personal material that is not of legitimate concern to the public.

Defense – Consent (which can be revoked) and newsworthiness (including nature of story, status of subject, time lapse, intimacy of revelation, degree of embarrassment).

False information – Publishing untruths, whether defamatory or not, by fictionalization (embellishing an otherwise true story with falsehoods) or putting a person in a false light (unintentionally giving a false impression of someone).

Defense: Truth, consent, New York Times rule (plaintiff must show actual malice, reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth).


HANDLING CRIME NEWS

In recognition of its responsibility to report news of crime and the potential problems associated with such reporting, The Blade has adopted these guidelines, which grew out of a cooperative effort between the Toledo Bar Association and the newspaper in 1966. The objective is to provide the public with pertinent information while avoiding publicity that might unduly interfere with the rights of defendants.

In criminal arrests use:
The name, age, and block and street address for the suspect. NOT the exact address [REVISED August 2015]
A description of the crime.
The specific legal charge.
How the arrest was made, when, and where.
Whether a grand jury has returned an indictment and a trial date has been set.
Some practical rules:
Crime stories should be based on information that can be documented, such as the police log, affidavits, warrants, and indictments.

Statements by investigators and attorneys, information from supplemental reports, etc., should be gathered but used with caution to avoid damaging a suspect’s rights.

The same caveat applies to information from witnesses unless they are under oath.

Do not say somebody will be charged with a crime. Wait until a charge is filed. You can say someone is being questioned in the investigation of a crime if you know that to be so, but being interrogated does not necessarily make a person a suspect.

When describing the events during a crime, do not link them with the suspect. Instead use terms such as “a man,” “a woman,” “the robber.”

Do not use the following types of information without supervisory approval:
Prior criminal record.
A confession.
Names of jurors selected for a particular trial.


CRIME VICTIMS

The names of victims are used except in sex-related crimes.

Omit addresses of victims unless they are pertinent to the story. Instead, use the age and general area of residence (West Toledo, near north side, etc).

Extreme caution must be used in reporting incest cases to protect the identity of the victim.

Full identification is used when the victim is dead.


A

a, an  –  Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. Thus, a habitual criminal, a historic occasion; an herb, an heiress.

When the article a or an is to precede a word or phrase beginning with a figure, be guided by pronunciation: a 1-year-old, an eight-point program, an 80 percent average, a 30-cent purchase, etc.

AARP  – The official name of the American Association of Retired Persons. It should be used alone in all references.

abbreviations
The following guidelines apply:

All months except March, April, May, June, and July are abbreviated when used with dates.
Days of the week are never abbreviated.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.),  Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.), Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. [Revised February 2016]

Terrace, Lane, and Way are always spelled out. Even in addresses, Terrace, Lane, and Way should be spelled out. For example, 23 Bethesda Terrace. [Revised December 2014].

Abbreviate north, east, south, and west in street names: 300 S. Detroit Ave. [Revised November 2011].

Do not use street, etc., generically in a formal address. Do not guess: Check the Polk directories and telephone book blue pages for the correct name. Resolve discrepancies relying on the telephone book or by checking with the municipality.

Highways are designated in the following manner: I-75, U.S. 23, State Rt. 20 for Ohio and all other states except Michigan, where the style is M-50. Spell out county and township roads: North County Road 5.

Company names should not be abbreviated unless the form is familiar, O-I for Owens-Illinois, GM for General Motors Co., and GE for General Electric. L-O-F is used for Libbey-Owens-Ford in historical stories. It no longer exists. It’s Pilkington PLC’s North American subsidiary.  [revised January 30, 2002]

The word building should be spelled out unless used as part of an address that includes a number: 614 Spitzer Bldg., Spitzer Building. Capitalize building only when it is part of the formal name: Safety Building, The Blade building.

Fort and mount are not abbreviated, except in headlines, unless the abbreviated name is the formal designation.

States are abbreviated in the following manner:
Ala.; Alaska; Ariz.; Ark.; Calif.; Colo.; Conn.; Del.; Fla.;   Ga.; Hawaii; Iowa; Idaho; Ill.; Ind.; Kan.; Ky.; La.; Mass.;     Md.; Maine; Mich.; Minn.; Miss.; Mo.; Mont.; N.C.; N.D.;   Neb.; Nev.; N.H.; N.J.; N.M.; N.Y.; Ohio; Okla.; Ore.; Pa.;  R.I.; S.C.; S.D.; Tenn.; Texas; Utah; Va.; Vt.; Wash.;  Wis.;  W.Va.; Wyo.

Canadian provinces are abbreviated in the following manner. It is not necessary to add Canada.

Alberta; B.C. (British Columbia);  Man. (Manitoba);  N.B. (New Brunswick); Nfld. (Newfoundland);  N.S. (Nova Scotia);  Ont. (Ontario);   P.E.I. (Prince Edward Island);  Que. (Quebec);  Sask. (Saskatchewan)

Do not abbreviate the name of a state or Canadian province except after municipalities. In referring to counties, parks, lakes, mountains, or other geographical features, use the full name of the state:

Franklin County, Ohio; Bedford Township, Michigan; Yosemite National Park, California; Round Lake, Minnesota (if there is a post office bearing the same name as the lake, the state abbreviation may be used); Fort Bragg, North Carolina.

Nations are not abbreviated except USSR for the former Soviet Union. United States is abbreviated U.S. only as an adjective.

State and party designations of members of Congress follow this style: Rep. John Jones (R., Mich.); Sen. Jack Smith (D., N.Y.). Use the same state abbreviations as elsewhere.
Party designations other than Democratic and Republican should not be spelled out: Sen. John Smith (I, Va.).

For state legislators, use the same style except that the hometown must be spelled out: John Jones (R., Cincinnati) or State Sen. Mary Smith (D., Toledo).

Well-known members of Congress need not be identified in this manner on first mention. Later in the story the state and party can be inserted.

Percentages are abbreviated in headlines or tabular material with %. Always use percent in copy.

Academic degrees are abbreviated as follows:

  • BA – bachelor of arts
  • BS – bachelor of science
  • DDS –  doctor of dental science
  • JD –  doctor of laws
  • MA –  master of arts
  • MD –  doctor of medicine
  • PhD  –  doctor of philosophy When not abbreviating, use bachelor’s degree, master’s degree, doctor’s degree.  Doctorate is acceptable for doctor’s degree.

Do not use abbreviations of academic degrees after a person’s name.

Agencies and organizations are usually referred to by the full name on first reference, then by initials. The abbreviations do not require periods: ICC, FHA, SEC, SEATO, UNESCO, WHO.

Periods are used in the adjectives U.S. and U.N., which are spelled out as nouns except in headlines, tabular material, and tie-in cutlines.

Some organizations are so well known by their initials that the abbreviations may be used on first reference: NATO, FBI, CIA, AFL-CIO, UAW, YMCA (or Y), YWCA, GOP, NAACP.

abbreviations (con’t)
If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate.

In using U for university omit the period: UT, UM, BGSU.

Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

Miscellaneous: A.D. (Anno Domini), B.C. (Before Christ), mph, AWOL, KO (knockout), RBI (run batted in).

abolition – Do not use “abolishment.”

a capella

according to – Do not use this phrase when said will suffice. There are situations in which according to is appropriate: Jones started the fight, according to a signed statement by Smith. Never use with a direct quote.

AccuWeather, Inc. – In State College, Pa.

acoustics –  This word takes a singular verb when referring to the science but plural when referring to the sound qualities of a hall or other building: Acoustics is gaining new stature as a science. The acoustics of the new hall were praised by critics.

acronyms –  In general, avoid overuse of acronyms, especially those that are not well known. If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate. Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

active or passive forms
In general the active voice is preferred.

Write “the work began,” not “the work was begun,” unless you want to emphasize who began it.

Write “the man’s leg was broken in a fall,” not “the man broke his leg.” The latter sounds as if he did it deliberately. Similarly, do not say “He had his license (or sentence) suspended.” Or “She had her degree suspended.” See had.

Write “the boy drowned in the creek,” not “the boy was drowned.” The latter implies murder.

adapt, adopt –  Adapt means to make suitable or modify; adopt means to take as one’s own. Example: The musical director adapted the old music; the college then adopted it as its official song.

ad nauseam

addresses –  Do not stop the reader’s flow with the use of commas. Jack Jones of 2145 Pond Circle. Not Jack Jones, 2145 Pond Circle.

For crime suspects, use the suspect’s block and street, but not the exact address. For example: Joe Smith, the 500 block of Douglas Road. [REVISED August 2015]

adopt –  Resolutions are adopted; bills are passed by legislative bodies.

adverse, averse – Adverse means unfavorable: He predicted adverse weather. Averse means reluctant, opposed: She is averse to change.

advice, advise –  noun, verb.

Adviser

affect, effect –  Affect should be used only as a verb. It means to act upon or influence. Effect as a verb means to bring about or accomplish. Effect as a noun means the result of an action. Example: The effect of the ruling was limited; it did not affect the litigants.

afterward –  Without s in all uses.

African-American –  hyphenated

agreement of subject and verb
Confusion on this point occurs chiefly with
(1) compound or complex subjects and
(2) collective nouns.

A compound subject (separate items usually connected by and or by commas and and) takes a plural verb: The governor and his escort were taken to the auditorium.

When the subject is a noun modified by a prepositional phrase, it is a complex subject and takes a singular verb: The governor, with his escort, was taken to the auditorium.

Collective nouns always have been a problem. Usage generally is to treat words like committee, government, class as singular: The committee offers the resolution.

However, when speaking of a committee, class, etc., acting as individuals, substitute “committee members” or “members of the class” and use a plural verb.

Sums of money always are singular: $100 was offered, $32.20 was the daily-double payoff, etc

Other words always considered singular are anybody, everybody, either, neither, headquarters, whereabouts.

Certain words ending in s but denoting a singular idea are treated as singular: mathematics, physics, politics. Examples: Mathematics is being subjected to new teaching approaches. Physics is the science of the hour. Politics receives expanded coverage in presidential election years.

aid, aide –  verb, noun.

air brake

air-condition, air-conditioned  –  verb, adjective.  The nouns are air conditioner and air conditioning.

airdrop, air-drop –  noun, verb.

airstrike –  One word.

Air Force

Alford plea – In an Alford plea, a defendant does not admit guilt but pleads guilty to a lesser charge to escape more severe penalties had the case gone to trial.

All-America, All-American – adjective, noun.

all right

all time, all-time –  An all-time high but the greatest runner of all time. Avoid the redundant phrase all-time or new record.

allude, refer –  We allude to something when we speak of it without direct mention; we refer to it when we mention it directly. Example: Although any direct reference to his deformity annoyed him, there were times when she felt it necessary to allude to it.

al-Qaeda – An international terrorist network led by Osama bin Laden. [revised 2002]

alumni, etc. –  Alumnus is the masculine singular, alumni the masculine plural, also used for a group including both sexes. Alumna is the feminine singular, alumnae the feminine plural.

A.D. – Anno Domini

another – It is wrong and unnecessary to use “another” in cases such as “council appropriated another $9 million for children” when the story does not say that $9 million has been appropriated for anything else. “Another” should be used only when it refers to something exactly like the first.

ante, anti –  As prefixes the first means before and never takes a hyphen. The second means against and usually takes a hyphen. A good rule is to use the hyphen when anti is joined with a word that could stand alone: anti-trust, anti-Semitic. See hyphenation.

anticipate, expect –  The words are not synonyms. It is one thing to expect an event, another to anticipate it by thought or deed. Examples: A record crowd was expected. The manager anticipated the record crowd by installing extra bleachers.

antiseptic, disinfectant – Antiseptics, such as hand sanitizers, are used to kill germs on living things. Disinfectants, such as bleach, are used on inanimate things, such as countertops and handrails. The adjective is disinfectant, not disinfecting. [Added April 2020]

apostrophes –  See punctuation

appraise, apprise –  Appraise means to set a value on. Apprise means to inform.

appropriate, expropriate, take –  To appropriate usually means to set aside for a special purpose. Do not use as a synonym for take or steal. To expropriate is to deprive of property, usually by government action.

ArenaHuntington Center is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. The arena opened in October 2009, and in April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights. [Updated June 2011]

Army

as if –  Should be used instead of like  as a conjunction: He ran as if a demon were pursuing him. See like.

attorney –  Technically, an attorney is someone (usually, but not necessarily, a lawyer) empowered to act for another. A lawyer is a person admitted to practice in a court system. Do not abbreviate.

attribution –  It is preferable to use he said rather than said he unless this usage results in awkward constructions. Be careful in using alternate words for said. A speaker ordinarily points out an accepted fact. To indicate means to intimate or to show indirectly and is not appropriate with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution in stories with limited sources once the identity of the speaker is established.

audience –  See spectators.

auger, augur – An auger is an instrument for boring. Augur means to foretell; also a seer.

author –  Do not use as a verb. Mr. Smith is the author of “Time & Again.”

authoress, poetess, etc. – Drop the needless ess.

auto –  Automobile is preferred, but auto or car is permitted to avoid repetition.

automaker

automotive plants, local
The following is style for local automotive plants:
Formal name of Chrysler group is now FCA US LLC.

  • Toledo Assembly Complex makes Jeep Wrangler and Jeep Cherokee. [revised Dec. 2014.]
  • Toledo Machining Plant in Perrysburg Township (not just Perrysburg). [revised Oct. 25, 2007]
  • Dundee Engine Plant. [added August 2013]
  • General Motors Co.’s Toledo Transmission Plant; no longer Hydramatic or Toledo Powertrain.
  • Also in the area: GM Defiance Powertrain Plant;  Ford’s Lima Engine Plant;  [revised August 2013]

avoid, avert –  To avoid is to shun, to avert is to prevent: The driver averted the collision by avoiding the truck.

awhile, a while –  She plans to remain here awhile. She will remain for a while.

AWOL – A term that normally refers to military personnel who are absent from the ranks without having been given permission. A truant is one who skips school without permission.

axis –  Plural is axes.


B

BP Husky Refining LLC – Refinery located in Oregon, Ohio, and owned by BP PLC. [added Nov. 17, 2008]

BP PLC – The company no longer uses British Petroleum. Its refinery in Oregon is called BP Husky Refining LLC. [revised Nov. 17, 2008]

Baby Boomer – Uppercase, no hyphen.

back door, back-door –  noun, adjective.

back room, back-room –  noun, adjective.

back up, back-up –  verb, noun/adjective.

backward –  Without s in all uses.

backyard, back-yard –  Noun, adjective.

bad, badly –  The first is an adjective; the second an adverb: He feels bad (he is ill); he feels badly (his fingers are numb).

baleful –  Do not confuse with mournful or soulful. It means ominous.

Band-Aid – trademark, capitalize

banks, local

The following is the style for local banks:

  • Citizens Bank (absorbed Charter One Bank) is part of Citizens Financial Group Inc, which is based in Providence, R.I. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Fifth Third Bank (Northwestern Ohio) is based in Toledo and is part of Fifth Third Bancorp, based in Cincinnati). [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • GenoaBank, based in Genoa, Ohio, with several area branches. Bank name is one word, with capital “B.” [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Huntington National Bank – Northwest Ohio, is based in Toledo and is part of Huntington Bancshares Inc., based in Columbus. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • KeyBank, based in Toledo, is part of KeyCorp, based in Cleveland. A branch can simply be called KeyBank (one word). [revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • PNC Bank, based in Pittsburgh, is part of PNC Financial Services Group Inc. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Resolute Bank, based in Maumee. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Signature Bank, based in Toledo. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Union Bank, based in Columbus Grove, Ohio and owned by Union Banking Co. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Waterford Bank, based in Sylvania. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
No longer is there a Sky Bank (became part of Huntington) or National City Bank (became part of PNC). [Added Feb. 9, 2017]

BAX Global, Inc. – The proper name for what was Burlington Air Express.

B.C. – Before Christ.

beside, besides –  Beside means alongside. Besides means “in addition to.”

best seller

between –  Generally refers to two only. Use among for more than two.

Bible, bible – Capitalize when referring to the holy book of Christanity, including the Scriptures in the Old Testament or the New Testament. Capitalize also related terms such as the Gospels, Gospel of St. Mark, the Scriptures, the Holy Scriptures.

Lowercase bible as a nonreligious term: My dictionary is my bible.

bi, semi –  Bi means two; so biennial is every two years, bimonthly every two months, etc. Semi means half; so semiannual is every half year, or biannual is twice a year.

Big Three – Use Detroit Three when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Traditionally, GM, Ford,  and Chrysler were referred to as the Big Three in the auto industry. However, years ago, Toyota and Volkswagen took over two of those slots. So, the term to use should be Detroit Three automakers. Do NOT use Big Three for GM, Ford and Chrysler. [Added February 2017]

bird watcher

bird’s-eye

Black: Uppercase in terms of race or racial history or culture. [Added February 2021]
Here are some other noteworthy comments on the style:
Black(s), white(s) (n.) Do not use either term as a singular noun. For plurals, phrasing such as Black people, white people, Black teachers, white students is often preferable when clearly relevant. White officers account for 64% of the police force, Black officers 21%, and Latino officers 15%. The plural nouns Blacks and whites are generally acceptable when clearly relevant and needed for reasons of space or sentence construction. He helped integrate dance halls among Blacks, whites, Latinos, and Asian Americans.  [Added February 2021]

Black (adj.) Use the capitalized term as an adjective in a racial, ethnic, or cultural sense: Black people, Black culture, Black literature, Black studies, Black colleges. African-American is also acceptable for those in the United States. The terms are not necessarily interchangeable, however. Americans of Caribbean heritage, for example, generally refer to themselves as Caribbean-American. Follow an individual’s preference if known. Use Negro or colored only in names of organizations or in rare quotations when essential. [Added February 2021]

Blade carrier – Use independent contractor. Do not use Blade carrier. Do not use contract employee.

blizzard – Often misused to refer to any snowstorm. See weather terms.

bloc, block – Use bloc for a combination of parties or of countries. Block is correct for other uses.

Block Communications, Inc.  –  The parent company of The Blade. Block Communications, Inc. owns communications companies in Ohio, Michigan, Pennsylvania, Illinois, Indiana, and Kentucky. The company is based in Toledo, and the corporate headquarters is located at 405 Madison Ave, Toledo, OH 43604.

In Toledo, companies include : The Blade, Buckeye Broadband (cable and Internet; changed June 2016; BCSN and BCAN appear on Buckeye Broadband) and Telesystem (formerly Buckeye Telesystem).  Telesystem is a national voice, data, and security systems provider.

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband.  [Revised August 2019]

Other companies owned by BCI include the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette in Pennsylvania,  Erie County Cablevision in Sandusky, Ohio; WLIO-TV in Lima, Ohio, and television stations in  Kentucky (Louisville), Indiana, and Illinois. BCI also owns MaxxSouth Broadband in parts of Mississippi and Alabama; Libercus, a content management system/publishing system; and Toledo Detroit Outdoor (billboard company). On July 6, 2000, the parent company changed its name to Block Communications, Inc. It was previously known as Blade Communications, Inc.  [Revised August 2019]

Block News Alliance – The proper designation for writers from other Block Communications, Inc., properties when their work appears in The Blade.

BLOCK, Allan – Chairman of Block Communications Inc., parent company of The Blade. Use Allan (two “l”s in first name) Block with no middle initial on first reference.

BLOCK, Diana – Executive vice president of Block Communications Inc.. She is the daughter of William Block Jr. [Added August 2019]

BLOCK, John Robinson – Publisher and editor-in-chief of The Blade and the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. On first reference, use John Robinson Block. Use the “Robinson” middle name. Do NOT use a middle initial.

BLOCK, Susan – Wife of Block Communications Inc. chairman Allan and board member of BCI.  Do NOT use Susan Allan Block. On succeeding references, she is Mrs. Block. [Updated October 2018]

BLOCK Jr., William – Retired president and general manager of the Post-Gazette and co-publisher of The Blade and Post-Gazette. William Block Jr. is the father of Diana Block and the cousin of Allan Block and John Robinson Block. [Added August 2019]

blond, blonde –  Use blond as a noun for males and as an adjective for all applications: She has blond hair. Use blonde as a noun for females.

blowup, blow up –  noun, verb.

B’nai B’rith

Bombay – Formerly the name for the financial center in India. Blade style now is Mumbai. No longer use Bombay in datelines or stories. See entry for Mumbai. [added November 27, 2008]

booby trap, booby-trap –  noun, adjective/verb.

border line, borderline –  noun, adjective.

boyfriend

breach, breech –  Breach means a break or opening and is used in phrases like “a breach of faith,” ” a breach in the dike,” or “stepping into the breach.” Breech means the rear or hind portion, hence the breech of a gun, a breech delivery.

break-in, break in – noun, verb.

breakout, break out –  noun, verb.

bric-a-brac

bridge names
I-280 over Maumee River: Veterans’ Glass City SkywayState Rt. 65 over Maumee River (drawbridge formerly used by I-280): Craig Memorial BridgeCherry Street/Main Street over Maumee River: Martin Luther King, Jr. BridgeState Rts. 2/51 over Maumee River: Anthony Wayne Bridge (also known as High Level Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)I-75 over Maumee River: DiSalle Bridge (also known as South End Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)U.S. 20/State Rt. 25 over Maumee River: Fort Meigs Memorial Bridge (also known as Maumee-Perrysburg Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)
[revised November 2007]broach, brooch –  The first means to open or introduce; the second is an ornament.

broadcast – Past tense is broadcast.

Buckeye Broadband, formerly Buckeye CableSystem, is the cable and Internet company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Note the “v” in Cablevision is lowercase and Cablevision is one word. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Telesystem — NAME CHANGE — The correct name is Telesystem. It is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

buckshot, bird shot –  Buckshot is large-size shot. Bird shot is small-size shot and is much more common. A person would never be “peppered” with buckshot.

bull, steer –  A bull is a male bovine. A steer is a castrated bull, usually fattened for market.

bull’s-eye

bullet –  The bullet is the projectile portion of a rifle or revolver cartridge, which includes a casing containing an explosive charge.

burglary –  See larceny.

business name style   [revised January 30, 2002]

  • for Company,  use Co.
  • for Companies, use Cos.
  • for Corporation,  use Corp.
  • for Incorporated, use Inc.
  • for Limited, use Ltd.
  • for Limited Liability Corporation, use LLC (no periods)
  • for Limited Partnership  (like Cedar Fair), use LP (no periods)
  • for Public Liability Company (like BP or Pilkington), use PLC (no periods)
  • for Spanish, French or Italian companies using S.A., use SA (no periods)
  • for Dutch companies using N.V., use NV (no periods)

business name style (con’t)

In most cases, don’t capitalize a whole name of a company  (use Trinova instead of TRINOVA), and, with few local exceptions (such as The Andersons), we don’t capitalize The in a company name (it’s Rouse Co., despite its official The Rouse Co.).

by (as prefix) –  No hyphen in most combinations, such as bylaw, bypass. Some exceptions are by-play and by-product.

by as suffix –  Usually takes a hyphen, as in passer-by.

bylines – See credit lines.


C

cabby

caliber – See weapons

call-up, call up – noun, verb

Canada goose

cancel, canceled, canceling, cancellation

cannon, canon – A cannon is a mounted gun; a canon refers to an ecclesiastical law or a church official.

canvas, canvass – Canvas is a fabric; canvass means to solicit.

capital, capitol  –  Capital applies to all uses except capitol, which is a building used as a seat of government.

capitalization

Some basic principles:

In addition to proper nouns, capitalize common nouns such as river, party, street, and west when they are part of proper names: Monroe Street, Maumee River, Democratic Party.

Lowercase common nouns when they stand alone in subsequent references: the party, the river.

Lowercase the common noun elements of names in all plural uses: the Democratic and Republican parties, Main and State streets, lakes Erie and Ontario.

Breeds of animals – Follow the spelling and capitalization in Webster’s Third New International Dictionary. For breeds not listed there, capitalize words derived from proper nouns and use lowercase elsewhere: thoroughbred, Arabian mare, basset hound, Boston terrier.

Constitution, laws

Capitalize references to the U.S. Constitution, with or without the U.S. modifier.

When referring to the constitutions of other nations or of states, capitalize only with the name of a nation or of a state: the French Constitution, the Massachusetts Constitution, the nation’s constitution, the state constitution.

The city charter of Toledo and all other cities is lowercase.

The formal names of acts of Congress and the Ohio General Assembly are uppercase. When in doubt, lowercase. Bills before passage are lowercase: Taft-Hartley Act (or Law), but the labor act or the labor law; the Sherman Anti-Trust Act (or Law), but the Hawaii statehood bill.

Capitalize amendments to the U.S. Constitution: the First Amendment, the 14th Amendment. Also capitalize the Bill of Rights referring to the first 10 amendments.

Courts – Formal names of courts are capitalized: the Supreme Court of the United States (also the Supreme Court), Circuit Court of Appeals, U.S. District Court or District Court, Ohio Supreme Court, Lucas County Common Pleas Court, Toledo Municipal Court, Municipal Court. Also capitalize the formal names of a foreign nation’s courts.

Derivatives
Capitalize words that are derived from proper nouns and still depend on them for their meaning: American, Christian, English, Marxism.

Lowercase words that are derived from proper nouns but no longer depend on them for their meaning: scotch whiskey, french fries, brussels sprouts, china, india rubber, spartan, geiger counter, utopia.

Geographic terms
Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: The pioneers opened the West.
Capitalize Michigan’s Upper Peninsula and Lower Peninsula.

Capitalize East and West when referring to the eastern and western worlds; South Pacific, North Pacific, South Atlantic, North Atlantic; Far North, Arctic Circle, Antarctic Circle, the Arctic, North Pole, South Pole, Eastern Hemisphere, Western Hemisphere.

Capitalize sections of the city of Toledo and well-known sections of other cities: West Toledo, South Toledo, New York’s West Side, Chicago’s South Side.

Lowercase points of the compass when used as directions; state and province in expressions like New York state, the province of Manitoba.

Capitalize Earth when referring to the planet, otherwise use lowercase. Lowercase sun, moon.

Government

General principles for federal, state, and local governmental units:

Always lowercase, never abbreviate: the federal government, the state government, the U.S. government. Lowercase administration and cabinet but capitalize a specific: The Bush Cabinet.

Capitalize the official names of all federal and state government departments, agencies, and offices: the State Department, the Treasury Department, the Treasury, the Defense Department, the Department of State, Department of Defense, General Services Administration, Secret Service.

Social Security – Capitalize Social Security (Administration and Act) when referring to the U.S. system. Capitalize Medicare and Medicaid.

Capitalize all departments, divisions, agencies, and offices below the state level: Toledo Police Department, Chicago Fire Department, Board of Zoning Appeals, Toledo-Lucas County Plan Commission.

Capitalize Electoral College referring to the body that elects the president.

Capitalize the formal names of legislative bodies and their respective chambers with and without the state name.

Prominent individuals – The first name of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Here are the official designations of state legislative bodies:

  • General Assembly: Arkansas, Colorado, Connecticut, Delaware, Georgia, Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Kentucky, Maryland, Missouri, North Carolina, Ohio, Pennsylvania, Rhode Island, South Carolina, Tennessee, Vermont, Virginia.
  • Legislature:  Alabama, Alaska, Arizona, California, Florida, Hawaii, Idaho, Kansas, Louisiana, Maine, Michigan, Minnesota, Mississippi, Nebraska, Nevada, New Jersey, New Mexico, New York, Oklahoma, South Dakota, Texas, Utah, Washington, West Virginia, Wisconsin, Wyoming. [NOT Ohio]
  • Legislative Assembly: Montana, North Dakota, Oregon.
  • General Court – Massachusetts, New Hampshire.

Examples: Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives; Ohio General Assembly, the General Assembly, the state Senate. Michigan Legislature.

In Ohio, the official name of the governing body is Ohio General Assembly. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.” In Michigan, the official name of the governing body is the Michigan Legislature, so that one is OK.
[Added May 2010]

Capitalize the names of full committees of Congress whether or not preceded by the name of the main legislative body: House Ways and Means Committee, Ways and Means Committee, Senate Foreign Relations Committee. Be certain of the full committee names. Ethics committee is a shortened, uncapped name. Subcommittees are not capitalized: a Senate military construction subcommittee.

The rule above applies to committees of state legislatures.

Capitalize all legislative bodies at the state and city level: Toledo City Council, Lucas County Commissioners, Spencer Township Trustees.

Capitalize the formal name of a foreign nation’s legislative body and its chambers both with and without the name of the country.

Holidays and observances – Capitalize names of holidays and observances, including day and eve in all uses: Christmas Day, Christmas Eve, New Year’s Eve, Labor Day.

Independent administrative agencies
Capitalize the formal names: Lucas County Mental Health Board, Lucas County Board of Mental Retardation, Children Services Board, Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority, Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority, Toledo Lucas County Public Library, Toledo Area Sanitary District, Lucas Metropolitan Housing Authority, Metroparks Toledo.

Military
Capitalize Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, Coast Guard and Merchant Marines, in all cases when we are referring to those branches of the United States military. Capitalize Joint Chiefs of Staff, lowercase the partial title joint chiefs.

Services of other countries are down: the Portuguese navy, the French air force.

Capitalize the names of all military decorations.

Organizations and institutions
Capitalize formal names: Trinity Episcopal Church, Rotary Club.

Capitalize Security Council, General Assembly, Food and Agriculture Organization, and other U.N. agencies when preceded by U.N.

Many specialized agencies, such as the U.N. Educational Scientific, and Cultural Organization, are referred to by initials: UNESCO, UNIFEM.

Capitalize union only if it is part of an official name: United Auto Workers union, American Postal Workers Union.

Personal titles
Capitalize formal titles when used immediately before names: Justice Andy Douglas, Chairman Lee Iacocca.

Lowercase formal titles when used alone or in constructions set off from names by commas.

Lowercase terms that are job descriptions rather than formal titles: Blade staff writer John Jones, plumber Jack Adams.

Capitalize the title for the U.S. President, Pope and Dalai Lama.

Capitalize Chief Executive when referring to the President. His wife is the First Lady.

Political parties
Capitalize the names of recognized political parties and their members: the Republican Party, Republicans; the Democratic Party, Democrats; the Socialist Party, Socialists, the Communist Party, Communists.

Lowercase terms referring to political philosophies and their followers: democracy, communism, socialist.

Write the Democratic National Committee and the Democratic National Convention.

Public buildings
Capitalize formal names of buildings and their rooms: Spitzer Building, Government Center, Ohio’s Statehouse, the Oval Office, the Versailles Room at the Toledo Club, the Summit Room of the Holiday Inn.

Lowercase words such as courthouse, jail, and embassy in most instances: Lucas County courthouse and Wood County jail, but U.S. Embassy.

Publications – Do not capitalize magazine unless it is part of the name: Time magazine, Toledo Magazine. Similarly, do not cap the in the name of a newspaper or wire service unless it is part of the formal name. The New York Times, The Plain Dealer, Detroit News, The Associated Press.

Races
Capitalize nouns and adjectives referring to races, nationalities, and regional groups: Oriental, Semitic, Buckeye, Yankee, Englishman.  Lowercase oriental in other uses: oriental rug, oriental cooking.

Capitalize African-American and Caucasian when used, as in direct quotes, but lowercase the preferred black and white.

Religious
Capitalize all nouns and pronouns referring to the Deity.

Capitalize sacred books such as Holy Bible, the Bible, Old Testament, New Testament, the Qur’an.

Capitalize Lent, Lenten, Rosh Hashanah, Yom Kippur, Ramadan, Sukkoth, Tet, etc.; Holy Communion, Eucharist. Mass, parts of the Mass such as the Credo, Gloria, Sanctus.

Capitalize Hades, Satan; lowercase heaven, hell, devil.

Capitalize church as part of the official name of a religious body or congregation.

Lowercase baptism, christening, biblical; day in Latter-day Saints and Seventh-day Adventists.
See titles for capitalization of religious titles.

Royalty, nobility
Do not capitalize titles when standing alone but do capitalize them when used with the name of the person: Queen Elizabeth, queen of England, the queen.

Honorary titles and titles of nobility are capitalized when they serve as alternate names: Lady Jane Wellesley, only daughter of the duke of Wellington, has been linked romantically with Charles, the prince of Wales. The duke is rumored to dislike the prince. See royalty.

Schools and colleges
Capitalize the proper name of a school district: Toledo Public Schools, Washington Local Schools, Penta County Joint Vocational School District, Whiteford Agricultural School District.

Capitalize the formal names of schools: Scott High School, Byrnedale Junior High School, Gateway Middle School, Harvard School, Coy Elementary School.

Capitalize formal names of colleges or universities: University of Toledo, Indiana University, University of Michigan. Lowercase subordinate colleges and divisions of universities: Harvard law school, Ohio State University history department.

Capitalize academic degrees only when abbreviated: BA (bachelor of arts), PhD (doctor of philosophy).

Ships, boats
Do not capitalize the word designating the classification of a ship or boat: battleship Missouri, aircraft carrier Saratoga, cruiser Toledo, etc. The same applies to words like schooner, yacht, ketch, etc.

In yacht racing, however, the racing class is capitalized: Comet, Vixen, Star, Thistle; the Star class yacht Arcturus, the Comet class sailboat Halley.

Time periods
Capitalize names of geologic and archaeological times: Cambrian, Paleozoic. Lowercase the generic word: Neolithic age.

Lowercase words such as baroque, classical, romantic except when referring to specific periods in art, literary, or music history.

Lowercase century: a 19th century poet; the Magna Carta was signed in the 13th century.

Lowercase daylight-saving time.

Titles of compositions – Capitalize the principal words in the names of books, movies, plays, poems, operas, songs, radio and television programs, works of art.

Treaties – Capitalize the official name. When in doubt, lowercase.

Wars – Capitalize Civil War, Revolutionary War (U.S. only), Korean War, Vietnam War, World War I, World War II, Persian Gulf War, WWI, WWII, etc. Do not capitalize variations, such as gulf war.

capture  – It is better and shorter to write the fugitive was captured than that he was apprehended. Seize is a permissible headline synonym for capture but avoid nab.

Carat, karat  – Carat is gem weight; karat is the fineness of gold.

carbon monoxide –  This poisonous gas is odorless, colorless, and flavorless. Do not refer to it as a fume. Write his death was caused by carbon monoxide poisoning or just carbon monoxide.

Casino – The casino that opened in May 2012 is called Hollywood Casino Toledo. Be sure to include Toledo, because is is part of the official name. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.
cave-in, cave in – noun/adjective, verb.
cease-fire – noun and adjective.

cement, concrete – Cement is an ingredient in concrete, Sidewalks, roads, etc. are made with concrete, not cement.

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention – Located in Atlanta, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is part of the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. On first reference, use Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Precede with national, federal or U.S. if needed for clarity. CDC is acceptable on second reference and it takes a singular verb.  [Added April 2020]

celebrant, celebrator – A celebrant is a person who officiates at a religious ceremony. A celebrator is someone having a good time.
center field, center fielder – nouns.
center-field – adjective.

Centerior Energy Corp. – see FirstEnergy Corp.

chairman,  – Do not use chair, chairwoman or chairperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Chairman Janet Smith, Chairman Bob Davis  (revised October 31, 2002)

chaise lounge

Charter Behavioral Health System – No longer Charter Hospital of Toledo.

checkup, check up – noun, verb.

chock-full

Chrysler Group LLC is now called FCA US LLC- Use it on first reference when referring to the new company. The parent company Fiat Chrysler Automobile N.V. Also, see automotive plants, local.
[Revised Dec. 17, 2014]

Toledo Assembly Complex (formerly Toledo Jeep Assembly complex)- Owned by FCA US  LLC. The complex is made up of two sets of plants, one that makes the Jeep Wrangler and the other makes the Jeep Cherokeee.  [revised Dec. 17. 2014].

See automotive plants, local.

claim – Do not use as a synonym for assert, declare, or insist. A good rule of thumb is to use claim as a verb only with a direct object: He claimed the prize.

clampdown, clamp down – noun, verb.

clarifications – See corrections.

Clarion Hotel – No longer the Sheraton Westgate.

Clazel Theater – New name of the historic theater in Bowling Green. Do not use Cla Ze or Cla-Zel. It’s one word: Clazel. It used to be hyphenated after the original owners Clark and Hazel, but that is no longer what it is called. [Revised October 2009]

clean-cut

cleanup, clean up – noun/adjective, verb.

clear-cut

cliches – Avoid old, inaccurate cliches: hammered out a contract; a sweeping bill; a massive tax cut; braved the rain, etc.

climactic, climatic – The first pertains to a climax: a climactic scene of a play. The second pertains to the climate: Some scientists predict severe climatic changes.

climax, culminate – Use climax as a transitive verb, culminate as an intransitive verb (with in): A banquet climaxed the day’s events. The day’s events culminated in a banquet.

close-up – noun and adjective.

closure – Most cases.

cloture – In legislative bodies.

co – Use the hyphen in compounds like co-defendant, co-sponsor, co-worker, and co-star. Other words, like copilot and correspondent, are not hyphenated.

coined verbs – In some cases coinages of verbs from nouns have become accepted: the couple vacationed; the family picnicked; the home was burglarized. However, some verb forms such as to impact and to prioritize are still not considered good usage. If in doubt, consult the dictionary.

coliseum, Colosseum – A coliseum is an enclosed arena. The Colosseum is the famed ruins in Rome.

Colombia – The South American country.

color-blind

come – Announcements, statements, wars, peace, cannot come.

comedown – noun.

commander in chief

commas – See punctuation.

Common Space – The arts organization called The Common Space, run by Martin Nagy, has two locations: Common Space in the former Glann School on Reynolds Road just north of Dorr Street, and Common Space Two, the former Martin School at Hill Avenue and Holland-Sylvania Road.

community-based corrections – This is the catch phrase for diverting inmates from costly medium and high-security facilities, such as the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility in Lucasville, to community alternatives, such as minimum security facilities, halfway houses, and house arrest with electronic bracelets, for example.

community-oriented policing – This is a return to the days when officers walked neighborhood beats. It is a style of policing that takes officers out of squad cars and mixes law enforcement with social work.

Companies
LOCAL     [revised Oct. 25, 2007]

  • The Andersons Inc., based in Maumee (The should be capitalized).
  • Cooper Tire & Rubber Co. (use ampersand), based in Findlay.
  • Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee [revised January 2017]
  • First Defiance Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • La-Z-Boy Inc. ( no Chair in the name), based in Monroe.
  • Libbey Inc. (no longer Libbey Glass), based in Toledo.
  • HCR ManorCare Inc., renamed/rebranded ProMedica Senior Care [October 2020]
  • N-Viro International Corp., based in Toledo.
  • Ohio Art Co., based in Bryan
  • Owens Corning  (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.
  • Owens-Illinois Inc., (use hyphen), based in Perrysburg. Second reference: O-I .
  • ProMedica (one word, M is capitalized), based in Toledo. [Added March 2019]
  • ProMedica Senior Care (previously HCR ManorCare Inc. [Added October 2020]
  • Rurban Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • Tecumseh Products Co., based in Ann Arbor [revised February 2011]
  • Welltower (previously Health Care REIT Inc.), based in Toledo [Revised March 2019]

Companies with big local presence [revised May 2015]

  • Chrysler Group LLC [revised 7/16/2009]
  • FirstEnergy Corp. (owns Toledo Edison)
  • Ford Motor Co.
  • General Motors Co. [Revised July 16, 2009]
  • Marathon Petroleum Corp. is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]
  • Pilkington North America, a subsidiary of Nippon (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)
  • Spartan Stores Inc. (owns Pharm stores)
    See also: automotive plants, banks, malls

complement, compliment  –  Complement is a noun or verb denoting completeness or the process of supplementing something: The ship has a complement of 200 sailors and 20 officers. The hat complements her dress. Compliment is a noun or verb that denotes praise or the expression of courtesy: The captain complimented the sailors.  She was flattered by the compliments on her outfit.

complexion – Use as a noun: She was of light complexion. Avoid complexioned and complected.

compose, comprise – The easiest rule of thumb is that comprise is the equivalent of is composed of: The book comprises 12 sections. The book is composed of 12 sections. Do not use is comprised of.

computer virus – A destructive, repetitive program “hidden” in a shared computer program that eats away at a system’s programs and stored information.

conditional clauses – Use the past perfect in the if clause, the past conditional in the main clause.Right: If the dog had kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

Wrong: If the dog would have kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

congressman –  Do not use congresswoman  or congressperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Bob Davis (revised October 31, 2002)

conscious, aware – We are conscious of what we feel but aware of what we know: Police were aware (not conscious) of the bank robbers’ plans.

Consumer Price Index – Based on a variety of goods and services, this is the chief measurement of inflation in the United States. Many government and private organizations use the index as a yardstick for revising salaries, wages, welfare benefits, and other payments to keep pace with inflation. As a result the index affects the income of about half the people in the United States.

continuous, continual – What is done continuously is done without interruption, but a man can work hard continually and still take time out to sleep.

controller, comptroller – Controller is the preferred word except when the official designNation is comptroller, as the comptroller of the United States.

co-op

cop-out

cops – Avoid the usage for policemen except in quotes, light features, and entertainment stories.

coronavirus – Use coronavirus. Do Not use COVID-19 unless it is part of a quote in a story. COVID-19, which stands for coronavirus disease 2019, is caused by a virus named SARS-CoV-2. Symptoms of the virus can include fever, cough, and breathing trouble. Most develop only mild symptoms. But some people, usually those with other medical complications, develop more severe symptoms, including pneumonia, which can be fatal.

corrections – This is the format: An article on a specific topic on a specific day made an error. The correct information is ——- ———– ——-. Except in very rare circumstances do not repeat the error.

Example of a correction:
An article yesterday Thurs. 9/7 on Continental Express Airlines’ use of larger planes on Toledo-to-Cleveland flights misidentified the Toledo station manager for Continental Express.  The manager is Gus Lahanis.

Example of an invented sports correction:
An article in yesterday’s sports section incorrectly reported the winners of the Grand Goose shuffleboard tournament. George Smith placed first and Emma Jones was second.

COSI – The Center of Science & Industry goes by COSI. When referring to the center, use COSI exclusively. On subsequent references, it may be called a hands-on science and education center.

council, counsel – Council is a deliberative or advisory body, as city council, a legislative council, ecclesiastical council. Counsel is legal or other advice or the person who gives it. The word counselor also is used for one who gives advice.

councilman –  Do not use councilwoman or councilperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Councilman Janet Smith, Councilman Bob Davis  [Revised October 31, 2002]

counter – Forms one-word compounds except when the second part of the combination begins with an r.

Countian – DO NOT use it or Lucas Countian. Countian is a made up word. Use Lucas county residents or count residents.  [Added January 2013]

counties – On first reference and in headlines county standing alone always means Lucas County. Do not use the name of a county by itself in a headline: Say a Lenawee County man; not a Lenawee man.

couple, pair

When used in the sense of two people, the word takes plural verbs and pronouns: The couple were married Saturday and left Sunday on their honeymoon.

In the sense of a single unit use a singular verb: Each couple was asked to give $10.

The above also applies to pair.

Do not write: Jones got a couple hits. Make it a couple of hits.

court cases – Italicize the names of lawsuits: Roe vs. Wade.

courtesy titles – see titles.

court-martial, courts-martial

cover-up, cover up – noun, verb.

coverage – We will cover with Blade staff all non-spot news events that occur within 150 miles of Toledo and which are sufficiently important to be likely to attract national coverage, These may include, but are not limited to, institutional openings, funerals, graduation speeches, parades, performances, appearances by luminaries. Excluded are sports events and trials.

COVID-19 – Use coronavirus. See coronavirus entry.

crash-land – verb.

crash-landing – noun.

credible, credulous – Credible means believable. Credulous means ready or disposed to believe.

Credit lines
All caps. Use the full name of the news service with photos one column and larger. Half-column wire photos run without credit.

Bylined articles written by Blade staff members carry the credit:
By JOE McGINTY
BLADE STAFF WRITER
unless the writer has a title such as business writer, music critic, arts writer, etc.

Bylined articles from writers based at other newspapers owned by Block Communications, Inc., carry the credit:
BLOCK NEWS ALLIANCE

Bylined articles by non-staff writers carry the credit:
SPECIAL TO THE BLADE

Articles written in The Blade newsroom from regional material provided by paid stringers are credited:
BLADE CORRESPONDENT

Staff-produced dateline and non-bylined articles are credited:
BLADE STAFF

Articles produced in The Blade newsroom from both staff-generated and news-service material are credited:
BLADE STAFF AND NEWS SERVICES
[revised March 2010]

News-service stories that require bylines follow the same credit format.
Examples:
By TAD BARTIMUS
ASSOCIATED PRESS

By R.W. APPLE
NEW YORK TIMES
By PAMELA CONSTABLE
WASHINGTON POST

Datelined non byline news-service articles are credited as follows:

Datelined news-service articles should be credited as specifically as possible. Use the name of the newspaper, such as the Los Angeles Times, New York Times or Washington Post. Do not use abbreviations, such as AP, NYT, or CP. Spell out names of the wire services.

Use BLADE NEWS SERVICES when dispatches are blended. [revised March 2010] Credit lines run above the dateline, and some examples are:

  • ASSOCIATED PRESS
  • REUTERS
  • NEW YORK TIMES
  • WASHINGTON POST
  • BLADE NEWS SERVICES

Credit lines for photos

For staff photos:
THE BLADE/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

For freelance photos and pictures taken by Blade reporters:
PHOTOGRAPHER NAME FOR THE BLADE

For AP, New York Times, Reuters: ASSOCIATED PRESS, NEW YORK TIMES, REUTERS. If you can determine that the picture was taken by a newspaper, use the name of the paper, such as CHICAGO TRIBUNE, or LOS ANGELES TIMES.

For staff file photo:
BLADE PHOTO

For pool photo:
POOL PHOTO/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

criteria, criterion – plural, singular.

critical – A person near death in a hospital is in critical condition. A person is critical when he criticizes someone or something.

cross as prefix – Usually hyphenated in combinations, but there are exceptions like crossover and crosswise.

cross-country

cross-examine

cross fire – noun

cuff links

Cutlines
The Blade uses two kinds of cutlines, so-called cutboxes and tie-in lines.

Cutboxes, used with photos without an accompanying story, have a headline briefly summarizing the photo, plus a block of text.    Cutlines should be written in the present tense except where common sense or historical times make it impractical. They should help tell the story with pertinent information; they should describe whatever is necessary to make the picture meaningful, but they should not state the obvious that is insulting to the reader: The politician kisses a baby or Molly Jones puts on her new shirt.

Tie-in cutlines are used with photos that
accompany articles. These cutlines identify people and/or things and the action in the picture. The day is not necessary because it is in the story. Use single quotes in all cutlines.

Cutlines with half-column and one-column mugshots include a brief description of the pictured person’s role to the article with which the cut appears. Limit half-column cuts to a two-line maximum, dropping first name if needed. Use verbs and articles where possible.
Examples:
half-column of Liz Taylor
Taylor: set
to wed again
one-column of the police chief
Chief Felker: He is
injured in a crash:

Cutline reefers now read STORY ON PAGE x.

Weather cutlines should indicate the forecast and refer.

cutoff, cut off – noun/adjective, verb.

cut-rate


D

Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee. [revised January 2017]

Datelines (also see state names)
All articles originating outside Lucas County with the exception of Rossford, Northwood, and Perrysburg carry a dateline.

All place names included on road maps published by the states of Ohio and Michigan will be used in datelines. Datelines from other states should be based on the Rand McNally atlas. Do not use townships as datelines. Stories developing in rural areas should carry a dateline of the nearest community on the map. In all cases it is essential high in the story to locate the community by appropriate indicators such as county and distance from a more well-known location.

All 4-star communities outside Lucas County as well as well-known and area cities stand alone in datelines and in body copy. Others should be followed by the state or Canadian province (see abbreviations) or by the name of the country. Names of countries are not abbreviated.

A dateline is required when the action we are reporting happened outside Toledo, even though we may be covering the event from here.

We would not use a dateline when we are simply interviewing an out-of-town source for a story we are developing or for a story we are following, as long as the news event is not happening in that town.

In certain cases, to avoid confusion, it may be necessary to let the reader know that we are conducting a telephone interview. An example would be interviewing an out-of-town person in advance of his or her Toledo appearance, such as an entertainer, author, scientist, etc. It is desirable to let the reader know by the third paragraph that we were conducting a telephone interview. If that’s not possible, it should be high up in the story – and before the runover.

THE FOLLOWING CITIES STAND ALONE:
Akron, Ann Arbor, Bowling Green, Bryan, Canton, Cincinnati, Cleveland, Columbus,  Dayton, Defiance, Erie, Findlay, Fostoria, Fremont, Kelleys Island, Lambertville,  Luckey, Napoleon, Port Clinton, Sandusky, Temperance, Tiffin, Wauseon, Youngstown [Revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Ohio):
Ada, Alvordton, Archbold, Bellevue, Bluffton, Bradner,  Carey, Clyde, Curtice, Custar, Cygnet, Delta, Deshler, Elliston, Fayette,  Gibsonburg, Graytown, Haskins,  Hicksville, Holgate,  Lakeside, Leipsic, Liberty Center, Little Sister Island,  Lyons, Marblehead, McClure, Metamora, Middle Bass Island, Montpelier,  North Baltimore, North Bass Island, Norwalk, Oak Harbor, Ohio City, Paulding, Pettisville, Pioneer, Portage, Put-in-Bay, Rattlesnake Island, Risingsun,  South Bass Island,  Stryker,  Upper Sandusky, Van Wert, Wapakoneta,  West Sister Island, Woodville, Wyandot. [revised July 19, 2012]

THE FOLLOWING MICHIGAN CITIES STAND ALONE:
Adrian, Ann Arbor, Detroit, Hillsdale, Kalamazoo, Lambertville, Lansing, Luna Pier, Monroe, Ottawa Lake, Temperance. All others would take the Mich. including Erie (to avoid possible confusion with Erie, Pa.)  [Added August 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Michigan):
Blissfield, Deerfield, Dundee, Ida, Maybee, Morenci, Ottawa Lake, Petersburg, Riga, Samaria, Tecumseh.  [revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:
United States:
Anchorage, Annapolis, Atlanta, Austin, Baltimore, Baton Rouge, Boise, Boston, Buffalo, Charlotte, Cheyenne, Chicago, Colorado Springs, Corpus Christi, Dallas, Denver, Des Moines, Detroit, El Paso, Fort Worth, Greensboro, Hartford, Hollywood, Honolulu, Houston, Indianapolis, Jacksonville, Jersey City, Juneau, Kansas City, Lansing, Las Vegas, Little Rock, Los Angeles, Louisville, Memphis, Miami, Milwaukee, Minneapolis, Nashville, Newark, New Orleans, New York,  Norfolk, Oakland,  Oklahoma City, Omaha, Philadelphia, Phoenix, Pittsburgh, Raleigh, Reno, Sacramento, Salt Lake City, San Antonio, San Diego, San Francisco, Santa Fe, Seattle, Spokane, St. Louis, St. Paul, Tacoma, Tallahassee, Tampa, Topeka,  Tucson,  United Nations, Virginia Beach, Washington

The Americas :
Buenos Aires, Calgary, Caracas, Edmonton, Guatemala, Havana, Managua, Mexico City, Montreal, Panama, Quebec, Rio de Janeiro, San Salvador, Sao Paulo, Saskatoon, Toronto,  Vancouver, Whitehorse, Winnipeg,

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:

Other Continents:
Algiers, Amsterdam, Athens, Baghdad, Bangkok, Barcelona, Beijing, Beirut, Belfast, Belgrade, Berlin, Bonn, Brussels, Budapest, Cairo, Calcutta, Cape Town, Casablanca, Copenhagen, Damascus,  Dublin, Edinburgh, Gdansk, Geneva, Glasgow, Hamburg, Hanoi, Helsinki, Ho Chi Minh City, Hong Kong, Istanbul, Jerusalem, Johannesburg, Leningrad, Lisbon, London, Luxembourg, Madrid, Manila, Marseille, Melbourne, Monte Carlo, Moscow, Munich, Naples, New Delhi, Oslo, Paris, Phnom Penh, Prague, Pretoria, Rome, Seoul, Singapore, Stockholm, Sydney, Taipei, Tehran, Tel Aviv, Tokyo, Turin, Vatican City, Venice, Vienna,  Warsaw, Yangon, Zurich.

data – The word typically takes singular verbs and pronouns when writing for general audiences and in data journalism contexts: The data is sound. In scientific and academic writing, plural verbs and pronouns are preferred. Use databank and database, but data processing (n. and adj.) and data center.

Davis-Besse nuclear power plant. The name is hyphenated, but the “n” in nuclear, “p” in power, and “p” in plant are all lowercase. [Added November 2011]

daylight-saving –  adjective.

day – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

dead end, dead-end –  noun, adjective/verb.

Democrat, Democratic  – Democrat is the proper noun referring to a member of the political party. Democratic is its adjective. See capitalization.

desert, dessert –  Two nouns are spelled desert. One, pronounced DESert, refers to a desolate or dry area. The other, pronounced deSERT, same as the verb, means something deserved or earned: “He got his just deserts.” Dessert is a course served at the end of a meal.

detective – Never abbreviate. For example, Detective Joe Smith.

Detroit Three – Use when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Do NOT use Big Three. See Big Three entry. [Added February 2017]

dialect –  Dialect should be avoided, even in quoted matter, unless it is clearly pertinent to a story.

differ, different –  Both words should be followed by from, not by than. However, differ in the sense of disagree is followed by with.

Examples: The gray squirrel differs from the red in size as well as color. The viola is different from the violin in size and pitch. The witness differed with the senator on the question of privileged information.

different – Do not use it unnecessarily, as in: he had 17 different jobs. She took 17 different pills.

Dingell – The late U.S. Rep. John (D., Dearborn). Not Trenton

discreet, discrete –  Discreet means prudent, circumspect: “I’m afraid I was not very discreet,” she wrote. Discrete means detached, separate: There are four discrete sounds from a quadraphonic system.

diseases – Do not capitalize diseases such as cancer, emphysema, leukemia, hepatitis, etc., but do capitalize the shorthand COVID-19, MERS, SARS. When a disease is known by the name of a person or geographical area identified with it, capitalize only the proper noun element: Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, Ebola virus, etc.

Avoid such expressions as: He is battling COVID-19. She is a stroke victim. Use neutral, precise descriptions: He has stomach cancer. She had a stroke. [Added April 2020]

DNA – deoxyribonucleic acid is a genetic code contained in the nuclei of human cells. Except for identical twins, no two people have identical DNA patterns.

dominant –  adjective.

dominate – verb.

double check, double-check –   noun, verb.

double play, double-play  – noun, adjective.

double-talk –  noun.

double time, double-time – noun, adjective/verb

douse, dowse –  The first means to plunge into water; the second, to use a divining rod to find water.

drier, dryer –  adjective, appliance

dropout, drop out –  noun, verb.

Drug Abuse Resistance Education – First reference should be Drug Abuse Resistance Education. Following references use DARE [revised October 23, 2002]

drugstore

drunk – He was drunk (when the adjective follows the noun). But a drunken driver; drunken driving.

due to – Not accepted as a substitute for “caused by” or “because of.”

dumpster – (Dumpster, a former trademark)  is a large metal trash bin, often of a kind that is emptied, or transported to a dump, by a specially equipped truck. Because there is no longer a trademark for the brand, the ‘d” in dumpster does not need to capitalized. [Updated October 2020]


E

easy, easily  –  Easy as an adverb survives only as a vulgarism and in a few phrases, mostly colloquial: stand easy, take it easy, easy come easy go, easier said than done.

Elderly – Use this word carefully and sparingly. Do not refer to a person as elderly unless it is clearly relevant to the story. Apply the same principle to terms such as senior citizen. It is appropriate in generic phrases that do not refer to specific individuals: concern for elderly people, a home for senior citizens, etc. If the intent is to show that an individual’s faculties have deteriorated, cite a graphic example and give attribution for it. Use age when available and appropriate. [Added November 2019]

Electricity – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Electric Auto-Lite – The name of the Toledo company when it was the site for the 1934 strike where the National Guard charged the protesters, killing 2 and wounding hundreds. The strike was one of the formative job actions in the founding of the UAW and CIO. In 1961, Electric Auto-Lite became Electric Autolite, at which time Autolite became a brand name.
[Revised October 30, 2002]

elude  –  To avoid adroitly, evade. See allude.

emigrant, immigrant –  A person emigrates from a country and immigrates into another. Thus an emigrant from Germany becomes an immigrant to the United States.

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

eminent, imminent –  Eminent means noted; imminent means near in time.

email –  Changed in June 2011 to follow the style of Associated Press. No longer use with a hyphen, and addresses should be in boldface. [Revised June 2011]

enact – Laws are enacted; bills are passed.

enclose – Preferred over inclose for all uses.

endorse – Now preferred over indorse in all uses.

en route – Two words.

envelop, envelope –  verb, noun.

epidemic, pandemic – An epidemic is the rapid spreading of disease in a certain population or region; a pandemic is an epidemic that has spread worldwide. Follow declarations of public health officials. On March 11, 2020, the World Health Organization declared the COVID-19 outbreak a pandemic. Do not write global pandemic, which is redundant. [Added April 2020]

erstwhile – Means former.

esports – Acceptable in all references to competitive multiplayer video gaming. Use alternate forms like eSports or e-sports only if part of a formal name, like an organization or arena. Capitalize at the start of sentences. Like other collective nouns that are plural in form, esports takes singular form when the group or quantity is regarded as a unit.

estate – An estate is used to refer to a large landed property owned by an individual of great wealth; said property would contain a large residence and other structures of great value, all of which would require a staff to maintain. An estate would not contain rental property and slum conditions on the property as was the case with Vice President Al Gore’s home and property that, in addition to his home, contained substandard housing being rented to a poor family. We and other media, in reporting that story, referred to the Gore property as an “estate.” Do not use “estate” to mean only an expensive home on landed property as defined in Webster’s Dictionary.

ethics committee – Not the official name of the congressional panel.

ever as prefix – Usually not hyphenated: everbearing and everlasting. Use a hyphen when the dictionary does not give a one-word form.

ex – Takes the hyphen when used in the sense of the former: ex-king, ex-president, ex-senator. Be sure the prefix is used with the right word. For instance, John J. Gilligan is an Ohio ex-governor because he is still an Ohioan; he is not an ex-Ohio governor. However, write ex-public official rather than public ex-official. In this case the ex refers to the whole phrase.

expect – See anticipate.

extradite – The governmental unit that gives up the prisoner does the extraditing: California extradited the suspect to Ohio. The suspect was extradited by California to Ohio. Ohio sought the extradition of the suspect by California.

eye opener


F

fact finder

fact-finding – noun/adjective

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall in Maumee, located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

faker, fakir – The meaning of the first is obvious. The second is a Moslem or Hindu holy man or ascetic.

Far East – The easternmost portions of the continent of Asia: China, Japan, North and South Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and the eastern portions of the Soviet Union. See Southeast Asia.

farmhand

farmhouse

farm worker

farther, further – Farther refers to physical distance: He walked farther into the woods. Further refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the mystery.

fat cat

female – Do not use as a synonym for woman. See lady.

fewer, less – Use fewer for people/individuals or things that can be counted. Fewer than 100 applicants applied. Use less with a number that describes quantity or bulk. Police recovered less than $1,500; It happened less than 36 hours ago; The recipe calls for less than two cups of sugar.

FFA – The official name of what formerly was Future Farmers of America.

fiance, fiancee – Fiance refers to a man; fiancee to a woman.

Fiberglas – Trademark of Owens Corning.

fiber glass, fiber-glass – noun, adjective.

Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate is the correct name for One SeaGate in downtown Toledo. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine.The former Fifth Third Center (headquarters at Madison and Huron) is no longer called that because the sign is down and the bank doesn’t own it anymore. For now, we could refer to it informally as the former Fifth Third Bank headquarters at Madison and Huron. [added  July 22, 2008]

Fifth Third Field – On first reference the new stadium should be called by its formal name. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the new Mud Hens stadium, or the stadium, etc. [revised January 30, 2002]

figure – The verb means calculate or estimate using figures. It is correct to say “He figured his income tax,” questionable to say “John Jones figured in the inquiry.”

firefighter

fire tower

first-rate – noun/adjective

FirstEnergy Corp. – owns Toledo Edison Co. and is based in Akron. FirstEnergy (one word) was created from merger of Centerior Energy Corp. and Ohio Edison Co. [ revised January 30, 2002]

flair, flare – Flair is a knack or talent, flare as a noun is a torch.

flare up, flare-up – verb, noun.

flaunt, flout – To flaunt is to display ostentatiously; to flout is to scoff at: The peacock flaunted its plumage. The composition flouted the rules.

flier, flyer – A flier is an aviator; a flyer is a handbill or a venture.

flimflam

flip-flop

floe  – Do not use ice with floe.

flounder, founder  – A flounder is a fish; to move in a clumsy manner is to flounder. To founder is to get bogged down, become disabled or to sink.

fold as suffix – Do not hyphenate: twofold, threefold, tenfold.

follow-up

foot, feet  – It is correct to say a man is a six-footer but not to say he is six foot tall or six foot. Also it is correct to say a 6-foot, 2-inch guard, or his height is 6 feet, 2 inches.

forgo, forego  –  Forgo means to abstain from or renounce. Forego means to go before.

former, old – Former means erstwhile; old refers to age: The old mansion on Cherry Street is the former home of Mrs. Harvey.

Fort – Do not abbreviate for cities or for military installations.

It should be Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Do not use Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Use Fort Bragg, not Fort Bragg. [Added November 2016]

Fostoria St. Wendelin Church and Parish Life Center

foul up, foul-up – verb, noun.

Four SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]

Franciscan Center – In Sylvania, not Franciscan Life Center.

Frankenstein – In Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein was the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself.

Franklin Park Mall – Official name of Toledo’s premier indoor mail. No longer owned by Westfield.

freelance

Frisbee – A trade name; always capitalize.

front line, front-line – noun, adjective.

front-runner

front yard, front-yard – noun, adjective.

full time, full-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

fund-raiser, fund-raising

funeral vs. memorial service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service. [Added February 2015]


G

Gadhafi, Moammar – Correct Blade style for the Libyan leader. Do NOT use Muammar Kaddafi, previous Blade style.
[Added March 2011].

gage, gauge – Gage is a pledge; gauge is a measurement.

General Growth Property Inc., a Chicago-based development company that owns the Shops at Fallen Timbers in Maumee.

General Motors Co. – Use on first reference. Do not use General Motors Corp. any longer. The name was changed during the 2009 bankruptcy. The “old GM,” with the assets to be disposed, is now referred to as Motors Liquidation Co. GM still can be used in second reference. [Revised July 16, 2009]

gibe – Means jeer or taunt, either as a noun or verb. See jibe.

girlfriend

Gladieux Enterprises – See V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

good, well – Write “he feels good” if you mean he is in good spirits; “he feels well” if he feels healthy. (In this case well is an adjective.) But he hears well, he sees well, meaning that his perception is good. (Well is an adverb in this case.)

good-bye

good Samaritan

graduate – Graduate is correctly used in the active voice; “She graduated from the university.” It is correct but unnecessary to use the passive voice: “He was graduated from the university.”

Do not drop the from: “John Adams graduated from Harvard,” not “John Adams graduated Harvard.”

graphics – Follow style, including the use of articles in all cases.

gray – The preferred American spelling.

great as prefix – Great-grandchild, great-grandmother, great-grandson.

grisly, grizzly – Grisly means horrible; grizzly means grayish.

grown-up


H

had  –  Avoid such constructions as “he had his leg broken” and “he had his car stolen.” Both signify intent.

The Hague – Netherlands

half as prefix  –  Half as an adjective does not take the hyphen in such combinations as half brother, half dozen, half inch, half mile.

Combinations used as adjectives take the hyphen: half-inch opening, half-mile run. Combinations always hyphenated include half-breed, half-and-half, half-dollar. One-word combinations include halfback, halfway. Consult dictionary when in doubt.

haled, hailed –  Haled is an older form of hauled. A suspect is haled into court. Hailed means greeted or acclaimed.

half mast, half staff –  The flag on a ship is lowered to half mast. On land the flag is lowered to half staff.

hand-washing

hangar, hanger  –  A hangar houses planes; a hanger holds clothes.

hanged, hung  –  One hangs a picture, criminal, or oneself. For past tense or passive voice use hanged when referring to executions or suicides, hung for other actions.

Hanukkah   –  The Jewish Festival of Lights, an eight-day commemoration of rededication of the Temple by the Macabees after their victory over the Syrians. Usually occurs in December, but sometime falls in November. DO NOT use Chanukah or any other variation.

hara-kiri

hard hat

hard-liner

Hardship stories – Include a website address or phone number with any “hardship-themed” story we publish. A good example would be an Associated Press story out of Los Angeles about the basset hound rescue center that has fallen on hard times. Do this with hardship stories involving people as well as dogs and other animals. [Added November 2009]

Hayes – New name for the museum and library in Fremont is Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]

HCR ManorCare Inc. , Renamed ProMedica Senior Care in October 2020. Headquarters is on Summit Street, downtown Toledo. [revised October 2020]

headlines

The cardinal rule is that the headline must be accurate and give the reader a true impression of the story. The headline should not steal the lead, especially in feature material.

Some additional guidelines:
Avoid verb heads.
Do not end a line of a head with a preposition except on the middle line of a three-line head or deck. But if a word that is normally a preposition is part of a verb, it must be on the line with the verb.Do not break a proper name, title and name, two-word phrase, or verb and auxiliary between lines of a headline.
As closely as possible headlines should follow the same style as text on abbreviations, etc., except as noted elsewhere.
If a name or title is spelled out in body copy, spell it out in the headline.But if a name or title is abbreviated in copy, do not spell it out in a headline. Use only numbers in heads, except in rare instances, such as “one of a kind.”
Avoid repeating a word in a headline except when any synonym would sound stilted and artificial. Short prepositions such as of, to, and in may be repeated.Do not use such words as rap, slap, hit, blast, as synonyms for criticize.Use quotation marks only when the words are verbatim. Do not put quotation marks around a word just because it is used in an unusual sense or to call attention to a pun.Avoid making a headline pun on a person’s name without supervisory approval.Do not use:
·       Lash for criticize.
·       Peak for record.
·       Snarl for traffic jam.
·       Do not base headlines on weather forecasts.
·       Do not split adjectives from nouns on different lines. This is a common problem.

Instead of:
Notes set for copy
editors on the desk

Rewrite the head to keep the adjective and noun on the same line, which makes it easier for readers to understand:

Desk copy editors
to get suggestions

head-on, head on  –  adjective, adverb.

heavy-handed

Heidelberg College   [revised January 30, 2002]

held  –  Avoid using as a synonym for believed or contended.

helter-skelter

high-handed

hippie, hippy –  noun, adjective.

hit-and-run

hit-skip

high-speed, etc. – It is not necessary to describe a chase, in autos or otherwise, as “high-speed.” A “low-speed” chase would be unusual.

It is unnecessary to write “the victim was rushed to the hospital.” It is assumed that a trip to the hospital is made as rapidly as possible. Write “was taken to the hospital.”

historic, historical – A historic event is an important occurrence, one that stands out in history. Any occurrence in the past is a, not an, historic event. Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. [added March 2010]

hoard, horde – Hoard means an accumulation and is also a verb; horde is a crowd.

hocus-pocus

Hodgkin’s disease

Hollywood Casino Toledo – The official name of the casino that opened in May 2012. Be sure to include Toledo. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.

home, hone –  Do not confuse these two verbs. To home in is to seek, as in a target. To hone means to sharpen.

home room

home rule

home run

horse race

hot line

hot rod, hot-rod – noun, adjective/verb.

Huntington Center – On first reference, this is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. In April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights to the arena. [revised April 16, 2010]

hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or more. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line.

Typhoons develop west of the line. They are known as cyclones in the Indian Ocean and Australia. When a hurricane or typhoon loses strength (wind speed), usually after landfall, it is reduced to tropical storm status.

Capitalize hurricane when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Hurricane Dorian, Hurricane Michael.

Use it and its in pronoun references.

Once storms lose strength and are downgraded to tropical storm or tropical depression status, it may be clearer to simply use the storm’s name on first reference: Officials said the storm surge from Dorian was blamed for the heavy damage to the region. Give the storm’s current status and history high in the story: Dorian came ashore as a major hurricane and was downgraded to a tropical storm. After a storm is downgraded, phrasing such as storm Michael or the remnants of Hurricane Maria is also acceptable on first reference, with background later.

hurricane categories – Hurricanes are ranked 1 to 5 according to what is known as the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale. Categories 3, 4 and 5 hurricanes are considered major hurricanes.

  • Category 1 — Winds of 74-95 mph (120-150 kph). Damage primarily to unanchored mobile homes, shrubbery and trees. Some damage to poorly constructed signs and piers. Extensive damage to power lines and poles likely will result in power outages that could last a few to several days.
  • Category 2 — Winds of 96-110 mph (155-175 kph). Some roof, door and window damage to buildings. Considerable damage to mobile homes, small watercraft, trees, poorly constructed signs and piers. Many shallowly rooted trees will be snapped or uprooted and block numerous roads. Near-total power loss is expected with outages that could last from several days to weeks.
  • Category 3 — Winds of 111-129 mph (180-210 kph). Some structural damage to small homes. Mobile homes destroyed and large trees blown down. Hurricane Katrina, the costliest natural disaster in U.S. history, was a Category 3 at landfall in 2005 after being a Category 5 in the Gulf of Mexico.
  • Category 4 — Winds of 130-156 mph (210-250 kph). Wall failures and roof collapses on small homes, and extensive damage to doors and windows. Complete destruction of some homes, especially mobile homes. Power outages will last for weeks to possibly months. Most of the area will be uninhabitable for weeks or months. In 2004, Hurricane Charley hit the Florida Gulf Coast near Fort Myers as a Category 4 storm. It left thousands homeless and the total U.S. damage was estimated at more than $15 billion.
  • Category 5 — Winds greater than 157 mph (250 kph). Complete roof failure on many homes and industrial buildings. Smaller buildings and mobile homes blown over or completely blown away. Major damage to lower floors of all structures located less than 15 feet (4.5 meters) above sea level and within 500 yards (460 meters) of the shoreline. Massive evacuation of residential areas on low ground within 5 to 10 miles (8 to 16 kilometers) inland may be required.

Hurricane Katrina in 2005, which was a Category 3 storm, was the most expensive hurricane to hit the United States with $160 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation into 2017 dollars. Hurricane Harvey in 2017 was second with $125 billion in damage, with 2017’s Maria, a Category 4 storm on landfall ranked third at $90 billion. Superstorm Sandy, which pummeled New York and New Jersey in 2012, didn’t have the high winds and had lost tropical status by the time it struck. Though not formally called a major hurricane, it had devastating effects and caused $70 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation.

hurricane names – The names of tropical cyclones are decided by the World Meteorological Organization and are recycled every six years. If more than 21 named tropical cyclones occur in one basin in a season, any additional storms will be named for Greek letters. The names of storms deemed to have caused extraordinary damage are retired from the list. When referring to two hurricanes: hurricanes Maria and Dorian.

hurricane season – The portion of the year that has a relatively high incidence of hurricanes. In the Atlantic, Caribbean and Gulf of Mexico, this is from June through November. In the eastern Pacific, it is May 15 through Nov. 30. In the central Pacific, it is June 1 through Nov. 30.

hurricane warning – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are expected somewhere within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. The warning is issued 36 hours before tropical-storm-force winds are expected to arrive.

hurricane watch – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are possible within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. A hurricane watch is issued 48 hours in advance of the expected onset of tropical-storm-force winds.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

hyphenation – An adjective modifying a noun takes no hyphen, but when the adjective and noun in combination modify another noun, the hyphen is required: sound money, a sound-money policy.

A noun used to modify another noun becomes an adjective for grammatical purposes and no hyphen is needed. Race winner, not race-winner; bird watcher, not bird-watcher. Exceptions are combinations shown as hyphenated in the dictionary.

Two hyphens are needed in phrases like 10-foot-deep hole, 50-foot-tall tree, three-mile-wide strip.

Compound adjectives made up of a noun and a verb must be hyphenated: a man-eating shark is different from a man eating shark.

However, the hyphen may be omitted in two-word phrases used together so generally that their connection is obvious: high school boy, income tax returns, civil rights struggle.

Do NOT use the hyphen between an adverb ending in ly and the verb, participle, or adjective it modifies: a recently remodeled house.

In general well or ill take the hyphen when the adverb is before the noun: a well-fed cat; the cat was well fed.

Do not use suspended hyphens, as in three-, five-, and eight-mile runs. Write either three-mile, five-mile, and eight-mile runs or three, five, and eight-mile runs.


I

ice pack

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

ill health –  Avoid this term. A person is either ill or healthy.

Imagination Station — Science center, formerly COSI, that opens October 2009 on Summit Street in downtown Toledo
[added September 2009]

imminent –  See eminent.

inaugurate –  Implies some degree of formality or ceremony; limit its use to such occasions.

include –  Use to introduce a series only when the items that follow are part of a total: The zoo includes lions and tigers.

incumbent – Avoid the redundancy of incumbent senator, etc.

infer, imply –  Infer means to draw a conclusion, imply to hint or suggest: The speaker implied that all was not well in his country. His audience inferred that a revolution was brewing.

insect –  Spiders and centipedes are not insects. If in doubt about a specific creature, consult references.

inside of, outside of –   Drop the of.

inter as prefix –  Takes no hyphen except when second part of the word begins with a capital letter, as in inter-American.

inter, intra –  Inter means between, intra within: Interplanetary travel, intramural (within the walls) athletics.

internet: Lowercase internet to match Blade style for web and website. The internet is a decentralized, worldwide network of computers and other devices that can communicate with each other.
The web, like email, is a subset of the internet. They are not synonymous and should not be used interchangeably in stories. [Added February 2021]

ISOH/IMPACT – A nonprofit disaster relief organization. It is based at 25182 River Road, Perrysburg, but its distribution center is at 905 Farnsworth Rd., Waterville. Note: all letters are uppercase.   [Added May 2013]

its, it’s  –  possessive pronoun, contraction of it is.


J

JayCee

jailed –  When incorrectly used for sentenced, jailed gives a different meaning. “The driver was jailed for 90 days” means that he has completed a sentence of 90 days. (Do not “give a sentence.”)

jelly bean

jibe –  Means agree. See gibe.

Johnson’s Island – is correct for the Lake Erie island north of Sandusky and south of Marblehead in Ottawa County. It was the site of a prisoner-of-war camp for Confederate officers captured during the American Civil War. [revised 2002, April 2014]

judges –  Blade coverage of court sentencings involving major crimes (including, but not limited to, murder, rape, major felonies, major white-collar crimes) always will give a direct quotation of the judge’s pronouncement of sentence.

We are interested in the judges’s feelings about the act and anything personal. Any judge speaks for a community as well as the criminal justice system. We must share that insight.

judgment – Not judgement.

justices, judges  –  Not always interchangeable. Municipal Court, Common Pleas Court, Juvenile Court, and U.S. district and circuit courts have judges. Members of the U.S. and Ohio Supreme courts are justices. The head of the U.S. Supreme Court is the chief justice of the United States. For a state other than Ohio try to follow approved usage in that state. A justice of the peace on second reference is never a judge. The term jurist may be applied to either justices or judges but never as a title.


K

Kaddafi, Muammar – Do NOT use this spelling for the Libyan leader. The correct Blade style is Moammar Gadhafi. [Revised March 2011]

Kaptur, Marcy — A Democrat, Marcy Kaptur is the U.S. Representative for Ohio’s 9th congressional district, which stretches from her hometown of Toledo to Cleveland. She is the longest-serving woman in Congress and she has represented the Democratic Party since 1983. After many years, Marcy has decided that she would like to be called Ms. Kaptur on second reference, not Miss.  [Added February 2021]

karat – See carat.

kids – Do not use for children except in light features in which it is appropriate.

knot – One nautical mile (6,076.10 feet) per hour. It is redundant to say knots per hour. To convert to approximate miles per hour, multiply knots by 1.15.

know-how

KO, KOs – nouns.

KO’s, KO’d – verbs.

Koran – Preferred spelling is Qur’an.

Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport – This is the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]


L

lady – Do not use as a synonym for woman. Lady may be used as a courtesy title or in a specific reference to fine manners without patronizing overtones. See female.

lake bed

larceny –  Larceny is unlawful taking or carrying away of personal property. Burglary is breaking into a building illegally with intent to steal. Robbery is larceny from a person or in the immediate presence of another by violence or threat of violence.

last, past –  Use last rather than past to refer to the time immediately preceding the time of writing.  It is not the style of The Blade to use the word last as in “last October” or “last Wednesday” unless it is October or unless the paper is going to be published on Wednesday. It is better to say that something occurred in October or will occur in October; that it happened Wednesday or it will happen Wednesday.

launch – Use it almost exclusively for military matters, rockets, attacks, missiles. It is not good usage to “launch”  political campaigns, programs, projects, drives, etc. Simply starting or beginning them is sufficient.

lawn mower

lawyer – See attorney.

Lead: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

led – Past tense of lead.

Lede: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

left field, left-field – noun, adjective.

left fielder

left-handed

left-hander

left wing, left-wing – noun, adjective.

left-winger, left winger –  The first is a political term; the second is a hockey position.

lend, loan –  Lend is the preferred verb form and should be used in all instances except when quoting someone. Loan is properly used as a noun.

less –  See fewer.

Levis Commons – Outdoor shops on State Rt. 25 in Perrysburg. Mall was built was built was developer Larry Dillin.

LG Philips Displays – formerly Philips Display Components [revised October 23, 2002]

liable, likely –  One is liable to a suit for damages. He is exposed or vulnerable to such a suit. He is likely to sue for damages.  He probably will sue.

lie, lay –  Lie is intransitive and does not take an object: lie, lay, lain. Lay is transitive and takes an object: lay, laid, laid.

Examples: He lies down but cannot sleep. He lay down in the grass. Lenin’s body has lain in Red Square since his death. The bricklayer lays bricks. He laid his rifle down. A new golf course was laid out.

life buoy

Mercy Health Life Flight – This is the name of the medical helicopter company operated by Corporate Jets, Inc., of Pittsburgh. It operates out of Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center. [revised April 26, 2016]

life jacket

life raft

lift-off

liftouts –  Used to break up blocks of type and to summarize a significant point of an article that is not part of the headline.

light-heavyweight

like –  Should not be used as a conjunction. Correct: It looked like a victory for the Conservatives. See as if.

like as suffix –  Usually not hyphenated: businesslike, lifelike. No hyphen is necessary after words ending in l: raillike. Use the hyphen after words ending in ll : bell-like.

like-minded

likely, probably –  Likely is normally an adjective, as in a likely story; probably is an adverb.

linage, lineage – The first is the number of lines; the second is one’s family tree.

living room

loath, loathe –  The first is an adjective meaning unwilling; the second a verb meaning to detest.

locate –  Verb meaning to place or to find. Do not write “The building is located at Sixth and Main streets.”  Write “The building is at Sixth and Main streets.”

locker room

L-O-F   – Acceptable on second reference for the former Libbey-Owens-Ford Co. in historical stories. [revised January 30, 2002]

long shot, long-shot  –  noun, adjective.

long-standing

long time, longtime –  noun, adjective.

long titles – Place long titles after the name. Instead of Lucas County Common Pleas Court Judge James Bates, use Judge James Bates, of Lucas County Common Pleas Court, said . . .

Lourdes University – Officially became a university on Aug. 19, 2011. Founded in 1958 as Lourdes College, the private university is situated on 113 wooded acres in Sylvania. [Added August 2011]

Lower Peninsula

Lucas County Arena – Name of the arena opened in downtown Toledo in October 2009. Do not use Lucas County Multipurpose Arena. [Added October 2009]

Lucas County Board of Mental Health and Recovery Services – On first reference, don’t call the agency the Mental Health Board. The board is the result of a 2006 merger.

Lucas County educational service center board – No longer Lucas County board of education.



M

Mach number

machine gun, machine-gun – noun, adjective/verb.

Magna Carta – (NOT Magna Charta)

Mafia – The secret society of criminals and its members. Do not use as a synonym for organized crime or the underworld.

majority, plurality – Majority means more than half an amount. Plurality means more than the next highest number. If there are more than two candidates in a race, the one with the greatest number of votes has a plurality, but he lacks a majority unless he has more than half the total vote.

makeup, make up –  noun/adjective, verb.

malls, local –  The following is a list of the major local malls:
North Towne Square; Southwyck Shopping Center; Franklin Park Mall (Franklin Park on second reference; Woodville Mall, Shops at Fallen Timbers (in Maumee) and Levis Commons (in Perrysburg)

man-made

man-of-war

mantel, mantle –  The first is a shelf; the second is a cloak.

Mardi Gras

Marathon Petroleum Company LLC is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]

margin, ratio – Margin is the amount or degree of difference: The measure passed by a 15-vote margin. Ratio is a proportional relationship between two or more things: Losers outnumbered gainers on the New York Stock Exchange by a 5-3 ratio.

Marines

market basket

Masonic, fraternal organizations – Use the following guidelines:

  • Trident Lodge, F&AM. Do not use lodge numbers or the term Blue Lodge. In some states and for black lodges it is AF&AM.
  • Solomon Chapter, RAM. Do not spell out Royal Arch Masons or use a chapter number.
  • Eastern Council, R&SM. The correct form for Royal and Select Masons.
  • Toledo Commandery, Knights Templar.  Chapter, Council, and Commandery constitute the York Rite of Masonry. Use the names of the groups, not York Rite.
  • Scottish Rite, Toledo. Omit “Valley of.” It is redundant to refer to a 32nd Degree Scottish Rite Mason. However, the 33rd Degree is a signal honor and should be mentioned when appropriate.
  • Constituent bodies of the Scottish Rite may be mentioned if someone has been an officer. They are: Commander, Toledo Consistory; Sovereign Prince, Northern Light Council, Princes of Jerusalem; Most Wise Master, Fort Industry Chapter, Rose Croix; Thrice Potent Master, Mi-A-Mi Lodge of Perfection.
  • Shrine and Grotto are short for much longer official titles of the parent organizations. The local Shrine body is Zenobia Temple. The black Shriners belong to Mecca Temple. It’s O-Ton-Ta-La Grotto.
  • Black Masonic groups sometimes are referred to as Prince Hall affiliates.
Polar Chapter, Eastern Star. Omit “Order of the” and do not use OES. This is primarily a women’s group, but men may belong.
Lodge of Rebekahs is a women’s order.

Write Knights of Pythias, Odd Fellows, Eagles, Moose, and Elks. Do not use the abbreviations K of P, IOOF, FOE, LOOM, and BPOE.

mayor, coverage of – Make the accounts as objective as possible. Save interpretation and analysis for columns or other types of articles whose purpose is clearly labeled.

medal, metal – Medal is a small piece of metal with a design or inscription made to commemorate some event or to honor some individual. Metal is any of a class of chemical elements, such as iron, gold, or aluminum.

media –  Plural form of medium and always takes a plural verb: News media plan to cover the story. Do NOT use as a synonym for employees of the media.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital.

Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [revised May 12, 2015]

Megawatt – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Mercy Health –  In April 2016, the health group changed its name to Mercy Health. It is no longer Mercy Health Partners. Its seven hospitals in northwest Ohio also have slightly different names: Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center, Mercy Health St. Anne Hospital, Mercy Health St. Charles Hospital, Mercy Health Children’s Hospital, Mercy Health Tiffin Hospital, Mercy Health Willard Hospital, and Mercy Health Hospital of Defiance.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center – No longer Mercy  St.. Vincent Mercy Medical Center St. Vincent Mercy Medical Center or  St. Vincent Medical Center.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy College of Ohio – A Toledo-based Catholic institution with a focus on healthcare. In 2011, the school changed its name from Mercy College of Northwest Ohio to Mercy College of Ohio. The school also has a Youngstown campus.
[Added January 2013]

memorial vs. funeral service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service.
[Added February 2015]

merry-go-round

Metroparks Toledo  – It is the name for the government agency that operates 15 Metroparks totaling more than 12,000 acres in Lucas County. Metroparks is one word. The  “M” is  capitalized, there is no hyphen, and there is no capital p. Use Metroparks Toledo on first reference. On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks.  [revised September 2017]

Mexican-American – hyphenated

mezzo-soprano

mid as prefix –  Not hyphenated unless the second part of the word begins with a capital letter.

Mid-American Conference  – Comprises University of Akron, Ball State University, Bowling Green State University, University of Buffalo, Central Michigan University, Eastern Michigan University, Kent State University, Miami University, Northern Illinois University, Ohio University, Temple University, University of Toledo, and Western Michigan University. [Revised November 2011]

middle age, middle-aged –  noun, adjective.

mill – All bond issue or levy stories must identify what a mill is and what any proposed levy changes would mean to the owner of a typical home.

millennium  [revised January 30, 2002]

minelayer, mine-laying –  noun, adjective.

minesweeper, mine-sweeping  – noun, adjective.

mini as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

mixed-up, mix-up, mix up  –  adjective, noun, verb.

Middle East – Comprises Afghanistan, Cyprus, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Kuwait, Jordan, Lebanon, Oman, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, South Yemen, Sudan, Syria, Turkey, United Arab Emirates, and Yemen. Mideast is acceptable, but Middle East is preferred.

model, replica –  A model may be a different size from the original and/or of different material; a replica is an exact duplicate.

Mohammed – Use this spelling for the name of the prophet and founder of the Islamic religion. Do Not use Muhammad.
[Added November 2009]

money maker

moneys – Restrict use to currencies, as in the moneys of the world.

Moonies – A pejorative term for members of the Rev. Sun Myung Moon’s Unification Church. DON’T use it.
[added Dec. 3, 2008]

mop-up, mop up –  noun, verb.

more than  –  Write “more than 500 attended,” not “over 500.” Over is permissible in headlines.

mother-in-law

mph

mucus, mucous –  noun, adjective.

multi as prefix –  Hyphenate only when the second part of the combination begins with the letter i.

Mumbai is now Blade style for the financial capital of  India. Formerly known as Bombay, there are 15 million people who live in Mumbai, which is the capital of Maharashtra on the western coast of India. Most U.S. news organizations refer to the city as Mumbai, NOT Bombay, since the Indian government made that change in the mid 1990s. The Blade also will use Mumbai when reporting news from this India city. Because Mumbai is not as well known as its predecessor, Bombay, Mumbai needs India in the dateline. [added November 27, 2008]



N

NAFTA – NAFTA is correct. In first reference use North American Free Trade Agreement. [revised October 23, 2002]

names  –  Getting a person’s name right is one of the first essentials of reporting. When interviewing people, ask for correct spelling, preference in the use of the first name and/or initials, and any peculiarities.

For names in wire stories the “World Almanac,”  “Who’s Who,” and other reference books are available.

Junior is permissible if it is part of the person’s formal name. Senior is not used unless father and son are living and both are well enough known that omission would create confusion. Generational designations generally are not needed for nationally known people.

Nicknames are permissible.  If John P. Jones is known to all his friends as Doc, his name would appear as John P. “Doc” Jones.

Use the nickname instead of the first name on first reference for a person best known by that name.

Do not use tasteless nicknames or the common nicknames for given names.

A married woman’s maiden name or name from a previous marriage will be used if desired. The names should appear in their proper order: Mrs. Mary Jones, nee Smith, would appear as Mrs. Mary Smith Jones. If the widow Jones is remarried to a man named Brown, her name should appear as Mrs. Mary Jones Brown.

Prominent individuals – The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Foreign names – In some foreign names the last name is not the family surname. In such cases on second reference the title should be used with the correct part of the name.

NATO – Acceptable on first reference.

nauseate, nauseous – The first is a verb meaning to make or become ill; the second is an adjective meaning causing illness or disgust.

Navy

near as prefix –  Near is an adjective as well as an adverb and can be used as such in phrases as near accident, near thing.

nearby

neo as prefix – Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

nerve-racking – Preferred to nerve-wracking.

new – Avoid using the phrase “constructing new building.” It is difficult for someone to build an old building. This is in line with editing expertise aimed at taking unnecessary words out of stories so there is more room for necessary ones. It is in the same realm as “a new record,” a completely unnecessary modifier.

news conference – Not press conference

next – Do not use with the day of the week or month.

nick – Not knick.

nobility – References to members of the nobility present special problems because nobles frequently are known by their titles rather than their given or family names. These guidelines relate to Britain’s nobility and may be adapted when appropriate to other nations.

Orders of rank begin with the royal family. The term royalty is reserved for relatives of living and deceased sovereigns.

Next in descending order are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts, and barons. Many hold inherited titles; others have been raised to the nobility by the sovereign.

Sovereigns also confer honorary titles, which do NOT make an individual a member of the nobility.  The principal designations in descending order are baronet and knight.

Refer to The Associated Press stylebook for a complete discussion of titles of nobility.

no-man’s-land

non –  Not hyphenated except in combination with proper nouns.

none – Usually means no single one, and in this sense takes singular verbs and pronouns: None of the seats was in its right place. Use a plural verb only if the sense is no two or no amount: None of the consultants agree on the same approach. None of the taxes have been paid.

Norfolk Southern Corp. – A railroad company. DO NOT  refer to it as Norfolk Southern Railway.

North – The northern United States.

North Toledo

North Towne Square – Mall is not part of the name.

Northwest Psychiatric Hospital – No longer Toledo Mental Health Center

notable, noted, notorious  –  Notable means worthy of notice; noted means celebrated or famous; notorious means publicly or widely known, usually in an unfavorable light. Notoriety is not a synonym for fame.

numbers –  Whenever possible spell out all numbers and ordinals below 10 with the following exceptions:

  • Ages -Use numerals without exception when referring to the age of people or animals in years, months, weeks, or days. This also applies to approximate ages: He was in his 40s.
  • Betting odds – He was a 2-1 favorite.
  • City council districts – The correct form is District 5. Do not spell out number.
  • Court identification – It’s the 6th U.S. Circuit Court, not Sixth U.S. Circuit.
  • Decimals – Always use numerals. For figures less than one use a 0 before the decimal point: 2.5, 0.2.
  • Fractional compounds – 3 1/2 inches, size 6 hat. For less common fractions the phrase must be spelled out: five and nine-sixteenths inches, 13 and three-sevenths gallons.
  • Measurements – Exact measurements in feet and inches: 6 feet, 2 inches tall. Otherwise six feet or seven inches unless used with abbreviations in tabular matter. Also, it’s 3 inches of snow fell, not 3″ of snow fell.
  • Money – With the $ sign: $5. Foreign currencies should be stated in U.S. dollars and cents. (The cents symbol is used in special cases such as graphics and charts and always takes numerals.) For sums of money one million and above: $1 million, $20 billion. This format applies only to money.
  • Percentages – 5 percent. For percentages below 1 percent use a 0 before the decimal: 0.2 percent.
  • Special uses – Spelling out extremely large figures is sometimes more appropriate: They planned to enlist a million workers. He was expected to draw a half-million votes. Spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence.
  • When numbers are used in a series or in close association and some are above nine, use numerals for all: The man was sentenced to from 1 to 25 years. It took 2 weeks and 10 days to complete the work.
  • Spell out one when it is used in a general rather than a numerical sense, even when other numbers appear in the same sentence: He was one of 13 seniors honored.
  • Spell out twofold through tenfold. Above tenfold make it 11-fold, 12-fold, 20-fold, etc.
  • Sports results – Detroit defeated Cleveland 2-1. He ran the 100-yard dash in 9.4 seconds (or 0:9:4). McEnroe defeated Connors 6-3, 5-7, 6-4.
  • In football stories use numerals when referring to yard lines but spell out through nine when referring to number of yards gained: Brown plunged four yards to the 3.
  • Time of day – 2 o’clock, 3 p.m., 4:45 a.m. Zeros are unnecessary for the hour on the hour.
  • Vote results – City council voted 6-3.
  • Weapons – A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun. See also Weapons.
  • Weights – Exact weights in pounds and ounces: 7 pounds, 6 ounces. Otherwise seven pounds or six ounces. (Use numerals with abbreviations in special cases such as charts and graphics.)


O

Obamacare – Nickname for President Obama’s Affordable Care Act. Obamacare is one word and should not be offset with quotation marks. [Added November 2016]

obscenity, profanity, vulgarity

May not be used in stories unless in direct quotations when there is a compelling reason and with the approval of the managing editor, or in his absence, an assistant managing editor.

Avoid using any form of abbreviation to substitute for a vulgarity (as in f—). We do not change quotes as in “damn you” to “darn you,” or “hell” to “heck,” etc.

This section shall be interpreted to mean we will permit the use of such words only in very rare instances.

off as prefix – Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: off-color, off-peak, off-season, off-white, off-key.  Some combinations without the hyphen: offhand, offset, offshore, offside, offstage.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

off as suffix –  Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: send-off, stop-off. Some combinations without the hyphen: playoff, standoff, takeoff, cutoff, liftoff.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

offhand –  adjective/adverb.

of mine, of his, etc. –  The common expressions “a friend of mine,”  “a friend of John’s”  should be avoided. Instead, write “my friend,”  “John’s friend.”

oil field

Ohio General Assembly – Official name of the state’s governing body. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.”
[Added May 2010]

Ohio Newspaper Organization – A consortium of Ohio’s eight major newspapers to share non-competitive news content on-cycle. The participating papers are The Blade, the Plain Dealer of Cleveland, The Columbus Dispatch, the Akron Beacon Journal, The Cincinnati Enquirer, the Dayton Daily News, The (Canton) Repository and The (Youngstown) Vindicator. Use Ohio Newspaper Organization on first reference, but the acronym OHNO is fine on subsequent references.

Under the consortium’s guidelines, the byline of the reporter and name of the newspaper should be used when posting OHNO stories on participating papers’ websites, print and e-editions.

ONMA – Use Ohio News Media Association. Formerly the Ohio Newspaper Association. ONMA is the trade association for more than 250 Ohio daily and weekly newspapers and media outlets.

OK, OKs, OK’d

old-timer, old-time – noun, adjective

One SeaGate is called Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine. [revised July 22, 2008]

one-sided

onetime, one-time –  The first means the former; the second means occurring only once

only –  Used in the sense of solely or exclusively, only should go as close as possible to the word it modifies. Note the different meanings: “Only he hoped to find her.” “He hoped only to find her.” “He hoped to find only her.”

Take care to use appropriately to convey a judgment or degree. Proper: Only two people attended the meeting. Improper: Only two people died in the crash.

open-minded

oral, verbal – All communication by words, whether written or spoken, is verbal. Hence, do not use “a verbal order” to mean an unwritten order; a spoken order is “an oral order.” But use verbal to signify by word rather than deed as “a verbal conflict” to distinguish from a physical conflict.

Ohio State Highway Patrol – Do not use Ohio Highway Patrol. The Ohio State Highway Patrol is a division of the Ohio State Department of Public Safety and is the official highway patrol agency in Ohio. [Added March 2019]

out of doors, out-of-doors –  noun, adjective.

over as prefix –  Not hyphenated.

Owens Corning  – (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.


    • P

      panic-stricken

      papier-mache

      part time, part-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

      party – Do not use party as a synonym for person. However, parties to a contract or a lawsuit is correct usage.

      pass – Bills are passed, laws are enacted.

      passer-by, passers-by

      past master

      patron, customer – Properly, a patron is a benefactor, a supporter, a protector, an advocate, or the like. Use of the word as a synonym for customer or client is colloquial.

      pawn ticket

      pay – All stories on new contracts must have some kind of indication of what the workers got in terms of pay increases. Either the range of pay or what the average employee got. For example, a city street worker would be paid $250 more or $13,250 a year with the increase. Any story about the appointment of a public official or promotion, etc., must state the salary for that position and indicate that the individual will be paid the salary. Do not use “Joe Smith earns $40,000.”

      PBF Toledo Refining Co. – The full name of the refinery on the Toledo-Oregon border. The refinery is owned by PBF, a private equity firm that bought the facility from Sunoco, Inc. in late 2010 for $400 million. [Added March 1, 2011]

      peak, peek, pique
      • Peak is the topmost point, such as a mountain peak, or to reach that point.
      • Peek is to peer or glance (The boy took a peek around the corner).
      • Pique is to upset, arouse or excite. (If you are piquing someone’s interest, you are exciting their interest, not taking a quick look.

      percent – one word. Use it or % in heads.

      Philips Displays – SEE: LG Philips Displays

      phenomena (plural noun), phenomenon (single noun) for “extremely unusual, extraordinary”. [added May 5, 2008]

      photos – Local feature photos with a weather theme must contain weather information as far as the day’s readings and what’s in store.

      pickles – In northwestern Ohio small cucumbers grown for pickling are referred to colloquially as pickles. They are not pickles until treated with vinegar and brine. Use the correct term, cucumbers.

      Pilkington North America – a subsidiary of Pilkington PLC (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)

      Ping-Pong – Trade name for table tennis.

      “Pit bull” – This is a generic descriptive term for a dog trained to fight and may refer to multiple breeds, including the American Staffordshire terrier, Staffordshire bull terrier, American pit bull terrier, and other mix breeds determined to be “pit bulls” by Lucas County Dog Warden Tom Skeldon. “Pit bulls” should have quotation marks and the style is two words, not one. [Revised November 2009]

      planes – It is our policy on airplane crashes to include in stories and cutlines the type of aircraft involved in the crash.

      playoff

      plead – Past tense is pleaded.

      plow – Correct in all uses.

      plurality – See majority.

      plurals – In compound forms add the s to the noun part of the compound to form the plural: attorneys general, notaries public. When both parts of the compound are normally nouns, add the s to the more important word: major generals, lieutenant colonels. (However, it is sergeants major, for a sergeant major is a sergeant, not a major.)
      The plural of proper names ending in x or z is formed by adding es. The addition of s is sufficient for names ending in ce or se: Keeping up with the Joneses. Lopez, Lopezes.
      For the plural of abbreviations add ‘s: The brief was full of etc.’s.
      For plurals of figures add s: Boeing 727s. The same for years: 1970s, but ’50s, ’60s.
      For plurals of single letters add ‘s: Oakland A’s, two B’s on his report card, 3 R’s.
      For plurals of multiple letters add s: She knows her ABCs.
      For plurals of all-caps initials without periods add s: YMCAs, GIs, POWs.

      Pokemon Go – Two words, with the “o” at the end lower case. Italics in body type, single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

      post as prefix – Usually not hyphenated except in combination with a proper noun.

      pore – A verb that means to gaze or study intensely: She pored over her books.

      pour – A verb that means to flow in a continuous stream: It poured rain. He poured the coffee.pre as prefix – Not hyphenated unless in combination with a proper noun.

      premier, premiere – The head of government in many countries is the premier (not necessarily synonymous with prime minister). As an adjective premier can mean first in rank or supreme: Pablo Casals was his era’s premier performer on the cello.
      Premiere refers to a first performance, either as noun or adjective. Do not use premiere as a verb.

      press conference – Do not use. News conference is preferred.

      preventive – Preferred over preventative as noun and adjective.

      principal, principle – Principal as a noun means the head of a school, the chief person in a transaction, or a sum of money from which interest derives. As an adjective it means first or highest in rank.
      Principle means a fundamental doctrine or tenet or a rule of conduct. It is not an adjective.

      Private Industry Collaborative [revised February 28, 2002]

      profanity – See obscenity.

      professor – Never abbreviate. For example, Professor Jim Smith.

      ProMedica – Official name of the region’s largest health-care system. Only use ProMedica. Do Not refer to it as ProMedica Health System in stories and/or headlines. The “P” and “M” are uppercase.
      The ProMedica Downtown Campus is comprised of the following:
      • The Steam Plant
      • The Junction (triangular building)
      • The Plaza (former Edison Plaza or what you called the Key Bank Building)
      • The Summit Center (former HCR ManorCare building)
      • The Depot (ProMedica’s parking garage)
      [Added February 2021].

      All ProMedica hospitals have the parent name in front of the hospital name. The ProMedica hospitals are:
      • ProMedica Bay Park Hospital
      • ProMedica Bixby Hospital
      • ProMedica Defiance Regional Hospital
      • ProMedica Flower Hospital
      • ProMedica Fostoria Community Hospital
      • ProMedica Herrick Hospital
      • ProMedica Memorial Hospital
      • ProMedica Toledo Children’s Hospital
      • ProMedica Toledo Hospital
      • ProMedica Wildwood Orthopaedic and Spine Hospital
      [Revised November 2016].

      ProMedica Senior Care (formerly HCR ManorCare). ProMedica Senior Care operates about 500 assisted living, skilled nursing, outpatient rehabilitation, memory care, and home-health and Hospice Care centers. [added October 2020]

      pronouns for animals – Use personal pronouns (he or she) if you know the gender of the pet. [Revised January 2015]

      Personal pronouns are acceptable when writing about an animal and its offspring.

      protester, not protestor

      proved, proven – Use proven only as an adjective: A proven remedy.

      provided – Make it “provided that” something occurs, not “providing that.”

      pseudo as prefix – Do not hyphenate unless in combination with a proper noun.
      Punctuation
      Some general rules:

          • Apostrophes – Normally the singular possessive of a word is formed by adding ‘s: the bear’s den. The plural possessive is formed by adding the apostrophe to the plural form: the bears’ den. In the case of common and singular proper nouns ending in s, use only an apostrophe after the s. Michael Woods’ desk, Gov. Rhodes’ grave, the moss’ coloration. But the plural possessive should be the Joneses’ house; the Lopezes’ golf clubs.
          • Omit in all possessive pronouns: his, hers, its, theirs.
          • In organization names follow the organization: Elks Club. When in doubt omit the apostrophe.
          • To indicate joint possession write Smith and Brown’s properties. If ownership is separate: Frank’s and Vicki’s faces.
          • Form singular and plural possessives of all-caps initials without periods by adding ‘s: YMCA’s, YMCAs’; GI’s, GIs’; POW’s, POWs’.
          • Use the apostrophe (not a single opening quote) to indicate omitted letters: rock ‘n’ roll, he is a ne’er-do-well, ‘Tis the season to be jolly. Omit the apostrophe on words that have come into common use: copter, possum.
          • Brackets – Use brackets to insert explanatory information inside quotes. Use parentheses outside of quotes.
          • Colons – Use the colon to introduce a list or a quotation. Capitalize the first word after a colon if it is a proper noun, the start of a complete sentence, or a new paragraph. Follow these rules in headlines.
          • Commas – Overuse and underuse are the most common problems with commas.
          • Underuse – Failure to use both commas when two are needed to set off a phrase or clause, the year in a date, and ages, unless the elements begin or end a sentence: John Jones, a South Side grocer, was the next speaker. The tragic events of Nov. 22, 1963, will long be remembered. November, 1963, will go down in history.
          • Overuse – Insertion between subject and verb: According to the printout, the house next door, has a large yard.
          • Improper use with conjunctions – As a general rule use a comma if the subject of each clause is expressly stated: We are visiting Washington, and we plan a side trip to Williamsburg. We visited Washington, but our senator would not see us. Do not use a comma when the subject of the two clauses is the same: We are visiting Washington and plan to see the White House.
          • Unnecessary use to set off short introductory clauses and phrases: During the night he heard many noises. (Use a comma if needed to avoid ambiguity: On the street below, the curious gathered. A comma is necessary after most when and if clauses: When he had tired of the mad pace of New York, he moved to Toledo.)
          • Unnecessary use to set off adverbs such as too, therefore, and also: He too is tired.

      Some additional guidelines:

          • Use the comma to separate items in a series: The colors of the flag are red, white, and blue. If the items in a series include commas, use semicolons to separate the items except before the last item, where a comma is used.
          • Street addresses and hometowns after a name should not have commas. Instead use the preposition of: Mary Roberts of 442 Adams St. called Florence Smith, Boston. Smith Co. of New York mailed the records to Brown Co. of South Avenue, Toledo.
          • Use commas before and after the abbreviation Jr. following names. However II and III, for second and third, follow the name without punctuation. When a senator or congressman uses Jr., the correct punctuation is Sen. John Jones, Jr. (R., Mass.).
          • Do not use commas to set off sports scores or legislative or judicial votes: The Tigers defeated the Indians 3-2 on the steady pitching of Justin Thompson. The Supreme Court ruled 5-4 today . . . The Ohio Senate voted 17-16 . . .
          • Use commas to separate a series of adjectives equal in rank. Adjectives are equal if the comma could be replaced by the word and without changing the sense: a thoughtful, precise manner; a dark, dangerous night.
          • Do not use a comma when the last adjective before a noun outranks its predecessors because it is an integral element of a noun phrase: a cheap fur coat; the old oaken bucket; a new, blue spring bonnet.
          • Do not use commas to set off essential clauses and phrases that cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence: Reporters who do not read the stylebook should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that one class of reporters, those who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors.)
          • Reporters, who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that all reporters do not read the stylebook.)
          • Commas are used to set off nonessential clauses and phrases that can be eliminated without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.

      We saw the 1995 winner of the Academy Award competition for best movie, “Braveheart.” (Only one movie won the award in 1995. The name is informative, but even without it no other movie could be meant.)

      We saw the award-winning movie “One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.” (No comma because many movies have won awards and without the name of the movie the reader would not know which movie was meant.)

      They ate dinner with their daughter Julie. (Because this couple has more than one daughter, the inclusion of her name is critical.) They ate dinner with their daughter Julie and her husband, David. (Julie has only one husband, so his name is only informative.)

      Do not confuse nonessential clauses and phrases with descriptive adjectives: Julie and husband David went shopping. Julie and her husband, David, went shopping.

      Dashes – Use long dashes but only when necessary to set off inserted matter where the break in thought is abrupt.

      Hyphens – Use to avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words: The president will speak to small-business men. (Businessmen normally is one word, but small businessmen is ambiguous.) He re-covered the leaky roof. He recovered his health. He viewed the re-creation of the event. He went to the recreation center.

      When a compound modifier two or more words that express a single concept precedes a noun, use hyphens to link all the words in the compound except the adverb very and all adverbs that end in ly: a first-quarter touchdown, a bluish-green dress, a full-time job, a well-known man, a better-qualified woman, a know-it-all attitude, a very good time, an easily remembered date.

      Many combinations that are hyphenated before a noun are not hyphenated when they occur after a noun: The team scored in the first quarter. The dress, a bluish green, was attractive. She works full time. His attitude suggested that he knew it all.

      Use a hyphen to designate dual heritage: African-American, Italian-American, Mexican-American. Do not hyphenate French Canadian or Latin American.

      Use a hyphen to separate letters and figures when used in combination: A-1 rating, C-47 plane.

      However, in plane designations involving letter-number combinations omit the hyphen after the number: XB-70A.

      Parentheses and brackets – Use parentheses to insert explanatory matter except in quotations, where brackets are used. The insertion of bracketed material should be kept to a minimum.

      If parenthetical material runs more than one paragraph, use a parenthesis at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.

      Parentheses are used around party and state or hometown designations of members of Congress and Ohio or Michigan state legislators: Bill Smith (R., Monroe).

      Quotes – The chief fault is failure to close the quotation. General rules:

          • Use single quotes for quoted matter inside quotes. Return to double quotes inside single quotes.
          • In headlines, quote boxes, and all cutlines use single quotes.
          • For continuous quoted matter running more than one paragraph use quotes at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.
          • The above applies only to continuous quoted matter. Each reintroduction, such as he said, he added, he continued, makes it a new quotation, and the previous paragraph should end with quotation marks.
          • Use italic type , not quotation marks, for the titles of plays, movies, books, operas, paintings, video games, TV shows and series and their episodes. Use quotation marks with slogans, songs, poems, chapters, and articles. However, in headlines use single quotes for all titles.
            [Revised August 2016]

      Do not use quotation marks with names of dogs, race horses, magazines, newspapers, orchestras, dances, boats, ships, aircraft, estates, rail lines, nicknames of cities or states, or nicknames of athletic teams.

      Do not use quotes for symphonies, concertos, overtures, etc. For such works descriptive terms are in quotes within parentheses:
      Beethoven’ s Symphony No. 3 (“Eroica”). Beethoven’s Piano Concerto No. 5 (“Emperor”).

      An opus number goes in parentheses.

      Capital letters used alone to convey a definite meaning usually can stand without quotes: a grade of A, the Y campaign, vitamin B.

      Use partial quotations only when the words are especially emphatic or pertinent: He said the Chinese attacked with a “savage butchery unknown in modern times.”

      Avoid using quotes on single words as well as new words or phrases and on those used in an unorthodox or figurative sense.

      Commas and periods go inside quotation marks; colons and semicolons go outside.

      Question marks and exclamation points go inside the quotation marks if they belong with the quoted matter, outside if they belong to the main sentence: He asked: “Is it time to go?” Did he say, “It is time to go”?

      Do not use quote marks to mean inches. Spell out inches when writing 3 inches of snow fell.

      Semicolons – The semicolon is used to separate items in a series when commas are included in the items. When a series of semicolons is used, end the series with a semicolon, not a comma: Jane Doe of 1616 Elm St.; Dick Jones of 1414 Hall St.; Becky Smith of 1313 Duke St. Use it to separate parts of a sentence when a more definitive break than the comma is called for; do not use a conjunction after the semicolon.

      In headlines that contain more than one verb separate the verbs by commas if they have the same subject, by semicolons if they have different subjects.

      Troops move through Sudan, put dissidents under arrest
      Storms kill 303; floods maroon 200

      puns – Avoid making a pun on a person’s name. See headlines.

      pupil, student – Avoid pupil. Student is preferred for all grades.



      Q

      quarter mile, quarter-mile, quarter-miler –  noun, adjective, runner. See half.

      queen –  Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain. See titles – royalty and nobility.

      quoteboxes –  Used to break up blocks of type and to highlight a remark from an article. One caution: Check the material after it is typeset to ensure that a quotation mark does not occupy a line by itself.

      quotes –  See also punctuation.

      Full quotes are preferable to partial quotes. But do not use full quotes if they have to be explained. Especially, don’t try to overdo an explanation when the context of the story has told the reader enough to know what is involved.

      This example came from the AP, but our reporters and other wire services use similar useless extra words:

      Ms. Brookner said Mrs. Hanssen asked her to issue a statement because she felt she could speak out after the plea agreement. “She feels terrible. I don’t think she can feel any worse, any more devastated,” said Ms. Brookner, describing Mrs. Hanssen’s emotions.

      Doesn’t the quote convey her feelings enough to avoid the redundancy? The same thing happens when a writer ends a quote and proceeds with, “referring to” or “said of.” To avoid this type of construction, the quote may have to be slightly altered and the speaker or subject matter introduced before the quote. Example:

      “Julie was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free,” Dr. Jones said of Julie Newman, referring to her problem of deciding on a divorce.

      The reader doesn’t know what is happening until the explanation. More clear and easier to read would be: Julie Newman was having a problem deciding on a divorce, Dr. Jones said, but she knew she “was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free.”

      Do not delete the words spoken in quotes and substitute more specific words in brackets. In quotes in which the meaning of a word is not clear, put the word in brackets, but leave the words that the person said:

      Correct: “We were going to do it [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

      Incorrect: “We were going to [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

      Qur’an – Sacred book for those of Muslim faith.



      R

      racial, national designations  –  Avoid designating a person’s race or nationality unless it is pertinent to the story. A naturalized citizen of the United States is an American regardless of birthplace. The hyphenated form, such as African-American or Mexican-American, may be used if pertinent.

      rack, wrack – The noun rack is a framework; the verb means to arrange on a rack, to torture, trouble, or torment: She racked her brain.

      The noun wrack means ruin and generally is confined to the phrase wrack and ruin. The verb wrack is the alternate spelling of the preferred rack.

      raise, rear – One raises livestock but rears children.

      rake-off

      ratio – See margin.

      rat race

      RBI, RBIs – Abbreviation for run batted in in baseball.

      re as prefix – Do not hyphenate except when the second part of the word begins with e or is a proper noun. Use a hyphen to indicate a meaning different from the common one-word form: recreation, re-creation; reform, re-form.

      Realtor – Use real estate agent unless there is a reason to indicate that the individual is a member of the National Association of Realtors.

      rebut, refute – Rebut means to argue to the contrary: He rebutted his opponent’s statement. Refute means to prove to be false or erroneous: Scientists refuted the contention that the world is square.

      recollect, remember –  To recollect is to recall to memory; to remember is to retain in memory.

      recur

      redundancy –  Avoid using the same words and phrases: craft a bill, create a committee, faces charges. Also, avoid repeating a word or phrase in several graphs or throughout the story.

      reign, rein –  Reign is the period a ruler is on the throne: The king began his reign. The leather strap for a horse is a rein, hence figuratively: seize the reins, give free rein to, put a check rein on.

      religious terms –  Some guidelines:

          • Mass is celebrated, said, or read. High Mass is sung.
          • Rosaries are recited or said, never read.
          • Celebrant refers to a person conducting a religious rite.
          • The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Utah, permits the term Mormon in referring to its members.
          • The Reorganized Church of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Independence, Mo., does not use the term Mormon. If in doubt as to which church is meant, do not use Mormon.
          • It is the United Methodist Church. The African Methodist Episcopal Church (AME) is a separate body.
          • It is incorrect to apply the term church to any Baptist unit other than a local congregation. The organization of Southern Baptists is the Southern Baptist Convention.
          • Organizational units of other denominations include diocese, archdiocese, area, synod, presbytery, etc. Check an official source for the accurate designation.
            replica – See model.

      revue, review –  A revue is a light musical stage show. Otherwise use review.

      Rh factor – Merriam Webster defines Rh factor as any of one or more genetically determined antigens present in the red blood cells of most persons and of higher animals and capable of inducing intense immunogenic reactions. Rh factor also is known as “Rhesus factor” because it was first discovered in the blood of Rhesus monkeys (small monkeys from India often used for experimentation).

      right field, right-field, right fielder – noun, adjective, ballplayer.

      right hand, right hander  –  nouns.

      right-hand, right-handed  –  adjectives.

      right of way, right-of-way  –  noun, adjective. Noun plural is rights of way.

      right wing, right-wing –  noun, adjective.

      right winger, right-winger   –  hockey player, political term.

      ripoff, rip off –  noun/ adjective, verb.

      rob, steal –  A person or place is robbed; the articles taken are stolen: Gunman robs bank. Gunman steals $10,000.

      robbery  See larceny.

      rodent  –  A gnawing animal, including rats and mice as well as beavers, muskrats, groundhogs, squirrels, and rabbits. Such animals as skunks and weasels are not rodents.

      roll call, roll-call – noun, adjective.

      round robin, round-robin  –  noun, adjective.

      roundup, round up –  noun/adjective, verb.

      rout, route – Rout as a noun means precipitous flight, a disastrous defeat, or a state of confusion. As a verb it means to put to flight or to defeat utterly. Route as a noun means course of travel or itinerary. The verb means to direct or to assign a course of travel.

      royalty  See nobility.

      rubber stamp, rubber-stamp  – noun, verb.

      Rumor(s) – Don’t use in stories or in headlines. We report facts or attribute news. The exception would be if the word is used in a quote. [Added April 2011]

      runner-up, runners-up
      Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. New name for the museum located in Fremont. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]


      S

      safe, safely –   “He arrived safely” means that there was no mishap in connection with his arrival. “He arrived safe” means he arrived in a safe condition.

      Sahara – Omit desert.

      said –  See attribution.

      saint –  St. is acceptable before names.

      St. Francis DeSales Church  [revised January 30, 2002]

      St. Francis de Sales High School  [revised January 30, 2002]

      St. Luke’s Hospital – On July 1, 2016, St. Luke’s became independent again. It is no longer affiliated with ProMedica. [Added November 2016]

      saving, savings –  Singular: The purchase was made at a saving of $100. Plural: The family’s savings amounted to $15,000.

      savior, Saviour –  common noun, Jesus Christ.

      Scholastic Assessment Tests – No longer Scholastic Aptitude Test.

      school bus

      school years

      sea gull –  There is no such bird. The bird is a gull, of which there are several varieties.

      SeaGate Convention Centre – The name of the downtown convention center in Toledo. Click here to go the convention center website. [revised Feb. 19, 2009]

      see –  Avoid the use of the word in cases like: Consumers will see their bills go up; parents will see their students’ grades go down; Monclova has seen the biggest percentage growth of any metro Toledo locale, etc. Avoid see in headlines as a substitute for foresee.

      self as prefix –  Always hyphenated.

      semi as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination a word beginning in i or a proper noun.

      send-off, send off  –  noun, verb.

      setup, set up –  noun/adjective, verb.

      sewage, sewerage –  As noun, sewage is waste matter; sewerage is a drainage system. Sewage may also be used as an adjective to refer to drainage, as in sewage system.

      shear, sheer –  The first means to cut; the second, precipitous or utter.

      Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475 in southwest Lucas County. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

      shot put, shot-putter, shot-putting

      shrank, shrunk –  Shrank is the past tense of the verb shrink, shrunk the past participle: He shrank from combat. The lake has shrunk to a mere pond.

      Shultz, Betty – Betty Shultz is a former member of the Toledo City Council , not Betty Schultz. [revised January 2013]

      shut-in –  noun/adjective.

      shutdown, shut-down –  noun, adjective.

      shutout, shut out –  noun/adjective, verb.

      Side Cut Metropark – Side Cut should be 2 words for the Metropark along the Maumee River’s west bank. [revised October 23, 2002]

      sign-up, sign up –  noun, verb.

      sit, set –  Sit is intransitive and does not take an object. Set is transitive and takes an object. Either may apply to people or things.

      sit-in –  noun.

      skin diver

      slowdown, slow down –  noun, verb.

      smaller –  See fewer.

      smart phone –  Two words in Blade style.

      Smithsonian Institution

      so-called –  adjective.

      so-so

      South – The southern United States.

      Southeast Asia – Comprises Burma, Cambodia, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, and Vietnam. See Far East.

      Southwyck Shopping Center – Defunct mall. Mall was not part of the name.

      spark plug –  noun.

      spectators, audience – Those who watch a performance are spectators; listeners form an audience. The crowds at sports events and motion pictures are spectators. Use audience for those attending speeches, lectures, spoken drama, concerts, opera, etc.

      speedup –  noun/adjective.

      split infinitives, verbs –  Splitting an infinitive no longer is considered a major literary crime, and many good writers do so. It is still better to avoid inserting adverbs, etc., between the parts of the verb. The test is how the sentence reads.

      split-up –  noun/adjective.

      spokesman – Our style is to use spokesman in all references. We do not use spokeswoman or spokesperson. [Added April 2011]

      sport utility vehicle – Preferred second reference,  SUV;  sport-utes can also be used. [revised Revised March 29, 2003]

      sprang, sprung –  Sprang is the past tense of spring; sprung is the past participle: He sprang to his feet. The trap was sprung.

      staffer –  Staff member is preferred.

      stanch, staunch –  The first means to stop the flow; the second firm or steadfast.

      standby –  noun/adjective.

      standoff

      The Star-Spangled Banner  [revised January 30, 2002]

      State Employment Relations Board  – Not State Employee Relations Board.

      State names – Follow these guidelines for using names of states in stories and datelines. Eight states are not abbreviated. They are Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas, and Utah.
      Below are the state abbreviations that would follow the city names that do not stand alone (Example for dateline: BIRMINGHAM, Ala) [Added July 2016]
      Ark. Mass. Okla.
      Calif. Mich. Ore.
      Colo. Minn. Pa.
      Conn. Miss. R.I.
      Del. Mo. S.C.
      Fla. Mont. S.D.
      Ga. Neb. Tenn.
      Ill. N.C. Vt.
      Ind. N.D. Va.
      Kan. N.H. W.Va.
      Ky. N.J. Wisc.
      La. N.M. Wyo.
      Md. N.Y.

      states’ rights

      stationary, stationery –  The first means immobile; the second, writing material.

      stay, stop –  A guest is staying, not stopping, at a hotel.

      step-up, step up –  noun, verb.

      Student – Student is preferred for all grades. Avoid using pupil.

      straits –  Difficulties.

      Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.), Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.) and Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. We should note an exception for East Broadway, which is different in that it is the “Broadway” in East Toledo and not the one that runs from South Toledo to downtown. [Updated April 2016]

      strong-arm –  adjective/verb.

      sub as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

      subpoena

      suffer, sustain, receive  –  A man suffers a broken leg. He does not sustain or receive a broken leg or have his leg broken.

      suit, suite –  One may have a suit of clothes, a suit of cards, or be faced with a lawsuit. There are suites of music, rooms, and furniture.

      Sunoco Mid-America’s Toledo refinery. No longer owned by Sunoco, Inc. and  the name of the facility is PBF Toledo Refining Co. PBF, a private equity firm, bought the facility from Sunoco in late 2010. It should be referred to as PBF Toledo Refining Co. [Added March 1, 2011]

      super as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

      superhero – One word [Added Nov. 2, 2016]

      survivors – In local obituaries, we shall include all people in the “survived by” listing, including those quoted or mentioned in the article.

      suspect, suspicion –  verb, noun: He suspected something was wrong. He had a suspicion something was wrong.

      swath, swathe – The first is a noun and is a mowed strip; the second a verb meaning to drape or wrap.

      Symphony – The Toledo Symphony is the local orchestra in northwest Ohio. Do Not refer to it as TSO in stories and headlines because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Added March 1, 2011]



      T

      table tennis  – Preferred term for Ping-Pong.

      takeoff

      takeover, take over –  noun/adjective, verb.

      Tam-O-Shanter – hockey/recreation center in Sylvania.

      TB – Acceptable for tuberculosis on second reference and in headlines.

      teenager –  one word

      telephone numbers –  Our policy of using telephone numbers in stories is that we don’t, with very few exceptions. If we do use one, the department head must be consulted and will be responsible for making sure the telephone number is absolutely necessary for the story and that the telephone number is correct.

      Telesystem, formerly Buckeye Telesystem,  is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

      that
      Use the conjunction that to introduce a dependent clause if the sentence is weak without it. There are no hard-and-fast rules but in general:

      That usually may be omitted when a dependent clause immediately follows a form of the verb “to say”: The president said he had signed the bill.

      That should be used when a time element intervenes between the verb and the dependent clause: The president said Monday that he had signed the bill.

      When in doubt, include that.

      that, which, who, whom –  Use the pronouns who and whom in referring to people and animals with names. Use the pronouns that and which in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without names.

      The Toledo Lucas County Public Library  NO HYPHEN. Change made in 2017.  [added September 2017]

      their, there, they’re
      Their is a possessive pronoun: They went to their house.

      There as an adverb indicates direction: We went there for dinner.

      There is a pronoun for constructions in which the subject follows the verb: There is no food on the table.

      They’re is a contraction for they are.

      Three SeaGate    [revised February 28, 2002]

      time designations

      Common sense should prevail in deciding how to designate specific hours in locations outside the eastern time zone:

      • When the time is significant, as in an earthquake, use either: 1 p.m. (San Diego time) or 10 p.m. PST.
      • When the time is pertinent, as with the live broadcast of an event, translate it into Toledo time: 9 p.m. (Toledo time).
      • In events of great historical significance both times may be pertinent: The document was signed at 4 p.m. Tokyo time (2 a.m. Toledo time.)

      time of day –  Avoid the redundancy of “Monday afternoon at 2 p.m.” or “tonight at 7 p.m.” Make it “at 2 p.m. Monday” and “at 7 tonight.” Use noon and midnight not 12 a.m. or 12 p.m.

      time element – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

      titles
      General guidelines:
      See also long titles

      Courtesy titles:
      Mr. and Mrs. are abbreviated whether used with full name or last name only.

      Use Ms. when requested by the woman. Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Ms. Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred. [Updated February 2021]

      DO NOT give a courtesy title to a person who has been convicted of a felony. On second reference, only the last name should be used. This is Blade style.

      Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

      DO NOT use a courtesy title with a coined or fanciful stage name to avoid appearing too literal. Meat Loaf and Little Richard, for example, keep their full names without title, in all references. [Added April 2014]

      Foreign individuals – Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. rather than attempt to give them the title used in their own language.

      Juveniles – Use the full name of people under the age of 18 on first reference: John Jones, Mary Jones. Do not use Mr. and Ms. with the last names of unmarried juveniles. On second reference the boy may be John, young Jones, or the Jones boy. She may be Mary, Miss Jones, or the Jones girl. Married juveniles are entitled to Mrs. and Mr.

      Entertainment, sports personalities
      Generally omit courtesy titles for movie, stage, television, radio, popular music, and sports personalities, including actors, directors, producers, coaches, players, and composers and performers of popular music.

      When the names of these people appear in regular news stories, the courtesy title may be used.

      When the names of non athletes appear on the sports pages, they should have a courtesy title on second reference.

      Magistrate – Do not use the title of Magistrate to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith. [Added April 2014]

      In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence. [Added April 2014]

      Music and literature – Use courtesy titles for living composers, authors, and musical artists in regular news copy. The courtesy title usually is not used in reviews.

      See names.

      Abbreviation guidelines:

      • Titles abbreviated with the full name: Sen., Gov., Rep. On second reference spell out Senator and Governor or use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss with the last name alone. Always use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss instead of Representative to save space. Ask women their preference: Miss, Ms., or Mrs. Do not presume.
      • For two or more people with the same title plural abbreviations may be used: Sens., Govs., Reps.
      • Do not abbreviate: Archbishop, Attorney General, Bishop, Cardinal, Congressman, District Attorney, President, Principal, Prosecutor, Secretary, Superintendent
      • Do not abbreviate: assistant, associate

      Limit titles preceding the name to three words: Secretary of State John Doe, but John Smith, assistant secretary of state for African affairs.

      Professional titles:
      Dr. is used ONLY for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians. Dr. should NOT be used for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. On second reference for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians, use the courtesy title Dr. For example, on second reference for Dr. Anthony Fauci, it would be Dr. Fauci.

      Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. DO NOT use Dr. for this group. If a person has an earned doctorate degree and it is a relevant element to the story, you can include this information. But DO NOT use the courtesy title Dr. [Updated 8/3/2020]

      Military guidelines:
      Abbreviations are given first, followed by second-reference usages, including alternatives,

      ARMY
      Commissioned officers: Gen. – General; Lt. Gen. – General; Maj. Gen. – General; Brig. Gen. – General; Col. – Colonel; Lt. Col. – Colonel; Maj. – Major; Capt. – Captain; 1st Lt. – Lieutenant;   2nd Lt. – Lieutenant;

      Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer/Mr.; WO – Warrant Officer/Mr.;

      Enlisted personnel: Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Command Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Platoon Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. 1st Class – Sergeant; Spec. 7 – Specialist/Mr.; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 6 – Specialist/Mr.; Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 5 – Specialist/Mr.; Cpl. – Corporal; Spec. 4 – Specialist/Mr.; Pfc. – Private; Pvt. 2 – Private; Pvt. 1 – Private [revised May 14, 2004]

      NAVY, COAST GUARD
      Commissioned officers: Adm. – Admiral;  Vice Adm. – Admiral;    Rear Adm. –  Admiral;  Comm. – Commodore;    Capt. – Captain; Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. – Lieutentant;  Lt. j.g. – Lieutenant;  Ens. – Ensign/Mr.

      Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer;   WO – Warrant Officer

      Enlisted personnel :  CPO – Chief Petty Officer/Mr.;  PO 1st Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;   PO 2nd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.; PO 3rd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;  Seaman –   Mr.;  Seaman Apprentice – Mr.;   Seaman Recruit –   Mr.

      MARINE CORPS
      Commissioned officers: Same as army.

      Warrant officers: Same as navy.

      Others: Sgt. Major – Sergeant; Master Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant;   Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant;  Staff Sgt. – Sergeant;  Sgt. – Sergeant;   Cpl. – Corporal;  Lance Cpl. – Corporal;  Pfc. – Private;   Pvt. –  Private

      AIR FORCE
      Commissioned officers: Same as army.
      Enlisted personnel: Chief Master Sgt. – Sergeant;
      Senior Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Tech. Sgt. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. – Sergeant; Senior Airman – Airman/Mr.; Airman 1st Class – Airman/Mr.;   Airman – Airman/Mr.;    Airman Basic  – Airman/Mr.

      Police titles – Use military style for captain, lieutenant, sergeant. Below these ranks use officer. Titles will be abbreviated on first and subsequent references.

      Prominent individuals
      The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln and, Jefferson.

      Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

      Religious titles

      Protestant uses
      The Rev. John Jones on first reference, The Rev. or Pastor Jones on second. Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones, or Dr. Jones (if applicable) on second reference.

      An Episcopal deacon or priest is the Rev. John Jones on first reference, the Rev. Jones on second reference. Some Episcopal rectors prefer to be called Father.

      A dean is the Very Rev. John Jones on first reference, Dean Jones on second.

      An Episcopal bishop is Bishop John Adams on first reference, Bishop Adams or Dr. Adams (if applicable) on second. This rule also applies to archbishops.

      Roman Catholic uses
      Do not use the name of or the abbreviation for a religious order after a member’s name. The Rev. John Jones on first reference, Father Jones on second reference. Do not refer to a Catholic priest as Mr.

      A monsignor is Mgsr. John Jones on first reference. On subsquent references, it should be Monsignor Jones. [Updated December 2017]

      Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones on second.

      Archbishop John Jones on first reference, Archbishop Jones on second unless he is a cardinal.

      A cardinal is Cardinal John Jones on first reference, Cardinal Jones on second. The title cardinal takes precedence over archbishop: Cardinal Terence Cooke, archbishop of New York.

      A Roman Catholic nun is usually Sister Mary Magdalene Jones on first reference, Sister Mary or Sister Mary Magdalene on second reference. However, usage varies both among and within orders, so personal preference should be verified and noted with “cq” in the story. Always spell out Sister when referring to a member of a religious order.

      Eastern Orthodox rites
      Clergy at the parish level use the Rev. Michael Elias on first reference, Father Michael on second reference.

      Archimandrite is an honorary title for priests, similar to monsignor in the Roman Catholic Church: Archimandrite Jones or the Right Rev. John Jones, subsequently Father John.

      Above the parish level usage varies:

      Antiochian Orthodox Church –  a metropolitan is an archbishop and the church uses both titles: Metropolitan Archbishop John Jones, subsequently Archbishop John.

      Greek Orthodox Church – Archbishop, Metropolitan, and Bishop.

      These titles are used with geographical area: archbishop of North and South America; metropolitan of New Jersey, bishop of Detroit diocese.
      Jewish uses: Rabbi James Wise, subsequently Rabbi Wise or Dr. Wise (if applicable).  Cantor Harry Epstein, Cantor Epstein, Mr. Epstein.
      Christian Science uses: Practitioner, Lecturer, Reader. (Do not use Rev. in any form.) Use Mr., Mrs., or Miss on second reference.

      Royalty and nobility:

      Kings and queens are referred to by first name in most cases: Queen Elizabeth II, or Queen Elizabeth; King Hussein, or Hussein. Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain.

      A British knight or baronet carries the title Sir before his full name on first reference: Sir Henry Smith. On second reference: Sir Henry. Do not use double titles or descriptions such as General Sir or Spokesman Lt., Surgeon Dr., Coroner Dr., or Leader General.

      The same applies to ladies carrying the title Dame, the feminine equivalent of knighthood: Dame Mary Brown, Dame Mary.

      Among members of the peerage (baron, viscount, earl, marquis, duke) usage varies. When the family name is different from the title, the correct form is John Churchill, Duke of Marlborough, or the Duke of Marlborough on first reference. Subsequent references could be Lord John, Lord Churchill, the Duke of Marlborough, or just Marlborough. When the family name and title are the same, the first name ordinarily is not used even on first reference: Field Marshal Viscount Montgomery. On second reference use Marshal Montgomery or Lord Montgomery.

      The wife of a knight or baronet is referred to as Lady with either the last name or her first name.

      Wrong-way drivers –  Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

      Toledo Area Metroparks  – DO NOT USE. Correct style on first reference is Metroparks Toledo. Metroparks is one word, no hyphen, no capital p.  On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks. [revised September 2017]

      Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority  –  Not Toledo Area Regional Transportation Agency. On second reference, TARTA.

      Toledo Arena Sports Inc. – A non-profit organization set up for the teams (Toledo Walleye, Bullfrogs) that play in the downtown arena, now called Huntington Center. [Added April 16, 2010]

      Toledo Edison Co.  – See FirstEnergy Corp. (revised January 21, 2003)

      Toledo Express Airport – Do NOT use this name on first reference to the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The new name for the airport is Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport.  The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]

      Toledo Metropolitan Area Council of Governments – TMACOG.

      Toledo Mud Hens — Mud Hens is two words. The Mud Hens are a professional baseball team in the International League. The Triple-A baseball club is affiliated with the Detroit Tigers of Major League Baseball.
      Top executives of the Toledo Mud Hens
          • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
          • Erik Ibsen is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Mud Hens. [Added June 2015]

      Toledo Symphony – The correct name for the local orchestra. On second reference, use symphony. Do NOT use TSO, because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Updated March 2011.]

      Toledo Walleye – A professional hockey team with the ECHL, formerly the East Coast Hockey League. ECHL is a developmental league for the American Hockey and the National Hockey League. The Walleye are affiliated with the AHL’s Grand Rapid Griffins and the NHL’s Detroit Red Wings. Walleye is a collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated.
      Top executives of the Toledo Walleye
          • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
          • Neil Neukam is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Walleye. [Updated June 2015]

      tongue-tied

      top-heavy

      topsy-turvy

      tortuous, torturous –  The first means twisting; the second means torturing.

      toss-up, toss up –  noun, verb.

      toward –  Without s in all uses. (NOT towards)

      Trademarks – A trademark is a brand, symbol, word, etc., used by a manufacturer or dealer and protected by law to prevent a competitor from using it. For example, Kleenex is the trademark for a facial tissue; BUBBLE WRAP (all caps) is the trademark for protective packaging and Dumpster is a trademark for a trash hauling bin.

      In general, use a generic equivalent unless the trademark name is essential to the story. When a trademark is used, capitalize it.

      The International Trademark Association’s Trademark Checklist is a helpful source of information about trademarks.

      Click here to go the INTRA’s Trademark Checklist

      Tranquility

      trans as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun. Transatlantic and transpacific are exceptions.

      trod –  past tense of tread.

      tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

      tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

      T-shirt

      trustee, trusty –  A member of a board of trustees or a person entrusted with something is a trustee. A convict granted certain privileges is a trusty (plural: trusties).

      try to –  Write “I will try to win” not “try and win.”

      Two SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]


      U

      Ukraine,  NOT the Ukraine

      ultra as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

      U.N. – Acceptable on second reference.

      under as prefix –  Do not hyphenate.

      under way

      unique –  One of a kind; nothing is more unique or most unique.

      University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

      University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital. Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [Revised May 12, 2015]

      Upper Peninsula



      V

      V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

      Valentine Theatre  [revised January 30, 2002]

      venal, venial –  The first means mercenary; the second, pardonable.

      vertebra, vertebrae – singular, plural.

      Veterans’ Glass City Skyway – Official name for the cable-stayed bridge and viaduct carrying I-280 over the Maumee River. Opened to traffic in June 2007. Note position of apostrophe in first word of name.  [revised November 2007]
      vice as auxiliary –  Do not hyphenate.

      vice, vise –  The first is a serious fault of character; the second a tool.

      vice versa

      victim – Do not use this word in referring to people who have a disabling disease or physical or mental impairment.

      videocassette, videotape –  Other video combinations are two words: video game.

      Video game titles – Italics in body type and single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

      Viet Cong, Vietnam, Vietnamese

      vocal cords



      W

      wait, await – Wait is intransitive; await transitive: He waited for four hours. They eagerly awaited his arrival.

      waive, wave – Waive means to relinquish or forgo: The defendant waived a preliminary hearing.  The verb wave generally means to move in the breeze or to signal a greeting.

      Walleye – East Coast Hockey League or  ECHL team. Walleye is collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated. [added November 2009]
      walleye – Freshwater perch-like fish native to most of the northern United States and Canada. Walleye fishing is popular in the Maumee River.

      Walmart –  The company’s name is now Walmart Inc. (spelled with NO hypen and NO capital M). Its stores are called Walmart. Please be careful when editing a story or writing a headline to use the proper spelling as sometimes the news services have it incorrect. [Updated March 2018]

      war game, war zone –  Other usages are one word: warplane, warship, wartime.

      water bed

      weapons –  An automatic is a pistol designed for automatic or semiautomatic firing. Its cartridges are held in a magazine. A machine gun is an automatic gun, usually mounted on a support, that fires as long as the trigger is depressed. A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun.

      weather terms

      • The designations watch and warning are attached to a number of weather conditions.
      • A watch is an alert to the possibility of a dangerous weather event. A warning is issued when a dangerous weather event is imminent or in progress.

      The following definitions are based on National Weather Service usage:

      • blizzard – Wind speeds of 35 mph or higher and considerable falling and/or blowing snow with visibility near zero. See severe blizzard.
      • cyclone –  Sometimes used in the United States to mean tornado and in the Indian Ocean area to mean hurricane. To avoid confusion use the more precise words.
      • dust storm –  Visibility of one-half mile or less, wind speeds of 30 mph or more.
      • flash flood –  A sudden, violent flood.
      • flood –  Stories about floods usually tell how high the water is and where it is expected to crest. Such a story should also list flood stage and state how high the water is above or below flood stage.
      • freezing drizzle, rain – Drizzle or rain that freezes on objects as it strikes them.
      • funnel cloud – A violent rotating column of air that does not touch ground.
      • gale – Sustained winds from 39 to 54 mph (34 to 47 knots.)
      • hail, sleet –  Precipitation in the form of frozen pellets. Hail is larger and occurs during powerful thunderstorms in which strong vertical air currents lift and drop ice crystals that grow as moisture freezes onto them.
      • sleet, also known as ice pellets, is rain that freezes before it hits the ground because of sub-freezing air near the surface beneath warmer air aloft.
      • sleet is granular and occurs during winter or winter-like storms.
      • hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or higher. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line, typhoons west of the line. When a hurricane or typhoon loses wind speed, it becomes a tropical storm.
      • ice storm –  Reserved for significant and possibly damaging accumulations of ice.
      • severe blizzard – Wind speeds of 45 mph or more, great density of falling and/or blowing snow with visibility frequently near zero, and a temperature of 10 degrees or lower.
      • sleet –  See hail.
      • squall –  A sudden increase of wind speed by a least 16 knots lasting for at least one minute.
      • tornado –  A violent rotating column of air that touches the ground. It usually starts as a funnel cloud and is accompanied by a roaring noise.
        travelers’ advisory – An alert that difficult traveling or hazardous road conditions are expected to be widespread.
      • tropical depression, tropical storm –  The first is a tropical cyclone with maximum sustained surface winds of 38 mph; the second, with winds from 39 to 73 mph. See hurricane.
      • typhoon – See hurricane.
      • waterspout – A tornado over water.
      • wind chill index –  Describes the combined effect of the wind and cold temperatures.

      Web – As an abbreviation of World Wide Web, use Web, capitalized. Also,  Web page and Web browser, but it is website and webcam, webcast.  [Revised  June 23, 2005]

      website – One word and the “w” is lowercase. [Revised February 2015]
      website reefers
      There are three kinds of reefers that can be used in the newspaper to The Blade’s website. Each has a specific Web address.
      Here’s how they should be handled:
      • To reefer to a story, video, photo gallery, audio tape, or added documents or data on our website, use either the toledoblade.com logo or use this address in type: toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online.
      • To refer to a specific section online or to a specific writer or columnist online, use this type of address: toledoblade.com/sports or toledoblade.com/courts or toledoblade.com/davehackenberg. To do this, please verify the address to make sure it is correct.

      • To reefer to the eBlade, use the eBlade logo and this address: eblade.toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online. Please do not use just toledoblade.com, as that will make the reader then have to find the eBlade link and click on that.

      well-being

      well-wisher

      West Toledo

      Westfield Franklin Park – In second reference, Franklin Park is acceptable.

      wheelchair –  Do not refer to people who use a wheelchair as being wheelchair bound or confined to a wheelchair. See victim.

      where – Do not use where at.

      wide as suffix –  Do not hyphenate.

      Wi-Fi – Not WiFi, wifi, wi-fi or Wi-fi. [Added July 2011]

      wiggle, wriggle  –  Wiggle means to jiggle or oscillate, wriggle means to squirm.
      windup, wind up –  noun, verb.
      Wood Lane – Name sometimes used for the Wood County Board of Development Disabilities, based in Bowling Green. [Revised 7/17/2009]
      Woodville Mall
      work load, work force – Other usages are one word: workday, workweek, workplace.

      wrack –  See rack.



      X

      X-ray



      Y

      yoke, yolk  –  The first is a wooden bar by which two draft animals are coupled at the necks for working together; the second, the yellow inner mass of a bird or reptile egg.

      youth – Applicable to boys and girls age 13 through 17. Use man or woman after the 18th birthday.

      YouTube –  The “Y” and “T” are uppercase and YouTube is one word. YouTube is a video-sharing website where users can upload, share and view video clips. [Added May 2009]


      Z

      zeros, zeroes  –  plural of the noun, third person singular verb.

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This is the latest edition of The Blade Stylebook. Earlier editions were published in 1934, 1948, 1958, 1967, 1975, 1991, 1997, and 2000, and updated routinely after 2004 on the online stylebook on Your SOURCE.

Style comprises rules that govern punctuation and word usage. When carefully adhered to, it makes a newspaper more attractive and easier to read. This Stylebook codifies The Blade’s style and must be followed by all reporters and editors so that this newspaper will have a uniform voice.

All editorial employees are expected to learn and follow these guidelines and policies.

John Robinson Block, Publisher and Editor-in-Chief

Blade Style Committee
John Robinson Block
Kurt Franck
Kim Bates
Tony Durham



DO’S AND DON’TS

Although the ultimate responsibility for style rests with the copy desk, reporters should familiarize themselves with the contents of this book so that their copy will require less editing for common errors.

Getting names correct is vital. Do not hesitate to have the news source spell out all names on which there is any possibility of error.

In attributing statements it is preferable to use “he said” rather than “said he” unless this usage results in awkward constructions.

Be careful in using alternate words for “said.” For instance, a speaker may “point out” an accepted fact but not an opinion; “to indicate” means to intimate or to show indirectly and should not be used with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution. Once it has been established who is responsible for a speech or statement, attribution usually can be restricted to sensitive areas.

Avoid racial designations except where pertinent.

Do not use terms like “kids,” “tots,” “kiddies,” “lad,” or “lass” for children except in light features in which they are appropriate.

Do not use the title of “Magistrate” to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith.

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence.

Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Miss Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred.

In obituaries the age normally follows the name: John Jones, 57, of Main Street died Friday. However, in obituaries of prominent people in which the lead contains extensive identification the age may be used in a separate sentence: He was 57.  When family members ask that the age of a deceased person be omitted, we normally comply. (See names for additional obituary guidelines.)

Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) to designate the time element. Do not use today, yesterday, tomorrow, and last night. Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style in the printed newspaper and all our digital platforms.

In general, use the day of the week if the date is within seven days of the day of publication. Otherwise use the calendar date. Do not use “last” and “next” with a day of the week. This also applies to months.

In a series of dates, reporters should clarify in notes mode the calendar dates.

When a.m. and p.m. are used, be sure there is no repetition. “At 2 p.m. Monday afternoon” is redundant, as is “7 p.m. tonight.” Noon and midnight are sufficient.



REPORTING SPEECHES

It is essential that a report on a speech convey the same emphasis the speaker intended the speech to convey, not a different emphasis the reporter may consider more important or more newsworthy.

While direct quotations can help to illustrate or emphasize significant points a speaker makes, they generally should be used sparingly. The reporter should be able to convey the speaker’s intent more accurately and succinctly with indirect quotations, summary, and interpretation.

When used, direct quotations should be the words of the speaker and should not be changed arbitrarily to conform to Blade style. If the speaker uses bad grammar or unacceptable words, paraphrase the statement unless the error was intentional to emphasize a point or the usage is significant in itself.

If a speaker makes a particularly newsworthy statement outside the main thrust of the speech (examples: a parenthetical or off-the-cuff comment during the course of the speech or an answer to a question afterward), the statement should be reported in a way that makes the context clear, either in the story on the speech or in a separate story.



SOURCES

The use of anonymous or unidentified sources should be avoided because it undermines the credibility of The Blade. Readers who are suspicious of what we report have greater reason to distrust information when we can not tell them where we got it. Reporters must make every effort to get information on the record, that is, with the source willing to be quoted by name.

The use of anonymous sources is sometimes necessary, but there must be a discussion with your supervisor, who will then discuss with the managing editor, executive editor or an assistant managing editor. Anonymous sources ought to be use sparingly, and not because someone asked “to remain anonymous.”

Again, the use of anonymous sources requires the approval of the managing editor or executive editor before they can run in the newspaper.



LIBEL

A publication is libelous if its information is false, it identifies a person (or organization or product) to any reader, and its natural effect is either to make the reader think generally less of the person (or organization or product) or to affect adversely its business or profession.  There are three kinds of libelous damage:  harm to reputation and good name;  harm to right to enjoy social contacts; harm to business, occupation, or professional  status.

Some of the main defenses against libel are:
·        Truth (plaintiff must generally prove falsity on matters of public concern).
·        Privilege of reporting legislative, judicial, or other public official records and proceedings (provided the report is fair, impartial and accurate, contains no extraneous matter that is libelous, and no malice is present).
·        Expressions of opinion (provided an opinion is expressed instead of fact, facts on which the opinion is based are not defamatory, no malice is present).
·        The New York Times, or constitutional, rule (allows printing in good faith defamatory falsehoods against public officials or public figures as long as knowledge of falsity or reckless disregard or serious doubt about truth is not present; public figures are those with general fame or notoriety in the community or those who have thrust themselves to the forefront of a public controversy to influence the outcome).

Other defenses include statute of limitations (one year in Ohio), privilege of a participant in an official proceeding, consent or authorization, and neutral reportage.

But malice can destroy many of these defenses.  Under The New York Times rule malice is reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth or knowing use of falsities to inflict harm on a public official or public figure. In other cases malice is gross carelessness, personal ill will, or extreme falsity. Plaintiffs must prove malice.

In addition Ohio and most other states allow private persons to collect actual damages by showing fault or negligence rather than having to prove actual malice, but actual malice must be proved for private persons to recover punitive damages.

And there are partial defenses to reduce damages such as retractions, stories friendly to the plaintiff, corrections, reasonable cause to believe the charge, use of wire service copy, provocation, heat of a campaign, mistaken target, care in preparing the story, proof of plaintiff’s bad reputation.



PRIVACY

Invasion of privacy is violating a person’s right to be let alone, to be free from unwarranted publicity.

The four types of privacy invasions and the defense or defenses for each are:

Appropriation – Unauthorized taking of someone’s name, picture, or likeness or personality for commercial gain.

Defense – Consent, provided it is timely, not given by a minor or incompetent or other unauthorized person, covers items that haven’t been materially altered, and doesn’t otherwise violate the right to publicity (a person’s right to control exploitation of own name or likeness).

Intrusion – Intrusion into private activities, such as stealing or breaking and entering, snooping with hidden cameras or recording devices, trespassing on private property, wiretaps.

Defense: Consent or implied consent.

Private facts – Publishing true personal material that is not of legitimate concern to the public.

Defense – Consent (which can be revoked) and newsworthiness (including nature of story, status of subject, time lapse, intimacy of revelation, degree of embarrassment).

False information – Publishing untruths, whether defamatory or not, by fictionalization (embellishing an otherwise true story with falsehoods) or putting a person in a false light (unintentionally giving a false impression of someone).

Defense: Truth, consent, New York Times rule (plaintiff must show actual malice, reckless disregard of or serious doubt about the truth).


HANDLING CRIME NEWS

In recognition of its responsibility to report news of crime and the potential problems associated with such reporting, The Blade has adopted these guidelines, which grew out of a cooperative effort between the Toledo Bar Association and the newspaper in 1966. The objective is to provide the public with pertinent information while avoiding publicity that might unduly interfere with the rights of defendants.

In criminal arrests use:
The name, age, and block and street address for the suspect. NOT the exact address [REVISED August 2015]
A description of the crime.
The specific legal charge.
How the arrest was made, when, and where.
Whether a grand jury has returned an indictment and a trial date has been set.
Some practical rules:
Crime stories should be based on information that can be documented, such as the police log, affidavits, warrants, and indictments.

Statements by investigators and attorneys, information from supplemental reports, etc., should be gathered but used with caution to avoid damaging a suspect’s rights.

The same caveat applies to information from witnesses unless they are under oath.

Do not say somebody will be charged with a crime. Wait until a charge is filed. You can say someone is being questioned in the investigation of a crime if you know that to be so, but being interrogated does not necessarily make a person a suspect.

When describing the events during a crime, do not link them with the suspect. Instead use terms such as “a man,” “a woman,” “the robber.”

Do not use the following types of information without supervisory approval:
Prior criminal record.
A confession.
Names of jurors selected for a particular trial.


CRIME VICTIMS

The names of victims are used except in sex-related crimes.

Omit addresses of victims unless they are pertinent to the story. Instead, use the age and general area of residence (West Toledo, near north side, etc).

Extreme caution must be used in reporting incest cases to protect the identity of the victim.

Full identification is used when the victim is dead.


A

a, an  –  Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. Thus, a habitual criminal, a historic occasion; an herb, an heiress.

When the article a or an is to precede a word or phrase beginning with a figure, be guided by pronunciation: a 1-year-old, an eight-point program, an 80 percent average, a 30-cent purchase, etc.

AARP  – The official name of the American Association of Retired Persons. It should be used alone in all references.

abbreviations
The following guidelines apply:

All months except March, April, May, June, and July are abbreviated when used with dates.
Days of the week are never abbreviated.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.),  Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.), Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. [Revised February 2016]

Terrace, Lane, and Way are always spelled out. Even in addresses, Terrace, Lane, and Way should be spelled out. For example, 23 Bethesda Terrace. [Revised December 2014].

Abbreviate north, east, south, and west in street names: 300 S. Detroit Ave. [Revised November 2011].

Do not use street, etc., generically in a formal address. Do not guess: Check the Polk directories and telephone book blue pages for the correct name. Resolve discrepancies relying on the telephone book or by checking with the municipality.

Highways are designated in the following manner: I-75, U.S. 23, State Rt. 20 for Ohio and all other states except Michigan, where the style is M-50. Spell out county and township roads: North County Road 5.

Company names should not be abbreviated unless the form is familiar, O-I for Owens-Illinois, GM for General Motors Co., and GE for General Electric. L-O-F is used for Libbey-Owens-Ford in historical stories. It no longer exists. It’s Pilkington PLC’s North American subsidiary.  [revised January 30, 2002]

The word building should be spelled out unless used as part of an address that includes a number: 614 Spitzer Bldg., Spitzer Building. Capitalize building only when it is part of the formal name: Safety Building, The Blade building.

Fort and mount are not abbreviated, except in headlines, unless the abbreviated name is the formal designation.

States are abbreviated in the following manner:
Ala.; Alaska; Ariz.; Ark.; Calif.; Colo.; Conn.; Del.; Fla.;   Ga.; Hawaii; Iowa; Idaho; Ill.; Ind.; Kan.; Ky.; La.; Mass.;     Md.; Maine; Mich.; Minn.; Miss.; Mo.; Mont.; N.C.; N.D.;   Neb.; Nev.; N.H.; N.J.; N.M.; N.Y.; Ohio; Okla.; Ore.; Pa.;  R.I.; S.C.; S.D.; Tenn.; Texas; Utah; Va.; Vt.; Wash.;  Wis.;  W.Va.; Wyo.

Canadian provinces are abbreviated in the following manner. It is not necessary to add Canada.

Alberta; B.C. (British Columbia);  Man. (Manitoba);  N.B. (New Brunswick); Nfld. (Newfoundland);  N.S. (Nova Scotia);  Ont. (Ontario);   P.E.I. (Prince Edward Island);  Que. (Quebec);  Sask. (Saskatchewan)

Do not abbreviate the name of a state or Canadian province except after municipalities. In referring to counties, parks, lakes, mountains, or other geographical features, use the full name of the state:

Franklin County, Ohio; Bedford Township, Michigan; Yosemite National Park, California; Round Lake, Minnesota (if there is a post office bearing the same name as the lake, the state abbreviation may be used); Fort Bragg, North Carolina.

Nations are not abbreviated except USSR for the former Soviet Union. United States is abbreviated U.S. only as an adjective.

State and party designations of members of Congress follow this style: Rep. John Jones (R., Mich.); Sen. Jack Smith (D., N.Y.). Use the same state abbreviations as elsewhere.
Party designations other than Democratic and Republican should not be spelled out: Sen. John Smith (I, Va.).

For state legislators, use the same style except that the hometown must be spelled out: John Jones (R., Cincinnati) or State Sen. Mary Smith (D., Toledo).

Well-known members of Congress need not be identified in this manner on first mention. Later in the story the state and party can be inserted.

Percentages are abbreviated in headlines or tabular material with %. Always use percent in copy.

Academic degrees are abbreviated as follows:

  • BA – bachelor of arts
  • BS – bachelor of science
  • DDS –  doctor of dental science
  • JD –  doctor of laws
  • MA –  master of arts
  • MD –  doctor of medicine
  • PhD  –  doctor of philosophy When not abbreviating, use bachelor’s degree, master’s degree, doctor’s degree.  Doctorate is acceptable for doctor’s degree.

Do not use abbreviations of academic degrees after a person’s name.

Agencies and organizations are usually referred to by the full name on first reference, then by initials. The abbreviations do not require periods: ICC, FHA, SEC, SEATO, UNESCO, WHO.

Periods are used in the adjectives U.S. and U.N., which are spelled out as nouns except in headlines, tabular material, and tie-in cutlines.

Some organizations are so well known by their initials that the abbreviations may be used on first reference: NATO, FBI, CIA, AFL-CIO, UAW, YMCA (or Y), YWCA, GOP, NAACP.

abbreviations (con’t)
If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate.

In using U for university omit the period: UT, UM, BGSU.

Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

Miscellaneous: A.D. (Anno Domini), B.C. (Before Christ), mph, AWOL, KO (knockout), RBI (run batted in).

abolition – Do not use “abolishment.”

a capella

according to – Do not use this phrase when said will suffice. There are situations in which according to is appropriate: Jones started the fight, according to a signed statement by Smith. Never use with a direct quote.

AccuWeather, Inc. – In State College, Pa.

acoustics –  This word takes a singular verb when referring to the science but plural when referring to the sound qualities of a hall or other building: Acoustics is gaining new stature as a science. The acoustics of the new hall were praised by critics.

acronyms –  In general, avoid overuse of acronyms, especially those that are not well known. If the agency is unfamiliar or initials do not follow exactly the wording of the name, do not abbreviate. Do not create abbreviations for phrases such as leveraged buyout (LBO), as soon as possible (ASAP).

active or passive forms
In general the active voice is preferred.

Write “the work began,” not “the work was begun,” unless you want to emphasize who began it.

Write “the man’s leg was broken in a fall,” not “the man broke his leg.” The latter sounds as if he did it deliberately. Similarly, do not say “He had his license (or sentence) suspended.” Or “She had her degree suspended.” See had.

Write “the boy drowned in the creek,” not “the boy was drowned.” The latter implies murder.

adapt, adopt –  Adapt means to make suitable or modify; adopt means to take as one’s own. Example: The musical director adapted the old music; the college then adopted it as its official song.

ad nauseam

addresses –  Do not stop the reader’s flow with the use of commas. Jack Jones of 2145 Pond Circle. Not Jack Jones, 2145 Pond Circle.

For crime suspects, use the suspect’s block and street, but not the exact address. For example: Joe Smith, the 500 block of Douglas Road. [REVISED August 2015]

adopt –  Resolutions are adopted; bills are passed by legislative bodies.

adverse, averse – Adverse means unfavorable: He predicted adverse weather. Averse means reluctant, opposed: She is averse to change.

advice, advise –  noun, verb.

Adviser

affect, effect –  Affect should be used only as a verb. It means to act upon or influence. Effect as a verb means to bring about or accomplish. Effect as a noun means the result of an action. Example: The effect of the ruling was limited; it did not affect the litigants.

afterward –  Without s in all uses.

African-American –  hyphenated

agreement of subject and verb
Confusion on this point occurs chiefly with
(1) compound or complex subjects and
(2) collective nouns.

A compound subject (separate items usually connected by and or by commas and and) takes a plural verb: The governor and his escort were taken to the auditorium.

When the subject is a noun modified by a prepositional phrase, it is a complex subject and takes a singular verb: The governor, with his escort, was taken to the auditorium.

Collective nouns always have been a problem. Usage generally is to treat words like committee, government, class as singular: The committee offers the resolution.

However, when speaking of a committee, class, etc., acting as individuals, substitute “committee members” or “members of the class” and use a plural verb.

Sums of money always are singular: $100 was offered, $32.20 was the daily-double payoff, etc

Other words always considered singular are anybody, everybody, either, neither, headquarters, whereabouts.

Certain words ending in s but denoting a singular idea are treated as singular: mathematics, physics, politics. Examples: Mathematics is being subjected to new teaching approaches. Physics is the science of the hour. Politics receives expanded coverage in presidential election years.

aid, aide –  verb, noun.

air brake

air-condition, air-conditioned  –  verb, adjective.  The nouns are air conditioner and air conditioning.

airdrop, air-drop –  noun, verb.

airstrike –  One word.

Air Force

Alford plea – In an Alford plea, a defendant does not admit guilt but pleads guilty to a lesser charge to escape more severe penalties had the case gone to trial.

All-America, All-American – adjective, noun.

all right

all time, all-time –  An all-time high but the greatest runner of all time. Avoid the redundant phrase all-time or new record.

allude, refer –  We allude to something when we speak of it without direct mention; we refer to it when we mention it directly. Example: Although any direct reference to his deformity annoyed him, there were times when she felt it necessary to allude to it.

al-Qaeda – An international terrorist network led by Osama bin Laden. [revised 2002]

alumni, etc. –  Alumnus is the masculine singular, alumni the masculine plural, also used for a group including both sexes. Alumna is the feminine singular, alumnae the feminine plural.

A.D. – Anno Domini

another – It is wrong and unnecessary to use “another” in cases such as “council appropriated another $9 million for children” when the story does not say that $9 million has been appropriated for anything else. “Another” should be used only when it refers to something exactly like the first.

ante, anti –  As prefixes the first means before and never takes a hyphen. The second means against and usually takes a hyphen. A good rule is to use the hyphen when anti is joined with a word that could stand alone: anti-trust, anti-Semitic. See hyphenation.

anticipate, expect –  The words are not synonyms. It is one thing to expect an event, another to anticipate it by thought or deed. Examples: A record crowd was expected. The manager anticipated the record crowd by installing extra bleachers.

antiseptic, disinfectant – Antiseptics, such as hand sanitizers, are used to kill germs on living things. Disinfectants, such as bleach, are used on inanimate things, such as countertops and handrails. The adjective is disinfectant, not disinfecting. [Added April 2020]

apostrophes –  See punctuation

appraise, apprise –  Appraise means to set a value on. Apprise means to inform.

appropriate, expropriate, take –  To appropriate usually means to set aside for a special purpose. Do not use as a synonym for take or steal. To expropriate is to deprive of property, usually by government action.

ArenaHuntington Center is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. The arena opened in October 2009, and in April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights. [Updated June 2011]

Army

as if –  Should be used instead of like  as a conjunction: He ran as if a demon were pursuing him. See like.

attorney –  Technically, an attorney is someone (usually, but not necessarily, a lawyer) empowered to act for another. A lawyer is a person admitted to practice in a court system. Do not abbreviate.

attribution –  It is preferable to use he said rather than said he unless this usage results in awkward constructions. Be careful in using alternate words for said. A speaker ordinarily points out an accepted fact. To indicate means to intimate or to show indirectly and is not appropriate with a flat statement.

Avoid excessive attribution in stories with limited sources once the identity of the speaker is established.

audience –  See spectators.

auger, augur – An auger is an instrument for boring. Augur means to foretell; also a seer.

author –  Do not use as a verb. Mr. Smith is the author of “Time & Again.”

authoress, poetess, etc. – Drop the needless ess.

auto –  Automobile is preferred, but auto or car is permitted to avoid repetition.

automaker

automotive plants, local
The following is style for local automotive plants:
Formal name of Chrysler group is now FCA US LLC.

  • Toledo Assembly Complex makes Jeep Wrangler and Jeep Cherokee. [revised Dec. 2014.]
  • Toledo Machining Plant in Perrysburg Township (not just Perrysburg). [revised Oct. 25, 2007]
  • Dundee Engine Plant. [added August 2013]
  • General Motors Co.’s Toledo Transmission Plant; no longer Hydramatic or Toledo Powertrain.
  • Also in the area: GM Defiance Powertrain Plant;  Ford’s Lima Engine Plant;  [revised August 2013]

avoid, avert –  To avoid is to shun, to avert is to prevent: The driver averted the collision by avoiding the truck.

awhile, a while –  She plans to remain here awhile. She will remain for a while.

AWOL – A term that normally refers to military personnel who are absent from the ranks without having been given permission. A truant is one who skips school without permission.

axis –  Plural is axes.


B

BP Husky Refining LLC – Refinery located in Oregon, Ohio, and owned by BP PLC. [added Nov. 17, 2008]

BP PLC – The company no longer uses British Petroleum. Its refinery in Oregon is called BP Husky Refining LLC. [revised Nov. 17, 2008]

Baby Boomer – Uppercase, no hyphen.

back door, back-door –  noun, adjective.

back room, back-room –  noun, adjective.

back up, back-up –  verb, noun/adjective.

backward –  Without s in all uses.

backyard, back-yard –  Noun, adjective.

bad, badly –  The first is an adjective; the second an adverb: He feels bad (he is ill); he feels badly (his fingers are numb).

baleful –  Do not confuse with mournful or soulful. It means ominous.

Band-Aid – trademark, capitalize

banks, local

The following is the style for local banks:

  • Citizens Bank (absorbed Charter One Bank) is part of Citizens Financial Group Inc, which is based in Providence, R.I. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Fifth Third Bank (Northwestern Ohio) is based in Toledo and is part of Fifth Third Bancorp, based in Cincinnati). [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • GenoaBank, based in Genoa, Ohio, with several area branches. Bank name is one word, with capital “B.” [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Huntington National Bank – Northwest Ohio, is based in Toledo and is part of Huntington Bancshares Inc., based in Columbus. [Revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • KeyBank, based in Toledo, is part of KeyCorp, based in Cleveland. A branch can simply be called KeyBank (one word). [revised Feb. 9, 2017]
  • PNC Bank, based in Pittsburgh, is part of PNC Financial Services Group Inc. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Resolute Bank, based in Maumee. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Signature Bank, based in Toledo. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Union Bank, based in Columbus Grove, Ohio and owned by Union Banking Co. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
  • Waterford Bank, based in Sylvania. [Added Feb. 9, 2017]
No longer is there a Sky Bank (became part of Huntington) or National City Bank (became part of PNC). [Added Feb. 9, 2017]

BAX Global, Inc. – The proper name for what was Burlington Air Express.

B.C. – Before Christ.

beside, besides –  Beside means alongside. Besides means “in addition to.”

best seller

between –  Generally refers to two only. Use among for more than two.

Bible, bible – Capitalize when referring to the holy book of Christanity, including the Scriptures in the Old Testament or the New Testament. Capitalize also related terms such as the Gospels, Gospel of St. Mark, the Scriptures, the Holy Scriptures.

Lowercase bible as a nonreligious term: My dictionary is my bible.

bi, semi –  Bi means two; so biennial is every two years, bimonthly every two months, etc. Semi means half; so semiannual is every half year, or biannual is twice a year.

Big Three – Use Detroit Three when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Traditionally, GM, Ford,  and Chrysler were referred to as the Big Three in the auto industry. However, years ago, Toyota and Volkswagen took over two of those slots. So, the term to use should be Detroit Three automakers. Do NOT use Big Three for GM, Ford and Chrysler. [Added February 2017]

bird watcher

bird’s-eye

Blade carrier – Use independent contractor. Do not use Blade carrier. Do not use contract employee.

blizzard – Often misused to refer to any snowstorm. See weather terms.

bloc, block – Use bloc for a combination of parties or of countries. Block is correct for other uses.

Block Communications, Inc.  –  The parent company of The Blade. Block Communications, Inc. owns communications companies in Ohio, Michigan, Pennsylvania, Illinois, Indiana, and Kentucky. The company is based in Toledo, and the corporate headquarters is located at 405 Madison Ave, Toledo, OH 43604.

In Toledo, companies include : The Blade, Buckeye Broadband (cable and Internet; changed June 2016; BCSN and BCAN appear on Buckeye Broadband) and Telesystem (formerly Buckeye Telesystem).  Telesystem is a national voice, data, and security systems provider.

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband.  [Revised August 2019]

Other companies owned by BCI include the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette in Pennsylvania,  Erie County Cablevision in Sandusky, Ohio; WLIO-TV in Lima, Ohio, and television stations in  Kentucky (Louisville), Indiana, and Illinois. BCI also owns MaxxSouth Broadband in parts of Mississippi and Alabama; Libercus, a content management system/publishing system; and Toledo Detroit Outdoor (billboard company). On July 6, 2000, the parent company changed its name to Block Communications, Inc. It was previously known as Blade Communications, Inc.  [Revised August 2019]

Block News Alliance – The proper designation for writers from other Block Communications, Inc., properties when their work appears in The Blade.

BLOCK, Allan – Chairman of Block Communications Inc., parent company of The Blade. Use Allan (two “l”s in first name) Block with no middle initial on first reference.

BLOCK, Diana – Executive vice president of Block Communications Inc.. She is the daughter of William Block Jr. [Added August 2019]

BLOCK, John Robinson – Publisher and editor-in-chief of The Blade and the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. On first reference, use John Robinson Block. Use the “Robinson” middle name. Do NOT use a middle initial.

BLOCK, Susan – Wife of Block Communications Inc. chairman Allan and board member of BCI.  Do NOT use Susan Allan Block. On succeeding references, she is Mrs. Block. [Updated October 2018]

BLOCK Jr., William – Retired president and general manager of the Post-Gazette and co-publisher of The Blade and Post-Gazette. William Block Jr. is the father of Diana Block and the cousin of Allan Block and John Robinson Block. [Added August 2019]

blond, blonde –  Use blond as a noun for males and as an adjective for all applications: She has blond hair. Use blonde as a noun for females.

blowup, blow up –  noun, verb.

B’nai B’rith

Bombay – Formerly the name for the financial center in India. Blade style now is Mumbai. No longer use Bombay in datelines or stories. See entry for Mumbai. [added November 27, 2008]

booby trap, booby-trap –  noun, adjective/verb.

border line, borderline –  noun, adjective.

boyfriend

breach, breech –  Breach means a break or opening and is used in phrases like “a breach of faith,” ” a breach in the dike,” or “stepping into the breach.” Breech means the rear or hind portion, hence the breech of a gun, a breech delivery.

break-in, break in – noun, verb.

breakout, break out –  noun, verb.

bric-a-brac

bridge names
I-280 over Maumee River: Veterans’ Glass City SkywayState Rt. 65 over Maumee River (drawbridge formerly used by I-280): Craig Memorial BridgeCherry Street/Main Street over Maumee River: Martin Luther King, Jr. BridgeState Rts. 2/51 over Maumee River: Anthony Wayne Bridge (also known as High Level Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)I-75 over Maumee River: DiSalle Bridge (also known as South End Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)U.S. 20/State Rt. 25 over Maumee River: Fort Meigs Memorial Bridge (also known as Maumee-Perrysburg Bridge, but that term not to be used on first reference)
[revised November 2007]broach, brooch –  The first means to open or introduce; the second is an ornament.

broadcast – Past tense is broadcast.

Buckeye Broadband, formerly Buckeye CableSystem, is the cable and Internet company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Cablevision is the legal name for the company that operates Buckeye Broadband. Note the “v” in Cablevision is lowercase and Cablevision is one word. Only use Buckeye Cablevision when quoting from legal documents or court filings. Otherwise, use Buckeye Broadband. [Revised June 2016]

Buckeye Telesystem — NAME CHANGE — The correct name is Telesystem. It is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

buckshot, bird shot –  Buckshot is large-size shot. Bird shot is small-size shot and is much more common. A person would never be “peppered” with buckshot.

bull, steer –  A bull is a male bovine. A steer is a castrated bull, usually fattened for market.

bull’s-eye

bullet –  The bullet is the projectile portion of a rifle or revolver cartridge, which includes a casing containing an explosive charge.

burglary –  See larceny.

business name style   [revised January 30, 2002]

  • for Company,  use Co.
  • for Companies, use Cos.
  • for Corporation,  use Corp.
  • for Incorporated, use Inc.
  • for Limited, use Ltd.
  • for Limited Liability Corporation, use LLC (no periods)
  • for Limited Partnership  (like Cedar Fair), use LP (no periods)
  • for Public Liability Company (like BP or Pilkington), use PLC (no periods)
  • for Spanish, French or Italian companies using S.A., use SA (no periods)
  • for Dutch companies using N.V., use NV (no periods)

business name style (con’t)

In most cases, don’t capitalize a whole name of a company  (use Trinova instead of TRINOVA), and, with few local exceptions (such as The Andersons), we don’t capitalize The in a company name (it’s Rouse Co., despite its official The Rouse Co.).

by (as prefix) –  No hyphen in most combinations, such as bylaw, bypass. Some exceptions are by-play and by-product.

by as suffix –  Usually takes a hyphen, as in passer-by.

bylines – See credit lines.


C

cabby

caliber – See weapons

call-up, call up – noun, verb

Canada goose

cancel, canceled, canceling, cancellation

cannon, canon – A cannon is a mounted gun; a canon refers to an ecclesiastical law or a church official.

canvas, canvass – Canvas is a fabric; canvass means to solicit.

capital, capitol  –  Capital applies to all uses except capitol, which is a building used as a seat of government.

capitalization

Some basic principles:

In addition to proper nouns, capitalize common nouns such as river, party, street, and west when they are part of proper names: Monroe Street, Maumee River, Democratic Party.

Lowercase common nouns when they stand alone in subsequent references: the party, the river.

Lowercase the common noun elements of names in all plural uses: the Democratic and Republican parties, Main and State streets, lakes Erie and Ontario.

Breeds of animals – Follow the spelling and capitalization in Webster’s Third New International Dictionary. For breeds not listed there, capitalize words derived from proper nouns and use lowercase elsewhere: thoroughbred, Arabian mare, basset hound, Boston terrier.

Constitution, laws

Capitalize references to the U.S. Constitution, with or without the U.S. modifier.

When referring to the constitutions of other nations or of states, capitalize only with the name of a nation or of a state: the French Constitution, the Massachusetts Constitution, the nation’s constitution, the state constitution.

The city charter of Toledo and all other cities is lowercase.

The formal names of acts of Congress and the Ohio General Assembly are uppercase. When in doubt, lowercase. Bills before passage are lowercase: Taft-Hartley Act (or Law), but the labor act or the labor law; the Sherman Anti-Trust Act (or Law), but the Hawaii statehood bill.

Capitalize amendments to the U.S. Constitution: the First Amendment, the 14th Amendment. Also capitalize the Bill of Rights referring to the first 10 amendments.

Courts – Formal names of courts are capitalized: the Supreme Court of the United States (also the Supreme Court), Circuit Court of Appeals, U.S. District Court or District Court, Ohio Supreme Court, Lucas County Common Pleas Court, Toledo Municipal Court, Municipal Court. Also capitalize the formal names of a foreign nation’s courts.

Derivatives
Capitalize words that are derived from proper nouns and still depend on them for their meaning: American, Christian, English, Marxism.

Lowercase words that are derived from proper nouns but no longer depend on them for their meaning: scotch whiskey, french fries, brussels sprouts, china, india rubber, spartan, geiger counter, utopia.

Geographic terms
Capitalize nouns referring to recognized sections of the United States: the East, the South, the Midwest, East Coast, West Coast, Gulf Coast: The pioneers opened the West.
Capitalize Michigan’s Upper Peninsula and Lower Peninsula.

Capitalize East and West when referring to the eastern and western worlds; South Pacific, North Pacific, South Atlantic, North Atlantic; Far North, Arctic Circle, Antarctic Circle, the Arctic, North Pole, South Pole, Eastern Hemisphere, Western Hemisphere.

Capitalize sections of the city of Toledo and well-known sections of other cities: West Toledo, South Toledo, New York’s West Side, Chicago’s South Side.

Lowercase points of the compass when used as directions; state and province in expressions like New York state, the province of Manitoba.

Capitalize Earth when referring to the planet, otherwise use lowercase. Lowercase sun, moon.

Government

General principles for federal, state, and local governmental units:

Always lowercase, never abbreviate: the federal government, the state government, the U.S. government. Lowercase administration and cabinet but capitalize a specific: The Bush Cabinet.

Capitalize the official names of all federal and state government departments, agencies, and offices: the State Department, the Treasury Department, the Treasury, the Defense Department, the Department of State, Department of Defense, General Services Administration, Secret Service.

Social Security – Capitalize Social Security (Administration and Act) when referring to the U.S. system. Capitalize Medicare and Medicaid.

Capitalize all departments, divisions, agencies, and offices below the state level: Toledo Police Department, Chicago Fire Department, Board of Zoning Appeals, Toledo-Lucas County Plan Commission.

Capitalize Electoral College referring to the body that elects the president.

Capitalize the formal names of legislative bodies and their respective chambers with and without the state name.

Prominent individuals – The first name of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Here are the official designations of state legislative bodies:

  • General Assembly: Arkansas, Colorado, Connecticut, Delaware, Georgia, Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Kentucky, Maryland, Missouri, North Carolina, Ohio, Pennsylvania, Rhode Island, South Carolina, Tennessee, Vermont, Virginia.
  • Legislature:  Alabama, Alaska, Arizona, California, Florida, Hawaii, Idaho, Kansas, Louisiana, Maine, Michigan, Minnesota, Mississippi, Nebraska, Nevada, New Jersey, New Mexico, New York, Oklahoma, South Dakota, Texas, Utah, Washington, West Virginia, Wisconsin, Wyoming. [NOT Ohio]
  • Legislative Assembly: Montana, North Dakota, Oregon.
  • General Court – Massachusetts, New Hampshire.

Examples: Congress, the Senate and the House of Representatives; Ohio General Assembly, the General Assembly, the state Senate. Michigan Legislature.

In Ohio, the official name of the governing body is Ohio General Assembly. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.” In Michigan, the official name of the governing body is the Michigan Legislature, so that one is OK.
[Added May 2010]

Capitalize the names of full committees of Congress whether or not preceded by the name of the main legislative body: House Ways and Means Committee, Ways and Means Committee, Senate Foreign Relations Committee. Be certain of the full committee names. Ethics committee is a shortened, uncapped name. Subcommittees are not capitalized: a Senate military construction subcommittee.

The rule above applies to committees of state legislatures.

Capitalize all legislative bodies at the state and city level: Toledo City Council, Lucas County Commissioners, Spencer Township Trustees.

Capitalize the formal name of a foreign nation’s legislative body and its chambers both with and without the name of the country.

Holidays and observances – Capitalize names of holidays and observances, including day and eve in all uses: Christmas Day, Christmas Eve, New Year’s Eve, Labor Day.

Independent administrative agencies
Capitalize the formal names: Lucas County Mental Health Board, Lucas County Board of Mental Retardation, Children Services Board, Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority, Regional Emergency Medical Services of Northwest Ohio, Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority, Toledo Lucas County Public Library, Toledo Area Sanitary District, Lucas Metropolitan Housing Authority, Metroparks Toledo.

Military
Capitalize Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, Coast Guard and Merchant Marines, in all cases when we are referring to those branches of the United States military. Capitalize Joint Chiefs of Staff, lowercase the partial title joint chiefs.

Services of other countries are down: the Portuguese navy, the French air force.

Capitalize the names of all military decorations.

Organizations and institutions
Capitalize formal names: Trinity Episcopal Church, Rotary Club.

Capitalize Security Council, General Assembly, Food and Agriculture Organization, and other U.N. agencies when preceded by U.N.

Many specialized agencies, such as the U.N. Educational Scientific, and Cultural Organization, are referred to by initials: UNESCO, UNIFEM.

Capitalize union only if it is part of an official name: United Auto Workers union, American Postal Workers Union.

Personal titles
Capitalize formal titles when used immediately before names: Justice Andy Douglas, Chairman Lee Iacocca.

Lowercase formal titles when used alone or in constructions set off from names by commas.

Lowercase terms that are job descriptions rather than formal titles: Blade staff writer John Jones, plumber Jack Adams.

Capitalize the title for the U.S. President, Pope and Dalai Lama.

Capitalize Chief Executive when referring to the President. His wife is the First Lady.

Political parties
Capitalize the names of recognized political parties and their members: the Republican Party, Republicans; the Democratic Party, Democrats; the Socialist Party, Socialists, the Communist Party, Communists.

Lowercase terms referring to political philosophies and their followers: democracy, communism, socialist.

Write the Democratic National Committee and the Democratic National Convention.

Public buildings
Capitalize formal names of buildings and their rooms: Spitzer Building, Government Center, Ohio’s Statehouse, the Oval Office, the Versailles Room at the Toledo Club, the Summit Room of the Holiday Inn.

Lowercase words such as courthouse, jail, and embassy in most instances: Lucas County courthouse and Wood County jail, but U.S. Embassy.

Publications – Do not capitalize magazine unless it is part of the name: Time magazine, Toledo Magazine. Similarly, do not cap the in the name of a newspaper or wire service unless it is part of the formal name. The New York Times, The Plain Dealer, Detroit News, The Associated Press.

Races
Capitalize nouns and adjectives referring to races, nationalities, and regional groups: Oriental, Semitic, Buckeye, Yankee, Englishman.  Lowercase oriental in other uses: oriental rug, oriental cooking.

Capitalize African-American and Caucasian when used, as in direct quotes, but lowercase the preferred black and white.

Religious
Capitalize all nouns and pronouns referring to the Deity.

Capitalize sacred books such as Holy Bible, the Bible, Old Testament, New Testament, the Qur’an.

Capitalize Lent, Lenten, Rosh Hashanah, Yom Kippur, Ramadan, Sukkoth, Tet, etc.; Holy Communion, Eucharist. Mass, parts of the Mass such as the Credo, Gloria, Sanctus.

Capitalize Hades, Satan; lowercase heaven, hell, devil.

Capitalize church as part of the official name of a religious body or congregation.

Lowercase baptism, christening, biblical; day in Latter-day Saints and Seventh-day Adventists.
See titles for capitalization of religious titles.

Royalty, nobility
Do not capitalize titles when standing alone but do capitalize them when used with the name of the person: Queen Elizabeth, queen of England, the queen.

Honorary titles and titles of nobility are capitalized when they serve as alternate names: Lady Jane Wellesley, only daughter of the duke of Wellington, has been linked romantically with Charles, the prince of Wales. The duke is rumored to dislike the prince. See royalty.

Schools and colleges
Capitalize the proper name of a school district: Toledo Public Schools, Washington Local Schools, Penta County Joint Vocational School District, Whiteford Agricultural School District.

Capitalize the formal names of schools: Scott High School, Byrnedale Junior High School, Gateway Middle School, Harvard School, Coy Elementary School.

Capitalize formal names of colleges or universities: University of Toledo, Indiana University, University of Michigan. Lowercase subordinate colleges and divisions of universities: Harvard law school, Ohio State University history department.

Capitalize academic degrees only when abbreviated: BA (bachelor of arts), PhD (doctor of philosophy).

Ships, boats
Do not capitalize the word designating the classification of a ship or boat: battleship Missouri, aircraft carrier Saratoga, cruiser Toledo, etc. The same applies to words like schooner, yacht, ketch, etc.

In yacht racing, however, the racing class is capitalized: Comet, Vixen, Star, Thistle; the Star class yacht Arcturus, the Comet class sailboat Halley.

Time periods
Capitalize names of geologic and archaeological times: Cambrian, Paleozoic. Lowercase the generic word: Neolithic age.

Lowercase words such as baroque, classical, romantic except when referring to specific periods in art, literary, or music history.

Lowercase century: a 19th century poet; the Magna Carta was signed in the 13th century.

Lowercase daylight-saving time.

Titles of compositions – Capitalize the principal words in the names of books, movies, plays, poems, operas, songs, radio and television programs, works of art.

Treaties – Capitalize the official name. When in doubt, lowercase.

Wars – Capitalize Civil War, Revolutionary War (U.S. only), Korean War, Vietnam War, World War I, World War II, Persian Gulf War, WWI, WWII, etc. Do not capitalize variations, such as gulf war.

capture  – It is better and shorter to write the fugitive was captured than that he was apprehended. Seize is a permissible headline synonym for capture but avoid nab.

Carat, karat  – Carat is gem weight; karat is the fineness of gold.

carbon monoxide –  This poisonous gas is odorless, colorless, and flavorless. Do not refer to it as a fume. Write his death was caused by carbon monoxide poisoning or just carbon monoxide.

Casino – The casino that opened in May 2012 is called Hollywood Casino Toledo. Be sure to include Toledo, because is is part of the official name. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.
cave-in, cave in – noun/adjective, verb.
cease-fire – noun and adjective.

cement, concrete – Cement is an ingredient in concrete, Sidewalks, roads, etc. are made with concrete, not cement.

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention – Located in Atlanta, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is part of the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. On first reference, use Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Precede with national, federal or U.S. if needed for clarity. CDC is acceptable on second reference and it takes a singular verb.  [Added April 2020]

celebrant, celebrator – A celebrant is a person who officiates at a religious ceremony. A celebrator is someone having a good time.
center field, center fielder – nouns.
center-field – adjective.

Centerior Energy Corp. – see FirstEnergy Corp.

chairman,  – Do not use chair, chairwoman or chairperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Chairman Janet Smith, Chairman Bob Davis  (revised October 31, 2002)

chaise lounge

Charter Behavioral Health System – No longer Charter Hospital of Toledo.

checkup, check up – noun, verb.

chock-full

Chrysler Group LLC is now called FCA US LLC- Use it on first reference when referring to the new company. The parent company Fiat Chrysler Automobile N.V. Also, see automotive plants, local.
[Revised Dec. 17, 2014]

Toledo Assembly Complex (formerly Toledo Jeep Assembly complex)- Owned by FCA US  LLC. The complex is made up of two sets of plants, one that makes the Jeep Wrangler and the other makes the Jeep Cherokeee.  [revised Dec. 17. 2014].

See automotive plants, local.

claim – Do not use as a synonym for assert, declare, or insist. A good rule of thumb is to use claim as a verb only with a direct object: He claimed the prize.

clampdown, clamp down – noun, verb.

clarifications – See corrections.

Clarion Hotel – No longer the Sheraton Westgate.

Clazel Theater – New name of the historic theater in Bowling Green. Do not use Cla Ze or Cla-Zel. It’s one word: Clazel. It used to be hyphenated after the original owners Clark and Hazel, but that is no longer what it is called. [Revised October 2009]

clean-cut

cleanup, clean up – noun/adjective, verb.

clear-cut

cliches – Avoid old, inaccurate cliches: hammered out a contract; a sweeping bill; a massive tax cut; braved the rain, etc.

climactic, climatic – The first pertains to a climax: a climactic scene of a play. The second pertains to the climate: Some scientists predict severe climatic changes.

climax, culminate – Use climax as a transitive verb, culminate as an intransitive verb (with in): A banquet climaxed the day’s events. The day’s events culminated in a banquet.

close-up – noun and adjective.

closure – Most cases.

cloture – In legislative bodies.

co – Use the hyphen in compounds like co-defendant, co-sponsor, co-worker, and co-star. Other words, like copilot and correspondent, are not hyphenated.

coined verbs – In some cases coinages of verbs from nouns have become accepted: the couple vacationed; the family picnicked; the home was burglarized. However, some verb forms such as to impact and to prioritize are still not considered good usage. If in doubt, consult the dictionary.

coliseum, Colosseum – A coliseum is an enclosed arena. The Colosseum is the famed ruins in Rome.

Colombia – The South American country.

color-blind

come – Announcements, statements, wars, peace, cannot come.

comedown – noun.

commander in chief

commas – See punctuation.

Common Space – The arts organization called The Common Space, run by Martin Nagy, has two locations: Common Space in the former Glann School on Reynolds Road just north of Dorr Street, and Common Space Two, the former Martin School at Hill Avenue and Holland-Sylvania Road.

community-based corrections – This is the catch phrase for diverting inmates from costly medium and high-security facilities, such as the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility in Lucasville, to community alternatives, such as minimum security facilities, halfway houses, and house arrest with electronic bracelets, for example.

community-oriented policing – This is a return to the days when officers walked neighborhood beats. It is a style of policing that takes officers out of squad cars and mixes law enforcement with social work.

Companies
LOCAL     [revised Oct. 25, 2007]

  • The Andersons Inc., based in Maumee (The should be capitalized).
  • Cooper Tire & Rubber Co. (use ampersand), based in Findlay.
  • Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee [revised January 2017]
  • First Defiance Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • La-Z-Boy Inc. ( no Chair in the name), based in Monroe.
  • Libbey Inc. (no longer Libbey Glass), based in Toledo.
  • HCR ManorCare Inc., renamed/rebranded ProMedica Senior Care [October 2020]
  • N-Viro International Corp., based in Toledo.
  • Ohio Art Co., based in Bryan
  • Owens Corning  (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.
  • Owens-Illinois Inc., (use hyphen), based in Perrysburg. Second reference: O-I .
  • ProMedica (one word, M is capitalized), based in Toledo. [Added March 2019]
  • ProMedica Senior Care (previously HCR ManorCare Inc. [Added October 2020]
  • Rurban Financial Corp., based in Defiance.
  • Tecumseh Products Co., based in Ann Arbor [revised February 2011]
  • Welltower (previously Health Care REIT Inc.), based in Toledo [Revised March 2019]

Companies with big local presence [revised May 2015]

  • Chrysler Group LLC [revised 7/16/2009]
  • FirstEnergy Corp. (owns Toledo Edison)
  • Ford Motor Co.
  • General Motors Co. [Revised July 16, 2009]
  • Marathon Petroleum Corp. is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]
  • Pilkington North America, a subsidiary of Nippon (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)
  • Spartan Stores Inc. (owns Pharm stores)
    See also: automotive plants, banks, malls

complement, compliment  –  Complement is a noun or verb denoting completeness or the process of supplementing something: The ship has a complement of 200 sailors and 20 officers. The hat complements her dress. Compliment is a noun or verb that denotes praise or the expression of courtesy: The captain complimented the sailors.  She was flattered by the compliments on her outfit.

complexion – Use as a noun: She was of light complexion. Avoid complexioned and complected.

compose, comprise – The easiest rule of thumb is that comprise is the equivalent of is composed of: The book comprises 12 sections. The book is composed of 12 sections. Do not use is comprised of.

computer virus – A destructive, repetitive program “hidden” in a shared computer program that eats away at a system’s programs and stored information.

conditional clauses – Use the past perfect in the if clause, the past conditional in the main clause.Right: If the dog had kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

Wrong: If the dog would have kept running, he would have caught the rabbit.

congressman –  Do not use congresswoman  or congressperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Bob Davis (revised October 31, 2002)

conscious, aware – We are conscious of what we feel but aware of what we know: Police were aware (not conscious) of the bank robbers’ plans.

Consumer Price Index – Based on a variety of goods and services, this is the chief measurement of inflation in the United States. Many government and private organizations use the index as a yardstick for revising salaries, wages, welfare benefits, and other payments to keep pace with inflation. As a result the index affects the income of about half the people in the United States.

continuous, continual – What is done continuously is done without interruption, but a man can work hard continually and still take time out to sleep.

controller, comptroller – Controller is the preferred word except when the official designNation is comptroller, as the comptroller of the United States.

co-op

cop-out

cops – Avoid the usage for policemen except in quotes, light features, and entertainment stories.

coronavirus – Use coronavirus. Do Not use COVID-19 unless it is part of a quote in a story. COVID-19, which stands for coronavirus disease 2019, is caused by a virus named SARS-CoV-2. Symptoms of the virus can include fever, cough, and breathing trouble. Most develop only mild symptoms. But some people, usually those with other medical complications, develop more severe symptoms, including pneumonia, which can be fatal.

corrections – This is the format: An article on a specific topic on a specific day made an error. The correct information is ——- ———– ——-. Except in very rare circumstances do not repeat the error.

Example of a correction:
An article yesterday Thurs. 9/7 on Continental Express Airlines’ use of larger planes on Toledo-to-Cleveland flights misidentified the Toledo station manager for Continental Express.  The manager is Gus Lahanis.

Example of an invented sports correction:
An article in yesterday’s sports section incorrectly reported the winners of the Grand Goose shuffleboard tournament. George Smith placed first and Emma Jones was second.

COSI – The Center of Science & Industry goes by COSI. When referring to the center, use COSI exclusively. On subsequent references, it may be called a hands-on science and education center.

council, counsel – Council is a deliberative or advisory body, as city council, a legislative council, ecclesiastical council. Counsel is legal or other advice or the person who gives it. The word counselor also is used for one who gives advice.

councilman –  Do not use councilwoman or councilperson. Capitalize the title before the name: Councilman Janet Smith, Councilman Bob Davis  [Revised October 31, 2002]

counter – Forms one-word compounds except when the second part of the combination begins with an r.

Countian – DO NOT use it or Lucas Countian. Countian is a made up word. Use Lucas county residents or count residents.  [Added January 2013]

counties – On first reference and in headlines county standing alone always means Lucas County. Do not use the name of a county by itself in a headline: Say a Lenawee County man; not a Lenawee man.

couple, pair

When used in the sense of two people, the word takes plural verbs and pronouns: The couple were married Saturday and left Sunday on their honeymoon.

In the sense of a single unit use a singular verb: Each couple was asked to give $10.

The above also applies to pair.

Do not write: Jones got a couple hits. Make it a couple of hits.

court cases – Italicize the names of lawsuits: Roe vs. Wade.

courtesy titles – see titles.

court-martial, courts-martial

cover-up, cover up – noun, verb.

coverage – We will cover with Blade staff all non-spot news events that occur within 150 miles of Toledo and which are sufficiently important to be likely to attract national coverage, These may include, but are not limited to, institutional openings, funerals, graduation speeches, parades, performances, appearances by luminaries. Excluded are sports events and trials.

COVID-19 – Use coronavirus. See coronavirus entry.

crash-land – verb.

crash-landing – noun.

credible, credulous – Credible means believable. Credulous means ready or disposed to believe.

Credit lines
All caps. Use the full name of the news service with photos one column and larger. Half-column wire photos run without credit.

Bylined articles written by Blade staff members carry the credit:
By JOE McGINTY
BLADE STAFF WRITER
unless the writer has a title such as business writer, music critic, arts writer, etc.

Bylined articles from writers based at other newspapers owned by Block Communications, Inc., carry the credit:
BLOCK NEWS ALLIANCE

Bylined articles by non-staff writers carry the credit:
SPECIAL TO THE BLADE

Articles written in The Blade newsroom from regional material provided by paid stringers are credited:
BLADE CORRESPONDENT

Staff-produced dateline and non-bylined articles are credited:
BLADE STAFF

Articles produced in The Blade newsroom from both staff-generated and news-service material are credited:
BLADE STAFF AND NEWS SERVICES
[revised March 2010]

News-service stories that require bylines follow the same credit format.
Examples:
By TAD BARTIMUS
ASSOCIATED PRESS

By R.W. APPLE
NEW YORK TIMES
By PAMELA CONSTABLE
WASHINGTON POST

Datelined non byline news-service articles are credited as follows:

Datelined news-service articles should be credited as specifically as possible. Use the name of the newspaper, such as the Los Angeles Times, New York Times or Washington Post. Do not use abbreviations, such as AP, NYT, or CP. Spell out names of the wire services.

Use BLADE NEWS SERVICES when dispatches are blended. [revised March 2010] Credit lines run above the dateline, and some examples are:

  • ASSOCIATED PRESS
  • REUTERS
  • NEW YORK TIMES
  • WASHINGTON POST
  • BLADE NEWS SERVICES

Credit lines for photos

For staff photos:
THE BLADE/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

For freelance photos and pictures taken by Blade reporters:
PHOTOGRAPHER NAME FOR THE BLADE

For AP, New York Times, Reuters: ASSOCIATED PRESS, NEW YORK TIMES, REUTERS. If you can determine that the picture was taken by a newspaper, use the name of the paper, such as CHICAGO TRIBUNE, or LOS ANGELES TIMES.

For staff file photo:
BLADE PHOTO

For pool photo:
POOL PHOTO/PHOTOGRAPHER NAME

criteria, criterion – plural, singular.

critical – A person near death in a hospital is in critical condition. A person is critical when he criticizes someone or something.

cross as prefix – Usually hyphenated in combinations, but there are exceptions like crossover and crosswise.

cross-country

cross-examine

cross fire – noun

cuff links

Cutlines
The Blade uses two kinds of cutlines, so-called cutboxes and tie-in lines.

Cutboxes, used with photos without an accompanying story, have a headline briefly summarizing the photo, plus a block of text.    Cutlines should be written in the present tense except where common sense or historical times make it impractical. They should help tell the story with pertinent information; they should describe whatever is necessary to make the picture meaningful, but they should not state the obvious that is insulting to the reader: The politician kisses a baby or Molly Jones puts on her new shirt.

Tie-in cutlines are used with photos that
accompany articles. These cutlines identify people and/or things and the action in the picture. The day is not necessary because it is in the story. Use single quotes in all cutlines.

Cutlines with half-column and one-column mugshots include a brief description of the pictured person’s role to the article with which the cut appears. Limit half-column cuts to a two-line maximum, dropping first name if needed. Use verbs and articles where possible.
Examples:
half-column of Liz Taylor
Taylor: set
to wed again
one-column of the police chief
Chief Felker: He is
injured in a crash:

Cutline reefers now read STORY ON PAGE x.

Weather cutlines should indicate the forecast and refer.

cutoff, cut off – noun/adjective, verb.

cut-rate


D

Dana Inc. (formerly Dana Holding Corp.), based in Maumee. [revised January 2017]

Datelines (also see state names)
All articles originating outside Lucas County with the exception of Rossford, Northwood, and Perrysburg carry a dateline.

All place names included on road maps published by the states of Ohio and Michigan will be used in datelines. Datelines from other states should be based on the Rand McNally atlas. Do not use townships as datelines. Stories developing in rural areas should carry a dateline of the nearest community on the map. In all cases it is essential high in the story to locate the community by appropriate indicators such as county and distance from a more well-known location.

All 4-star communities outside Lucas County as well as well-known and area cities stand alone in datelines and in body copy. Others should be followed by the state or Canadian province (see abbreviations) or by the name of the country. Names of countries are not abbreviated.

A dateline is required when the action we are reporting happened outside Toledo, even though we may be covering the event from here.

We would not use a dateline when we are simply interviewing an out-of-town source for a story we are developing or for a story we are following, as long as the news event is not happening in that town.

In certain cases, to avoid confusion, it may be necessary to let the reader know that we are conducting a telephone interview. An example would be interviewing an out-of-town person in advance of his or her Toledo appearance, such as an entertainer, author, scientist, etc. It is desirable to let the reader know by the third paragraph that we were conducting a telephone interview. If that’s not possible, it should be high up in the story – and before the runover.

THE FOLLOWING CITIES STAND ALONE:
Akron, Ann Arbor, Bowling Green, Bryan, Canton, Cincinnati, Cleveland, Columbus,  Dayton, Defiance, Erie, Findlay, Fostoria, Fremont, Kelleys Island, Lambertville,  Luckey, Napoleon, Port Clinton, Sandusky, Temperance, Tiffin, Wauseon, Youngstown [Revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Ohio):
Ada, Alvordton, Archbold, Bellevue, Bluffton, Bradner,  Carey, Clyde, Curtice, Custar, Cygnet, Delta, Deshler, Elliston, Fayette,  Gibsonburg, Graytown, Haskins,  Hicksville, Holgate,  Lakeside, Leipsic, Liberty Center, Little Sister Island,  Lyons, Marblehead, McClure, Metamora, Middle Bass Island, Montpelier,  North Baltimore, North Bass Island, Norwalk, Oak Harbor, Ohio City, Paulding, Pettisville, Pioneer, Portage, Put-in-Bay, Rattlesnake Island, Risingsun,  South Bass Island,  Stryker,  Upper Sandusky, Van Wert, Wapakoneta,  West Sister Island, Woodville, Wyandot. [revised July 19, 2012]

THE FOLLOWING MICHIGAN CITIES STAND ALONE:
Adrian, Ann Arbor, Detroit, Hillsdale, Kalamazoo, Lambertville, Lansing, Luna Pier, Monroe, Ottawa Lake, Temperance. All others would take the Mich. including Erie (to avoid possible confusion with Erie, Pa.)  [Added August 2019]

THESE CITIES REQUIRE THE STATE:
Toledo Area (Michigan):
Blissfield, Deerfield, Dundee, Ida, Maybee, Morenci, Ottawa Lake, Petersburg, Riga, Samaria, Tecumseh.  [revised March 2019]

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:
United States:
Anchorage, Annapolis, Atlanta, Austin, Baltimore, Baton Rouge, Boise, Boston, Buffalo, Charlotte, Cheyenne, Chicago, Colorado Springs, Corpus Christi, Dallas, Denver, Des Moines, Detroit, El Paso, Fort Worth, Greensboro, Hartford, Hollywood, Honolulu, Houston, Indianapolis, Jacksonville, Jersey City, Juneau, Kansas City, Lansing, Las Vegas, Little Rock, Los Angeles, Louisville, Memphis, Miami, Milwaukee, Minneapolis, Nashville, Newark, New Orleans, New York,  Norfolk, Oakland,  Oklahoma City, Omaha, Philadelphia, Phoenix, Pittsburgh, Raleigh, Reno, Sacramento, Salt Lake City, San Antonio, San Diego, San Francisco, Santa Fe, Seattle, Spokane, St. Louis, St. Paul, Tacoma, Tallahassee, Tampa, Topeka,  Tucson,  United Nations, Virginia Beach, Washington

The Americas :
Buenos Aires, Calgary, Caracas, Edmonton, Guatemala, Havana, Managua, Mexico City, Montreal, Panama, Quebec, Rio de Janeiro, San Salvador, Sao Paulo, Saskatoon, Toronto,  Vancouver, Whitehorse, Winnipeg,

THESE CITIES STAND ALONE:

Other Continents:
Algiers, Amsterdam, Athens, Baghdad, Bangkok, Barcelona, Beijing, Beirut, Belfast, Belgrade, Berlin, Bonn, Brussels, Budapest, Cairo, Calcutta, Cape Town, Casablanca, Copenhagen, Damascus,  Dublin, Edinburgh, Gdansk, Geneva, Glasgow, Hamburg, Hanoi, Helsinki, Ho Chi Minh City, Hong Kong, Istanbul, Jerusalem, Johannesburg, Leningrad, Lisbon, London, Luxembourg, Madrid, Manila, Marseille, Melbourne, Monte Carlo, Moscow, Munich, Naples, New Delhi, Oslo, Paris, Phnom Penh, Prague, Pretoria, Rome, Seoul, Singapore, Stockholm, Sydney, Taipei, Tehran, Tel Aviv, Tokyo, Turin, Vatican City, Venice, Vienna,  Warsaw, Yangon, Zurich.

data – The word typically takes singular verbs and pronouns when writing for general audiences and in data journalism contexts: The data is sound. In scientific and academic writing, plural verbs and pronouns are preferred. Use databank and database, but data processing (n. and adj.) and data center.

Davis-Besse nuclear power plant. The name is hyphenated, but the “n” in nuclear, “p” in power, and “p” in plant are all lowercase. [Added November 2011]

daylight-saving –  adjective.

day – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

dead end, dead-end –  noun, adjective/verb.

Democrat, Democratic  – Democrat is the proper noun referring to a member of the political party. Democratic is its adjective. See capitalization.

desert, dessert –  Two nouns are spelled desert. One, pronounced DESert, refers to a desolate or dry area. The other, pronounced deSERT, same as the verb, means something deserved or earned: “He got his just deserts.” Dessert is a course served at the end of a meal.

detective – Never abbreviate. For example, Detective Joe Smith.

Detroit Three – Use when referring to General Motors, Ford Motor and Chrysler. Do NOT use Big Three. See Big Three entry. [Added February 2017]

dialect –  Dialect should be avoided, even in quoted matter, unless it is clearly pertinent to a story.

differ, different –  Both words should be followed by from, not by than. However, differ in the sense of disagree is followed by with.

Examples: The gray squirrel differs from the red in size as well as color. The viola is different from the violin in size and pitch. The witness differed with the senator on the question of privileged information.

different – Do not use it unnecessarily, as in: he had 17 different jobs. She took 17 different pills.

Dingell – The late U.S. Rep. John (D., Dearborn). Not Trenton

discreet, discrete –  Discreet means prudent, circumspect: “I’m afraid I was not very discreet,” she wrote. Discrete means detached, separate: There are four discrete sounds from a quadraphonic system.

diseases – Do not capitalize diseases such as cancer, emphysema, leukemia, hepatitis, etc., but do capitalize the shorthand COVID-19, MERS, SARS. When a disease is known by the name of a person or geographical area identified with it, capitalize only the proper noun element: Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, Ebola virus, etc.

Avoid such expressions as: He is battling COVID-19. She is a stroke victim. Use neutral, precise descriptions: He has stomach cancer. She had a stroke. [Added April 2020]

DNA – deoxyribonucleic acid is a genetic code contained in the nuclei of human cells. Except for identical twins, no two people have identical DNA patterns.

dominant –  adjective.

dominate – verb.

double check, double-check –   noun, verb.

double play, double-play  – noun, adjective.

double-talk –  noun.

double time, double-time – noun, adjective/verb

douse, dowse –  The first means to plunge into water; the second, to use a divining rod to find water.

drier, dryer –  adjective, appliance

dropout, drop out –  noun, verb.

Drug Abuse Resistance Education – First reference should be Drug Abuse Resistance Education. Following references use DARE [revised October 23, 2002]

drugstore

drunk – He was drunk (when the adjective follows the noun). But a drunken driver; drunken driving.

due to – Not accepted as a substitute for “caused by” or “because of.”

dumpster – (Dumpster, a former trademark)  is a large metal trash bin, often of a kind that is emptied, or transported to a dump, by a specially equipped truck. Because there is no longer a trademark for the brand, the ‘d” in dumpster does not need to capitalized. [Updated October 2020]


E

easy, easily  –  Easy as an adverb survives only as a vulgarism and in a few phrases, mostly colloquial: stand easy, take it easy, easy come easy go, easier said than done.

Elderly – Use this word carefully and sparingly. Do not refer to a person as elderly unless it is clearly relevant to the story. Apply the same principle to terms such as senior citizen. It is appropriate in generic phrases that do not refer to specific individuals: concern for elderly people, a home for senior citizens, etc. If the intent is to show that an individual’s faculties have deteriorated, cite a graphic example and give attribution for it. Use age when available and appropriate. [Added November 2019]

Electricity – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Electric Auto-Lite – The name of the Toledo company when it was the site for the 1934 strike where the National Guard charged the protesters, killing 2 and wounding hundreds. The strike was one of the formative job actions in the founding of the UAW and CIO. In 1961, Electric Auto-Lite became Electric Autolite, at which time Autolite became a brand name.
[Revised October 30, 2002]

elude  –  To avoid adroitly, evade. See allude.

emigrant, immigrant –  A person emigrates from a country and immigrates into another. Thus an emigrant from Germany becomes an immigrant to the United States.

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

eminent, imminent –  Eminent means noted; imminent means near in time.

email –  Changed in June 2011 to follow the style of Associated Press. No longer use with a hyphen, and addresses should be in boldface. [Revised June 2011]

enact – Laws are enacted; bills are passed.

enclose – Preferred over inclose for all uses.

endorse – Now preferred over indorse in all uses.

en route – Two words.

envelop, envelope –  verb, noun.

epidemic, pandemic – An epidemic is the rapid spreading of disease in a certain population or region; a pandemic is an epidemic that has spread worldwide. Follow declarations of public health officials. On March 11, 2020, the World Health Organization declared the COVID-19 outbreak a pandemic. Do not write global pandemic, which is redundant. [Added April 2020]

erstwhile – Means former.

esports – Acceptable in all references to competitive multiplayer video gaming. Use alternate forms like eSports or e-sports only if part of a formal name, like an organization or arena. Capitalize at the start of sentences. Like other collective nouns that are plural in form, esports takes singular form when the group or quantity is regarded as a unit.

estate – An estate is used to refer to a large landed property owned by an individual of great wealth; said property would contain a large residence and other structures of great value, all of which would require a staff to maintain. An estate would not contain rental property and slum conditions on the property as was the case with Vice President Al Gore’s home and property that, in addition to his home, contained substandard housing being rented to a poor family. We and other media, in reporting that story, referred to the Gore property as an “estate.” Do not use “estate” to mean only an expensive home on landed property as defined in Webster’s Dictionary.

ethics committee – Not the official name of the congressional panel.

ever as prefix – Usually not hyphenated: everbearing and everlasting. Use a hyphen when the dictionary does not give a one-word form.

ex – Takes the hyphen when used in the sense of the former: ex-king, ex-president, ex-senator. Be sure the prefix is used with the right word. For instance, John J. Gilligan is an Ohio ex-governor because he is still an Ohioan; he is not an ex-Ohio governor. However, write ex-public official rather than public ex-official. In this case the ex refers to the whole phrase.

expect – See anticipate.

extradite – The governmental unit that gives up the prisoner does the extraditing: California extradited the suspect to Ohio. The suspect was extradited by California to Ohio. Ohio sought the extradition of the suspect by California.

eye opener


F

fact finder

fact-finding – noun/adjective

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall in Maumee, located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

faker, fakir – The meaning of the first is obvious. The second is a Moslem or Hindu holy man or ascetic.

Far East – The easternmost portions of the continent of Asia: China, Japan, North and South Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and the eastern portions of the Soviet Union. See Southeast Asia.

farmhand

farmhouse

farm worker

farther, further – Farther refers to physical distance: He walked farther into the woods. Further refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the mystery.

fat cat

female – Do not use as a synonym for woman. See lady.

fewer, less – Use fewer for people/individuals or things that can be counted. Fewer than 100 applicants applied. Use less with a number that describes quantity or bulk. Police recovered less than $1,500; It happened less than 36 hours ago; The recipe calls for less than two cups of sugar.

FFA – The official name of what formerly was Future Farmers of America.

fiance, fiancee – Fiance refers to a man; fiancee to a woman.

Fiberglas – Trademark of Owens Corning.

fiber glass, fiber-glass – noun, adjective.

Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate is the correct name for One SeaGate in downtown Toledo. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine.The former Fifth Third Center (headquarters at Madison and Huron) is no longer called that because the sign is down and the bank doesn’t own it anymore. For now, we could refer to it informally as the former Fifth Third Bank headquarters at Madison and Huron. [added  July 22, 2008]

Fifth Third Field – On first reference the new stadium should be called by its formal name. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the new Mud Hens stadium, or the stadium, etc. [revised January 30, 2002]

figure – The verb means calculate or estimate using figures. It is correct to say “He figured his income tax,” questionable to say “John Jones figured in the inquiry.”

firefighter

fire tower

first-rate – noun/adjective

FirstEnergy Corp. – owns Toledo Edison Co. and is based in Akron. FirstEnergy (one word) was created from merger of Centerior Energy Corp. and Ohio Edison Co. [ revised January 30, 2002]

flair, flare – Flair is a knack or talent, flare as a noun is a torch.

flare up, flare-up – verb, noun.

flaunt, flout – To flaunt is to display ostentatiously; to flout is to scoff at: The peacock flaunted its plumage. The composition flouted the rules.

flier, flyer – A flier is an aviator; a flyer is a handbill or a venture.

flimflam

flip-flop

floe  – Do not use ice with floe.

flounder, founder  – A flounder is a fish; to move in a clumsy manner is to flounder. To founder is to get bogged down, become disabled or to sink.

fold as suffix – Do not hyphenate: twofold, threefold, tenfold.

follow-up

foot, feet  – It is correct to say a man is a six-footer but not to say he is six foot tall or six foot. Also it is correct to say a 6-foot, 2-inch guard, or his height is 6 feet, 2 inches.

forgo, forego  –  Forgo means to abstain from or renounce. Forego means to go before.

former, old – Former means erstwhile; old refers to age: The old mansion on Cherry Street is the former home of Mrs. Harvey.

Fort – Do not abbreviate for cities or for military installations.

It should be Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Do not use Fort Wayne or Fort Lauderdale. Use Fort Bragg, not Fort Bragg. [Added November 2016]

Fostoria St. Wendelin Church and Parish Life Center

foul up, foul-up – verb, noun.

Four SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]

Franciscan Center – In Sylvania, not Franciscan Life Center.

Frankenstein – In Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein was the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself.

Franklin Park Mall – Official name of Toledo’s premier indoor mail. No longer owned by Westfield.

freelance

Frisbee – A trade name; always capitalize.

front line, front-line – noun, adjective.

front-runner

front yard, front-yard – noun, adjective.

full time, full-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

fund-raiser, fund-raising

funeral vs. memorial service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service. [Added February 2015]


G

Gadhafi, Moammar – Correct Blade style for the Libyan leader. Do NOT use Muammar Kaddafi, previous Blade style.
[Added March 2011].

gage, gauge – Gage is a pledge; gauge is a measurement.

General Growth Property Inc., a Chicago-based development company that owns the Shops at Fallen Timbers in Maumee.

General Motors Co. – Use on first reference. Do not use General Motors Corp. any longer. The name was changed during the 2009 bankruptcy. The “old GM,” with the assets to be disposed, is now referred to as Motors Liquidation Co. GM still can be used in second reference. [Revised July 16, 2009]

gibe – Means jeer or taunt, either as a noun or verb. See jibe.

girlfriend

Gladieux Enterprises – See V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

good, well – Write “he feels good” if you mean he is in good spirits; “he feels well” if he feels healthy. (In this case well is an adjective.) But he hears well, he sees well, meaning that his perception is good. (Well is an adverb in this case.)

good-bye

good Samaritan

graduate – Graduate is correctly used in the active voice; “She graduated from the university.” It is correct but unnecessary to use the passive voice: “He was graduated from the university.”

Do not drop the from: “John Adams graduated from Harvard,” not “John Adams graduated Harvard.”

graphics – Follow style, including the use of articles in all cases.

gray – The preferred American spelling.

great as prefix – Great-grandchild, great-grandmother, great-grandson.

grisly, grizzly – Grisly means horrible; grizzly means grayish.

grown-up


H

had  –  Avoid such constructions as “he had his leg broken” and “he had his car stolen.” Both signify intent.

The Hague – Netherlands

half as prefix  –  Half as an adjective does not take the hyphen in such combinations as half brother, half dozen, half inch, half mile.

Combinations used as adjectives take the hyphen: half-inch opening, half-mile run. Combinations always hyphenated include half-breed, half-and-half, half-dollar. One-word combinations include halfback, halfway. Consult dictionary when in doubt.

haled, hailed –  Haled is an older form of hauled. A suspect is haled into court. Hailed means greeted or acclaimed.

half mast, half staff –  The flag on a ship is lowered to half mast. On land the flag is lowered to half staff.

hand-washing

hangar, hanger  –  A hangar houses planes; a hanger holds clothes.

hanged, hung  –  One hangs a picture, criminal, or oneself. For past tense or passive voice use hanged when referring to executions or suicides, hung for other actions.

Hanukkah   –  The Jewish Festival of Lights, an eight-day commemoration of rededication of the Temple by the Macabees after their victory over the Syrians. Usually occurs in December, but sometime falls in November. DO NOT use Chanukah or any other variation.

hara-kiri

hard hat

hard-liner

Hardship stories – Include a website address or phone number with any “hardship-themed” story we publish. A good example would be an Associated Press story out of Los Angeles about the basset hound rescue center that has fallen on hard times. Do this with hardship stories involving people as well as dogs and other animals. [Added November 2009]

Hayes – New name for the museum and library in Fremont is Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]

HCR ManorCare Inc. , Renamed ProMedica Senior Care in October 2020. Headquarters is on Summit Street, downtown Toledo. [revised October 2020]

headlines

The cardinal rule is that the headline must be accurate and give the reader a true impression of the story. The headline should not steal the lead, especially in feature material.

Some additional guidelines:
Avoid verb heads.
Do not end a line of a head with a preposition except on the middle line of a three-line head or deck. But if a word that is normally a preposition is part of a verb, it must be on the line with the verb.Do not break a proper name, title and name, two-word phrase, or verb and auxiliary between lines of a headline.
As closely as possible headlines should follow the same style as text on abbreviations, etc., except as noted elsewhere.
If a name or title is spelled out in body copy, spell it out in the headline.But if a name or title is abbreviated in copy, do not spell it out in a headline. Use only numbers in heads, except in rare instances, such as “one of a kind.”
Avoid repeating a word in a headline except when any synonym would sound stilted and artificial. Short prepositions such as of, to, and in may be repeated.Do not use such words as rap, slap, hit, blast, as synonyms for criticize.Use quotation marks only when the words are verbatim. Do not put quotation marks around a word just because it is used in an unusual sense or to call attention to a pun.Avoid making a headline pun on a person’s name without supervisory approval.Do not use:
·       Lash for criticize.
·       Peak for record.
·       Snarl for traffic jam.
·       Do not base headlines on weather forecasts.
·       Do not split adjectives from nouns on different lines. This is a common problem.

Instead of:
Notes set for copy
editors on the desk

Rewrite the head to keep the adjective and noun on the same line, which makes it easier for readers to understand:

Desk copy editors
to get suggestions

head-on, head on  –  adjective, adverb.

heavy-handed

Heidelberg College   [revised January 30, 2002]

held  –  Avoid using as a synonym for believed or contended.

helter-skelter

high-handed

hippie, hippy –  noun, adjective.

hit-and-run

hit-skip

high-speed, etc. – It is not necessary to describe a chase, in autos or otherwise, as “high-speed.” A “low-speed” chase would be unusual.

It is unnecessary to write “the victim was rushed to the hospital.” It is assumed that a trip to the hospital is made as rapidly as possible. Write “was taken to the hospital.”

historic, historical – A historic event is an important occurrence, one that stands out in history. Any occurrence in the past is a, not an, historic event. Words beginning with h are preceded by a, not an, unless the h is silent. [added March 2010]

hoard, horde – Hoard means an accumulation and is also a verb; horde is a crowd.

hocus-pocus

Hodgkin’s disease

Hollywood Casino Toledo – The official name of the casino that opened in May 2012. Be sure to include Toledo. The casino is owned and operated by Penn National Gaming Inc. of Wyomissing, PA.

home, hone –  Do not confuse these two verbs. To home in is to seek, as in a target. To hone means to sharpen.

home room

home rule

home run

horse race

hot line

hot rod, hot-rod – noun, adjective/verb.

Huntington Center – On first reference, this is the name to be used for the Lucas County-owned arena in downtown Toledo. In second and subsequent references, it is acceptable to refer to it as the downtown Toledo arena or the arena in Toledo. In April 2010, Huntington National Bank announced it would pay $2.1 million for six years for the naming rights to the arena. [revised April 16, 2010]

hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or more. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line.

Typhoons develop west of the line. They are known as cyclones in the Indian Ocean and Australia. When a hurricane or typhoon loses strength (wind speed), usually after landfall, it is reduced to tropical storm status.

Capitalize hurricane when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Hurricane Dorian, Hurricane Michael.

Use it and its in pronoun references.

Once storms lose strength and are downgraded to tropical storm or tropical depression status, it may be clearer to simply use the storm’s name on first reference: Officials said the storm surge from Dorian was blamed for the heavy damage to the region. Give the storm’s current status and history high in the story: Dorian came ashore as a major hurricane and was downgraded to a tropical storm. After a storm is downgraded, phrasing such as storm Michael or the remnants of Hurricane Maria is also acceptable on first reference, with background later.

hurricane categories – Hurricanes are ranked 1 to 5 according to what is known as the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale. Categories 3, 4 and 5 hurricanes are considered major hurricanes.

  • Category 1 — Winds of 74-95 mph (120-150 kph). Damage primarily to unanchored mobile homes, shrubbery and trees. Some damage to poorly constructed signs and piers. Extensive damage to power lines and poles likely will result in power outages that could last a few to several days.
  • Category 2 — Winds of 96-110 mph (155-175 kph). Some roof, door and window damage to buildings. Considerable damage to mobile homes, small watercraft, trees, poorly constructed signs and piers. Many shallowly rooted trees will be snapped or uprooted and block numerous roads. Near-total power loss is expected with outages that could last from several days to weeks.
  • Category 3 — Winds of 111-129 mph (180-210 kph). Some structural damage to small homes. Mobile homes destroyed and large trees blown down. Hurricane Katrina, the costliest natural disaster in U.S. history, was a Category 3 at landfall in 2005 after being a Category 5 in the Gulf of Mexico.
  • Category 4 — Winds of 130-156 mph (210-250 kph). Wall failures and roof collapses on small homes, and extensive damage to doors and windows. Complete destruction of some homes, especially mobile homes. Power outages will last for weeks to possibly months. Most of the area will be uninhabitable for weeks or months. In 2004, Hurricane Charley hit the Florida Gulf Coast near Fort Myers as a Category 4 storm. It left thousands homeless and the total U.S. damage was estimated at more than $15 billion.
  • Category 5 — Winds greater than 157 mph (250 kph). Complete roof failure on many homes and industrial buildings. Smaller buildings and mobile homes blown over or completely blown away. Major damage to lower floors of all structures located less than 15 feet (4.5 meters) above sea level and within 500 yards (460 meters) of the shoreline. Massive evacuation of residential areas on low ground within 5 to 10 miles (8 to 16 kilometers) inland may be required.

Hurricane Katrina in 2005, which was a Category 3 storm, was the most expensive hurricane to hit the United States with $160 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation into 2017 dollars. Hurricane Harvey in 2017 was second with $125 billion in damage, with 2017’s Maria, a Category 4 storm on landfall ranked third at $90 billion. Superstorm Sandy, which pummeled New York and New Jersey in 2012, didn’t have the high winds and had lost tropical status by the time it struck. Though not formally called a major hurricane, it had devastating effects and caused $70 billion in damage, when adjusted for inflation.

hurricane names – The names of tropical cyclones are decided by the World Meteorological Organization and are recycled every six years. If more than 21 named tropical cyclones occur in one basin in a season, any additional storms will be named for Greek letters. The names of storms deemed to have caused extraordinary damage are retired from the list. When referring to two hurricanes: hurricanes Maria and Dorian.

hurricane season – The portion of the year that has a relatively high incidence of hurricanes. In the Atlantic, Caribbean and Gulf of Mexico, this is from June through November. In the eastern Pacific, it is May 15 through Nov. 30. In the central Pacific, it is June 1 through Nov. 30.

hurricane warning – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are expected somewhere within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. The warning is issued 36 hours before tropical-storm-force winds are expected to arrive.

hurricane watch – An announcement that sustained winds of 74 mph (119 km/hr) or higher are possible within the specified area in association with a tropical, subtropical or post-tropical cyclone. A hurricane watch is issued 48 hours in advance of the expected onset of tropical-storm-force winds.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

hyphenation – An adjective modifying a noun takes no hyphen, but when the adjective and noun in combination modify another noun, the hyphen is required: sound money, a sound-money policy.

A noun used to modify another noun becomes an adjective for grammatical purposes and no hyphen is needed. Race winner, not race-winner; bird watcher, not bird-watcher. Exceptions are combinations shown as hyphenated in the dictionary.

Two hyphens are needed in phrases like 10-foot-deep hole, 50-foot-tall tree, three-mile-wide strip.

Compound adjectives made up of a noun and a verb must be hyphenated: a man-eating shark is different from a man eating shark.

However, the hyphen may be omitted in two-word phrases used together so generally that their connection is obvious: high school boy, income tax returns, civil rights struggle.

Do NOT use the hyphen between an adverb ending in ly and the verb, participle, or adjective it modifies: a recently remodeled house.

In general well or ill take the hyphen when the adverb is before the noun: a well-fed cat; the cat was well fed.

Do not use suspended hyphens, as in three-, five-, and eight-mile runs. Write either three-mile, five-mile, and eight-mile runs or three, five, and eight-mile runs.


I

ice pack

illegal immigrant – Blade style for immigrant who is illegally in the United States. Do not use the euphemism undocumented.

ill health –  Avoid this term. A person is either ill or healthy.

Imagination Station — Science center, formerly COSI, that opens October 2009 on Summit Street in downtown Toledo
[added September 2009]

imminent –  See eminent.

inaugurate –  Implies some degree of formality or ceremony; limit its use to such occasions.

include –  Use to introduce a series only when the items that follow are part of a total: The zoo includes lions and tigers.

incumbent – Avoid the redundancy of incumbent senator, etc.

infer, imply –  Infer means to draw a conclusion, imply to hint or suggest: The speaker implied that all was not well in his country. His audience inferred that a revolution was brewing.

insect –  Spiders and centipedes are not insects. If in doubt about a specific creature, consult references.

inside of, outside of –   Drop the of.

inter as prefix –  Takes no hyphen except when second part of the word begins with a capital letter, as in inter-American.

inter, intra –  Inter means between, intra within: Interplanetary travel, intramural (within the walls) athletics.

ISOH/IMPACT – A nonprofit disaster relief organization. It is based at 25182 River Road, Perrysburg, but its distribution center is at 905 Farnsworth Rd., Waterville. Note: all letters are uppercase.   [Added May 2013]

its, it’s  –  possessive pronoun, contraction of it is.


J

JayCee

jailed –  When incorrectly used for sentenced, jailed gives a different meaning. “The driver was jailed for 90 days” means that he has completed a sentence of 90 days. (Do not “give a sentence.”)

jelly bean

jibe –  Means agree. See gibe.

Johnson’s Island – is correct for the Lake Erie island north of Sandusky and south of Marblehead in Ottawa County. It was the site of a prisoner-of-war camp for Confederate officers captured during the American Civil War. [revised 2002, April 2014]

judges –  Blade coverage of court sentencings involving major crimes (including, but not limited to, murder, rape, major felonies, major white-collar crimes) always will give a direct quotation of the judge’s pronouncement of sentence.

We are interested in the judges’s feelings about the act and anything personal. Any judge speaks for a community as well as the criminal justice system. We must share that insight.

judgment – Not judgement.

justices, judges  –  Not always interchangeable. Municipal Court, Common Pleas Court, Juvenile Court, and U.S. district and circuit courts have judges. Members of the U.S. and Ohio Supreme courts are justices. The head of the U.S. Supreme Court is the chief justice of the United States. For a state other than Ohio try to follow approved usage in that state. A justice of the peace on second reference is never a judge. The term jurist may be applied to either justices or judges but never as a title.


K

Kaddafi, Muammar – Do NOT use this spelling for the Libyan leader. The correct Blade style is Moammar Gadhafi. [Revised March 2011]

karat – See carat.

kids – Do not use for children except in light features in which it is appropriate.

knot – One nautical mile (6,076.10 feet) per hour. It is redundant to say knots per hour. To convert to approximate miles per hour, multiply knots by 1.15.

know-how

KO, KOs – nouns.

KO’s, KO’d – verbs.

Koran – Preferred spelling is Qur’an.

Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport – This is the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]


L

lady – Do not use as a synonym for woman. Lady may be used as a courtesy title or in a specific reference to fine manners without patronizing overtones. See female.

lake bed

larceny –  Larceny is unlawful taking or carrying away of personal property. Burglary is breaking into a building illegally with intent to steal. Robbery is larceny from a person or in the immediate presence of another by violence or threat of violence.

last, past –  Use last rather than past to refer to the time immediately preceding the time of writing.  It is not the style of The Blade to use the word last as in “last October” or “last Wednesday” unless it is October or unless the paper is going to be published on Wednesday. It is better to say that something occurred in October or will occur in October; that it happened Wednesday or it will happen Wednesday.

launch – Use it almost exclusively for military matters, rockets, attacks, missiles. It is not good usage to “launch”  political campaigns, programs, projects, drives, etc. Simply starting or beginning them is sufficient.

lawn mower

lawyer – See attorney.

Lead: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

led – Past tense of lead.

Lede: Use “lead” when referring to the opening paragraph of a story. Do not use “lede” in stories because “lede” is journalistic jargon. [Added June 2019]

left field, left-field – noun, adjective.

left fielder

left-handed

left-hander

left wing, left-wing – noun, adjective.

left-winger, left winger –  The first is a political term; the second is a hockey position.

lend, loan –  Lend is the preferred verb form and should be used in all instances except when quoting someone. Loan is properly used as a noun.

less –  See fewer.

Levis Commons – Outdoor shops on State Rt. 25 in Perrysburg. Mall was built was built was developer Larry Dillin.

LG Philips Displays – formerly Philips Display Components [revised October 23, 2002]

liable, likely –  One is liable to a suit for damages. He is exposed or vulnerable to such a suit. He is likely to sue for damages.  He probably will sue.

lie, lay –  Lie is intransitive and does not take an object: lie, lay, lain. Lay is transitive and takes an object: lay, laid, laid.

Examples: He lies down but cannot sleep. He lay down in the grass. Lenin’s body has lain in Red Square since his death. The bricklayer lays bricks. He laid his rifle down. A new golf course was laid out.

life buoy

Mercy Health Life Flight – This is the name of the medical helicopter company operated by Corporate Jets, Inc., of Pittsburgh. It operates out of Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center. [revised April 26, 2016]

life jacket

life raft

lift-off

liftouts –  Used to break up blocks of type and to summarize a significant point of an article that is not part of the headline.

light-heavyweight

like –  Should not be used as a conjunction. Correct: It looked like a victory for the Conservatives. See as if.

like as suffix –  Usually not hyphenated: businesslike, lifelike. No hyphen is necessary after words ending in l: raillike. Use the hyphen after words ending in ll : bell-like.

like-minded

likely, probably –  Likely is normally an adjective, as in a likely story; probably is an adverb.

linage, lineage – The first is the number of lines; the second is one’s family tree.

living room

loath, loathe –  The first is an adjective meaning unwilling; the second a verb meaning to detest.

locate –  Verb meaning to place or to find. Do not write “The building is located at Sixth and Main streets.”  Write “The building is at Sixth and Main streets.”

locker room

L-O-F   – Acceptable on second reference for the former Libbey-Owens-Ford Co. in historical stories. [revised January 30, 2002]

long shot, long-shot  –  noun, adjective.

long-standing

long time, longtime –  noun, adjective.

long titles – Place long titles after the name. Instead of Lucas County Common Pleas Court Judge James Bates, use Judge James Bates, of Lucas County Common Pleas Court, said . . .

Lourdes University – Officially became a university on Aug. 19, 2011. Founded in 1958 as Lourdes College, the private university is situated on 113 wooded acres in Sylvania. [Added August 2011]

Lower Peninsula

Lucas County Arena – Name of the arena opened in downtown Toledo in October 2009. Do not use Lucas County Multipurpose Arena. [Added October 2009]

Lucas County Board of Mental Health and Recovery Services – On first reference, don’t call the agency the Mental Health Board. The board is the result of a 2006 merger.

Lucas County educational service center board – No longer Lucas County board of education.



M

Mach number

machine gun, machine-gun – noun, adjective/verb.

Magna Carta – (NOT Magna Charta)

Mafia – The secret society of criminals and its members. Do not use as a synonym for organized crime or the underworld.

majority, plurality – Majority means more than half an amount. Plurality means more than the next highest number. If there are more than two candidates in a race, the one with the greatest number of votes has a plurality, but he lacks a majority unless he has more than half the total vote.

makeup, make up –  noun/adjective, verb.

malls, local –  The following is a list of the major local malls:
North Towne Square; Southwyck Shopping Center; Franklin Park Mall (Franklin Park on second reference; Woodville Mall, Shops at Fallen Timbers (in Maumee) and Levis Commons (in Perrysburg)

man-made

man-of-war

mantel, mantle –  The first is a shelf; the second is a cloak.

Mardi Gras

Marathon Petroleum Company LLC is based in Findlay. It was formerly affiliated with Marathon Oil. Its subsidiaries include MPLX LP and Speedway LLC. [revised May 20, 2015]

margin, ratio – Margin is the amount or degree of difference: The measure passed by a 15-vote margin. Ratio is a proportional relationship between two or more things: Losers outnumbered gainers on the New York Stock Exchange by a 5-3 ratio.

Marines

market basket

Masonic, fraternal organizations – Use the following guidelines:

  • Trident Lodge, F&AM. Do not use lodge numbers or the term Blue Lodge. In some states and for black lodges it is AF&AM.
  • Solomon Chapter, RAM. Do not spell out Royal Arch Masons or use a chapter number.
  • Eastern Council, R&SM. The correct form for Royal and Select Masons.
  • Toledo Commandery, Knights Templar.  Chapter, Council, and Commandery constitute the York Rite of Masonry. Use the names of the groups, not York Rite.
  • Scottish Rite, Toledo. Omit “Valley of.” It is redundant to refer to a 32nd Degree Scottish Rite Mason. However, the 33rd Degree is a signal honor and should be mentioned when appropriate.
  • Constituent bodies of the Scottish Rite may be mentioned if someone has been an officer. They are: Commander, Toledo Consistory; Sovereign Prince, Northern Light Council, Princes of Jerusalem; Most Wise Master, Fort Industry Chapter, Rose Croix; Thrice Potent Master, Mi-A-Mi Lodge of Perfection.
  • Shrine and Grotto are short for much longer official titles of the parent organizations. The local Shrine body is Zenobia Temple. The black Shriners belong to Mecca Temple. It’s O-Ton-Ta-La Grotto.
  • Black Masonic groups sometimes are referred to as Prince Hall affiliates.
Polar Chapter, Eastern Star. Omit “Order of the” and do not use OES. This is primarily a women’s group, but men may belong.
Lodge of Rebekahs is a women’s order.

Write Knights of Pythias, Odd Fellows, Eagles, Moose, and Elks. Do not use the abbreviations K of P, IOOF, FOE, LOOM, and BPOE.

mayor, coverage of – Make the accounts as objective as possible. Save interpretation and analysis for columns or other types of articles whose purpose is clearly labeled.

medal, metal – Medal is a small piece of metal with a design or inscription made to commemorate some event or to honor some individual. Metal is any of a class of chemical elements, such as iron, gold, or aluminum.

media –  Plural form of medium and always takes a plural verb: News media plan to cover the story. Do NOT use as a synonym for employees of the media.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital.

Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [revised May 12, 2015]

Megawatt – How much electricity a power plant produces can be stated in megawatts. How much it costs to generate that power or what consumers pay for that power should be stated in megawatt-hour or kilowatt-hour. For example: BigPower Plant generates 800 megawatts of electricity but it costs it $100 per megawatt-hour.
[Added March 2017]

Mercy Health –  In April 2016, the health group changed its name to Mercy Health. It is no longer Mercy Health Partners. Its seven hospitals in northwest Ohio also have slightly different names: Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center, Mercy Health St. Anne Hospital, Mercy Health St. Charles Hospital, Mercy Health Children’s Hospital, Mercy Health Tiffin Hospital, Mercy Health Willard Hospital, and Mercy Health Hospital of Defiance.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy Health St. Vincent Medical Center – No longer Mercy  St.. Vincent Mercy Medical Center St. Vincent Mercy Medical Center or  St. Vincent Medical Center.
[Revised April 26, 2016]

Mercy College of Ohio – A Toledo-based Catholic institution with a focus on healthcare. In 2011, the school changed its name from Mercy College of Northwest Ohio to Mercy College of Ohio. The school also has a Youngstown campus.
[Added January 2013]

memorial vs. funeral service – Under Blade style, whenever the body is present, it is a funeral service and NOT a memorial service. If your uncle Joe died six months ago and was buried then, and you decide to have a service today without the body, it would be a memorial service.
[Added February 2015]

merry-go-round

Metroparks Toledo  – It is the name for the government agency that operates 15 Metroparks totaling more than 12,000 acres in Lucas County. Metroparks is one word. The  “M” is  capitalized, there is no hyphen, and there is no capital p. Use Metroparks Toledo on first reference. On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks.  [revised September 2017]

Mexican-American – hyphenated

mezzo-soprano

mid as prefix –  Not hyphenated unless the second part of the word begins with a capital letter.

Mid-American Conference  – Comprises University of Akron, Ball State University, Bowling Green State University, University of Buffalo, Central Michigan University, Eastern Michigan University, Kent State University, Miami University, Northern Illinois University, Ohio University, Temple University, University of Toledo, and Western Michigan University. [Revised November 2011]

middle age, middle-aged –  noun, adjective.

mill – All bond issue or levy stories must identify what a mill is and what any proposed levy changes would mean to the owner of a typical home.

millennium  [revised January 30, 2002]

minelayer, mine-laying –  noun, adjective.

minesweeper, mine-sweeping  – noun, adjective.

mini as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

mixed-up, mix-up, mix up  –  adjective, noun, verb.

Middle East – Comprises Afghanistan, Cyprus, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Kuwait, Jordan, Lebanon, Oman, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, South Yemen, Sudan, Syria, Turkey, United Arab Emirates, and Yemen. Mideast is acceptable, but Middle East is preferred.

model, replica –  A model may be a different size from the original and/or of different material; a replica is an exact duplicate.

Mohammed – Use this spelling for the name of the prophet and founder of the Islamic religion. Do Not use Muhammad.
[Added November 2009]

money maker

moneys – Restrict use to currencies, as in the moneys of the world.

Moonies – A pejorative term for members of the Rev. Sun Myung Moon’s Unification Church. DON’T use it.
[added Dec. 3, 2008]

mop-up, mop up –  noun, verb.

more than  –  Write “more than 500 attended,” not “over 500.” Over is permissible in headlines.

mother-in-law

mph

mucus, mucous –  noun, adjective.

multi as prefix –  Hyphenate only when the second part of the combination begins with the letter i.

Mumbai is now Blade style for the financial capital of  India. Formerly known as Bombay, there are 15 million people who live in Mumbai, which is the capital of Maharashtra on the western coast of India. Most U.S. news organizations refer to the city as Mumbai, NOT Bombay, since the Indian government made that change in the mid 1990s. The Blade also will use Mumbai when reporting news from this India city. Because Mumbai is not as well known as its predecessor, Bombay, Mumbai needs India in the dateline. [added November 27, 2008]



N

NAFTA – NAFTA is correct. In first reference use North American Free Trade Agreement. [revised October 23, 2002]

names  –  Getting a person’s name right is one of the first essentials of reporting. When interviewing people, ask for correct spelling, preference in the use of the first name and/or initials, and any peculiarities.

For names in wire stories the “World Almanac,”  “Who’s Who,” and other reference books are available.

Junior is permissible if it is part of the person’s formal name. Senior is not used unless father and son are living and both are well enough known that omission would create confusion. Generational designations generally are not needed for nationally known people.

Nicknames are permissible.  If John P. Jones is known to all his friends as Doc, his name would appear as John P. “Doc” Jones.

Use the nickname instead of the first name on first reference for a person best known by that name.

Do not use tasteless nicknames or the common nicknames for given names.

A married woman’s maiden name or name from a previous marriage will be used if desired. The names should appear in their proper order: Mrs. Mary Jones, nee Smith, would appear as Mrs. Mary Smith Jones. If the widow Jones is remarried to a man named Brown, her name should appear as Mrs. Mary Jones Brown.

Prominent individuals – The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln, and Jefferson.

Foreign names – In some foreign names the last name is not the family surname. In such cases on second reference the title should be used with the correct part of the name.

NATO – Acceptable on first reference.

nauseate, nauseous – The first is a verb meaning to make or become ill; the second is an adjective meaning causing illness or disgust.

Navy

near as prefix –  Near is an adjective as well as an adverb and can be used as such in phrases as near accident, near thing.

nearby

neo as prefix – Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

nerve-racking – Preferred to nerve-wracking.

new – Avoid using the phrase “constructing new building.” It is difficult for someone to build an old building. This is in line with editing expertise aimed at taking unnecessary words out of stories so there is more room for necessary ones. It is in the same realm as “a new record,” a completely unnecessary modifier.

news conference – Not press conference

next – Do not use with the day of the week or month.

nick – Not knick.

nobility – References to members of the nobility present special problems because nobles frequently are known by their titles rather than their given or family names. These guidelines relate to Britain’s nobility and may be adapted when appropriate to other nations.

Orders of rank begin with the royal family. The term royalty is reserved for relatives of living and deceased sovereigns.

Next in descending order are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts, and barons. Many hold inherited titles; others have been raised to the nobility by the sovereign.

Sovereigns also confer honorary titles, which do NOT make an individual a member of the nobility.  The principal designations in descending order are baronet and knight.

Refer to The Associated Press stylebook for a complete discussion of titles of nobility.

no-man’s-land

non –  Not hyphenated except in combination with proper nouns.

none – Usually means no single one, and in this sense takes singular verbs and pronouns: None of the seats was in its right place. Use a plural verb only if the sense is no two or no amount: None of the consultants agree on the same approach. None of the taxes have been paid.

Norfolk Southern Corp. – A railroad company. DO NOT  refer to it as Norfolk Southern Railway.

North – The northern United States.

North Toledo

North Towne Square – Mall is not part of the name.

Northwest Psychiatric Hospital – No longer Toledo Mental Health Center

notable, noted, notorious  –  Notable means worthy of notice; noted means celebrated or famous; notorious means publicly or widely known, usually in an unfavorable light. Notoriety is not a synonym for fame.

numbers –  Whenever possible spell out all numbers and ordinals below 10 with the following exceptions:

  • Ages -Use numerals without exception when referring to the age of people or animals in years, months, weeks, or days. This also applies to approximate ages: He was in his 40s.
  • Betting odds – He was a 2-1 favorite.
  • City council districts – The correct form is District 5. Do not spell out number.
  • Court identification – It’s the 6th U.S. Circuit Court, not Sixth U.S. Circuit.
  • Decimals – Always use numerals. For figures less than one use a 0 before the decimal point: 2.5, 0.2.
  • Fractional compounds – 3 1/2 inches, size 6 hat. For less common fractions the phrase must be spelled out: five and nine-sixteenths inches, 13 and three-sevenths gallons.
  • Measurements – Exact measurements in feet and inches: 6 feet, 2 inches tall. Otherwise six feet or seven inches unless used with abbreviations in tabular matter. Also, it’s 3 inches of snow fell, not 3″ of snow fell.
  • Money – With the $ sign: $5. Foreign currencies should be stated in U.S. dollars and cents. (The cents symbol is used in special cases such as graphics and charts and always takes numerals.) For sums of money one million and above: $1 million, $20 billion. This format applies only to money.
  • Percentages – 5 percent. For percentages below 1 percent use a 0 before the decimal: 0.2 percent.
  • Special uses – Spelling out extremely large figures is sometimes more appropriate: They planned to enlist a million workers. He was expected to draw a half-million votes. Spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence.
  • When numbers are used in a series or in close association and some are above nine, use numerals for all: The man was sentenced to from 1 to 25 years. It took 2 weeks and 10 days to complete the work.
  • Spell out one when it is used in a general rather than a numerical sense, even when other numbers appear in the same sentence: He was one of 13 seniors honored.
  • Spell out twofold through tenfold. Above tenfold make it 11-fold, 12-fold, 20-fold, etc.
  • Sports results – Detroit defeated Cleveland 2-1. He ran the 100-yard dash in 9.4 seconds (or 0:9:4). McEnroe defeated Connors 6-3, 5-7, 6-4.
  • In football stories use numerals when referring to yard lines but spell out through nine when referring to number of yards gained: Brown plunged four yards to the 3.
  • Time of day – 2 o’clock, 3 p.m., 4:45 a.m. Zeros are unnecessary for the hour on the hour.
  • Vote results – City council voted 6-3.
  • Weapons – A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun. See also Weapons.
  • Weights – Exact weights in pounds and ounces: 7 pounds, 6 ounces. Otherwise seven pounds or six ounces. (Use numerals with abbreviations in special cases such as charts and graphics.)


O

Obamacare – Nickname for President Obama’s Affordable Care Act. Obamacare is one word and should not be offset with quotation marks. [Added November 2016]

obscenity, profanity, vulgarity

May not be used in stories unless in direct quotations when there is a compelling reason and with the approval of the managing editor, or in his absence, an assistant managing editor.

Avoid using any form of abbreviation to substitute for a vulgarity (as in f—). We do not change quotes as in “damn you” to “darn you,” or “hell” to “heck,” etc.

This section shall be interpreted to mean we will permit the use of such words only in very rare instances.

off as prefix – Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: off-color, off-peak, off-season, off-white, off-key.  Some combinations without the hyphen: offhand, offset, offshore, offside, offstage.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

off as suffix –  Some commonly used combinations with a hyphen: send-off, stop-off. Some combinations without the hyphen: playoff, standoff, takeoff, cutoff, liftoff.

If in doubt hyphenate if it is not listed in the dictionary.

offhand –  adjective/adverb.

of mine, of his, etc. –  The common expressions “a friend of mine,”  “a friend of John’s”  should be avoided. Instead, write “my friend,”  “John’s friend.”

oil field

Ohio General Assembly – Official name of the state’s governing body. So to call it a legislature is generic and should be lowercase. Do NOT call it the Ohio Legislature, with a capital “L.”
[Added May 2010]

Ohio Newspaper Organization – A consortium of Ohio’s eight major newspapers to share non-competitive news content on-cycle. The participating papers are The Blade, the Plain Dealer of Cleveland, The Columbus Dispatch, the Akron Beacon Journal, The Cincinnati Enquirer, the Dayton Daily News, The (Canton) Repository and The (Youngstown) Vindicator. Use Ohio Newspaper Organization on first reference, but the acronym OHNO is fine on subsequent references.

Under the consortium’s guidelines, the byline of the reporter and name of the newspaper should be used when posting OHNO stories on participating papers’ websites, print and e-editions.

ONMA – Use Ohio News Media Association. Formerly the Ohio Newspaper Association. ONMA is the trade association for more than 250 Ohio daily and weekly newspapers and media outlets.

OK, OKs, OK’d

old-timer, old-time – noun, adjective

One SeaGate is called Fifth Third Center at One SeaGate. On second reference, One SeaGate is fine. [revised July 22, 2008]

one-sided

onetime, one-time –  The first means the former; the second means occurring only once

only –  Used in the sense of solely or exclusively, only should go as close as possible to the word it modifies. Note the different meanings: “Only he hoped to find her.” “He hoped only to find her.” “He hoped to find only her.”

Take care to use appropriately to convey a judgment or degree. Proper: Only two people attended the meeting. Improper: Only two people died in the crash.

open-minded

oral, verbal – All communication by words, whether written or spoken, is verbal. Hence, do not use “a verbal order” to mean an unwritten order; a spoken order is “an oral order.” But use verbal to signify by word rather than deed as “a verbal conflict” to distinguish from a physical conflict.

Ohio State Highway Patrol – Do not use Ohio Highway Patrol. The Ohio State Highway Patrol is a division of the Ohio State Department of Public Safety and is the official highway patrol agency in Ohio. [Added March 2019]

out of doors, out-of-doors –  noun, adjective.

over as prefix –  Not hyphenated.

Owens Corning  – (no hyphen, no Co., or Corp., and no Fiberglas), based in Toledo.  Second reference: OC.


P

panic-stricken

papier-mache

part time, part-time – noun/adverb, adjective.

party – Do not use party as a synonym for person. However, parties to a contract or a lawsuit is correct usage.

pass – Bills are passed, laws are enacted.

passer-by, passers-by

past master

patron, customer – Properly, a patron is a benefactor, a supporter, a protector, an advocate, or the like. Use of the word as a synonym for customer or client is colloquial.

pawn ticket

pay – All stories on new contracts must have some kind of indication of what the workers got in terms of pay increases. Either the range of pay or what the average employee got. For example, a city street worker would be paid $250 more or $13,250 a year with the increase. Any story about the appointment of a public official or promotion, etc., must state the salary for that position and indicate that the individual will be paid the salary. Do not use “Joe Smith earns $40,000.”

PBF Toledo Refining Co. – The full name of the refinery on the Toledo-Oregon border. The refinery is owned by PBF, a private equity firm that bought the facility from Sunoco, Inc. in late 2010 for $400 million. [Added March 1, 2011]

peak, peek, pique
• Peak is the topmost point, such as a mountain peak, or to reach that point.
• Peek is to peer or glance (The boy took a peek around the corner).
• Pique is to upset, arouse or excite. (If you are piquing someone’s interest, you are exciting their interest, not taking a quick look.

percent – one word. Use it or % in heads.

Philips Displays – SEE: LG Philips Displays

phenomena (plural noun), phenomenon (single noun) for “extremely unusual, extraordinary”. [added May 5, 2008]

photos – Local feature photos with a weather theme must contain weather information as far as the day’s readings and what’s in store.

pickles – In northwestern Ohio small cucumbers grown for pickling are referred to colloquially as pickles. They are not pickles until treated with vinegar and brine. Use the correct term, cucumbers.

Pilkington North America – a subsidiary of Pilkington PLC (formerly was Libbey-Owens-Ford Co.)

Ping-Pong – Trade name for table tennis.

“Pit bull” – This is a generic descriptive term for a dog trained to fight and may refer to multiple breeds, including the American Staffordshire terrier, Staffordshire bull terrier, American pit bull terrier, and other mix breeds determined to be “pit bulls” by Lucas County Dog Warden Tom Skeldon. “Pit bulls” should have quotation marks and the style is two words, not one. [Revised November 2009]

planes – It is our policy on airplane crashes to include in stories and cutlines the type of aircraft involved in the crash.

playoff

plead – Past tense is pleaded.

plow – Correct in all uses.

plurality – See majority.

plurals – In compound forms add the s to the noun part of the compound to form the plural: attorneys general, notaries public. When both parts of the compound are normally nouns, add the s to the more important word: major generals, lieutenant colonels. (However, it is sergeants major, for a sergeant major is a sergeant, not a major.)
The plural of proper names ending in x or z is formed by adding es. The addition of s is sufficient for names ending in ce or se: Keeping up with the Joneses. Lopez, Lopezes.
For the plural of abbreviations add ‘s: The brief was full of etc.’s.
For plurals of figures add s: Boeing 727s. The same for years: 1970s, but ’50s, ’60s.
For plurals of single letters add ‘s: Oakland A’s, two B’s on his report card, 3 R’s.
For plurals of multiple letters add s: She knows her ABCs.
For plurals of all-caps initials without periods add s: YMCAs, GIs, POWs.

Pokemon Go – Two words, with the “o” at the end lower case. Italics in body type, single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

post as prefix – Usually not hyphenated except in combination with a proper noun.

pore – A verb that means to gaze or study intensely: She pored over her books.

pour – A verb that means to flow in a continuous stream: It poured rain. He poured the coffee.pre as prefix – Not hyphenated unless in combination with a proper noun.

premier, premiere – The head of government in many countries is the premier (not necessarily synonymous with prime minister). As an adjective premier can mean first in rank or supreme: Pablo Casals was his era’s premier performer on the cello.
Premiere refers to a first performance, either as noun or adjective. Do not use premiere as a verb.

press conference – Do not use. News conference is preferred.

preventive – Preferred over preventative as noun and adjective.

principal, principle – Principal as a noun means the head of a school, the chief person in a transaction, or a sum of money from which interest derives. As an adjective it means first or highest in rank.
Principle means a fundamental doctrine or tenet or a rule of conduct. It is not an adjective.

Private Industry Collaborative [revised February 28, 2002]

profanity – See obscenity.

professor – Never abbreviate. For example, Professor Jim Smith.

ProMedica – Official name of the region’s largest health-care system. Only use ProMedica. Do Not refer to it as ProMedica Health System in stories and/or headlines. The “P” and “M” are uppercase. All ProMedica hospitals have the parent name in front of the hospital name. The ProMedica hospitals are:
• ProMedica Bay Park Hospital
• ProMedica Bixby Hospital
• ProMedica Defiance Regional Hospital
• ProMedica Flower Hospital
• ProMedica Fostoria Community Hospital
• ProMedica Herrick Hospital
• ProMedica Memorial Hospital
• ProMedica Toledo Children’s Hospital
• ProMedica Toledo Hospital
• ProMedica Wildwood Orthopaedic and Spine Hospital
[Revised November 2016].

ProMedica Senior Care (formerly HCR ManorCare). ProMedica Senior Care operates about 500 assisted living, skilled nursing, outpatient rehabilitation, memory care, and home-health and Hospice Care centers. [added October 2020]

pronouns for animals – Use personal pronouns (he or she) if you know the gender of the pet. [Revised January 2015]

Personal pronouns are acceptable when writing about an animal and its offspring.

protester, not protestor

proved, proven – Use proven only as an adjective: A proven remedy.

provided – Make it “provided that” something occurs, not “providing that.”

pseudo as prefix – Do not hyphenate unless in combination with a proper noun.
Punctuation
Some general rules:

  • Apostrophes – Normally the singular possessive of a word is formed by adding ‘s: the bear’s den. The plural possessive is formed by adding the apostrophe to the plural form: the bears’ den. In the case of common and singular proper nouns ending in s, use only an apostrophe after the s. Michael Woods’ desk, Gov. Rhodes’ grave, the moss’ coloration. But the plural possessive should be the Joneses’ house; the Lopezes’ golf clubs.
  • Omit in all possessive pronouns: his, hers, its, theirs.
  • In organization names follow the organization: Elks Club. When in doubt omit the apostrophe.
  • To indicate joint possession write Smith and Brown’s properties. If ownership is separate: Frank’s and Vicki’s faces.
  • Form singular and plural possessives of all-caps initials without periods by adding ‘s: YMCA’s, YMCAs’; GI’s, GIs’; POW’s, POWs’.
  • Use the apostrophe (not a single opening quote) to indicate omitted letters: rock ‘n’ roll, he is a ne’er-do-well, ‘Tis the season to be jolly. Omit the apostrophe on words that have come into common use: copter, possum.
  • Brackets – Use brackets to insert explanatory information inside quotes. Use parentheses outside of quotes.
  • Colons – Use the colon to introduce a list or a quotation. Capitalize the first word after a colon if it is a proper noun, the start of a complete sentence, or a new paragraph. Follow these rules in headlines.
  • Commas – Overuse and underuse are the most common problems with commas.
  • Underuse – Failure to use both commas when two are needed to set off a phrase or clause, the year in a date, and ages, unless the elements begin or end a sentence: John Jones, a South Side grocer, was the next speaker. The tragic events of Nov. 22, 1963, will long be remembered. November, 1963, will go down in history.
  • Overuse – Insertion between subject and verb: According to the printout, the house next door, has a large yard.
  • Improper use with conjunctions – As a general rule use a comma if the subject of each clause is expressly stated: We are visiting Washington, and we plan a side trip to Williamsburg. We visited Washington, but our senator would not see us. Do not use a comma when the subject of the two clauses is the same: We are visiting Washington and plan to see the White House.
  • Unnecessary use to set off short introductory clauses and phrases: During the night he heard many noises. (Use a comma if needed to avoid ambiguity: On the street below, the curious gathered. A comma is necessary after most when and if clauses: When he had tired of the mad pace of New York, he moved to Toledo.)
  • Unnecessary use to set off adverbs such as too, therefore, and also: He too is tired.

Some additional guidelines:

  • Use the comma to separate items in a series: The colors of the flag are red, white, and blue. If the items in a series include commas, use semicolons to separate the items except before the last item, where a comma is used.
  • Street addresses and hometowns after a name should not have commas. Instead use the preposition of: Mary Roberts of 442 Adams St. called Florence Smith, Boston. Smith Co. of New York mailed the records to Brown Co. of South Avenue, Toledo.
  • Use commas before and after the abbreviation Jr. following names. However II and III, for second and third, follow the name without punctuation. When a senator or congressman uses Jr., the correct punctuation is Sen. John Jones, Jr. (R., Mass.).
  • Do not use commas to set off sports scores or legislative or judicial votes: The Tigers defeated the Indians 3-2 on the steady pitching of Justin Thompson. The Supreme Court ruled 5-4 today . . . The Ohio Senate voted 17-16 . . .
  • Use commas to separate a series of adjectives equal in rank. Adjectives are equal if the comma could be replaced by the word and without changing the sense: a thoughtful, precise manner; a dark, dangerous night.
  • Do not use a comma when the last adjective before a noun outranks its predecessors because it is an integral element of a noun phrase: a cheap fur coat; the old oaken bucket; a new, blue spring bonnet.
  • Do not use commas to set off essential clauses and phrases that cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence: Reporters who do not read the stylebook should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that one class of reporters, those who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors.)
  • Reporters, who do not read the stylebook, should not criticize their editors. (The writer is saying that all reporters do not read the stylebook.)
  • Commas are used to set off nonessential clauses and phrases that can be eliminated without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.

We saw the 1995 winner of the Academy Award competition for best movie, “Braveheart.” (Only one movie won the award in 1995. The name is informative, but even without it no other movie could be meant.)

We saw the award-winning movie “One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest.” (No comma because many movies have won awards and without the name of the movie the reader would not know which movie was meant.)

They ate dinner with their daughter Julie. (Because this couple has more than one daughter, the inclusion of her name is critical.) They ate dinner with their daughter Julie and her husband, David. (Julie has only one husband, so his name is only informative.)

Do not confuse nonessential clauses and phrases with descriptive adjectives: Julie and husband David went shopping. Julie and her husband, David, went shopping.

Dashes – Use long dashes but only when necessary to set off inserted matter where the break in thought is abrupt.

Hyphens – Use to avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words: The president will speak to small-business men. (Businessmen normally is one word, but small businessmen is ambiguous.) He re-covered the leaky roof. He recovered his health. He viewed the re-creation of the event. He went to the recreation center.

When a compound modifier two or more words that express a single concept precedes a noun, use hyphens to link all the words in the compound except the adverb very and all adverbs that end in ly: a first-quarter touchdown, a bluish-green dress, a full-time job, a well-known man, a better-qualified woman, a know-it-all attitude, a very good time, an easily remembered date.

Many combinations that are hyphenated before a noun are not hyphenated when they occur after a noun: The team scored in the first quarter. The dress, a bluish green, was attractive. She works full time. His attitude suggested that he knew it all.

Use a hyphen to designate dual heritage: African-American, Italian-American, Mexican-American. Do not hyphenate French Canadian or Latin American.

Use a hyphen to separate letters and figures when used in combination: A-1 rating, C-47 plane.

However, in plane designations involving letter-number combinations omit the hyphen after the number: XB-70A.

Parentheses and brackets – Use parentheses to insert explanatory matter except in quotations, where brackets are used. The insertion of bracketed material should be kept to a minimum.

If parenthetical material runs more than one paragraph, use a parenthesis at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.

Parentheses are used around party and state or hometown designations of members of Congress and Ohio or Michigan state legislators: Bill Smith (R., Monroe).

Quotes – The chief fault is failure to close the quotation. General rules:

  • Use single quotes for quoted matter inside quotes. Return to double quotes inside single quotes.
  • In headlines, quote boxes, and all cutlines use single quotes.
  • For continuous quoted matter running more than one paragraph use quotes at the beginning of each paragraph but at the end of the last paragraph only.
  • The above applies only to continuous quoted matter. Each reintroduction, such as he said, he added, he continued, makes it a new quotation, and the previous paragraph should end with quotation marks.
  • Use italic type , not quotation marks, for the titles of plays, movies, books, operas, paintings, video games, TV shows and series and their episodes. Use quotation marks with slogans, songs, poems, chapters, and articles. However, in headlines use single quotes for all titles.
    [Revised August 2016]

Do not use quotation marks with names of dogs, race horses, magazines, newspapers, orchestras, dances, boats, ships, aircraft, estates, rail lines, nicknames of cities or states, or nicknames of athletic teams.

Do not use quotes for symphonies, concertos, overtures, etc. For such works descriptive terms are in quotes within parentheses:
Beethoven’ s Symphony No. 3 (“Eroica”). Beethoven’s Piano Concerto No. 5 (“Emperor”).

An opus number goes in parentheses.

Capital letters used alone to convey a definite meaning usually can stand without quotes: a grade of A, the Y campaign, vitamin B.

Use partial quotations only when the words are especially emphatic or pertinent: He said the Chinese attacked with a “savage butchery unknown in modern times.”

Avoid using quotes on single words as well as new words or phrases and on those used in an unorthodox or figurative sense.

Commas and periods go inside quotation marks; colons and semicolons go outside.

Question marks and exclamation points go inside the quotation marks if they belong with the quoted matter, outside if they belong to the main sentence: He asked: “Is it time to go?” Did he say, “It is time to go”?

Do not use quote marks to mean inches. Spell out inches when writing 3 inches of snow fell.

Semicolons – The semicolon is used to separate items in a series when commas are included in the items. When a series of semicolons is used, end the series with a semicolon, not a comma: Jane Doe of 1616 Elm St.; Dick Jones of 1414 Hall St.; Becky Smith of 1313 Duke St. Use it to separate parts of a sentence when a more definitive break than the comma is called for; do not use a conjunction after the semicolon.

In headlines that contain more than one verb separate the verbs by commas if they have the same subject, by semicolons if they have different subjects.

Troops move through Sudan, put dissidents under arrest
Storms kill 303; floods maroon 200

puns – Avoid making a pun on a person’s name. See headlines.

pupil, student – Avoid pupil. Student is preferred for all grades.



Q

quarter mile, quarter-mile, quarter-miler –  noun, adjective, runner. See half.

queen –  Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain. See titles – royalty and nobility.

quoteboxes –  Used to break up blocks of type and to highlight a remark from an article. One caution: Check the material after it is typeset to ensure that a quotation mark does not occupy a line by itself.

quotes –  See also punctuation.

Full quotes are preferable to partial quotes. But do not use full quotes if they have to be explained. Especially, don’t try to overdo an explanation when the context of the story has told the reader enough to know what is involved.

This example came from the AP, but our reporters and other wire services use similar useless extra words:

Ms. Brookner said Mrs. Hanssen asked her to issue a statement because she felt she could speak out after the plea agreement. “She feels terrible. I don’t think she can feel any worse, any more devastated,” said Ms. Brookner, describing Mrs. Hanssen’s emotions.

Doesn’t the quote convey her feelings enough to avoid the redundancy? The same thing happens when a writer ends a quote and proceeds with, “referring to” or “said of.” To avoid this type of construction, the quote may have to be slightly altered and the speaker or subject matter introduced before the quote. Example:

“Julie was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free,” Dr. Jones said of Julie Newman, referring to her problem of deciding on a divorce.

The reader doesn’t know what is happening until the explanation. More clear and easier to read would be: Julie Newman was having a problem deciding on a divorce, Dr. Jones said, but she knew she “was at the crossroads in her life and needed to find a solution to set her free.”

Do not delete the words spoken in quotes and substitute more specific words in brackets. In quotes in which the meaning of a word is not clear, put the word in brackets, but leave the words that the person said:

Correct: “We were going to do it [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

Incorrect: “We were going to [operate] right away, but we ran out of knives,” Dr. Jones said.

Qur’an – Sacred book for those of Muslim faith.



R

racial, national designations  –  Avoid designating a person’s race or nationality unless it is pertinent to the story. A naturalized citizen of the United States is an American regardless of birthplace. The hyphenated form, such as African-American or Mexican-American, may be used if pertinent.

rack, wrack – The noun rack is a framework; the verb means to arrange on a rack, to torture, trouble, or torment: She racked her brain.

The noun wrack means ruin and generally is confined to the phrase wrack and ruin. The verb wrack is the alternate spelling of the preferred rack.

raise, rear – One raises livestock but rears children.

rake-off

ratio – See margin.

rat race

RBI, RBIs – Abbreviation for run batted in in baseball.

re as prefix – Do not hyphenate except when the second part of the word begins with e or is a proper noun. Use a hyphen to indicate a meaning different from the common one-word form: recreation, re-creation; reform, re-form.

Realtor – Use real estate agent unless there is a reason to indicate that the individual is a member of the National Association of Realtors.

rebut, refute – Rebut means to argue to the contrary: He rebutted his opponent’s statement. Refute means to prove to be false or erroneous: Scientists refuted the contention that the world is square.

recollect, remember –  To recollect is to recall to memory; to remember is to retain in memory.

recur

redundancy –  Avoid using the same words and phrases: craft a bill, create a committee, faces charges. Also, avoid repeating a word or phrase in several graphs or throughout the story.

reign, rein –  Reign is the period a ruler is on the throne: The king began his reign. The leather strap for a horse is a rein, hence figuratively: seize the reins, give free rein to, put a check rein on.

religious terms –  Some guidelines:

  • Mass is celebrated, said, or read. High Mass is sung.
  • Rosaries are recited or said, never read.
  • Celebrant refers to a person conducting a religious rite.
  • The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Utah, permits the term Mormon in referring to its members.
  • The Reorganized Church of Latter-day Saints, with headquarters in Independence, Mo., does not use the term Mormon. If in doubt as to which church is meant, do not use Mormon.
  • It is the United Methodist Church. The African Methodist Episcopal Church (AME) is a separate body.
  • It is incorrect to apply the term church to any Baptist unit other than a local congregation. The organization of Southern Baptists is the Southern Baptist Convention.
  • Organizational units of other denominations include diocese, archdiocese, area, synod, presbytery, etc. Check an official source for the accurate designation.
    replica – See model.

revue, review –  A revue is a light musical stage show. Otherwise use review.

Rh factor – Merriam Webster defines Rh factor as any of one or more genetically determined antigens present in the red blood cells of most persons and of higher animals and capable of inducing intense immunogenic reactions. Rh factor also is known as “Rhesus factor” because it was first discovered in the blood of Rhesus monkeys (small monkeys from India often used for experimentation).

right field, right-field, right fielder – noun, adjective, ballplayer.

right hand, right hander  –  nouns.

right-hand, right-handed  –  adjectives.

right of way, right-of-way  –  noun, adjective. Noun plural is rights of way.

right wing, right-wing –  noun, adjective.

right winger, right-winger   –  hockey player, political term.

ripoff, rip off –  noun/ adjective, verb.

rob, steal –  A person or place is robbed; the articles taken are stolen: Gunman robs bank. Gunman steals $10,000.

robbery  See larceny.

rodent  –  A gnawing animal, including rats and mice as well as beavers, muskrats, groundhogs, squirrels, and rabbits. Such animals as skunks and weasels are not rodents.

roll call, roll-call – noun, adjective.

round robin, round-robin  –  noun, adjective.

roundup, round up –  noun/adjective, verb.

rout, route – Rout as a noun means precipitous flight, a disastrous defeat, or a state of confusion. As a verb it means to put to flight or to defeat utterly. Route as a noun means course of travel or itinerary. The verb means to direct or to assign a course of travel.

royalty  See nobility.

rubber stamp, rubber-stamp  – noun, verb.

Rumor(s) – Don’t use in stories or in headlines. We report facts or attribute news. The exception would be if the word is used in a quote. [Added April 2011]

runner-up, runners-up
Rutherford B. Hayes Presidential Library & Museums. New name for the museum located in Fremont. DO NOT call it the Hayes Presidential Library & Museum [Added February 2017]


S

safe, safely –   “He arrived safely” means that there was no mishap in connection with his arrival. “He arrived safe” means he arrived in a safe condition.

Sahara – Omit desert.

said –  See attribution.

saint –  St. is acceptable before names.

St. Francis DeSales Church  [revised January 30, 2002]

St. Francis de Sales High School  [revised January 30, 2002]

St. Luke’s Hospital – On July 1, 2016, St. Luke’s became independent again. It is no longer affiliated with ProMedica. [Added November 2016]

saving, savings –  Singular: The purchase was made at a saving of $100. Plural: The family’s savings amounted to $15,000.

savior, Saviour –  common noun, Jesus Christ.

Scholastic Assessment Tests – No longer Scholastic Aptitude Test.

school bus

school years

sea gull –  There is no such bird. The bird is a gull, of which there are several varieties.

SeaGate Convention Centre – The name of the downtown convention center in Toledo. Click here to go the convention center website. [revised Feb. 19, 2009]

see –  Avoid the use of the word in cases like: Consumers will see their bills go up; parents will see their students’ grades go down; Monclova has seen the biggest percentage growth of any metro Toledo locale, etc. Avoid see in headlines as a substitute for foresee.

self as prefix –  Always hyphenated.

semi as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination a word beginning in i or a proper noun.

send-off, send off  –  noun, verb.

setup, set up –  noun/adjective, verb.

sewage, sewerage –  As noun, sewage is waste matter; sewerage is a drainage system. Sewage may also be used as an adjective to refer to drainage, as in sewage system.

shear, sheer –  The first means to cut; the second, precipitous or utter.

Shops at Fallen Timbers – Name of faux-village style mall located off U.S. 24, just west of U.S.23/I-475 in southwest Lucas County. The mall is owned by General Growth Properties Inc. of Chicago.

shot put, shot-putter, shot-putting

shrank, shrunk –  Shrank is the past tense of the verb shrink, shrunk the past participle: He shrank from combat. The lake has shrunk to a mere pond.

Shultz, Betty – Betty Shultz is a former member of the Toledo City Council , not Betty Schultz. [revised January 2013]

shut-in –  noun/adjective.

shutdown, shut-down –  noun, adjective.

shutout, shut out –  noun/adjective, verb.

Side Cut Metropark – Side Cut should be 2 words for the Metropark along the Maumee River’s west bank. [revised October 23, 2002]

sign-up, sign up –  noun, verb.

sit, set –  Sit is intransitive and does not take an object. Set is transitive and takes an object. Either may apply to people or things.

sit-in –  noun.

skin diver

slowdown, slow down –  noun, verb.

smaller –  See fewer.

smart phone –  Two words in Blade style.

Smithsonian Institution

so-called –  adjective.

so-so

South – The southern United States.

Southeast Asia – Comprises Burma, Cambodia, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, and Vietnam. See Far East.

Southwyck Shopping Center – Defunct mall. Mall was not part of the name.

spark plug –  noun.

spectators, audience – Those who watch a performance are spectators; listeners form an audience. The crowds at sports events and motion pictures are spectators. Use audience for those attending speeches, lectures, spoken drama, concerts, opera, etc.

speedup –  noun/adjective.

split infinitives, verbs –  Splitting an infinitive no longer is considered a major literary crime, and many good writers do so. It is still better to avoid inserting adverbs, etc., between the parts of the verb. The test is how the sentence reads.

split-up –  noun/adjective.

spokesman – Our style is to use spokesman in all references. We do not use spokeswoman or spokesperson. [Added April 2011]

sport utility vehicle – Preferred second reference,  SUV;  sport-utes can also be used. [revised Revised March 29, 2003]

sprang, sprung –  Sprang is the past tense of spring; sprung is the past participle: He sprang to his feet. The trap was sprung.

staffer –  Staff member is preferred.

stanch, staunch –  The first means to stop the flow; the second firm or steadfast.

standby –  noun/adjective.

standoff

The Star-Spangled Banner  [revised January 30, 2002]

State Employment Relations Board  – Not State Employee Relations Board.

State names – Follow these guidelines for using names of states in stories and datelines. Eight states are not abbreviated. They are Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas, and Utah.
Below are the state abbreviations that would follow the city names that do not stand alone (Example for dateline: BIRMINGHAM, Ala) [Added July 2016]
Ark. Mass. Okla.
Calif. Mich. Ore.
Colo. Minn. Pa.
Conn. Miss. R.I.
Del. Mo. S.C.
Fla. Mont. S.D.
Ga. Neb. Tenn.
Ill. N.C. Vt.
Ind. N.D. Va.
Kan. N.H. W.Va.
Ky. N.J. Wisc.
La. N.M. Wyo.
Md. N.Y.

states’ rights

stationary, stationery –  The first means immobile; the second, writing material.

stay, stop –  A guest is staying, not stopping, at a hotel.

step-up, step up –  noun, verb.

Student – Student is preferred for all grades. Avoid using pupil.

straits –  Difficulties.

Street abbreviations: With exact street addresses, use only the abbreviations for Street (St.), Avenue (Ave.), Boulevard (Blvd.), Court (Ct.), Drive (Dr.), Highway (Hwy.) Parkway (PKwy.) and Place (Pl.) and the directional designations N., S, E., W. NW, NE, SE, SW. Abbreviate only with a numbered address. Do not abbreviate when only a block number is used. Example: 300 N. Summit St. But the store is on North Summit Street. We should note an exception for East Broadway, which is different in that it is the “Broadway” in East Toledo and not the one that runs from South Toledo to downtown. [Updated April 2016]

strong-arm –  adjective/verb.

sub as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

subpoena

suffer, sustain, receive  –  A man suffers a broken leg. He does not sustain or receive a broken leg or have his leg broken.

suit, suite –  One may have a suit of clothes, a suit of cards, or be faced with a lawsuit. There are suites of music, rooms, and furniture.

Sunoco Mid-America’s Toledo refinery. No longer owned by Sunoco, Inc. and  the name of the facility is PBF Toledo Refining Co. PBF, a private equity firm, bought the facility from Sunoco in late 2010. It should be referred to as PBF Toledo Refining Co. [Added March 1, 2011]

super as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun.

superhero – One word [Added Nov. 2, 2016]

survivors – In local obituaries, we shall include all people in the “survived by” listing, including those quoted or mentioned in the article.

suspect, suspicion –  verb, noun: He suspected something was wrong. He had a suspicion something was wrong.

swath, swathe – The first is a noun and is a mowed strip; the second a verb meaning to drape or wrap.

Symphony – The Toledo Symphony is the local orchestra in northwest Ohio. Do Not refer to it as TSO in stories and headlines because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Added March 1, 2011]



T

table tennis  – Preferred term for Ping-Pong.

takeoff

takeover, take over –  noun/adjective, verb.

Tam-O-Shanter – hockey/recreation center in Sylvania.

TB – Acceptable for tuberculosis on second reference and in headlines.

teenager –  one word

telephone numbers –  Our policy of using telephone numbers in stories is that we don’t, with very few exceptions. If we do use one, the department head must be consulted and will be responsible for making sure the telephone number is absolutely necessary for the story and that the telephone number is correct.

Telesystem, formerly Buckeye Telesystem,  is the commercial telephone company owned by Block Communications Inc., which is the parent company of The Blade. Note, the “s” in Telesystem is lowercase and Telesystem is one word. [Updated June 2016]

that
Use the conjunction that to introduce a dependent clause if the sentence is weak without it. There are no hard-and-fast rules but in general:

That usually may be omitted when a dependent clause immediately follows a form of the verb “to say”: The president said he had signed the bill.

That should be used when a time element intervenes between the verb and the dependent clause: The president said Monday that he had signed the bill.

When in doubt, include that.

that, which, who, whom –  Use the pronouns who and whom in referring to people and animals with names. Use the pronouns that and which in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without names.

The Toledo Lucas County Public Library  NO HYPHEN. Change made in 2017.  [added September 2017]

their, there, they’re
Their is a possessive pronoun: They went to their house.

There as an adverb indicates direction: We went there for dinner.

There is a pronoun for constructions in which the subject follows the verb: There is no food on the table.

They’re is a contraction for they are.

Three SeaGate    [revised February 28, 2002]

time designations

Common sense should prevail in deciding how to designate specific hours in locations outside the eastern time zone:

  • When the time is significant, as in an earthquake, use either: 1 p.m. (San Diego time) or 10 p.m. PST.
  • When the time is pertinent, as with the live broadcast of an event, translate it into Toledo time: 9 p.m. (Toledo time).
  • In events of great historical significance both times may be pertinent: The document was signed at 4 p.m. Tokyo time (2 a.m. Toledo time.)

time of day –  Avoid the redundancy of “Monday afternoon at 2 p.m.” or “tonight at 7 p.m.” Make it “at 2 p.m. Monday” and “at 7 tonight.” Use noon and midnight not 12 a.m. or 12 p.m.

time element – Use days of the week (Monday, Tuesday, etc.) in stories for days within seven days before or after the current day. Do NOT use today, tomorrow, yesterday, or last night.  Do not use this morning or tonight, but explain in the story the specific time of the action when possible. We will follow this style both in the printed newspaper and on toledoblade.com. [Added November 2011, Updated April 2012, Updated July 2017]

titles
General guidelines:
See also long titles

Courtesy titles:
Mr. and Mrs. are abbreviated whether used with full name or last name only.

Use Ms. when requested by the woman. Women should be afforded the courtesy title they desire in The Blade. Our policy has been to ask women what they prefer to be called on second reference, Miss, Mrs., or Ms., unless they have some other title such as medical doctor. For example, Marcy Kaptur, our U.S. representative, prefers to be known as Miss Kaptur on succeeding references. Do not use Ms. as a default position. Be sure to ask what courtesy title is preferred. [Updated April 2014]

DO NOT give a courtesy title to a person who has been convicted of a felon. On second reference, only the last name should be used. This is Blade style.

Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

DO NOT use a courtesy title with a coined or fanciful stage name to avoid appearing too literal. Meat Loaf and Little Richard, for example, keep their full names without title, in all references. [Added April 2014]

Foreign individuals – Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. rather than attempt to give them the title used in their own language.

Juveniles – Use the full name of people under the age of 18 on first reference: John Jones, Mary Jones. Do not use Mr. and Ms. with the last names of unmarried juveniles. On second reference the boy may be John, young Jones, or the Jones boy. She may be Mary, Miss Jones, or the Jones girl. Married juveniles are entitled to Mrs. and Mr.

Entertainment, sports personalities
Generally omit courtesy titles for movie, stage, television, radio, popular music, and sports personalities, including actors, directors, producers, coaches, players, and composers and performers of popular music.

When the names of these people appear in regular news stories, the courtesy title may be used.

When the names of non athletes appear on the sports pages, they should have a courtesy title on second reference.

Magistrate – Do not use the title of Magistrate to modify a person’s name. Magistrates are not at the level of judges. You can mention that the person is a magistrate, but do not refer to them as Magistrate John Smith. Instead, it should be John Smith, juvenile court magistrate, said…. On succeeding references, he would be Mr. Smith, not Magistrate Smith. [Added April 2014]

In a federal court ONLY, a magistrate judge is considered to be a judge, and should be referred to as Magistrate Judge on first reference. For example, Magistrate Judge John Smith said… In subsequent references, the magistrate judge should be referred to as Judge, i.e. Judge Smith imposed the sentence. [Added April 2014]

Music and literature – Use courtesy titles for living composers, authors, and musical artists in regular news copy. The courtesy title usually is not used in reviews.

See names.

Abbreviation guidelines:

  • Titles abbreviated with the full name: Sen., Gov., Rep. On second reference spell out Senator and Governor or use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss with the last name alone. Always use Mr., Mrs., Ms., or Miss instead of Representative to save space. Ask women their preference: Miss, Ms., or Mrs. Do not presume.
  • For two or more people with the same title plural abbreviations may be used: Sens., Govs., Reps.
  • Do not abbreviate: Archbishop, Attorney General, Bishop, Cardinal, Congressman, District Attorney, President, Principal, Prosecutor, Secretary, Superintendent
  • Do not abbreviate: assistant, associate

Limit titles preceding the name to three words: Secretary of State John Doe, but John Smith, assistant secretary of state for African affairs.

Professional titles:
Dr. is used ONLY for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians. Dr. should NOT be used for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. On second reference for physicians, osteopaths, and veterinarians, use the courtesy title Dr. For example, on second reference for Dr. Anthony Fauci, it would be Dr. Fauci.

Use Mr., Mrs., Miss, or Ms. for chiropractors, dentists, educators, members of the clergy, and others with doctorate degrees. DO NOT use Dr. for this group. If a person has an earned doctorate degree and it is a relevant element to the story, you can include this information. But DO NOT use the courtesy title Dr. [Updated 8/3/2020]

Military guidelines:
Abbreviations are given first, followed by second-reference usages, including alternatives,

ARMY
Commissioned officers: Gen. – General; Lt. Gen. – General; Maj. Gen. – General; Brig. Gen. – General; Col. – Colonel; Lt. Col. – Colonel; Maj. – Major; Capt. – Captain; 1st Lt. – Lieutenant;   2nd Lt. – Lieutenant;

Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer/Mr.; WO – Warrant Officer/Mr.;

Enlisted personnel: Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Command Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. Maj. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Platoon Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. 1st Class – Sergeant; Spec. 7 – Specialist/Mr.; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 6 – Specialist/Mr.; Sgt. – Sergeant; Spec. 5 – Specialist/Mr.; Cpl. – Corporal; Spec. 4 – Specialist/Mr.; Pfc. – Private; Pvt. 2 – Private; Pvt. 1 – Private [revised May 14, 2004]

NAVY, COAST GUARD
Commissioned officers: Adm. – Admiral;  Vice Adm. – Admiral;    Rear Adm. –  Admiral;  Comm. – Commodore;    Capt. – Captain; Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. Cmdr. – Commander;   Lt. – Lieutentant;  Lt. j.g. – Lieutenant;  Ens. – Ensign/Mr.

Warrant officers: CWO – Chief Warrant Officer;   WO – Warrant Officer

Enlisted personnel :  CPO – Chief Petty Officer/Mr.;  PO 1st Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;   PO 2nd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.; PO 3rd Class – Petty Officer/Mr.;  Seaman –   Mr.;  Seaman Apprentice – Mr.;   Seaman Recruit –   Mr.

MARINE CORPS
Commissioned officers: Same as army.

Warrant officers: Same as navy.

Others: Sgt. Major – Sergeant; Master Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; 1st Sgt. – Sergeant;   Gunnery Sgt. – Sergeant;  Staff Sgt. – Sergeant;  Sgt. – Sergeant;   Cpl. – Corporal;  Lance Cpl. – Corporal;  Pfc. – Private;   Pvt. –  Private

AIR FORCE
Commissioned officers: Same as army.
Enlisted personnel: Chief Master Sgt. – Sergeant;
Senior Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Master Sgt. – Sergeant; Tech. Sgt. – Sergeant; Staff Sgt. – Sergeant; Sgt. – Sergeant; Senior Airman – Airman/Mr.; Airman 1st Class – Airman/Mr.;   Airman – Airman/Mr.;    Airman Basic  – Airman/Mr.

Police titles – Use military style for captain, lieutenant, sergeant. Below these ranks use officer. Titles will be abbreviated on first and subsequent references.

Prominent individuals
The first names of the president may be omitted on first reference. The first names of all other officials including the vice president and the governors of Ohio and Michigan should be included on first reference. The same applies to all living former U.S. presidents. Use the first names of all deceased presidents except for such historic figures as Washington, Lincoln and, Jefferson.

Our style is to use congressman and councilman in all references as in Congressman Janet Smith, Congressman Henry Smith; Councilman Bob Davis, Councilman Mary Davis. We do not use congresswoman or councilwoman. [revised October 23, 2002]

Religious titles

Protestant uses
The Rev. John Jones on first reference, The Rev. or Pastor Jones on second. Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones, or Dr. Jones (if applicable) on second reference.

An Episcopal deacon or priest is the Rev. John Jones on first reference, the Rev. Jones on second reference. Some Episcopal rectors prefer to be called Father.

A dean is the Very Rev. John Jones on first reference, Dean Jones on second.

An Episcopal bishop is Bishop John Adams on first reference, Bishop Adams or Dr. Adams (if applicable) on second. This rule also applies to archbishops.

Roman Catholic uses
Do not use the name of or the abbreviation for a religious order after a member’s name. The Rev. John Jones on first reference, Father Jones on second reference. Do not refer to a Catholic priest as Mr.

A monsignor is Mgsr. John Jones on first reference. On subsquent references, it should be Monsignor Jones. [Updated December 2017]

Bishop John Jones on first reference, Bishop Jones on second.

Archbishop John Jones on first reference, Archbishop Jones on second unless he is a cardinal.

A cardinal is Cardinal John Jones on first reference, Cardinal Jones on second. The title cardinal takes precedence over archbishop: Cardinal Terence Cooke, archbishop of New York.

A Roman Catholic nun is usually Sister Mary Magdalene Jones on first reference, Sister Mary or Sister Mary Magdalene on second reference. However, usage varies both among and within orders, so personal preference should be verified and noted with “cq” in the story. Always spell out Sister when referring to a member of a religious order.

Eastern Orthodox rites
Clergy at the parish level use the Rev. Michael Elias on first reference, Father Michael on second reference.

Archimandrite is an honorary title for priests, similar to monsignor in the Roman Catholic Church: Archimandrite Jones or the Right Rev. John Jones, subsequently Father John.

Above the parish level usage varies:

Antiochian Orthodox Church –  a metropolitan is an archbishop and the church uses both titles: Metropolitan Archbishop John Jones, subsequently Archbishop John.

Greek Orthodox Church – Archbishop, Metropolitan, and Bishop.

These titles are used with geographical area: archbishop of North and South America; metropolitan of New Jersey, bishop of Detroit diocese.
Jewish uses: Rabbi James Wise, subsequently Rabbi Wise or Dr. Wise (if applicable).  Cantor Harry Epstein, Cantor Epstein, Mr. Epstein.
Christian Science uses: Practitioner, Lecturer, Reader. (Do not use Rev. in any form.) Use Mr., Mrs., or Miss on second reference.

Royalty and nobility:

Kings and queens are referred to by first name in most cases: Queen Elizabeth II, or Queen Elizabeth; King Hussein, or Hussein. Identify the current queen of England as Queen Elizabeth II. Do not identify her as Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II or Queen Elizabeth II of Britain because she is the monarch of several nations. For example, she is Queen Elizabeth I of Canada, so it is our style to identify her only as Queen Elizabeth II in all cases. The world’s other monarchs should be identified through their countries, such as King Hussein of Jordan or King Juan Carlos of Spain.

A British knight or baronet carries the title Sir before his full name on first reference: Sir Henry Smith. On second reference: Sir Henry. Do not use double titles or descriptions such as General Sir or Spokesman Lt., Surgeon Dr., Coroner Dr., or Leader General.

The same applies to ladies carrying the title Dame, the feminine equivalent of knighthood: Dame Mary Brown, Dame Mary.

Among members of the peerage (baron, viscount, earl, marquis, duke) usage varies. When the family name is different from the title, the correct form is John Churchill, Duke of Marlborough, or the Duke of Marlborough on first reference. Subsequent references could be Lord John, Lord Churchill, the Duke of Marlborough, or just Marlborough. When the family name and title are the same, the first name ordinarily is not used even on first reference: Field Marshal Viscount Montgomery. On second reference use Marshal Montgomery or Lord Montgomery.

The wife of a knight or baronet is referred to as Lady with either the last name or her first name.

Wrong-way drivers –  Do NOT give a courtesy title to a person arrested in a wrong-way crash. On second reference, only the last name should be used. [Added March 2012]

Toledo Area Metroparks  – DO NOT USE. Correct style on first reference is Metroparks Toledo. Metroparks is one word, no hyphen, no capital p.  On second reference, you can use Metropark or Metroparks. [revised September 2017]

Toledo Area Regional Transit Authority  –  Not Toledo Area Regional Transportation Agency. On second reference, TARTA.

Toledo Arena Sports Inc. – A non-profit organization set up for the teams (Toledo Walleye, Bullfrogs) that play in the downtown arena, now called Huntington Center. [Added April 16, 2010]

Toledo Edison Co.  – See FirstEnergy Corp. (revised January 21, 2003)

Toledo Express Airport – Do NOT use this name on first reference to the municipal airport serving the Toledo area. The new name for the airport is Eugene F. Kranz Toledo Express Airport.  The airport is not in Swanton. Swanton is far west of the airport and most of it is in Fulton County. The Toledo-Lucas County Port Authority and Toledo City Council both voted in 2019 to add Mr. Kranz’s name to the airport in honor of his celebrated career at NASA. A native of Toledo and 1951 graduate of Central Catholic High School, Mr. Kranz was best known as a flight director for the Apollo 11 and Apollo 13 missions. [Added September 2020]

Toledo Metropolitan Area Council of Governments – TMACOG.

Toledo Mud Hens — Mud Hens is two words. The Mud Hens are a professional baseball team in the International League. The Triple-A baseball club is affiliated with the Detroit Tigers of Major League Baseball.
Top executives of the Toledo Mud Hens
  • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
  • Erik Ibsen is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Mud Hens. [Added June 2015]

Toledo Symphony – The correct name for the local orchestra. On second reference, use symphony. Do NOT use TSO, because that is not a recognizable acronym. [Updated March 2011.]

Toledo Walleye – A professional hockey team with the ECHL, formerly the East Coast Hockey League. ECHL is a developmental league for the American Hockey and the National Hockey League. The Walleye are affiliated with the AHL’s Grand Rapid Griffins and the NHL’s Detroit Red Wings. Walleye is a collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated.
Top executives of the Toledo Walleye
  • Joe Napoli is president and chief executive officer (CEO) of the Toledo Walleye and the Toledo Mud Hens.
  • Neil Neukam is the executive vice president and general manager of the Toledo Walleye. [Updated June 2015]

tongue-tied

top-heavy

topsy-turvy

tortuous, torturous –  The first means twisting; the second means torturing.

toss-up, toss up –  noun, verb.

toward –  Without s in all uses. (NOT towards)

Trademarks – A trademark is a brand, symbol, word, etc., used by a manufacturer or dealer and protected by law to prevent a competitor from using it. For example, Kleenex is the trademark for a facial tissue; BUBBLE WRAP (all caps) is the trademark for protective packaging and Dumpster is a trademark for a trash hauling bin.

In general, use a generic equivalent unless the trademark name is essential to the story. When a trademark is used, capitalize it.

The International Trademark Association’s Trademark Checklist is a helpful source of information about trademarks.

Click here to go the INTRA’s Trademark Checklist

Tranquility

trans as prefix –  Do not hyphenate except in combination with a proper noun. Transatlantic and transpacific are exceptions.

trod –  past tense of tread.

tropical depression – A tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface wind is 38 mph (33 knots) or less.

tropical storm – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the maximum sustained surface winds range from 39 to 73 mph (34 to 63 knots) inclusive. Capitalize tropical storm when it is part of the name that weather forecasters assign to a storm: Tropical Storm Allison. Do not abbreviate to TS.

T-shirt

trustee, trusty –  A member of a board of trustees or a person entrusted with something is a trustee. A convict granted certain privileges is a trusty (plural: trusties).

try to –  Write “I will try to win” not “try and win.”

Two SeaGate  [revised February 28, 2002]


U

Ukraine,  NOT the Ukraine

ultra as prefix – Do not hyphenate.

U.N. – Acceptable on second reference.

under as prefix –  Do not hyphenate.

under way

unique –  One of a kind; nothing is more unique or most unique.

University of Toledo  Health Science Campus is the former Medical College of Ohio that merged with UT. We should always mention that it is the former MCO.

University of Toledo Medical Center should refer only to the hospital, NOT to the College of Medicine or any other health-related colleges on the South Toledo campus. Always include that it is the former Medical College of Ohio hospital. Never refer to UTMC in any regard except for the university’s hospital. [Revised May 12, 2015]

Upper Peninsula



V

V/Gladieux Enterprises, Inc. (revised October 30, 2002)

Valentine Theatre  [revised January 30, 2002]

venal, venial –  The first means mercenary; the second, pardonable.

vertebra, vertebrae – singular, plural.

Veterans’ Glass City Skyway – Official name for the cable-stayed bridge and viaduct carrying I-280 over the Maumee River. Opened to traffic in June 2007. Note position of apostrophe in first word of name.  [revised November 2007]
vice as auxiliary –  Do not hyphenate.

vice, vise –  The first is a serious fault of character; the second a tool.

vice versa

victim – Do not use this word in referring to people who have a disabling disease or physical or mental impairment.

videocassette, videotape –  Other video combinations are two words: video game.

Video game titles – Italics in body type and single quotes in headlines. [Added August 2016]

Viet Cong, Vietnam, Vietnamese

vocal cords



W

wait, await – Wait is intransitive; await transitive: He waited for four hours. They eagerly awaited his arrival.

waive, wave – Waive means to relinquish or forgo: The defendant waived a preliminary hearing.  The verb wave generally means to move in the breeze or to signal a greeting.

Walleye – East Coast Hockey League or  ECHL team. Walleye is collective noun that takes a plural verb. For example, Walleye win or Walleye are undefeated. [added November 2009]
walleye – Freshwater perch-like fish native to most of the northern United States and Canada. Walleye fishing is popular in the Maumee River.

Walmart –  The company’s name is now Walmart Inc. (spelled with NO hypen and NO capital M). Its stores are called Walmart. Please be careful when editing a story or writing a headline to use the proper spelling as sometimes the news services have it incorrect. [Updated March 2018]

war game, war zone –  Other usages are one word: warplane, warship, wartime.

water bed

weapons –  An automatic is a pistol designed for automatic or semiautomatic firing. Its cartridges are held in a magazine. A machine gun is an automatic gun, usually mounted on a support, that fires as long as the trigger is depressed. A 9mm pistol; a 22-caliber rifle, a .22 rifle, a 12-gauge shotgun.

weather terms

  • The designations watch and warning are attached to a number of weather conditions.
  • A watch is an alert to the possibility of a dangerous weather event. A warning is issued when a dangerous weather event is imminent or in progress.

The following definitions are based on National Weather Service usage:

  • blizzard – Wind speeds of 35 mph or higher and considerable falling and/or blowing snow with visibility near zero. See severe blizzard.
  • cyclone –  Sometimes used in the United States to mean tornado and in the Indian Ocean area to mean hurricane. To avoid confusion use the more precise words.
  • dust storm –  Visibility of one-half mile or less, wind speeds of 30 mph or more.
  • flash flood –  A sudden, violent flood.
  • flood –  Stories about floods usually tell how high the water is and where it is expected to crest. Such a story should also list flood stage and state how high the water is above or below flood stage.
  • freezing drizzle, rain – Drizzle or rain that freezes on objects as it strikes them.
  • funnel cloud – A violent rotating column of air that does not touch ground.
  • gale – Sustained winds from 39 to 54 mph (34 to 47 knots.)
  • hail, sleet –  Precipitation in the form of frozen pellets. Hail is larger and occurs during powerful thunderstorms in which strong vertical air currents lift and drop ice crystals that grow as moisture freezes onto them.
  • sleet, also known as ice pellets, is rain that freezes before it hits the ground because of sub-freezing air near the surface beneath warmer air aloft.
  • sleet is granular and occurs during winter or winter-like storms.
  • hurricane or typhoon – A warm-core tropical cyclone in which the minimum sustained surface wind is 74 mph or higher. Hurricanes are spawned east of the international date line, typhoons west of the line. When a hurricane or typhoon loses wind speed, it becomes a tropical storm.
  • ice storm –  Reserved for significant and possibly damaging accumulations of ice.
  • severe blizzard – Wind speeds of 45 mph or more, great density of falling and/or blowing snow with visibility frequently near zero, and a temperature of 10 degrees or lower.
  • sleet –  See hail.
  • squall –  A sudden increase of wind speed by a least 16 knots lasting for at least one minute.
  • tornado –  A violent rotating column of air that touches the ground. It usually starts as a funnel cloud and is accompanied by a roaring noise.
    travelers’ advisory – An alert that difficult traveling or hazardous road conditions are expected to be widespread.
  • tropical depression, tropical storm –  The first is a tropical cyclone with maximum sustained surface winds of 38 mph; the second, with winds from 39 to 73 mph. See hurricane.
  • typhoon – See hurricane.
  • waterspout – A tornado over water.
  • wind chill index –  Describes the combined effect of the wind and cold temperatures.

Web – As an abbreviation of World Wide Web, use Web, capitalized. Also,  Web page and Web browser, but it is website and webcam, webcast.  [Revised  June 23, 2005]

website – One word and the “w” is lowercase. [Revised February 2015]
website reefers
There are three kinds of reefers that can be used in the newspaper to The Blade’s website. Each has a specific Web address.
Here’s how they should be handled:
• To reefer to a story, video, photo gallery, audio tape, or added documents or data on our website, use either the toledoblade.com logo or use this address in type: toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online.
• To refer to a specific section online or to a specific writer or columnist online, use this type of address: toledoblade.com/sports or toledoblade.com/courts or toledoblade.com/davehackenberg. To do this, please verify the address to make sure it is correct.

• To reefer to the eBlade, use the eBlade logo and this address: eblade.toledoblade.com. In text, identify the appropriate information online. Please do not use just toledoblade.com, as that will make the reader then have to find the eBlade link and click on that.

well-being

well-wisher

West Toledo

Westfield Franklin Park – In second reference, Franklin Park is acceptable.

wheelchair –  Do not refer to people who use a wheelchair as being wheelchair bound or confined to a wheelchair. See victim.

where – Do not use where at.

wide as suffix –  Do not hyphenate.

Wi-Fi – Not WiFi, wifi, wi-fi or Wi-fi. [Added July 2011]

wiggle, wriggle  –  Wiggle means to jiggle or oscillate, wriggle means to squirm.
windup, wind up –  noun, verb.
Wood Lane – Name sometimes used for the Wood County Board of Development Disabilities, based in Bowling Green. [Revised 7/17/2009]
Woodville Mall
work load, work force – Other usages are one word: workday, workweek, workplace.

wrack –  See rack.



X

X-ray



Y

yoke, yolk  –  The first is a wooden bar by which two draft animals are coupled at the necks for working together; the second, the yellow inner mass of a bird or reptile egg.

youth – Applicable to boys and girls age 13 through 17. Use man or woman after the 18th birthday.

YouTube –  The “Y” and “T” are uppercase and YouTube is one word. YouTube is a video-sharing website where users can upload, share and view video clips. [Added May 2009]


Z

zeros, zeroes  –  plural of the noun, third person singular verb.